Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight
Gas Bag
Garry said:
Very good. Very funny. Well done
There was a young man from Ostende
Who couldn\'t lean over or bend.
The cause of the trouble
Was a great gas bubble
That wouldn\'t come out either end.
March 29th, 2017 03:47
Garry said:
Very good. Very funny. Well done
There was a young man from Ostende
Who couldn\'t lean over or bend.
The cause of the trouble
Was a great gas bubble
That wouldn\'t come out either end.
March 29th, 2017 03:47
Old Mother Hen
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, all life forms should help each other.
March 29th, 2017 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, all life forms should help each other.
March 29th, 2017 00:09
Got Game
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you are woman,you are mom,the master of the universe
March 28th, 2017 20:01
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you are woman,you are mom,the master of the universe
March 28th, 2017 20:01
Moved Out
Pintu Mahakul said:
We have learned many things from books and toys ever. Years pass through and time comes ahead. Returning to nest every feels good. Memorable poem is shared.
March 28th, 2017 19:38
Pintu Mahakul said:
We have learned many things from books and toys ever. Years pass through and time comes ahead. Returning to nest every feels good. Memorable poem is shared.
March 28th, 2017 19:38
Old Mother Hen
Pintu Mahakul said:
Amazing story and affection of mother hen is shared here. Interesting view mesmerizes mind. Mother hen always helps chicken. Every line is composed wisely.
March 28th, 2017 19:36
Pintu Mahakul said:
Amazing story and affection of mother hen is shared here. Interesting view mesmerizes mind. Mother hen always helps chicken. Every line is composed wisely.
March 28th, 2017 19:36
Old Mother Hen
Michael Edwards said:
When I was young we had chickens all over the place - the old ones went into the big old boiling pot - hope that isn\'t her fate - well versed WBL
March 28th, 2017 07:25
Michael Edwards said:
When I was young we had chickens all over the place - the old ones went into the big old boiling pot - hope that isn\'t her fate - well versed WBL
March 28th, 2017 07:25
Old Mother Hen
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY ~ lovely fable ! In my experience all Girls are just MOTHER HENS waiting to morph into Grannies. hanks Heaven for GIRLS ! Farmyard Hugs for you BRIAN ! Please visit my SOLAR HAIKU ~ Thanks B
March 28th, 2017 06:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY ~ lovely fable ! In my experience all Girls are just MOTHER HENS waiting to morph into Grannies. hanks Heaven for GIRLS ! Farmyard Hugs for you BRIAN ! Please visit my SOLAR HAIKU ~ Thanks B
March 28th, 2017 06:09
Moved Out
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem! You must be proud that you\'ve raised your children well. I can only hope that someday I can say the same. Great write!
March 27th, 2017 12:56
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem! You must be proud that you\'ve raised your children well. I can only hope that someday I can say the same. Great write!
March 27th, 2017 12:56
Moved Out
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you raised them well,it will go with them,lovely sentiment
March 27th, 2017 10:09
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you raised them well,it will go with them,lovely sentiment
March 27th, 2017 10:09
Moved Out
Fay Slimm. said:
An interesting time in the life of an offspring is when they start to make their own way and need parental blessing to take that journey.
March 27th, 2017 07:55
Fay Slimm. said:
An interesting time in the life of an offspring is when they start to make their own way and need parental blessing to take that journey.
March 27th, 2017 07:55
Moved Out
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing HONEY ~ to be responsible ~ all fledglings MUST flee the nest ~ painful but true. I have flown but close enough to visit ! Thanks a lovely poem ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 27th, 2017 07:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing HONEY ~ to be responsible ~ all fledglings MUST flee the nest ~ painful but true. I have flown but close enough to visit ! Thanks a lovely poem ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 27th, 2017 07:48
Moved Out
Garry said:
Our son is studying history and Chinese and is fascinated by the far East. He in his second year of study in China at the moment. Your poem sums up the emotions around this. In your usual elegant style. Well done
March 27th, 2017 05:21
Garry said:
Our son is studying history and Chinese and is fascinated by the far East. He in his second year of study in China at the moment. Your poem sums up the emotions around this. In your usual elegant style. Well done
March 27th, 2017 05:21
Moved Out
Michael Edwards said:
I think we are of like mind - my children and grandchildren are the greatest gifts I possess and will always be there for them BUT they must make their own way - I (that is we - my wife and I) wont always be here as a back stop should things go wrong.
March 27th, 2017 01:58
Michael Edwards said:
I think we are of like mind - my children and grandchildren are the greatest gifts I possess and will always be there for them BUT they must make their own way - I (that is we - my wife and I) wont always be here as a back stop should things go wrong.
