the secret club in the park
Augustus said:



December 28th, 2016 21:39

the secret club in the park
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 28th, 2016 09:25

Harmony
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written poem

December 27th, 2016 12:06

They don\'t answer
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS AVI ~ For a great message on a Special Day, In this \"Age of the Cyberman\" too many people are obsessed with negatives, Those who no longer email or send a card or invite you to functions ~ My attitude (like yours ?) is to say ~ It\'s over ~ le it GO ! I try to accentuate the POSITIVE and encourage and concentrate on those who are ACTIVE in my life. On MPS (for instance) people come & go each day ~ but there are those (like YOU !) ~ who i really love ~ so I try to comment on each of you \"lessons\" (and send you a hug !) and I love it when you comment on mine. Those that don\'t care I let slip out of my NET ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN. XOX

December 25th, 2016 14:10

Do your pave your path, or do you let the path lead you?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for reminding us ~ once again ~ AVI ~ That we can be MASTERS OF OUR OWN DESTINY ! We don\'t need to be blown aside by every wind of chance and circumstance ~ we can Plan and Plot and Pilot our own course ! BUT it does NOT happen by chance or even good luck ! It requires VITALITY ~ WILL POWER ~ HIGH SENSES and BALANCED HEALTH ~ AMEN. Thanks for providing the key points for my NEW YEAR SERMON ~ I love you ! Big CHRISTMAS Hugs ~ You best Pupil ever ~ BRiAN XOX

December 25th, 2016 03:26

life
Augustus said:

So many on the planet unaware. This needs to be in our schools. Nicely done.

December 23rd, 2016 12:29

life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FOR CARING & SHARING AVI ~ It is true what you say ~ All our times and All our comings and goings are IN GOD\'S HANDS ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN.

December 23rd, 2016 08:49

multi levels of writing
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

AS YOU KNOW ~ AVI ~ BETTER THAN ME \"The moving hand doth write and having writ moves on ~ Nor all thy piety nor wit can move it back to cancel half a line ~ nor all thy tears wash out a word of it ! The incidence and transience (yet permanence ?) of writing is a sobering thought. I have letters which I preserve (because of their preciousness) for all time even though the passion they express is long gone and irretrievable ~ and in some cases the writer has moved to a higher Astral Plane ! E-mails and the messages and poems and comments on MPS are both ephemeral and real ~ and in my impression to easily (and often hastily dispatched) We can send each other LOVE & HUGS because we have an excellent relationship built up gradually over many weeks and it is very precious ! BUT if I overstepped the mark and pressed SEND it could easily destroy what we have. BUT it is so easily done ~ which is part of the many problems of electronic communication. In the distant past 1990\'s when i didn\'t have a PC ~ I sometimes wrote and rewrote letters and even then did not post or hand deliver them for all the obvious reasons. I once sent a VALENTINE to the wrong SISTER ! But with E-mails and messages and comments on MPS it all happens too too fast ! Love and Hugs as ever ~ BRIAN

December 21st, 2016 16:55

multi levels of writing
Augustus said:

One can fill the day thinking about all of the thoughts and emotions this poem conjures up.

December 21st, 2016 14:43

more of the same
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 14th, 2016 14:24

This year - 2017
SilentLaugh said:

Great poem! I love how lengthy it is! It gives you a chance to explain everything! :P

December 13th, 2016 15:08

Children
Augustus said:

Save the children from dogmatics and helicopter parents.

December 10th, 2016 23:42

Children
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Great poem AVI and because we are all an influence on the CHILDREN in our Community it is achallenge to each one of us ! I\'m not a PARENT but I have lots of TEACHABLE and IMPRESSIONABLE Children in my extended Family and even more in my Community ! In everyday life we do teach (unwittingly) by example and that is a great challenge to each of us ! I am a Professional Teacher of Applied Science ~ but although all my students are 16+ they are still very very teachable and easily influenced. That is one of the many responsibilities of being an Adult in an increasingly adolescent World. Thanks again for mentoring us. Your Chief Learner ~ BRIAN Love & Hugs !

December 10th, 2016 15:30

Criticism
Tony36 said:

Awesomely written and expressed

December 9th, 2016 14:49

Criticism
illia said:

Absolutely fantastic I\'m still smiling from reading and still smiling whilst txting. I\'m kinda thinking the same. Don\'t give us stupid questions we already know that. Let us ask for own knowledge. Let us judge as ourselves nobody else. With all there whirly trixy illusion. Don\'t patronize he who already does that anyway. Keep your noise let me create mine. I think that\'s what I received. Well I did thankyou bloody marvellous. I\'m inspired 😆 pip

December 9th, 2016 13:13