Comments received on poems by avigail



karma and negative gossip
Augustus said:

great advice.


December 7th, 2016 23:36

karma and negative gossip
WriteBeLight said:

I believe in the Law of Attraction. Good advice.

December 7th, 2016 16:40

karma and negative gossip
Tony36 said:

Very true great write

December 7th, 2016 16:37

gap in the known
Augustus said:

Oh, you know all my faults. Fill in the gaps with nonsense and make mountains out of mole hills. Nicely done.

December 6th, 2016 16:43

gap in the known
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

December 6th, 2016 14:12

gap in the known
WriteBeLight said:

We all can have wild imaginations and anxiety. Thanks for the words of support!

December 6th, 2016 12:59

gap in the known
Daniel said:

Excellent piece, and absolutely spot on! We do tend to fill the unknown with all sorts of fictitious horrors and insurmountable problems,. Only to discover it to be something mundane! Great poem!

December 6th, 2016 12:44

gap in the known
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI for today\'s challenge. As we grow older (if we keep our Brains active) our knowledge increases and so too should our WISDOM & UNDERSTANDING ! We all have a conceptual field which is OUR WORLD VIEW of things. Of course there are GAPS ~ some of them quite scary ! I have found that year by year the GAPS are filled ~ BUT ~ sometimes new GAPS appear. Once again my SWEETEST TUTOR I take your advice and BREATH DEEPLY AND WAIT FOR THINGS TO BE SHOWN ! You are very precious to me ~ Love & HUGS ~ Your Tabla Rasa ~ BRIAN

December 6th, 2016 10:12

Habits
Augustus said:

Guilty as charged. Love the way you think.

December 5th, 2016 22:58

Habits
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 5th, 2016 14:38

Habits
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhhhh AVI ~ I big subject and a challenging one ! As we get older our habits get more ingrained and to some extent define who we are. I dont use tobacco or drugs and only use alcohol socially ~ I have never been drunk. I do have some male habits but I am in control of them ~ they are not in control of me. However I will give myself a \"habit check\" just to make sure. Love & Big Hugs ~ Your obedient pupil ~ BRIAN

December 5th, 2016 12:21

Creator images and robots
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

AS YOU KNOW AVI ~ The Scriptures teach us tha GOD is SOVEREIGN. He is TRANSCENDENT in CREATION and brought everything into being by the POWER of His WORD. GOID is also IMMANENT in CR$ATION and controls and holds the UNIVERSE together again by the WORD of HIS POWER. Pllanet Earth and the Human Race (created in IMAGO DEO) are very very precious to GOD ! We each one have a choice between GOOD & EVIL ~ God created us with free will ~ so it is inevitable that we build the beat of us (and the worst) into our ROBOTS and our Science Fiction. Of course GOD is watching ~ 24/7 ~ and I for one KNOW GOD never allows anything to get TOTALLY OUT OF HAND ! Thanks for sharing ~ Love and loving Hugs ~ BRIAN

November 30th, 2016 10:50

understanding
Augustus said:

Very understanding. What a lovely way to make this concept clearer, to encourage us to reexamine how we perceive each other and ourselves. Motivating.

November 29th, 2016 17:51

understanding
Tony36 said:

Challenging and wonderful write

November 29th, 2016 14:03

understanding
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS AVI ~ for another challenging and philosophic poem ! Beautifully written and rhymed ! To acknowledge someone you have to be SYMPATHETIC to understand someone you have to be EMPATHETIC It\'s the difference between standing with someone and standing UNDER A SHOWER with someone ! That really is UNDERSTANDING ! Love and Big Hugs ~ BRIAN

November 29th, 2016 08:52

Don\'t judge the people that play life
Tony36 said:

Great write love it

November 28th, 2016 17:18

Don\'t judge the people that play life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

In my experience \"People who play life\" never sail too close to the wind ~ AND ~ always have a way to escape ~ because as with all actors ~ they have read (and memorised) the PLOT ~ Amor y Abrazos ~ Tu Amigo ~ BRIAN

November 28th, 2016 16:46

Are you lonely? – don’t be
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

November 27th, 2016 14:04

Are you lonely? – don’t be
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

ARE YOU LONESOME TONIGHT ~ NO NO NO ~ AVI ! Because every day and in every way I do all the things on your list ~ I am one of your followers ~ Thanks for caring ! Love & Big Hugs ~ BRIAN

November 27th, 2016 11:41

eden on earth
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI AVI ~ I love to get at least FIVE A DAY of FRUIT & VEGGIES and of course of all the other nutritious thainghs GOD has provided for us ! God is GOOD ~ God is LOVE ~ so Love and lots of Hugs for you too ~ BRIAN

November 26th, 2016 10:48

eden on earth
WriteBeLight said:

The fresher the better. I wish everybody loved fruits and vegetables. They may not always be available. But have to try and search them out. Good healthy advice. ☺️

November 26th, 2016 09:47

Anxiety and PTSD – don’t let them get you crazy
Tony36 said:

PTSD is a growing problem with our military men and women. Anxiety is another problem that needs to be addressed. Great write

November 25th, 2016 12:59

Anxiety and PTSD – don’t let them get you crazy
WriteBeLight said:

I hope so much that your poem helps. I worry about all people with those conditions, and the terrible experiences they have been through. Very supportive message.

November 25th, 2016 10:23

healthy salad
WriteBeLight said:

Ok, now I\'m hungry....:) Delicious poem.

November 25th, 2016 02:03

healthy salad
Tony36 said:

Sounds goof

November 24th, 2016 12:46

healthy salad
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI AVI ~ YOU KNOW I\'M A CUDDLY BUNNY SO I LOVE SALAD ! LET ME RECAP: Fresh picked lettuce ~ celery ~ apple ~ onion and black pepper ~ Then to garnish: Turmeric (anti-inflammatory and anti-depressant etc) Garlic (suppresses cancer) ~ Baking Soda (indigestion)~ Olive Oil (polyunsaturated) and Apple (Cider) Vinegar (balances pH) etc etc. The dressing you have suggested Professor would make us live forever if taken daily ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Love & Big Hugs ~ Your devoted student BRIAN

November 24th, 2016 11:43

Be a sun not a moon
Tony36 said:

Awesome Awesome write

November 23rd, 2016 16:47

Be a sun not a moon
WriteBeLight said:

CAGAK. Life is so much better with your suggestion. That is great! Happy Thanksgiving!

November 23rd, 2016 16:08

Be a sun not a moon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

More good advice from the MPS Councillor ! Because I am male I have always had more of an affinity with Brother Sun than Sister Moon so i\'m not in danger of being a LUNATIC ~ more a HELIOSISM ! I like the mantra (for me it\'s a bit like repeating the Psalms or other verses of Scripture etc.) I like balance of the pentagon ~ Compassion ~ Appreciation ~ Gratitude ~ Attention ~ Kindness ~ These are TRAITS we need to exercise 24 / 7 especially coming up to the Christian Advent Period when people can become vert selfish and self centered ! My Family always practice TITHING in our Christian Giving and give 10% of our gross income to the LORD. At Christmas I like to support SEND A COW etc for the underdeveloped World and to try to give as much to needy Charities as I spend on my self and my Friends and Family all my nieces and nephews get a COW in KENYA as part of their Christmas Gift and they love it. Its all part of the AVI CAGAK Philosophy ! Love you HUGS ~ BRIAN

November 23rd, 2016 15:17

Be a sun not a moon
Elegant_Style said:

This is beautiful but you also manage to make it an adorably funny read!! Nice job

November 23rd, 2016 12:30



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