Comments received on poems by MatPie
Haiku #1
sorenbarrett said:
I got this senryu it is the tarot card of the hanged man inverted that one is ready and open to moving on using the knowledge gained during a period of suspension to further one\'s life. A great senryu
September 22nd, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
I got this senryu it is the tarot card of the hanged man inverted that one is ready and open to moving on using the knowledge gained during a period of suspension to further one\'s life. A great senryu
September 22nd, 2025 04:46
meditating in the morning
sorenbarrett said:
Here is meditation and reflection in a poem about all about and all within. Nicely penned
September 20th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Here is meditation and reflection in a poem about all about and all within. Nicely penned
September 20th, 2025 03:55
time was never a friend to the body
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of gradual deterioration in this poem. A sense of entropy. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of gradual deterioration in this poem. A sense of entropy. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 03:49
the guilt of the past is a burden but also a journey to self-discovery
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
It captures both the lingering weight of past regrets and the deep self-examination that comes with trying to reconcile past dreams with present reality. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:41
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
It captures both the lingering weight of past regrets and the deep self-examination that comes with trying to reconcile past dreams with present reality. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:41
the guilt of the past is a burden but also a journey to self-discovery
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the discontent of unfulfilled dreams in this poem constrained by public expectations and molded into what society demands. A wonderful write
September 17th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the discontent of unfulfilled dreams in this poem constrained by public expectations and molded into what society demands. A wonderful write
September 17th, 2025 04:55
Fall
sorenbarrett said:
This one contains feelings of alienation, isolation, not fitting, a desire to melt into nothingness and feelings of disintegration physically. A sad poem of rage against the world.
September 15th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
This one contains feelings of alienation, isolation, not fitting, a desire to melt into nothingness and feelings of disintegration physically. A sad poem of rage against the world.
September 15th, 2025 05:12
Naked
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is it is only a matter of looking for it. A lovely write about being oneself and finding beauty in what ever lies around us. Loved it
September 14th, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is it is only a matter of looking for it. A lovely write about being oneself and finding beauty in what ever lies around us. Loved it
September 14th, 2025 05:32
Cycle
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a feel of day by day taking things as they come and going with the flow. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a feel of day by day taking things as they come and going with the flow. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 04:12
Midnight
sorenbarrett said:
Like a substance induced intoxication this poem joins fragments as it journeys on a inner cerebral trip between disjoined distractions to a place of unity. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Like a substance induced intoxication this poem joins fragments as it journeys on a inner cerebral trip between disjoined distractions to a place of unity. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 04:17
oh, beautiful sky
sorenbarrett said:
I take from this a sadness over the state we have left the world in. A sad poem that begs for redemption
September 5th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
I take from this a sadness over the state we have left the world in. A sad poem that begs for redemption
September 5th, 2025 04:24
naivety, or, an idealist
sorenbarrett said:
An existential poem of need for meaning for progress and development. Nicely worded in most poetic form
September 4th, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
An existential poem of need for meaning for progress and development. Nicely worded in most poetic form
September 4th, 2025 05:01
Futile
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal reflections in this poem It creates images that in metaphor take time to sink in. Nicely done
August 26th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal reflections in this poem It creates images that in metaphor take time to sink in. Nicely done
August 26th, 2025 04:56
Quietude
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of feeling a bit better than usual and this is a day to enjoy, nice positive write, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 11:04
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of feeling a bit better than usual and this is a day to enjoy, nice positive write, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 11:04
Stuck In Time
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of ineptness and powerlessness against superior forces. A poem of insignificance. Well written
July 26th, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of ineptness and powerlessness against superior forces. A poem of insignificance. Well written
July 26th, 2025 05:29
Ghost
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Desolation like a dessert road where the unmet sand lies and waits perhaps for time to pass perhaps to become a path or a part of the landscape some day, a very reflective poem !
July 20th, 2025 13:42
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Desolation like a dessert road where the unmet sand lies and waits perhaps for time to pass perhaps to become a path or a part of the landscape some day, a very reflective poem !
July 20th, 2025 13:42
Ghost
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sends feelings of pain and unanswered questions of loss and inequity that needs recompense. Nicely done
July 20th, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sends feelings of pain and unanswered questions of loss and inequity that needs recompense. Nicely done
July 20th, 2025 12:59
Distance
sorenbarrett said:
Astral projection comes to mind where the astral body travels through space and time. A rather supernatural and esoteric write. Well done with good imagery.
July 19th, 2025 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
Astral projection comes to mind where the astral body travels through space and time. A rather supernatural and esoteric write. Well done with good imagery.
July 19th, 2025 16:11
Transformation
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being spoken to by someone from a different universe, an interesting and enjoyable read
July 16th, 2025 18:29
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being spoken to by someone from a different universe, an interesting and enjoyable read
July 16th, 2025 18:29
Transformation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks as if from another world. It holds power in a breath. A fave
July 16th, 2025 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks as if from another world. It holds power in a breath. A fave
July 16th, 2025 07:10
Sit Still
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write calling for treating nature as an equal and value and protect it, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 08:41
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write calling for treating nature as an equal and value and protect it, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 08:41
Sit Still
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to take notice of nature and wisdom and accept natures equality. A lovely thought put in wonderful verse
June 16th, 2025 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to take notice of nature and wisdom and accept natures equality. A lovely thought put in wonderful verse
June 16th, 2025 08:32
End
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write at the current state of the world and the feeling of hopelessness that many have, nicely expressed
May 16th, 2025 09:21
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write at the current state of the world and the feeling of hopelessness that many have, nicely expressed
May 16th, 2025 09:21
End
sorenbarrett said:
The title well fitting this poem speaks of the temporal nature of all. Nicely imaged and worded it leaves a sense of hopelessness. Well done
May 16th, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
The title well fitting this poem speaks of the temporal nature of all. Nicely imaged and worded it leaves a sense of hopelessness. Well done
May 16th, 2025 09:15
Numb
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and sad. Well done, and welcome to MPS! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 13:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and sad. Well done, and welcome to MPS! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 13:17
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