Comments received on poems by avigail



Transformation – life from the dead.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI PRECIOUS ~ Missed you this last few weeks ~ welcome back ! Thanks for reminding us that although we might be \"Created in God\'s likeness\" even Homo Sapiens is part of the natural cycle of things. From dust we came and to dust we shall return. I will be buried eventually (not cremated) and I thereby bequeath my body back to Mother Earth. Thanks for sharing your wisdom ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN

March 8th, 2017 17:18

Transformation – life from the dead.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

March 8th, 2017 15:12

Transformation – life from the dead.
lost-but-not-broken17 said:

very nice.. great write!

March 8th, 2017 13:53

Mother Earth , Death and life - dark poem
Augustus said:

Did your mom just pass? My condolences. This is a heartfelt poem of life, death and the nature of Mother Earth.
If you were near I would sing to you from the Kaddish, Yitgadal v’yitkadash sh’mei raba b’alma di-v’ra....with much love, A.

March 7th, 2017 17:10

spirit blows dark clouds away
Augustus said:

Damn, this is so poignant to my current situation. I know of the dark cloud and the perception behind it. Thank God for Ruah. Thanks. Nicely done. Love it!

February 11th, 2017 11:51

spirit blows dark clouds away
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

BEAUTIFUL THOUGHT AVI ~ Also very true in my experience ! When the grey clouds turn to blue ~ And the dark clouds roll away ~In the morning of a new life ~ When the Sun comes shining through ~ AMEN ~Hugs ~ BRIAN

February 11th, 2017 11:36

spirit blows dark clouds away
Fay Slimm. said:

Such an uplifting read - - spirit certainly does recharge our batteries.

February 11th, 2017 10:11

Streams in spaghetti mind
Augustus said:

By spaghetti I am imagining all of the neurons, axons, dentrites the pathways interconnected streaming in the brain carrying the \"beliefs, thoughts...\" yes years of observation. Kudos.

February 10th, 2017 15:50

Streams in spaghetti mind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ Beliefs ~ External and Internal Triggers are inside and outside us 24/7 and do lead to Thoughts ~ Imaginations etc etc. It is true our Brains are like a bowl of cooked SPAGHETTI each strand an emotion which intertwines and interacts. I\'m having Spag-bol for dinner ~ so while I\'m twirling each intertwined spaghetto on my fork I will give some more thought to your latest psychological ode. Intertwined Hugs ~ BRIAN

February 10th, 2017 11:09

Streams in spaghetti mind
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

February 10th, 2017 08:34

Vitality math
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

AMEN ~ AVI We are what we eat and a balanced diet harmonises ~ not just the physical body but also the mind & spirit as well ~ Hugs BRIAN

February 9th, 2017 18:02

Vitality math
Tony36 said:

Love it great write

February 9th, 2017 13:26

Vitality math
WriteBeLight said:

Love that Avigail!

February 9th, 2017 13:25

The “what and the how”
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS AVI for intriguing our minds with another important concept of the importance of the content of a BOOK and the COVER it is marketed in. Older Books often have a wonderful content but their cover is (by comparison with 21st C publications) VERY DULL so we have to learn *by experience\" TO NEVER JUDGE A BOOK BY IS COVER ! The same is true of CHOCOLATE BARS (Hershey\'s are awesome but the packaging is minimal !) and of course even more importantly (as we have discussed elsewhere MEN & WOMEN ! Trump and his Family are all well turned out but actions speak louder than haute couture ! Our own experience and the experience of other perceptive people is the key to seeing beyond fancy marketing and packaging ~ AMEN ~ Hugs BRIAN

