Comments received on poems by MatPie
If I Could Change
sorenbarrett said:
Experience it. A lovely thought that I do before I write nicely said.
February 10th, 2026 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
Experience it. A lovely thought that I do before I write nicely said.
February 10th, 2026 13:33
Everything eats and is eaten
sorenbarrett said:
A deep message in this poem that speaks of the cycle of life and its flow. Well done
February 9th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
A deep message in this poem that speaks of the cycle of life and its flow. Well done
February 9th, 2026 06:52
Lose
sorenbarrett said:
Here we see a feeling of gradual loss of control and it gives a sense of despair and inevitability. Nicely done.
January 26th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Here we see a feeling of gradual loss of control and it gives a sense of despair and inevitability. Nicely done.
January 26th, 2026 04:06
Stepping Out
Thomas W Case said:
This carries the courage of leaving shelter without knowing what comes next.
Fragile ground, steady resolve—the kind of hope that walks anyway.
January 25th, 2026 07:42
Thomas W Case said:
This carries the courage of leaving shelter without knowing what comes next.
Fragile ground, steady resolve—the kind of hope that walks anyway.
January 25th, 2026 07:42
Stepping Out
sorenbarrett said:
As I interpret this work it speaks of linger within ourselves and once outside we may find it cold and dangerous but we do our best finding more progress that if we stay safe inside. Lovely
January 25th, 2026 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
As I interpret this work it speaks of linger within ourselves and once outside we may find it cold and dangerous but we do our best finding more progress that if we stay safe inside. Lovely
January 25th, 2026 07:27
Light
sorenbarrett said:
To look with a new perspective where truth is in the way one sees it. Why not look upon beauty if that is your choice and leave the ugly behind. A lovely poem
January 19th, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
To look with a new perspective where truth is in the way one sees it. Why not look upon beauty if that is your choice and leave the ugly behind. A lovely poem
January 19th, 2026 04:58
At The Other Side
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this it seems that we all have been scared by the bogyman created out of an us verses them attitude. Better to face the enemy we know than the one we don\'t know. Those that hide under the bed, in the shadows, our closet. Well written
January 17th, 2026 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this it seems that we all have been scared by the bogyman created out of an us verses them attitude. Better to face the enemy we know than the one we don\'t know. Those that hide under the bed, in the shadows, our closet. Well written
January 17th, 2026 10:28
Old Words, New Words
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and too true for most to want to consider being true to oneself is key and anything else is self betrayal. A lovely write
January 16th, 2026 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and too true for most to want to consider being true to oneself is key and anything else is self betrayal. A lovely write
January 16th, 2026 06:50
Old Words, New Words
Paul Bell said:
Yes originality has long gone, only to be replaced with cheap copies, regurgitated rubbish.
You see it with fashion, television, and theatre plays that add or take away something from the original play.
January 16th, 2026 04:43
Paul Bell said:
Yes originality has long gone, only to be replaced with cheap copies, regurgitated rubbish.
You see it with fashion, television, and theatre plays that add or take away something from the original play.
January 16th, 2026 04:43
Observer
sorenbarrett said:
In a world too busy to see, hearts too hard to feel, ears that can not hear for the drowning sounds of technology we have all missed something. A good write
January 15th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
In a world too busy to see, hearts too hard to feel, ears that can not hear for the drowning sounds of technology we have all missed something. A good write
January 15th, 2026 04:38
acceptance (or not)
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic language about addiction and it takes many forms. Some prefer substances, others relationships, yet others sex itself. A good write
November 27th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic language about addiction and it takes many forms. Some prefer substances, others relationships, yet others sex itself. A good write
November 27th, 2025 04:29
Anger
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of recognition. It is ironical that we use the word human to mean charity, love, kindness when other animals are far better than us. One of the only to wage war, to murder and show greed. We it would be much more logical to call acts of mercy and love animal and acts of a heinous nature human but arrogance does not permit.
November 11th, 2025 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of recognition. It is ironical that we use the word human to mean charity, love, kindness when other animals are far better than us. One of the only to wage war, to murder and show greed. We it would be much more logical to call acts of mercy and love animal and acts of a heinous nature human but arrogance does not permit.
November 11th, 2025 07:37
No Name #2
sorenbarrett said:
This monologue in poetic form seems a soliloquy as it speaks of life and wanting to live. Nicely done
November 10th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This monologue in poetic form seems a soliloquy as it speaks of life and wanting to live. Nicely done
November 10th, 2025 04:26
No Name #1
sorenbarrett said:
So many feelings of discomfort to remind one that they are alive. Very nicely sritten
October 14th, 2025 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
So many feelings of discomfort to remind one that they are alive. Very nicely sritten
October 14th, 2025 13:46
Haiku #1
sorenbarrett said:
I got this senryu it is the tarot card of the hanged man inverted that one is ready and open to moving on using the knowledge gained during a period of suspension to further one\'s life. A great senryu
September 22nd, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
I got this senryu it is the tarot card of the hanged man inverted that one is ready and open to moving on using the knowledge gained during a period of suspension to further one\'s life. A great senryu
September 22nd, 2025 04:46
meditating in the morning
sorenbarrett said:
Here is meditation and reflection in a poem about all about and all within. Nicely penned
September 20th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Here is meditation and reflection in a poem about all about and all within. Nicely penned
September 20th, 2025 03:55
time was never a friend to the body
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of gradual deterioration in this poem. A sense of entropy. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of gradual deterioration in this poem. A sense of entropy. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 03:49
the guilt of the past is a burden but also a journey to self-discovery
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
It captures both the lingering weight of past regrets and the deep self-examination that comes with trying to reconcile past dreams with present reality. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:41
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
It captures both the lingering weight of past regrets and the deep self-examination that comes with trying to reconcile past dreams with present reality. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:41
the guilt of the past is a burden but also a journey to self-discovery
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the discontent of unfulfilled dreams in this poem constrained by public expectations and molded into what society demands. A wonderful write
September 17th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the discontent of unfulfilled dreams in this poem constrained by public expectations and molded into what society demands. A wonderful write
September 17th, 2025 04:55
Fall
sorenbarrett said:
This one contains feelings of alienation, isolation, not fitting, a desire to melt into nothingness and feelings of disintegration physically. A sad poem of rage against the world.
September 15th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
This one contains feelings of alienation, isolation, not fitting, a desire to melt into nothingness and feelings of disintegration physically. A sad poem of rage against the world.
September 15th, 2025 05:12
Naked
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is it is only a matter of looking for it. A lovely write about being oneself and finding beauty in what ever lies around us. Loved it
September 14th, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is it is only a matter of looking for it. A lovely write about being oneself and finding beauty in what ever lies around us. Loved it
September 14th, 2025 05:32
Cycle
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a feel of day by day taking things as they come and going with the flow. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a feel of day by day taking things as they come and going with the flow. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 04:12
Midnight
sorenbarrett said:
Like a substance induced intoxication this poem joins fragments as it journeys on a inner cerebral trip between disjoined distractions to a place of unity. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Like a substance induced intoxication this poem joins fragments as it journeys on a inner cerebral trip between disjoined distractions to a place of unity. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 04:17
oh, beautiful sky
sorenbarrett said:
I take from this a sadness over the state we have left the world in. A sad poem that begs for redemption
September 5th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
I take from this a sadness over the state we have left the world in. A sad poem that begs for redemption
September 5th, 2025 04:24
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