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Never Kid Myself
Michael Edwards said:

Only a fool fools himself (or herself!).

May 11th, 2017 09:36

Never Kid Myself
Goldfinch60 said:

You cannot fool yourself. God write.

May 11th, 2017 07:56

Never Kid Myself
swingline said:

If only people never lied but told the truth to the best of their ability .

May 11th, 2017 06:49

Never Kid Myself
orchidee said:

Depends if you (well, me then!) can look in the mirror without it cracking! heehee. A fine write. Is a vampire looking in your mirror there - no reflection. Not that I\'m gonna write about them - too \'dark\'.

May 11th, 2017 06:31

Never Kid Myself
Jessie said:

I love this poem. I find the message to be an important one-- trying not to kid yourself or fool yourself. Because if you fool yourself, you are the greater fool. This is really great insight into the innermost problem in our society. People not just lying to others, but lying to themselves so they can pretend they are someone who they\'re not. This is truly a wonderful poem.

May 11th, 2017 06:16

Stay Young
swingline said:

It would make me blue to give up the Blues .

May 10th, 2017 18:37

Stay Young
Michael Edwards said:

After a day of hard graft in the garden I feel I\'ve earned a bit of chocolate - errr perhaps not - mmm - well just a couple of bits.

May 10th, 2017 10:42

Stay Young
Fay Slimm. said:

Good advice - I agree to stay responsible is the best way of dumping the blues. Great read.

May 10th, 2017 09:04

Stay Young
orchidee said:

A fine write.

May 10th, 2017 08:20

Stay Young
Goldfinch60 said:

The blues are there sometimes so that you can appreciate the myriad good times there are in your life. Good write.

May 10th, 2017 08:10

Done With The Sick And Tired
Mizzy said:

we cant always carry an umbrella about unless its a retractable that fits into your handbag. Liked your poem. I am sick of being sick too x

May 9th, 2017 22:02

Done With The Sick And Tired
Michael Edwards said:

Whether the weather be wet or whether the weather be fine, I\'ll retire indoors with the fruit of the vine,

May 9th, 2017 13:42

Done With The Sick And Tired
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks HONEY (I have given you a very sweet name ~ because you are !) We live in a sick WORLD HONEY because of SIN & SATAN and every Man (& Woman) worldwide does what they consider what is right in their own eyes. This is why gossip and the TV ~ Radio ~ Internet etc makes us all sick. BUT NOT THE WEATHER ! In the US (like the UK) we have 4 Seasons ~ just as GOD promised so we know (as has happened in my lifetime) Spring always follows a Bad Winter and Summer ~ Spring and then the Fall. GOD designed Planet Earth (and its Seasons) to be the only Living Planet in the Milky Way ~ SO those that complain about the Weather in any Season or any State are in essence complaining against our Creator God. Some climate change is of course \"Man Made\" and we can\'t blame GOD for that ! WARMING HUGS ~ BRIAN

May 9th, 2017 09:01

Done With The Sick And Tired
orchidee said:

The hay fever? Get well soon. Good write.

May 9th, 2017 08:13

Done With The Sick And Tired
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

May 9th, 2017 08:12

Done With The Sick And Tired
swingline said:

Can\'t help it . I\'m a weather freak ! Live for tornadoes , floods , and the hurricane of the week . High pressure , low pressure , barometric bars . Cirrus , cumulus, niimbostratus , my how clouds look from afar ! Ice storms , droughts , dust storms that cover the car . Thank God for weather , the least intrusive subject to discuss by far .

May 9th, 2017 07:47

Have You Seen My Voice?
Michael Edwards said:

To think I may not find it
is something that I fear
But what is that?
I heard it
so it must be somewhere near.

May 8th, 2017 10:55

Have You Seen My Voice?
orchidee said:

Get well soon W!

May 8th, 2017 10:27

Have You Seen My Voice?
Goldfinch60 said:

such a sad state but a good write.

May 8th, 2017 07:51

Have You Seen My Voice?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for scaring HONEY ! In my experience \"Girls from New York ~ Love to Talk ~ Talk ~ Talk !\" That is true of all the American Girls I have met especially those from TEXAS. I love their accent and they love mine so we talk all night ! So I understand just how serious your loss of voice is to you ! We have an expression \"Go suck a zube !\" A ZUBE is a throat lozenge ~ I don\'t know if they are available in the US ? I would give you a throat massage with WD40 to loosen your vocal chords ! Croaky Hugs ~ BRIAN

May 8th, 2017 07:40

Have You Seen My Voice?
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

May 8th, 2017 07:08

Have You Seen My Voice?
vvnrose said:

If only I lost my voice for a day and could skip work and play.....!!!

May 8th, 2017 05:54

Please Stop The Cough
Michael Edwards said:

Allergies - don\'t they make you want to curse. I\'m not bothered by pollen but suffer cold induced urticaria which in simple terms: I\'m allergic to the cold - sounds daft but it\'s the opposite of those who suffer from heat rash.

May 7th, 2017 11:51

Please Stop The Cough
orchidee said:

Oh dear, pollen spells disaster for some - or irritation, annoyance, etc. A fine write.

May 7th, 2017 08:28

Suet Seeker
orchidee said:

A fine write WBL.

May 6th, 2017 10:46

Suet Seeker
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI HONEY ~ In the Winter when i lived at home ~ We always put out fatballs for the Birds and we did have a GREEN WOODPECKER as a regular visitor. I adore all varieties of BIRDS ~ Feathery Hugs ~ BRIAN

May 6th, 2017 09:44

Suet Seeker
Rajkumar said:

A good one write

May 6th, 2017 06:17

Think Before You Kink
Michael Edwards said:

We\'ve got cordless vacuum cleaners and the hose is on a reel said he smugly. The biggest problem I have is with the cords to the bedside lights which plug in to sockets somewhere under the bed. Enjoyed the write.

May 5th, 2017 11:01

Think Before You Kink
Tony36 said:

Great write, the fight with the hose goes on

May 5th, 2017 10:34

Think Before You Kink
orchidee said:

A fine write.

May 5th, 2017 10:16



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