March 27th, 2017 01:58
Moved Out
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but every child should now that if their new life has troubles their original nest will still be there to comfort them. All we can do for our children is our best and hope that their new lives are theirs to make their own but still always be there for them, and in my case be there for Grandchildren as well.
March 27th, 2017 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but every child should now that if their new life has troubles their original nest will still be there to comfort them. All we can do for our children is our best and hope that their new lives are theirs to make their own but still always be there for them, and in my case be there for Grandchildren as well.
March 27th, 2017 01:49
Got Game
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a great last stanza. Keep going forward WBL.
March 27th, 2017 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a great last stanza. Keep going forward WBL.
March 27th, 2017 00:32
Got Game
Augustus said:
In this dice game of life you rolled faith and family. Kudos.
March 26th, 2017 15:27
Augustus said:
In this dice game of life you rolled faith and family. Kudos.
March 26th, 2017 15:27
Got Game
Garry said:
What a great idea. Very creative. Loved the verse about faith in yourself.
I agree with DS, the elephant picture was excellently chosen.
March 26th, 2017 13:00
Garry said:
What a great idea. Very creative. Loved the verse about faith in yourself.
I agree with DS, the elephant picture was excellently chosen.
March 26th, 2017 13:00
A List For That
Goldfinch60 said:
I write a shopping list for the supermarket and take it with me but the items I buy seem to bear no relation to those on the list! Good write.
March 26th, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I write a shopping list for the supermarket and take it with me but the items I buy seem to bear no relation to those on the list! Good write.
March 26th, 2017 01:23
A List For That
Michael Edwards said:
oh I am with you all the way. we write out lists for everything including for shopping which we attach to the front door so we don\'t forget it. and what happens? We either walk straight past it or we exit by the side door. Thanks for the smile.
March 25th, 2017 15:49
Michael Edwards said:
oh I am with you all the way. we write out lists for everything including for shopping which we attach to the front door so we don\'t forget it. and what happens? We either walk straight past it or we exit by the side door. Thanks for the smile.
March 25th, 2017 15:49
A List For That
Christina8 said:
Great poem! I keep lists too! But I need a master list such as yourself--that would help keep me more organized. A few times I have forgotten my shopping list. Infuriating!
March 25th, 2017 12:56
Christina8 said:
Great poem! I keep lists too! But I need a master list such as yourself--that would help keep me more organized. A few times I have forgotten my shopping list. Infuriating!
March 25th, 2017 12:56
A List For That
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I\'ve got a little list ~ of Girls I\'ve never kissed ~ but none of them\'d be missed ~ so I\'ll cross them off my list ~ I\'ll cross them off my list ! Yes indeed HONEY ~ I need to make lists fro everything and of course most important of all ~ A LIST OF LISTS ! BRIAN
March 25th, 2017 10:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I\'ve got a little list ~ of Girls I\'ve never kissed ~ but none of them\'d be missed ~ so I\'ll cross them off my list ~ I\'ll cross them off my list ! Yes indeed HONEY ~ I need to make lists fro everything and of course most important of all ~ A LIST OF LISTS ! BRIAN
March 25th, 2017 10:18
Electromagnetic Static
Michael Edwards said:
Yes we all know the feeling although electricity doesn\'t bother me too much. To test if a cable is alive I simply pinch it quickly - a trick I learnt from my father - if you are expecting it there is no element of surprise although I wouldn\'t want to try on anything above 240volts. .
March 24th, 2017 09:34
Michael Edwards said:
Yes we all know the feeling although electricity doesn\'t bother me too much. To test if a cable is alive I simply pinch it quickly - a trick I learnt from my father - if you are expecting it there is no element of surprise although I wouldn\'t want to try on anything above 240volts. .
March 24th, 2017 09:34
Electromagnetic Static
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write. In one place that I work many years ago if I wore one particular pair of shoes I would get shocks all day!!
March 24th, 2017 09:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write. In one place that I work many years ago if I wore one particular pair of shoes I would get shocks all day!!
March 24th, 2017 09:18
Electromagnetic Static
Philip said:
What a shocking poem!. I remember as a young child running on a big nylon carpet in a store ,touching a filing cabinate and getting literally blown onto the floor. Good fun for a Friday. Phil.G
March 24th, 2017 06:00
Philip said:
What a shocking poem!. I remember as a young child running on a big nylon carpet in a store ,touching a filing cabinate and getting literally blown onto the floor. Good fun for a Friday. Phil.G
March 24th, 2017 06:00
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