Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight
Butterflies
P.H.Rose said:
This is wonderful.. lady.
Very well done...
My favourite insect...
They are so beautiful
And make me happy
When I see them..
April 2nd, 2017 10:05
P.H.Rose said:
This is wonderful.. lady.
Very well done...
My favourite insect...
They are so beautiful
And make me happy
When I see them..
April 2nd, 2017 10:05
Butterflies
Philip said:
Beautifully written!. There was a red admiral on our lawn yesterday just warming it\'s wings. Phil.G
April 2nd, 2017 07:46
Philip said:
Beautifully written!. There was a red admiral on our lawn yesterday just warming it\'s wings. Phil.G
April 2nd, 2017 07:46
Take Out The Trash
Goldfinch60 said:
Like Michael we get our rubbish bins collected but in our case black for non recoverable and green for recyclable, the garden waste I have to take to the waste tip for recycling - it gives me and my wife a trip out as we will always end up with coffee somewhere. I really know how to spoil her!
April 2nd, 2017 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Like Michael we get our rubbish bins collected but in our case black for non recoverable and green for recyclable, the garden waste I have to take to the waste tip for recycling - it gives me and my wife a trip out as we will always end up with coffee somewhere. I really know how to spoil her!
April 2nd, 2017 00:44
Take Out The Trash
Garry said:
The grinding reality of everyday life. Nicely done
April 1st, 2017 10:23
Garry said:
The grinding reality of everyday life. Nicely done
April 1st, 2017 10:23
Take Out The Trash
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring HONEY ! Always remember when you see on (sanitized) TV the child rag pickers on rubbish tips in India and elsewhere ~ always remember that our rubbish is their gold ~ RECYCLE & DONATE ~ Sanitized Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 1st, 2017 08:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring HONEY ! Always remember when you see on (sanitized) TV the child rag pickers on rubbish tips in India and elsewhere ~ always remember that our rubbish is their gold ~ RECYCLE & DONATE ~ Sanitized Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 1st, 2017 08:03
Take Out The Trash
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one - do you have the same type of collections as here in the UK - two weekly cycle - one week its the black bin with all non-recoverable waste, the next week green bin with garden refuse and also blue bin for recyclables (paper plastic, metal etc) although it does vary a bit depending on which authority you come under.
April 1st, 2017 06:08
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one - do you have the same type of collections as here in the UK - two weekly cycle - one week its the black bin with all non-recoverable waste, the next week green bin with garden refuse and also blue bin for recyclables (paper plastic, metal etc) although it does vary a bit depending on which authority you come under.
April 1st, 2017 06:08
Santuary Bar
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds like a great day to me,and i wonder who that good looking lady is sitting at the table
March 31st, 2017 21:29
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds like a great day to me,and i wonder who that good looking lady is sitting at the table
March 31st, 2017 21:29
Santuary Bar
MendedFences27 said:
Well, sounds like fun, in a \"Me\" kind of way, but we all need those moments from time to time. A long day at work always seems to make the drinks taste better. This poem ran smooth and conveyed the images and the action to a \"T.\" The theme of needing some \"Me\" time is unique, at least I\'ve not read much on it, lately. Well done. - Phil A.
March 31st, 2017 19:56
MendedFences27 said:
Well, sounds like fun, in a \"Me\" kind of way, but we all need those moments from time to time. A long day at work always seems to make the drinks taste better. This poem ran smooth and conveyed the images and the action to a \"T.\" The theme of needing some \"Me\" time is unique, at least I\'ve not read much on it, lately. Well done. - Phil A.
March 31st, 2017 19:56
Santuary Bar
P.H.Rose said:
Love this WBL.
Great poem,
On my own riding
The bus or sat in
A pub(bar) people
watching is the
Best time for me
To get inspiration
For my poems,
Also sat in bed
When my love is
Fast asleep is
Another good
Time. It\'s like
Being alone
Except when
She snores
Which believe
Me is a sound
I still don\'t believe
Comes out of that
Beautiful being..
Glad I found time
To read this...
Enjoyed it very much..
Norm.
March 31st, 2017 17:40
P.H.Rose said:
Love this WBL.
Great poem,
On my own riding
The bus or sat in
A pub(bar) people
watching is the
Best time for me
To get inspiration
For my poems,
Also sat in bed
When my love is
Fast asleep is
Another good
Time. It\'s like
Being alone
Except when
She snores
Which believe
Me is a sound
I still don\'t believe
Comes out of that
Beautiful being..
Glad I found time
To read this...
Enjoyed it very much..
Norm.
March 31st, 2017 17:40
Santuary Bar
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY ~ Very apt and it complements the frenzy of the \"Daily Grind\" featured in my ODE today. The Good Book advises us to meditate ! Any time ~ anywhere ~ any how ~ just do it ! However your poem hilites the importance of being alone ~ AMEN. Thanks for being you ~ love the picture ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 31st, 2017 17:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY ~ Very apt and it complements the frenzy of the \"Daily Grind\" featured in my ODE today. The Good Book advises us to meditate ! Any time ~ anywhere ~ any how ~ just do it ! However your poem hilites the importance of being alone ~ AMEN. Thanks for being you ~ love the picture ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 31st, 2017 17:39
Santuary Bar
Michael Edwards said:
Oh if only I could watch TV or go to a film without getting bored and wandering off or falling asleep - me time is on my own with a sheet of paper to write, draw or paint.