February 8th, 2017 16:46

How old is s/he?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for jolting all our consciences AVI we are all guilty of focussing on our own peer group and dismissing a senile any SENIOR who is in a Rest Home or who looks space out ! This is my experience also ~ when I take time to know them and communicate wih them they are WONDERFUL ~ FUNNY and storehouses of a bygone age. In the UK we still have veterens of WW2 but they are all 90+ We do have a Pensioners Lunch each week at Church and I manage to go at least once a month (work permitting) and also a Coffee Morning at Church on a Staurday and we visit Rest Homes on a Sunday. An old Man asleep in the corner one Sunday ~ woke up when he smelled the Hot Buttered Buns ! He turned out to be a Fighter Pilot in WW2 (Wing Commander Boardman) who came alive when he showed me his souvenirs later. He has promised to came and give a Talk at College he is 95 ! I always agree with you AVI ~ and I ~ DON\'T JUDGE BY PHYSICAL DRESSING ! Big Hugs for being you ! Love BRIAN

February 7th, 2017 12:44

How old is s/he?
Tony36 said:

Great write, my Grandma is this way. Sometimes she gets names wrong, sometimes she forgets things, she may need a wheelchair to help get around. But she is still as bright as she ever was.

February 7th, 2017 09:05

hidden agenda
JerryBolton said:

There are smooth talkers and wandering walkers. When we are physically attracted with someone, it is easy to be misled, because we want so much to believe.

February 6th, 2017 19:43

hidden agenda
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

We all have AGENDAS AVI to cope with the \"Trivial round the Common Task\" ~ I like it when I can set my own (open) Agenda and be the Master of my own Destiny ! To me \"Hidden Agendas\" are anathema and are like \"Hidden Vices\" Thanks for sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN Please check my latest FUSION on Favorite American Presidents ~ Thanks B

February 6th, 2017 16:29

hidden agenda
Tony36 said:

Great write and great advice

February 6th, 2017 15:12

Living on earth and in the the clouds
WriteBeLight said:

It is a wonderful way to communicate. :)

February 5th, 2017 19:49

Living on earth and in the the clouds
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS AVI ~ I love the favt hat yoiu see CYBERSPACE as another ASTRAL DIMENSION ~ beautiful sensuous thought ! It enables me to share thoughts and hugs with someone as perfect and precious as you are in Body ~ Soul ~ Spirit ! Love in Cyberland ~ BRIAN XOX

February 5th, 2017 12:18

Living on earth and in the the clouds
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed

February 5th, 2017 09:50

mom
WriteBeLight said:

Insightful and full of images. Well done.

February 5th, 2017 08:03

mom
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed

February 4th, 2017 15:07

mom
Antoinette said:

I deffinately get this sense of a cycle and peeling back at the layers of your your mother truly is. I loved it. ;)

February 4th, 2017 11:45

New Order in the family
WriteBeLight said:

Family is family and it can be extremely tough to deal with, although, we do. Nice to hear from you. :)


February 3rd, 2017 19:50

New Order in the family
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HELLO AVI ~ Thanks for your poem today. It reminds me of the inevitable cycle on Earth of Birth and Death and translation to a new Dimension. The Scriptures teach us \"That GOD puts all in Families\" ~ Biological Families (which are so so important) Spiritual Familes (those with whom collectively we choose to reach out to the Creator) and intellectual Families (our Alma Maters) and transient groups like MPS. I value all these Families (as you do) and when one of my Biological Family passes over to their New Dimension then (almost subconsciously) I strengthen my links with those still confined to Planet Earth. Thanks for sharing ~ food for thought as usual ! Hugs BRIAN (Missed You !)

February 3rd, 2017 18:02

This year - 2017
illia said:

Love it. Wonderfully up. Guidance is a wonderful thing. Its even more beautiful when that has passed on to someone that uses your guidance and insight as a magnet for good. I\'m very much looking forward to 2017 very positive emotions. Lovely read 😊

December 30th, 2016 05:40

the secret club in the park
trinhead said:

brought me to walking my dog through the park and seeing all the people i pass- knowing they have a story to tell but knowing now isn\'t the time to tell it! beautiful!

December 29th, 2016 16:19

the secret club in the park
Augustus said:

This is less clinical, more personal and less abstract. I can form a picture in my mind of the park with other folks and animals. It is not any less or more worthy than your other poems, just (at least to me) a different style.

December 28th, 2016 21:44



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