Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight
Rain Power
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An interesting rainy day poem. Described swell in fine meter and rhyming. Kudos. The power of water yeahhh great lament style.
Nice to read from u again, hoping u will too my latest.
April 25th, 2017 13:23
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An interesting rainy day poem. Described swell in fine meter and rhyming. Kudos. The power of water yeahhh great lament style.
Nice to read from u again, hoping u will too my latest.
April 25th, 2017 13:23
Day After Long Weekend Blues
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful weekend, now back to the grind, One reason to hate Mondays or Tuesdays. Loved how you presented this, loved the rhyming, and it just flowed from beginning to end. Great write. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2017 20:14
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful weekend, now back to the grind, One reason to hate Mondays or Tuesdays. Loved how you presented this, loved the rhyming, and it just flowed from beginning to end. Great write. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2017 20:14
Day After Long Weekend Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes weekends are a boon for today\'s hard workers - very well told all the after effects of a long weekend.
April 24th, 2017 10:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes weekends are a boon for today\'s hard workers - very well told all the after effects of a long weekend.
April 24th, 2017 10:10
Day After Long Weekend Blues
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Being retired now I have seven day weekends all the time, saying that though I did work for forty seven years and one month without ever being out of work so I reckon I have earned my very long weekends.
April 24th, 2017 07:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Being retired now I have seven day weekends all the time, saying that though I did work for forty seven years and one month without ever being out of work so I reckon I have earned my very long weekends.
April 24th, 2017 07:58
Peregrine Pride
Goldfinch60 said:
Peregrines are wonderful birds. We have them in several places near to me and I have watched them in all their glory.
Good write WBL.
April 24th, 2017 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Peregrines are wonderful birds. We have them in several places near to me and I have watched them in all their glory.
Good write WBL.
April 24th, 2017 00:44
Peregrine Pride
P.H.Rose said:
Really lovely poem WBL
I\'ve got a little story tell you
Last week I woke up, went
Down stairs to my kitchen
To make my morning cuppa
As I looked out of the window
I couldn\'t believe what I was watching a hawk was eating
A smaller bird on my lawn.
I was told it was a hawk as
They eat their pray when they
Catch it... it only left feathers
On my lawn, not a bit of the bird
True story....
April 23rd, 2017 11:26
P.H.Rose said:
Really lovely poem WBL
I\'ve got a little story tell you
Last week I woke up, went
Down stairs to my kitchen
To make my morning cuppa
As I looked out of the window
I couldn\'t believe what I was watching a hawk was eating
A smaller bird on my lawn.
I was told it was a hawk as
They eat their pray when they
Catch it... it only left feathers
On my lawn, not a bit of the bird
True story....
April 23rd, 2017 11:26
Peregrine Pride
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I loved this poetic account of caring for Perigrine offspring - such wonderful birds and thanks for sharing.
April 23rd, 2017 08:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I loved this poetic account of caring for Perigrine offspring - such wonderful birds and thanks for sharing.
April 23rd, 2017 08:23
Peregrine Pride
orchidee said:
A fine write. We\'ve some huge kites that pass by now and again. Birds, that is, not the other sort. Oh do shut up, I tell myself! lol.
April 23rd, 2017 07:34
orchidee said:
A fine write. We\'ve some huge kites that pass by now and again. Birds, that is, not the other sort. Oh do shut up, I tell myself! lol.
April 23rd, 2017 07:34
Peregrine Pride
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY ~ Beautiful Birds ~ Beautiful Poem ! I have visited the MAYO ~ great Medical Centre I didn\'t know they had an Avian Ward ! Will check viseo link. Thanks for caring ~ Hugs BRIAN Please check my Poem and my Fusion on Cities ~ Thanks B.
April 23rd, 2017 07:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY ~ Beautiful Birds ~ Beautiful Poem ! I have visited the MAYO ~ great Medical Centre I didn\'t know they had an Avian Ward ! Will check viseo link. Thanks for caring ~ Hugs BRIAN Please check my Poem and my Fusion on Cities ~ Thanks B.
April 23rd, 2017 07:26
Blinders On
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY ~ I always thought you were a WYSIWYG and now I know ~ straight from the Filly\'s mouth ! Hugs BRIAN
April 22nd, 2017 14:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY ~ I always thought you were a WYSIWYG and now I know ~ straight from the Filly\'s mouth ! Hugs BRIAN
April 22nd, 2017 14:51
Blinders On
orchidee said:
I bet on a horse. A rocking horse. Now why does it never win?! lol.
April 22nd, 2017 10:14
orchidee said:
I bet on a horse. A rocking horse. Now why does it never win?! lol.
April 22nd, 2017 10:14
Blinders On
orchidee said:
Erm, I see a horse! heehee. Know what you mean though. Good write.
April 22nd, 2017 10:13
orchidee said:
Erm, I see a horse! heehee. Know what you mean though. Good write.
April 22nd, 2017 10:13
Driven Drive
orchidee said:
I dunno how I thought up all that rubbish (waffle!) of that verbal garbage (my other comment!) lol.
April 21st, 2017 14:11
orchidee said:
I dunno how I thought up all that rubbish (waffle!) of that verbal garbage (my other comment!) lol.
April 21st, 2017 14:11
Driven Drive
orchidee said:
You not got time to think about if you may be wasting time? You was saying.... but then you was distracted? Did another distraction then come along, to distract you even more? And have you got time to consider if I\'m wasting time by waffling here?! I wish I would shut up! heehee. Good write.
April 21st, 2017 14:09
orchidee said:
You not got time to think about if you may be wasting time? You was saying.... but then you was distracted? Did another distraction then come along, to distract you even more? And have you got time to consider if I\'m wasting time by waffling here?! I wish I would shut up! heehee. Good write.
April 21st, 2017 14:09
Driven Drive
Michael Edwards said:
If, at the end of the day, I can say I\'ve achieved something today no matter how small then its not been a wasted day- I\'m sure you achieve something worthwhile every day WBL
April 21st, 2017 10:11
Michael Edwards said:
If, at the end of the day, I can say I\'ve achieved something today no matter how small then its not been a wasted day- I\'m sure you achieve something worthwhile every day WBL
April 21st, 2017 10:11
Driven Drive
Goldfinch60 said:
One of the beauties of retirement is the ability to waste time and not get taken to task for it.
I do remember when it wasn\'t so.
April 21st, 2017 08:02
Goldfinch60 said:
One of the beauties of retirement is the ability to waste time and not get taken to task for it.
I do remember when it wasn\'t so.
April 21st, 2017 08:02
Foggy Fever
MendedFences27 said:
Time is a precious commodity. We work, eat and sleep and there is no time for leisure. Grab every second you can for yourself and enjoy them in any way you can. Your poem is a great expression of the workforce\'s dilemma, survival vs. leisure. TGIF - Phil A.
April 20th, 2017 20:31
MendedFences27 said:
Time is a precious commodity. We work, eat and sleep and there is no time for leisure. Grab every second you can for yourself and enjoy them in any way you can. Your poem is a great expression of the workforce\'s dilemma, survival vs. leisure. TGIF - Phil A.
April 20th, 2017 20:31
Foggy Fever
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written poem. I have become recently busy and have wacky hours. I have spring fever as well! Great write! Hope spring gets here even faster for the both of us!
April 20th, 2017 15:59
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written poem. I have become recently busy and have wacky hours. I have spring fever as well! Great write! Hope spring gets here even faster for the both of us!
April 20th, 2017 15:59
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