Comments received on poems by Emi
Make Up Your Mind
Cheeky Missy said:
Sounds like he doesn't really love you but is using you....yuck! How nasty! You excellently presented the miserable dilemma....if only the heart wasn't so readily influenced by that which does not love it....we'd be freer. Ending it in a couplet was effective. Beautifully done!
February 6th, 2011 20:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Sounds like he doesn't really love you but is using you....yuck! How nasty! You excellently presented the miserable dilemma....if only the heart wasn't so readily influenced by that which does not love it....we'd be freer. Ending it in a couplet was effective. Beautifully done!
February 6th, 2011 20:32
Tick Tock
dbremner said:
This is absolutely BRILLIANT, one of the best poems I have ever read here - I really mean that!
You have perfectly captured what I tried to in the fifth part of my poem 'Life'.
Well done this is great poetry.
February 4th, 2011 15:33
dbremner said:
This is absolutely BRILLIANT, one of the best poems I have ever read here - I really mean that!
You have perfectly captured what I tried to in the fifth part of my poem 'Life'.
Well done this is great poetry.
February 4th, 2011 15:33
Tick Tock
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent. Beautifully done! You aptly portrayed the speeding time...when as you say, "...you most want it to slow down." The funny thing is, the old saying that "time flies when you're having fun" and half the time any more we are not, yet it flies nonetheless....excepting when we suffer, then every second is an hour, every minute a millennium.
February 4th, 2011 14:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent. Beautifully done! You aptly portrayed the speeding time...when as you say, "...you most want it to slow down." The funny thing is, the old saying that "time flies when you're having fun" and half the time any more we are not, yet it flies nonetheless....excepting when we suffer, then every second is an hour, every minute a millennium.
February 4th, 2011 14:25
Or So They Say
dbremner said:
Very well written the last part turns the earlier parts on their head and the second last part acts as an ideal bridge between both. Well constructed you have done really well.
February 3rd, 2011 12:49
dbremner said:
Very well written the last part turns the earlier parts on their head and the second last part acts as an ideal bridge between both. Well constructed you have done really well.
February 3rd, 2011 12:49
Or So They Say
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! This is very sweet! I love how you presented this very sweet expression of love....from the negatives that crush to the love that covers, revives and inspires. Very well done. Delightful!
February 3rd, 2011 12:02
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! This is very sweet! I love how you presented this very sweet expression of love....from the negatives that crush to the love that covers, revives and inspires. Very well done. Delightful!
February 3rd, 2011 12:02
Deeper and Deeper
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent depiction of a selfish and thereby miserable character! What does 11:11 signify? You aptly described a lonely, depressed condition. The disturbing and fascinating fact is that this applies to so very many people. Very well done! I enjoyed how well you expressed it.
February 2nd, 2011 20:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent depiction of a selfish and thereby miserable character! What does 11:11 signify? You aptly described a lonely, depressed condition. The disturbing and fascinating fact is that this applies to so very many people. Very well done! I enjoyed how well you expressed it.
February 2nd, 2011 20:24
Cinderella
Marius said:
For a moment I thought the story itself was written after your poem... until I read the ending. Beautifully written and definitely an alternative; but I wonder: did she settle?
February 1st, 2011 20:44
Marius said:
For a moment I thought the story itself was written after your poem... until I read the ending. Beautifully written and definitely an alternative; but I wonder: did she settle?
February 1st, 2011 20:44
Black and White
Cheeky Missy said:
Perfect. You captured the sorrow and loss in those simple words...a world lacking colour without your beloved...and described your sorrow in the action of drawing without purpose scenes reminiscent of your situation. Excellent.
February 1st, 2011 15:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Perfect. You captured the sorrow and loss in those simple words...a world lacking colour without your beloved...and described your sorrow in the action of drawing without purpose scenes reminiscent of your situation. Excellent.
February 1st, 2011 15:42
As Long as Forever
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas...it is a bittersweet love poem, for the grief of the concluding stanza...though the speaker loves, the recipient does not reciprocate the same love, somewhat reminiscent of guy/girl friendships when only one "falls in love" and the other never does....the friendly love is there, but the other hurts for they long for so much more, but in vain. I enjoyed it, especially for the longing love you rather eloquently expressed. Excellent!
January 31st, 2011 23:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas...it is a bittersweet love poem, for the grief of the concluding stanza...though the speaker loves, the recipient does not reciprocate the same love, somewhat reminiscent of guy/girl friendships when only one "falls in love" and the other never does....the friendly love is there, but the other hurts for they long for so much more, but in vain. I enjoyed it, especially for the longing love you rather eloquently expressed. Excellent!
January 31st, 2011 23:28
Little by Little
Cheeky Missy said:
It is very sweet, with a tinge of bittersweet, for the bitterness of your sorrow, but whoever is comforting you is making it sweeter....that is very nice for you. You portrayed the situation well, from your sadness to the tender heart and hand (so like your profile image) that is sweetening your life.
January 31st, 2011 00:16
Cheeky Missy said:
It is very sweet, with a tinge of bittersweet, for the bitterness of your sorrow, but whoever is comforting you is making it sweeter....that is very nice for you. You portrayed the situation well, from your sadness to the tender heart and hand (so like your profile image) that is sweetening your life.
January 31st, 2011 00:16
Cinderella
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! I quite enjoyed your alternate version to the old fairy tale! Lovely! Delightful! Congratulations! Excellent! And seriously, an excellent admonition to all. I love this one!
January 30th, 2011 00:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! I quite enjoyed your alternate version to the old fairy tale! Lovely! Delightful! Congratulations! Excellent! And seriously, an excellent admonition to all. I love this one!
January 30th, 2011 00:15
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