Comments received on poems by SheWasTheSun
A Stunning Example
FredPeyer said:
SWTS, you wrote a stunning poem here. Beautifully written, I really like the second and fifth lines.
September 1st, 2017 20:32
FredPeyer said:
SWTS, you wrote a stunning poem here. Beautifully written, I really like the second and fifth lines.
September 1st, 2017 20:32
Stand By
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may the stage be set for the next act.
August 12th, 2017 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may the stage be set for the next act.
August 12th, 2017 00:39
Stand By
FredPeyer said:
I like the first line and then it gets even better. Very nice writing.
August 11th, 2017 21:29
FredPeyer said:
I like the first line and then it gets even better. Very nice writing.
August 11th, 2017 21:29
Rich in Influence
charlesbarrett said:
Spectacular write. This one goes straight into my favorites. “You burst into the air you’d cowered beneath”. Just breathtaking. Thank you for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 17:48
charlesbarrett said:
Spectacular write. This one goes straight into my favorites. “You burst into the air you’d cowered beneath”. Just breathtaking. Thank you for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 17:48
Picture Perfect Land
kevin browne said:
well what can I say about this one which hasn\'t been said by the beautiful construction itself. it says it all my dear wizardry poet. it shows how you have compiled a great mastery of words together and sprinkled glitter all over it. its a stunner of a poem and a brilliant theme also. great work.
July 24th, 2017 18:33
kevin browne said:
well what can I say about this one which hasn\'t been said by the beautiful construction itself. it says it all my dear wizardry poet. it shows how you have compiled a great mastery of words together and sprinkled glitter all over it. its a stunner of a poem and a brilliant theme also. great work.
July 24th, 2017 18:33
Picture Perfect Land
L.S.L said:
All i can do is applaud to your amazing poem, well done i love it
(Although i may not be an expert)
And have constructed my own meaning
Keep it up x
July 24th, 2017 17:29
L.S.L said:
All i can do is applaud to your amazing poem, well done i love it
(Although i may not be an expert)
And have constructed my own meaning
Keep it up x
July 24th, 2017 17:29
Unspoken
FredPeyer said:
Maya Angelou is a great poet and your poem is a fitting and beautifully written interpretation of her quote.
I like it a lot!
July 7th, 2017 22:50
FredPeyer said:
Maya Angelou is a great poet and your poem is a fitting and beautifully written interpretation of her quote.
I like it a lot!
July 7th, 2017 22:50
Unspoken
kevin browne said:
words of the unspoken poet maybe the best we read sometimes. I love your influence and how you turned it yourself into a piece of magic. thank God for the words we use otherwise we wouldn\'t be able to read such beautiful work as yours. fantastic my friend.
July 7th, 2017 21:23
kevin browne said:
words of the unspoken poet maybe the best we read sometimes. I love your influence and how you turned it yourself into a piece of magic. thank God for the words we use otherwise we wouldn\'t be able to read such beautiful work as yours. fantastic my friend.
July 7th, 2017 21:23
Unspoken
burning-embers said:
WOW To think Maya Angelou said all that to you in just one line!
July 7th, 2017 20:43
burning-embers said:
WOW To think Maya Angelou said all that to you in just one line!
July 7th, 2017 20:43
Before I Bleed
lostgirl24 said:
Very beautiful and strongly written! I really love this poem!
July 5th, 2017 17:28
lostgirl24 said:
Very beautiful and strongly written! I really love this poem!
July 5th, 2017 17:28
The Whispers
malubotelho said:
I know those whispers, they try to outshine us every moment of our life. I call them ego. I try not to listen to them. Beautiful poem. Lovely written. Thanks
June 28th, 2017 14:24
malubotelho said:
I know those whispers, they try to outshine us every moment of our life. I call them ego. I try not to listen to them. Beautiful poem. Lovely written. Thanks
June 28th, 2017 14:24
Shed
Louis Gibbs said:
A truly brilliant poem, She! I found it moving and was completely taken by it. More, please!
June 27th, 2017 21:21
Louis Gibbs said:
A truly brilliant poem, She! I found it moving and was completely taken by it. More, please!
June 27th, 2017 21:21
Shed
malubotelho said:
I\'m still trying to find the words for my comment. I only know it is a great work.
June 27th, 2017 20:26
malubotelho said:
I\'m still trying to find the words for my comment. I only know it is a great work.
June 27th, 2017 20:26
Shed
FredPeyer said:
Man, I read it three times! Personal re-incarnation! Tear yourself down, then build yourself up. A very well written and intriguing poem. Thank you.
June 27th, 2017 19:52
FredPeyer said:
Man, I read it three times! Personal re-incarnation! Tear yourself down, then build yourself up. A very well written and intriguing poem. Thank you.
June 27th, 2017 19:52
Glass Cases
Augustus said:
Great metaphor especially as glass is so fragile. Exceedingly well done
June 18th, 2017 21:32
Augustus said:
Great metaphor especially as glass is so fragile. Exceedingly well done
June 18th, 2017 21:32
Glass Cases
Hopey_xx said:
Very powerful and so well written. I enjoyed reading it!
June 18th, 2017 14:30
Hopey_xx said:
Very powerful and so well written. I enjoyed reading it!
June 18th, 2017 14:30
Write You Down
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant poem, SWTS! A great tribute to your mysterious Love.
June 18th, 2017 09:44
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant poem, SWTS! A great tribute to your mysterious Love.
June 18th, 2017 09:44
In Not Enough
Goldfinch60 said:
Hopefully Not Enough will become more. Good write.
June 16th, 2017 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Hopefully Not Enough will become more. Good write.
June 16th, 2017 00:46
In Not Enough
Louis Gibbs said:
Deeply felt, well expressed poem, \"Sun\". I, too, look for more.
June 15th, 2017 16:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Deeply felt, well expressed poem, \"Sun\". I, too, look for more.
June 15th, 2017 16:41
Lessons
Bibbeck said:
Wow! Deep! But very clever. I love the last 3 \'verses\' the most.
June 13th, 2017 17:28
Bibbeck said:
Wow! Deep! But very clever. I love the last 3 \'verses\' the most.
June 13th, 2017 17:28
Hips and Ribs
swingline said:
A titillating poem full of tease and exasperation . Well done .
May 20th, 2017 20:07
swingline said:
A titillating poem full of tease and exasperation . Well done .
May 20th, 2017 20:07
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