Comments received on poems by MatPie



Stuck In Time
sorenbarrett said:

A sense of ineptness and powerlessness against superior forces. A poem of insignificance. Well written

July 26th, 2025 05:29

Ghost
Mourgana of the Fey said:

Desolation like a dessert road where the unmet sand lies and waits perhaps for time to pass perhaps to become a path or a part of the landscape some day, a very reflective poem !

July 20th, 2025 13:42

Ghost
sorenbarrett said:

This poem sends feelings of pain and unanswered questions of loss and inequity that needs recompense. Nicely done

July 20th, 2025 12:59

Distance
sorenbarrett said:

Astral projection comes to mind where the astral body travels through space and time. A rather supernatural and esoteric write. Well done with good imagery.

July 19th, 2025 16:11

Transformation
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of being spoken to by someone from a different universe, an interesting and enjoyable read

July 16th, 2025 18:29

Transformation
sorenbarrett said:

This poem speaks as if from another world. It holds power in a breath. A fave

July 16th, 2025 07:10

Sit Still
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 16th, 2025 09:40

Sit Still
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write calling for treating nature as an equal and value and protect it, enjoyed the read

June 16th, 2025 08:41

Sit Still
sorenbarrett said:

A plea to take notice of nature and wisdom and accept natures equality. A lovely thought put in wonderful verse

June 16th, 2025 08:32

End
Poetic Licence said:

A well written write at the current state of the world and the feeling of hopelessness that many have, nicely expressed

May 16th, 2025 09:21

End
sorenbarrett said:

The title well fitting this poem speaks of the temporal nature of all. Nicely imaged and worded it leaves a sense of hopelessness. Well done

May 16th, 2025 09:15

Numb
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊

May 14th, 2025 16:50

Numb
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Powerful and sad. Well done, and welcome to MPS! 🌹👏

May 14th, 2025 13:17

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May 14th, 2025 11:55

Numb
sorenbarrett said:

A sad write of deterioration. A powerful write

May 14th, 2025 11:55