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Supermarket Meany
willyweed said:
clean up in produce , I try to go when the store is empty? nice write funny girl!
March 23rd, 2017 09:55
willyweed said:
clean up in produce , I try to go when the store is empty? nice write funny girl!
March 23rd, 2017 09:55
Supermarket Meany
Christina8 said:
Great poem! I can\'t stand those aisle blockers. Or the person that waited till the end of their sale to get out their wallet and write a check as slow as possible, even though they are just scanned and handed back. Get a debit card already! Thats just one example. Great job!
March 23rd, 2017 09:47
Christina8 said:
Great poem! I can\'t stand those aisle blockers. Or the person that waited till the end of their sale to get out their wallet and write a check as slow as possible, even though they are just scanned and handed back. Get a debit card already! Thats just one example. Great job!
March 23rd, 2017 09:47
Supermarket Meany
Michael Edwards said:
I know this only too well. The worst offenders are those who while waiting in the queue fail to get themselves ready - The result: as the goods come through checkout they are still fighting to open their bag, then are slow loading up, then when told how much to pay start looking for their purse and when they do take forever counting out change, and then suddenly remember they may (just may) have some vouchers somewhere if only they can remember where they are and then start up a conversation with the cashier and then get really angry when you show signs of impatience and then block up the exit with their trolley whilst having a conversation with another incoming individual of like mind. Great poem by the way !!!!
March 23rd, 2017 08:57
Michael Edwards said:
I know this only too well. The worst offenders are those who while waiting in the queue fail to get themselves ready - The result: as the goods come through checkout they are still fighting to open their bag, then are slow loading up, then when told how much to pay start looking for their purse and when they do take forever counting out change, and then suddenly remember they may (just may) have some vouchers somewhere if only they can remember where they are and then start up a conversation with the cashier and then get really angry when you show signs of impatience and then block up the exit with their trolley whilst having a conversation with another incoming individual of like mind. Great poem by the way !!!!
March 23rd, 2017 08:57
Supermarket Meany
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I have written a few about my views of people in supermarkets. They are found in the U.K. as well. Politeness seems to be dying in our world.
March 23rd, 2017 08:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I have written a few about my views of people in supermarkets. They are found in the U.K. as well. Politeness seems to be dying in our world.
March 23rd, 2017 08:40
Supermarket Meany
notapoet said:
Great write WBL, very entertaining I just love the humor in your writes.
March 23rd, 2017 08:01
notapoet said:
Great write WBL, very entertaining I just love the humor in your writes.
March 23rd, 2017 08:01
Supermarket Meany
Garry said:
Good rant. Reads well. The ice cream-leavers would realky upset me
March 23rd, 2017 06:50
Garry said:
Good rant. Reads well. The ice cream-leavers would realky upset me
March 23rd, 2017 06:50
Homework Notes
Goldfinch60 said:
Grab it with both hands, as Brian has said just going a few miles to a concert needs thinking about in the UK. Good write.
March 22nd, 2017 06:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Grab it with both hands, as Brian has said just going a few miles to a concert needs thinking about in the UK. Good write.
March 22nd, 2017 06:41
Homework Notes
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring HONEY ~ CARPE DIEM (seize the day) If we don\'\'t grasp our chances ~ opportunity never knocks twice ~ I should know. You must appreciate that the USA is 40 times bigger than the UK and we would think twice if travelling more than 50 miles for a concert and then we would want to stay overnight ! Americans I know will take two internal flights for a GIG ! So HONEY get off your butt and GO GO GO ! Transatlantic Hugs ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B !
March 22nd, 2017 06:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring HONEY ~ CARPE DIEM (seize the day) If we don\'\'t grasp our chances ~ opportunity never knocks twice ~ I should know. You must appreciate that the USA is 40 times bigger than the UK and we would think twice if travelling more than 50 miles for a concert and then we would want to stay overnight ! Americans I know will take two internal flights for a GIG ! So HONEY get off your butt and GO GO GO ! Transatlantic Hugs ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B !
March 22nd, 2017 06:17
Smiling Jack
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, there are so many people out there whose way of life is to con them out of money, politicians come to my mind.
March 22nd, 2017 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, there are so many people out there whose way of life is to con them out of money, politicians come to my mind.
March 22nd, 2017 01:31
Smiling Jack
MendedFences27 said:
Nice story, nice rhyme. Honesty is the best policy, believed by so few, dishonored by so many.
\"Smiling Jack,\" I think I\'ve met this guy or someone just like him. \"Not to be trusted,\" written all over their faces. As phony as their gems. But you have a gem here, in your poem.
Enjoyed reading it. - Phil A.
March 21st, 2017 18:22
MendedFences27 said:
Nice story, nice rhyme. Honesty is the best policy, believed by so few, dishonored by so many.
\"Smiling Jack,\" I think I\'ve met this guy or someone just like him. \"Not to be trusted,\" written all over their faces. As phony as their gems. But you have a gem here, in your poem.
Enjoyed reading it. - Phil A.
March 21st, 2017 18:22
Smiling Jack
MendedFences27 said:
Nice story, nice rhyme. Honesty is the best policy, believed by so few, dishonored by so many.
