Comments received on poems by MatPie
Anger
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of recognition. It is ironical that we use the word human to mean charity, love, kindness when other animals are far better than us. One of the only to wage war, to murder and show greed. We it would be much more logical to call acts of mercy and love animal and acts of a heinous nature human but arrogance does not permit.
November 11th, 2025 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of recognition. It is ironical that we use the word human to mean charity, love, kindness when other animals are far better than us. One of the only to wage war, to murder and show greed. We it would be much more logical to call acts of mercy and love animal and acts of a heinous nature human but arrogance does not permit.
November 11th, 2025 07:37
No Name #2
sorenbarrett said:
This monologue in poetic form seems a soliloquy as it speaks of life and wanting to live. Nicely done
November 10th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This monologue in poetic form seems a soliloquy as it speaks of life and wanting to live. Nicely done
November 10th, 2025 04:26
No Name #1
sorenbarrett said:
So many feelings of discomfort to remind one that they are alive. Very nicely sritten
October 14th, 2025 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
So many feelings of discomfort to remind one that they are alive. Very nicely sritten
October 14th, 2025 13:46
Haiku #1
sorenbarrett said:
I got this senryu it is the tarot card of the hanged man inverted that one is ready and open to moving on using the knowledge gained during a period of suspension to further one\'s life. A great senryu
September 22nd, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
I got this senryu it is the tarot card of the hanged man inverted that one is ready and open to moving on using the knowledge gained during a period of suspension to further one\'s life. A great senryu
September 22nd, 2025 04:46
meditating in the morning
sorenbarrett said:
Here is meditation and reflection in a poem about all about and all within. Nicely penned
September 20th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Here is meditation and reflection in a poem about all about and all within. Nicely penned
September 20th, 2025 03:55
time was never a friend to the body
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of gradual deterioration in this poem. A sense of entropy. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of gradual deterioration in this poem. A sense of entropy. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 03:49
the guilt of the past is a burden but also a journey to self-discovery
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
It captures both the lingering weight of past regrets and the deep self-examination that comes with trying to reconcile past dreams with present reality. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:41
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
It captures both the lingering weight of past regrets and the deep self-examination that comes with trying to reconcile past dreams with present reality. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:41
the guilt of the past is a burden but also a journey to self-discovery
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the discontent of unfulfilled dreams in this poem constrained by public expectations and molded into what society demands. A wonderful write
September 17th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the discontent of unfulfilled dreams in this poem constrained by public expectations and molded into what society demands. A wonderful write
September 17th, 2025 04:55
Fall
sorenbarrett said:
This one contains feelings of alienation, isolation, not fitting, a desire to melt into nothingness and feelings of disintegration physically. A sad poem of rage against the world.
September 15th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
This one contains feelings of alienation, isolation, not fitting, a desire to melt into nothingness and feelings of disintegration physically. A sad poem of rage against the world.
September 15th, 2025 05:12
Naked
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is it is only a matter of looking for it. A lovely write about being oneself and finding beauty in what ever lies around us. Loved it
September 14th, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is it is only a matter of looking for it. A lovely write about being oneself and finding beauty in what ever lies around us. Loved it
September 14th, 2025 05:32
Cycle
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a feel of day by day taking things as they come and going with the flow. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a feel of day by day taking things as they come and going with the flow. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 04:12
Midnight
sorenbarrett said:
Like a substance induced intoxication this poem joins fragments as it journeys on a inner cerebral trip between disjoined distractions to a place of unity. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Like a substance induced intoxication this poem joins fragments as it journeys on a inner cerebral trip between disjoined distractions to a place of unity. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 04:17
oh, beautiful sky
sorenbarrett said:
I take from this a sadness over the state we have left the world in. A sad poem that begs for redemption
September 5th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
I take from this a sadness over the state we have left the world in. A sad poem that begs for redemption
September 5th, 2025 04:24
naivety, or, an idealist
sorenbarrett said:
An existential poem of need for meaning for progress and development. Nicely worded in most poetic form
September 4th, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
An existential poem of need for meaning for progress and development. Nicely worded in most poetic form
September 4th, 2025 05:01
Futile
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal reflections in this poem It creates images that in metaphor take time to sink in. Nicely done
August 26th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal reflections in this poem It creates images that in metaphor take time to sink in. Nicely done
August 26th, 2025 04:56
Quietude
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of feeling a bit better than usual and this is a day to enjoy, nice positive write, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 11:04
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of feeling a bit better than usual and this is a day to enjoy, nice positive write, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 11:04
Stuck In Time
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of ineptness and powerlessness against superior forces. A poem of insignificance. Well written
July 26th, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of ineptness and powerlessness against superior forces. A poem of insignificance. Well written
July 26th, 2025 05:29
Ghost
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Desolation like a dessert road where the unmet sand lies and waits perhaps for time to pass perhaps to become a path or a part of the landscape some day, a very reflective poem !
July 20th, 2025 13:42
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Desolation like a dessert road where the unmet sand lies and waits perhaps for time to pass perhaps to become a path or a part of the landscape some day, a very reflective poem !
July 20th, 2025 13:42
Ghost
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sends feelings of pain and unanswered questions of loss and inequity that needs recompense. Nicely done
July 20th, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sends feelings of pain and unanswered questions of loss and inequity that needs recompense. Nicely done
July 20th, 2025 12:59
Distance
sorenbarrett said:
Astral projection comes to mind where the astral body travels through space and time. A rather supernatural and esoteric write. Well done with good imagery.
July 19th, 2025 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
Astral projection comes to mind where the astral body travels through space and time. A rather supernatural and esoteric write. Well done with good imagery.
July 19th, 2025 16:11
Transformation
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being spoken to by someone from a different universe, an interesting and enjoyable read
July 16th, 2025 18:29
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being spoken to by someone from a different universe, an interesting and enjoyable read
July 16th, 2025 18:29
Transformation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks as if from another world. It holds power in a breath. A fave
July 16th, 2025 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks as if from another world. It holds power in a breath. A fave
July 16th, 2025 07:10
Sit Still
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write calling for treating nature as an equal and value and protect it, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 08:41
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write calling for treating nature as an equal and value and protect it, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 08:41
Sit Still
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to take notice of nature and wisdom and accept natures equality. A lovely thought put in wonderful verse
June 16th, 2025 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to take notice of nature and wisdom and accept natures equality. A lovely thought put in wonderful verse
June 16th, 2025 08:32
End
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write at the current state of the world and the feeling of hopelessness that many have, nicely expressed
May 16th, 2025 09:21
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write at the current state of the world and the feeling of hopelessness that many have, nicely expressed
May 16th, 2025 09:21
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