Comments received on poems by Michael A. McGuire



Unconscious Acts of Self Inflicted Agony
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of pain and suffering well worded and nicely written

July 9th, 2026 07:22

The Sun\'s Salvation
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem of prayer for a brighter day and the encouragement that it is coming. Nicely worded with some internal rhyme. Well done.

July 8th, 2026 08:54

Satan\'s Song of Sorrow
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that now sounds familiar. Nicely done

July 7th, 2026 07:20

Spring: A time for change and new hope
sorenbarrett said:

The pairing of spring with birth and creation and as such with God and heaven is a logical progression and works well in this poem. Nicely done

July 6th, 2026 17:45

Hope in the midst of Despair
2781 said:

For those with eyes to see.

July 5th, 2026 09:38

Hope in the midst of Despair
sorenbarrett said:

Chaos of life presented in this write with great internal rhyme. Nicely done

July 5th, 2026 07:28

The Poet’s Creed
soheil khodaparasti said:

In The Old Man and the Sea, Hemingway reminds us: \"A man can be destroyed but not defeated.\"

July 4th, 2026 09:37

The Poet’s Creed
Syd said:

Well written Michael 👏

- Syd 🍄

July 4th, 2026 07:23

The Poet’s Creed
sorenbarrett said:

The swift hand of mortals erases all even themselves. Well written

July 4th, 2026 07:10

Sunset
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful poetic image painted in these words. Well done and a fave

July 3rd, 2026 06:13

A Mother’s Love
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem of mother\'s love enumerating all the things she would do for her child. Nicely done

July 2nd, 2026 08:50

A Mother’s Love
Friendship said:

Lovely written

July 2nd, 2026 07:53

Resignation
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poetic expression of how the only person that can make or break us is ourself and our resignation. Well done

July 1st, 2026 09:25

Later Days
2781 said:

I prefer murder, at least those left have someone to blame.

June 30th, 2026 08:02

Later Days
sorenbarrett said:

Metaphoric in its personification of suicide. Dark it speaks out from beyond. Well done

June 30th, 2026 06:06

Perception
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic definition nicely worded. Well done.

June 29th, 2026 08:47

Perception
2781 said:

We need a good helper though.

June 29th, 2026 06:59

The Quest
sorenbarrett said:

A good message yes indeed to be enlightened one must have the courage to enter the unknown and give up what one knows

June 28th, 2026 08:30

Dance on Fire
sorenbarrett said:

I love image of emotions as a dance on fire and love is such. Well written

June 27th, 2026 07:33

Freedom/Escape
sorenbarrett said:

Carpe diem is the message I get from this poem. Lovely

June 26th, 2026 07:02

A Combination of Quotes and Philosophical Insights
ms.divine said:

The last line got me 🤗🫶🏿✍🏼

June 26th, 2026 01:18

A Combination of Quotes and Philosophical Insights
orchidee said:

I had a feeling this was going to be long! Good write of LIV (54, that is!) writings, M.

June 25th, 2026 13:55

A Combination of Quotes and Philosophical Insights
sorenbarrett said:

A book of chapters all laid out and titled. It seems a modern day Tao or Analects of Confucius. Nicely done my favorite part the first twenty or so. Well done

June 25th, 2026 07:39

Just Glad to be Alive
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of gratitude that speaks of acknowledging all the things we have to be grateful for. Very nicely written

June 24th, 2026 06:37

Schizophrenic Scribblings of the Lost Union
sorenbarrett said:

Dark, nihilistic, it in its existentialism finds a dystopian society where not only does freedom not exist but it is advertised as such. Surreal becomes too real here. Well done

June 23rd, 2026 06:52

Nowhere to Hide
ms.divine said:

Great write this is relatable

June 22nd, 2026 09:40

Nowhere to Hide
sorenbarrett said:

A hard look at life. Nicely written

June 22nd, 2026 06:04

Eternal Love
GoddessEYES said:

Love it new beginnings in love 💕

June 21st, 2026 22:14

Eternal Love
Friendship said:

Nicely done

June 21st, 2026 14:03

Eternal Love
sorenbarrett said:

Although it names no force by name it implies a higher power and is spiritual in nature. Nicely written

June 21st, 2026 07:21

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