\"Smiling Jack,\" I think I\'ve met this guy or someone just like him. \"Not to be trusted,\" written all over their faces. As phony as their gems. But you have a gem here, in your poem.
Enjoyed reading it. - Phil A.
March 21st, 2017 18:22
MendedFences27 said:
Nice story, nice rhyme. Honesty is the best policy, believed by so few, dishonored by so many.
\"Smiling Jack,\" I think I\'ve met this guy or someone just like him. \"Not to be trusted,\" written all over their faces. As phony as their gems. But you have a gem here, in your poem.
Enjoyed reading it. - Phil A.
March 21st, 2017 18:22
Smiling Jack
ron parrish aka wordman said:
he will never change,and he`s all over the world making his deals,and those newly weds thinking they got a deal
March 21st, 2017 16:38
ron parrish aka wordman said:
he will never change,and he`s all over the world making his deals,and those newly weds thinking they got a deal
March 21st, 2017 16:38
Smiling Jack
Christina8 said:
Very good story. I wonder if he ever really did change his ways! I don\'t know what I\'d say if I walked into that scenario. Anyway, great write!-Christina
March 21st, 2017 06:29
Christina8 said:
Very good story. I wonder if he ever really did change his ways! I don\'t know what I\'d say if I walked into that scenario. Anyway, great write!-Christina
March 21st, 2017 06:29
Wonderful Wings
Christina8 said:
Absolutely wonderful write! I love hummingbirds too. But my favorite is the cardinal! Some people look at butterflies as a sign from heaven but I look at cardinals as such. So beautiful!
March 20th, 2017 12:31
Christina8 said:
Absolutely wonderful write! I love hummingbirds too. But my favorite is the cardinal! Some people look at butterflies as a sign from heaven but I look at cardinals as such. So beautiful!
March 20th, 2017 12:31
Wonderful Wings
Michael Edwards said:
Yup - as Goldfinch we also. especially the tit family and tree creepers et al - great poem WBL
March 20th, 2017 08:52
Michael Edwards said:
Yup - as Goldfinch we also. especially the tit family and tree creepers et al - great poem WBL
March 20th, 2017 08:52
Wonderful Wings
kevin browne said:
I wanna fly like a bird in the sky. set us free. lovely poem WriteBeLight.
March 20th, 2017 07:03
kevin browne said:
I wanna fly like a bird in the sky. set us free. lovely poem WriteBeLight.
March 20th, 2017 07:03
Wonderful Wings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A beautiful ODE Honey reminding me of all the wonderful Birds I see on my visits to what is still God\'s Own Country (despite TRUMP !). I\'m giving a talk on KENTUCKY (as an example of a typical American State) entitled KENTUCKY ~ WHAT A STATE TO BE IN ! I endorse the idea that every American State has a State Bird and a State Tree for it to sit in ! In the case of Kentucky it is a CARDINAL ~ 1926 (very popular) perching in a TULIP POPLAR ~ 1994 ~ It had to wait a long time to find a tree. Thanks for sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 20th, 2017 06:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A beautiful ODE Honey reminding me of all the wonderful Birds I see on my visits to what is still God\'s Own Country (despite TRUMP !). I\'m giving a talk on KENTUCKY (as an example of a typical American State) entitled KENTUCKY ~ WHAT A STATE TO BE IN ! I endorse the idea that every American State has a State Bird and a State Tree for it to sit in ! In the case of Kentucky it is a CARDINAL ~ 1926 (very popular) perching in a TULIP POPLAR ~ 1994 ~ It had to wait a long time to find a tree. Thanks for sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 20th, 2017 06:09
Wonderful Wings
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we feed the birds in our garden and as we go into spring I know that it will cost us a fortune as it did last year but the joy we, and obviously you, get from watching the birds is priceless.
Obviously we have Goldfinches in our garden as one of the visitors, one day a few years ago there were forty of them in the garden, i felt so honoured.
March 20th, 2017 05:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we feed the birds in our garden and as we go into spring I know that it will cost us a fortune as it did last year but the joy we, and obviously you, get from watching the birds is priceless.
Obviously we have Goldfinches in our garden as one of the visitors, one day a few years ago there were forty of them in the garden, i felt so honoured.
March 20th, 2017 05:42
Ski Trip
Goldfinch60 said:
Out in the cold and sun - my type of weather. Good uplifting write.
March 20th, 2017 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Out in the cold and sun - my type of weather. Good uplifting write.
March 20th, 2017 01:37
Ski Trip
rrodriguez said:
Fun under the sun... enjoy your trip and be careful. Fine write... really nice.
March 19th, 2017 19:09
rrodriguez said:
Fun under the sun... enjoy your trip and be careful. Fine write... really nice.
March 19th, 2017 19:09
Ski Trip
Michael Edwards said:
Great write as always. My son owns a Ski travel company here in the UK but America isn\'t on the radar although Canada is currently courting the UK market.
March 19th, 2017 09:47
Michael Edwards said:
Great write as always. My son owns a Ski travel company here in the UK but America isn\'t on the radar although Canada is currently courting the UK market.
March 19th, 2017 09:47
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