Comments received on poems by SheWasTheSun
Touch the Moon
HappyMarii said:
\"My own destiny sings\" Such a delicious line, thank you for sharing your poem! It was lovely.
December 11th, 2016 19:32
HappyMarii said:
\"My own destiny sings\" Such a delicious line, thank you for sharing your poem! It was lovely.
December 11th, 2016 19:32
Don\'t Wear That
Augustus said:
If only older peers and adults would leave kids to their own devices in these matters. Great!
December 7th, 2016 15:37
Augustus said:
If only older peers and adults would leave kids to their own devices in these matters. Great!
December 7th, 2016 15:37
Annie
Daniel said:
A great piece of writing, I think we all know an Annie! A brilliant poem!
December 6th, 2016 13:12
Daniel said:
A great piece of writing, I think we all know an Annie! A brilliant poem!
December 6th, 2016 13:12
Annie
Christina8 said:
Wow this is an excellent poem, but terrifying. Excellent last line! Great job!
December 5th, 2016 14:39
Christina8 said:
Wow this is an excellent poem, but terrifying. Excellent last line! Great job!
December 5th, 2016 14:39
Easy
SabreLi said:
Such true words; people are always taking the so-called \'easy\' route, but often in times of great sadness and pain, neither option is really \'easy\'. I, for one, tend to turn pain into anger as I find this much easier to deal with than hurt and yet, beneath the surface, the pain still exists. Well done xx
November 30th, 2016 14:58
SabreLi said:
Such true words; people are always taking the so-called \'easy\' route, but often in times of great sadness and pain, neither option is really \'easy\'. I, for one, tend to turn pain into anger as I find this much easier to deal with than hurt and yet, beneath the surface, the pain still exists. Well done xx
November 30th, 2016 14:58
The Complex Art of Change
Augustus said:
The poem consistently reflects many aspects of change throughout. Nicely done.
October 9th, 2016 22:25
Augustus said:
The poem consistently reflects many aspects of change throughout. Nicely done.
October 9th, 2016 22:25
Your Voice
P.X. Vexxus said:
Love this. Our voices can be powerful, it can shape and change the lives of people around us, and the world itself. Thank you for sharing.
October 5th, 2016 01:42
P.X. Vexxus said:
Love this. Our voices can be powerful, it can shape and change the lives of people around us, and the world itself. Thank you for sharing.
October 5th, 2016 01:42
Light
foldingchairs said:
I really enjoyed the twist you added at the end, where you learn that even though she is light, she does not love her light. It really resonated with me and was beautifully written.
October 4th, 2016 14:28
foldingchairs said:
I really enjoyed the twist you added at the end, where you learn that even though she is light, she does not love her light. It really resonated with me and was beautifully written.
October 4th, 2016 14:28
Light
Augustus said:
Bulimia and anorexia are real challenges for the young.
Nicely done.
October 4th, 2016 11:29
Augustus said:
Bulimia and anorexia are real challenges for the young.
Nicely done.
October 4th, 2016 11:29
Your Burdens
Augustus said:
I can interpret this several ways. It could represent looking in a mirror and talking to our other half, the self deprecating abuser who cuts.. Or some one who is tired of the treatment they have received and saying "look, you are the one with the problem, I'm out of here." Anyway it caught my attention and was enjoyable.
September 22nd, 2016 21:50
Augustus said:
I can interpret this several ways. It could represent looking in a mirror and talking to our other half, the self deprecating abuser who cuts.. Or some one who is tired of the treatment they have received and saying "look, you are the one with the problem, I'm out of here." Anyway it caught my attention and was enjoyable.
September 22nd, 2016 21:50
Inside
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANGEL for a very challenging poem. In my relationships with Females I try to let them take the lead and never ever move to fast. You are all very very precious and I would hate to think I was a "Silly Man" who pushed a Girl back ~ inside herself ! This is a beautifully written poem ~ neat quatrains with a consistent abab ~ cdcd etc rhyming pattern. Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN (UK)
September 13th, 2016 05:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANGEL for a very challenging poem. In my relationships with Females I try to let them take the lead and never ever move to fast. You are all very very precious and I would hate to think I was a "Silly Man" who pushed a Girl back ~ inside herself ! This is a beautifully written poem ~ neat quatrains with a consistent abab ~ cdcd etc rhyming pattern. Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN (UK)
September 13th, 2016 05:02
She\'s Made of Contradictions
lysistrata said:
Tonight we'd raise a glass of Vinsanto to your talent....and bright future.🍷🍷🍷🍷🎂🎊
Has it got autobiographical elements?!
August 9th, 2016 09:25
lysistrata said:
Tonight we'd raise a glass of Vinsanto to your talent....and bright future.🍷🍷🍷🍷🎂🎊
Has it got autobiographical elements?!
August 9th, 2016 09:25
She\'s Made of Contradictions
rrodriguez said:
This is very nicely written. Great job. Enjoyed reading it.
August 9th, 2016 06:58
rrodriguez said:
This is very nicely written. Great job. Enjoyed reading it.
August 9th, 2016 06:58
Thunderstorms
lysistrata said:
I love your subject matter and your writing.
But it could always be 'improved'?!
You have to keep getting better.....
July 31st, 2016 03:33
lysistrata said:
I love your subject matter and your writing.
But it could always be 'improved'?!
You have to keep getting better.....
July 31st, 2016 03:33
Smile Spell
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I really enjoyed this piece. I t made me smile for sure...xxxooo
July 21st, 2016 00:27
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I really enjoyed this piece. I t made me smile for sure...xxxooo
July 21st, 2016 00:27
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