Comments received on poems by SheWasTheSun
Sidewalk Cracks II
Goldfinch60 said:
Your love will push through, love is so powerful.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 23:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Your love will push through, love is so powerful.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 23:51
Sidewalk Cracks II
MendedFences27 said:
I just finished Part 1 and now I\'m crushed. I hope this is fiction and you guys are still good.
Apart from that it\'s a nice little poem with a strong hopeful outlook. Chin Up. - Phil A.
August 3rd, 2020 22:11
MendedFences27 said:
I just finished Part 1 and now I\'m crushed. I hope this is fiction and you guys are still good.
Apart from that it\'s a nice little poem with a strong hopeful outlook. Chin Up. - Phil A.
August 3rd, 2020 22:11
Sidewalk Cracks
MendedFences27 said:
True Love \"lives in the sidewalk cracks,\" between the lines, and many other hidden places. And as Andy said \"It never dies.\" As time passes love \"grows,\" becomes stronger, deeper, and more pleasurable.
Your poem captures all those hidden facets of a relationship that endures.It is very unique, It inspires. - Phil A.
August 3rd, 2020 22:06
MendedFences27 said:
True Love \"lives in the sidewalk cracks,\" between the lines, and many other hidden places. And as Andy said \"It never dies.\" As time passes love \"grows,\" becomes stronger, deeper, and more pleasurable.
Your poem captures all those hidden facets of a relationship that endures.It is very unique, It inspires. - Phil A.
August 3rd, 2020 22:06
Sidewalk Cracks
Goldfinch60 said:
True love never dies and will always find a way forwards (or upwards) in life.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
True love never dies and will always find a way forwards (or upwards) in life.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 00:16
Sleepless Nights
dusk arising said:
The sunrise is, in my personal estimation, the finest of gifts for it means we are another day alive on this planet.
Deepest sympathy and empathy with you in this time of fear for your loved one. May all those near and dear to you enjoy many more dawning of the days ahead once these troubled times are behind us.
Stay safe, be strong.
July 3rd, 2020 08:08
dusk arising said:
The sunrise is, in my personal estimation, the finest of gifts for it means we are another day alive on this planet.
Deepest sympathy and empathy with you in this time of fear for your loved one. May all those near and dear to you enjoy many more dawning of the days ahead once these troubled times are behind us.
Stay safe, be strong.
July 3rd, 2020 08:08
Six Days
jarcher54 said:
This bit is lovely and heart-breaking:
I wonder how long
Until you\'re really gone
July 3rd, 2020 00:26
jarcher54 said:
This bit is lovely and heart-breaking:
I wonder how long
Until you\'re really gone
July 3rd, 2020 00:26
Every Sister
jarcher54 said:
It is important for women to speak their piece at this time of reckoning. As a man I pledge not to be defensive, not to deny, not to make excuses or claim to be the exception, not to argue with your premise... I pledge to listen. I appreciate you being so clear, so firm, so emphatic with such a vital message.
July 3rd, 2020 00:18
jarcher54 said:
It is important for women to speak their piece at this time of reckoning. As a man I pledge not to be defensive, not to deny, not to make excuses or claim to be the exception, not to argue with your premise... I pledge to listen. I appreciate you being so clear, so firm, so emphatic with such a vital message.
July 3rd, 2020 00:18
Sleepless Nights
jarcher54 said:
Many of us are experiencing sleepless nights. Thanks for reminding us of the small blessing of the new day... even if we badly need a nap later. I will make a point of appreciating tomorrow\'s sunrise and will keep your father and the all others who have become sick in my thoughts as the sun comes up over my neighbor\'s pecan trees.
July 3rd, 2020 00:11
jarcher54 said:
Many of us are experiencing sleepless nights. Thanks for reminding us of the small blessing of the new day... even if we badly need a nap later. I will make a point of appreciating tomorrow\'s sunrise and will keep your father and the all others who have become sick in my thoughts as the sun comes up over my neighbor\'s pecan trees.
July 3rd, 2020 00:11
Unbecoming
MendedFences27 said:
Before we can love anyone or anything we must first love ourselves.Once we are safe in our own skin, then we can let others in. All this advice is what I see in your poem. Someone is reaching self-awareness and will go forward with an open heart. A very eye-opening poem. Nicely done - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:18
MendedFences27 said:
Before we can love anyone or anything we must first love ourselves.Once we are safe in our own skin, then we can let others in. All this advice is what I see in your poem. Someone is reaching self-awareness and will go forward with an open heart. A very eye-opening poem. Nicely done - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:18
Unbecoming
Goddess of the Mist said:
Awesome, I love this poem and the freedom it conveys!
June 8th, 2020 21:26
Goddess of the Mist said:
Awesome, I love this poem and the freedom it conveys!
June 8th, 2020 21:26
Forgiveness
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoyed reading this piece. It is very true. Forgiveness is very powerful.
We must forgive.
Ask Jesus to forgive you of your sins, and He will.
Christ saves.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key
May 29th, 2020 00:20
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoyed reading this piece. It is very true. Forgiveness is very powerful.
We must forgive.
Ask Jesus to forgive you of your sins, and He will.
Christ saves.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key
May 29th, 2020 00:20
These Nights
MendedFences27 said:
Such nights as these come all too often it seems. Unhappy relationships
can weigh on the soul. Yet there are only two choices, Yes or No. Men can be like devils, but when they are, it is best to say Farewell.
Your poem describes the pain of such weight very distinctly. One can feel the agony in your words.. a brilliant lament of the pain of heartbreak. Well done.