March 31st, 2017 10:49
Michael Edwards said:
Oh if only I could watch TV or go to a film without getting bored and wandering off or falling asleep - me time is on my own with a sheet of paper to write, draw or paint.
March 31st, 2017 10:49
Don\'t Deflect
Philip said:
If you make a mistake admit it honestly and quickly. A lie is like a pebble thrown in a pond the ripples grow and grow (another old proverb). I can sympathies with a person who is scared to admit fault because of perhaps a bullying parent or boss. Very thought provoking. Phil.G
March 30th, 2017 08:48
Philip said:
If you make a mistake admit it honestly and quickly. A lie is like a pebble thrown in a pond the ripples grow and grow (another old proverb). I can sympathies with a person who is scared to admit fault because of perhaps a bullying parent or boss. Very thought provoking. Phil.G
March 30th, 2017 08:48
Don\'t Deflect
Goldfinch60 said:
We all make mistakes, they are the things that give us our experience, we mus accept that we make them and just move forward to blame others is obscene. Good write.
March 30th, 2017 08:13
Goldfinch60 said:
We all make mistakes, they are the things that give us our experience, we mus accept that we make them and just move forward to blame others is obscene. Good write.
March 30th, 2017 08:13
Don\'t Deflect
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY for an elegant poem but with very serious message. Jesus had a sense of humour (He needed it !) He said ~ don\'t bother trying to remove a splinter from your Brother\'s when you have a four foot plank sticking our of yours. Let him that is without sin ~ cast the first stone ~ AMEN. Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 30th, 2017 07:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY for an elegant poem but with very serious message. Jesus had a sense of humour (He needed it !) He said ~ don\'t bother trying to remove a splinter from your Brother\'s when you have a four foot plank sticking our of yours. Let him that is without sin ~ cast the first stone ~ AMEN. Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 30th, 2017 07:41
Don\'t Deflect
Tony36 said:
Remember you have one finger pointing out, but you have three fingers pointing right back at you. That\'s what my mom used to say tomy bbrother and I. Great write
March 30th, 2017 07:41
Tony36 said:
Remember you have one finger pointing out, but you have three fingers pointing right back at you. That\'s what my mom used to say tomy bbrother and I. Great write
March 30th, 2017 07:41
Don\'t Deflect
Michael Edwards said:
good read. sometimes it goes beyond not admitting you are wrong - it is also not making an issue out of the mistakes of others.
March 30th, 2017 06:13
Michael Edwards said:
good read. sometimes it goes beyond not admitting you are wrong - it is also not making an issue out of the mistakes of others.
March 30th, 2017 06:13
Don\'t Deflect
Fay Slimm. said:
So true these words encouraging apology when needed- it makes all the difference to any relationship. Good read and thanks for sharing.
March 30th, 2017 05:49
Fay Slimm. said:
So true these words encouraging apology when needed- it makes all the difference to any relationship. Good read and thanks for sharing.
March 30th, 2017 05:49
Gas Bag
Christina8 said:
Excellent write! I like your lighthearted topics that make me smile. Even your feedback is funny! I applaud you for always coming up with relatable topics every single day!
March 29th, 2017 15:47
Christina8 said:
Excellent write! I like your lighthearted topics that make me smile. Even your feedback is funny! I applaud you for always coming up with relatable topics every single day!
March 29th, 2017 15:47
Gas Bag
Michael Edwards said:
Great one - just be grateful it was the northerlies - its even more embarrassing when its the southerlies.
Reminds me of the epithet on a gravestone: Where ere you be let your wind go free for holding it back was the death of me.
March 29th, 2017 11:27
Michael Edwards said:
Great one - just be grateful it was the northerlies - its even more embarrassing when its the southerlies.
Reminds me of the epithet on a gravestone: Where ere you be let your wind go free for holding it back was the death of me.
March 29th, 2017 11:27
Gas Bag
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I had a young friend called HERB
Renowed for power and ...
Shower of his BURB
When I asked \"What\'s the trouble\"
He replied it\'s a bubble
Of gas in me tubble
That has to explode
Or I\'ll burst
Thanks for sharing HONEY ~ at least
it is more socially acceptable than FA * * ING !
Hugs (despite it might make you BURP !) BRIAN
March 29th, 2017 05:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I had a young friend called HERB
Renowed for power and ...
Shower of his BURB
When I asked \"What\'s the trouble\"
He replied it\'s a bubble
Of gas in me tubble
That has to explode
Or I\'ll burst
Thanks for sharing HONEY ~ at least
it is more socially acceptable than FA * * ING !
Hugs (despite it might make you BURP !) BRIAN
March 29th, 2017 05:47
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