Perhaps, \"Over and over and over again.\" - Phil A.
March 6th, 2020 23:16
MendedFences27 said:
Such nights as these come all too often it seems. Unhappy relationships
can weigh on the soul. Yet there are only two choices, Yes or No. Men can be like devils, but when they are, it is best to say Farewell.
Your poem describes the pain of such weight very distinctly. One can feel the agony in your words.. a brilliant lament of the pain of heartbreak. Well done.
Perhaps, \"Over and over and over again.\" - Phil A.
March 6th, 2020 23:16
Rebel Pen
MendedFences27 said:
This short poem sums up the anguish of parting, and the reflection on it\'s correctness. We deal with it, all of us, differently. Some are freed quickly and some never let go. Your poetry gives us all a glimpse of what it\'s like to deal with the parting. Loved this one. -Phil A.
March 1st, 2020 23:32
MendedFences27 said:
This short poem sums up the anguish of parting, and the reflection on it\'s correctness. We deal with it, all of us, differently. Some are freed quickly and some never let go. Your poetry gives us all a glimpse of what it\'s like to deal with the parting. Loved this one. -Phil A.
March 1st, 2020 23:32
You Stopped By
MendedFences27 said:
When we\'re missing someone, a dream can ease the pain. Never completely, but momentarily we are are peace..
A pure depiction of such a dream, almost life-like, that ends in a more peaceful parting. I loved the flow and rhyming. A terrific poem. - Phil A.
March 1st, 2020 23:22
MendedFences27 said:
When we\'re missing someone, a dream can ease the pain. Never completely, but momentarily we are are peace..
A pure depiction of such a dream, almost life-like, that ends in a more peaceful parting. I loved the flow and rhyming. A terrific poem. - Phil A.
March 1st, 2020 23:22
He Has Me
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I can DEFINITELY RELATE TO THIS PIECE..i have been through it a gew times before..boysmenmen are very stranhe creatures sometimes..its crazy how they CONSUME US..anyway..its life..nice work
March 1st, 2020 18:00
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I can DEFINITELY RELATE TO THIS PIECE..i have been through it a gew times before..boysmenmen are very stranhe creatures sometimes..its crazy how they CONSUME US..anyway..its life..nice work
March 1st, 2020 18:00
He Has Me
MendedFences27 said:
This is beautiful poetry. A personal subject, expressed eloquently. the emotion runs through the entire poem. I like how you split the two stanzas and contrasted the with/without circumstances.
I wish to suggest a few things that might improve this. Small things. I will send them private message, if you friend me. - Phil A.
March 1st, 2020 16:50
MendedFences27 said:
This is beautiful poetry. A personal subject, expressed eloquently. the emotion runs through the entire poem. I like how you split the two stanzas and contrasted the with/without circumstances.
I wish to suggest a few things that might improve this. Small things. I will send them private message, if you friend me. - Phil A.
March 1st, 2020 16:50
Keep Running
Goldfinch60 said:
If you keep running you may always run into the one that is right for you.
Andy
February 16th, 2020 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
If you keep running you may always run into the one that is right for you.
Andy
February 16th, 2020 01:20
Just Like That
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write, may you always be here.
February 3rd, 2020 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write, may you always be here.
February 3rd, 2020 01:57
You Stopped By
dusk arising said:
May she come again into those dreams.
A delight to read.
January 20th, 2020 01:50
dusk arising said:
May she come again into those dreams.
A delight to read.
January 20th, 2020 01:50
Perhaps
Nicholas Browning said:
Love is fleeting, they always say. Though, what that really means I\'m not sure.
January 13th, 2020 22:37
Nicholas Browning said:
Love is fleeting, they always say. Though, what that really means I\'m not sure.
January 13th, 2020 22:37
Villains and Victims
Goldfinch60 said:
In all these contexts that he had became it gave you the one thing that cannot be taught and that is experience. Go forward in your life knowing that you now know more.
December 15th, 2019 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
In all these contexts that he had became it gave you the one thing that cannot be taught and that is experience. Go forward in your life knowing that you now know more.
December 15th, 2019 02:00
These Nights
Evergreen said:
Beautiful. I can relate to this. Throughly enjoyed reading this.
October 25th, 2019 01:13
Evergreen said:
Beautiful. I can relate to this. Throughly enjoyed reading this.
October 25th, 2019 01:13
Apologies
Clara said:
I sense such sadness, regret, sorrow, guilt here... To have chosen, voluntarily or not, the wrong person... Relatable and, under each line, quite devastating. To miss what once was, to wish you could go back... But this knew you, is worth that person\'s time too. I really liked this one. Well expressed.
October 11th, 2019 16:13
Clara said:
I sense such sadness, regret, sorrow, guilt here... To have chosen, voluntarily or not, the wrong person... Relatable and, under each line, quite devastating. To miss what once was, to wish you could go back... But this knew you, is worth that person\'s time too. I really liked this one. Well expressed.
October 11th, 2019 16:13
Apologies
dusk arising said:
Thoughts in time is absolutely right in her comment. We are not the mistakes, we are matured and shaped by our mistakes and joys. They are our character born of experience. This will inevitably lead to wisdom.... wisdom may be read about, but cannot be taught by anything other than one\'s own life.
October 11th, 2019 15:35
dusk arising said:
Thoughts in time is absolutely right in her comment. We are not the mistakes, we are matured and shaped by our mistakes and joys. They are our character born of experience. This will inevitably lead to wisdom.... wisdom may be read about, but cannot be taught by anything other than one\'s own life.
October 11th, 2019 15:35
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