Comments received on poems by Emi
If Only I Had Known
Hoween94 said:
wow! this poem reflects on my past, very inspiring poem. i love the way it is structured
December 23rd, 2011 04:32
Hoween94 said:
wow! this poem reflects on my past, very inspiring poem. i love the way it is structured
December 23rd, 2011 04:32
Unsaid
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Simple yet beautifully written. It enabled me to feel how you felt. The doubt that surrounds you intrigues me ... in fact if you were my own daughter I would ask you to walk up to him and talk to 'him' just to test the water to see if it's too hot, too cold or just right. Good Job Emi!
August 18th, 2011 21:37
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Simple yet beautifully written. It enabled me to feel how you felt. The doubt that surrounds you intrigues me ... in fact if you were my own daughter I would ask you to walk up to him and talk to 'him' just to test the water to see if it's too hot, too cold or just right. Good Job Emi!
August 18th, 2011 21:37
Unsaid
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! And the initial assessment that she should just keep silent is probably better, in the long run. If he is so stupidly cold-hearted to have caused the break in the first place, what profit seriously is her chasing after the renewal of his former affections? You depicted it beautifully in the bittersweet reality. Oh, how true! She'll wish she'd said it, but hopefully she'll learn that she was better off silent.
August 5th, 2011 22:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! And the initial assessment that she should just keep silent is probably better, in the long run. If he is so stupidly cold-hearted to have caused the break in the first place, what profit seriously is her chasing after the renewal of his former affections? You depicted it beautifully in the bittersweet reality. Oh, how true! She'll wish she'd said it, but hopefully she'll learn that she was better off silent.
August 5th, 2011 22:23
Unsaid
Anna said:
TT.TT
Poetically, it's beautiful, and an epic way to express another way of sad in love.
August 5th, 2011 18:25
Anna said:
TT.TT
Poetically, it's beautiful, and an epic way to express another way of sad in love.
August 5th, 2011 18:25
Every Single Thing
Anna said:
Aww... Sucks that you haven't been in a writing feeling lately, 'cause I've really missed you and your poems while you were off! This is a good one, by the way :) Wanting to remember everything... that's true.
August 4th, 2011 16:11
Anna said:
Aww... Sucks that you haven't been in a writing feeling lately, 'cause I've really missed you and your poems while you were off! This is a good one, by the way :) Wanting to remember everything... that's true.
August 4th, 2011 16:11
Forever & Always
Anna said:
I love how you bring everything together in the end.. it's very sweet!
July 21st, 2011 07:42
Anna said:
I love how you bring everything together in the end.. it's very sweet!
July 21st, 2011 07:42
Little by Little
Anna said:
It's beautiful, but I'm so sorry that you felt like that at the time, and thank you to that person!
July 21st, 2011 07:38
Anna said:
It's beautiful, but I'm so sorry that you felt like that at the time, and thank you to that person!
July 21st, 2011 07:38
Can't Do Anything Right
Anna said:
This is sad.... It reminds me of how I always have a hard time making the right decision, and how many people always ask me "Why can't you do anything right?" But it's beautiful poetically, beautiful and saaad.
July 21st, 2011 07:34
Anna said:
This is sad.... It reminds me of how I always have a hard time making the right decision, and how many people always ask me "Why can't you do anything right?" But it's beautiful poetically, beautiful and saaad.
July 21st, 2011 07:34
Far Behind
Anna said:
I love the format! It's really so unique! And also, the message in it gets across clear... I LOVE IT A LOT_ SO MUCH THAT I'LL MARRY IT, IF YOU'LL LET ME!!
July 21st, 2011 07:32
Anna said:
I love the format! It's really so unique! And also, the message in it gets across clear... I LOVE IT A LOT_ SO MUCH THAT I'LL MARRY IT, IF YOU'LL LET ME!!
July 21st, 2011 07:32
Can't Do Anything Right
Cheeky Missy said:
Sorrowful, indeed. It seems, though, an excellent acknowledgment of our very real condition and fallibility. While our deceitful heart persuades us that we are so promising, instead, in a very real sense, we really can't do anything right. Fascinating, sad, and thought-provoking. Bittersweetly beautiful.
July 19th, 2011 19:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Sorrowful, indeed. It seems, though, an excellent acknowledgment of our very real condition and fallibility. While our deceitful heart persuades us that we are so promising, instead, in a very real sense, we really can't do anything right. Fascinating, sad, and thought-provoking. Bittersweetly beautiful.
July 19th, 2011 19:39
Far Behind
Cheeky Missy said:
Almost virulent, passionately fierce and definitely dangerous. A vengeful piece indeed, threatening and lingering, the conclusion effectively making the words "far behind" a lie, since if the threat holds, the speaker will never really be so "far" behind ever. Fascinating, eerie, haunting and chilling. Rather ugly in that sense. Well done if that was the intent.
July 19th, 2011 19:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Almost virulent, passionately fierce and definitely dangerous. A vengeful piece indeed, threatening and lingering, the conclusion effectively making the words "far behind" a lie, since if the threat holds, the speaker will never really be so "far" behind ever. Fascinating, eerie, haunting and chilling. Rather ugly in that sense. Well done if that was the intent.
July 19th, 2011 19:36
Never
Anna said:
This poem was very very clever! I don't really know what to say about it, seriously, 'cause I'm tongue tied, but it was brilliant, true and AWESOMEZZ!!!!!
July 18th, 2011 06:47
Anna said:
This poem was very very clever! I don't really know what to say about it, seriously, 'cause I'm tongue tied, but it was brilliant, true and AWESOMEZZ!!!!!
July 18th, 2011 06:47
If Only I Had Known
Anna said:
Oh my cheese.
That was a very nice poem, I've always read about ones where someone leaves you, but now it's the other way around :P
July 18th, 2011 06:45
Anna said:
Oh my cheese.
That was a very nice poem, I've always read about ones where someone leaves you, but now it's the other way around :P
July 18th, 2011 06:45
If Only I Had Known
Cheeky Missy said:
Thought-provoking and again, very fascinating. It expresses the experience aptly, poignantly evoking a reminder of folly repented too late. We frequently realize our mistakes when it is too late unfortunately. One point I disagree on though, stanza 7, it could not have been but hatred that wanted the separation, seems to me. Now in the loss the speaker cannot but long impossibly for a renewal, but it was indeed odious hate that drove the dagger through. Love would not have done it. Self-love, mayhap craves the return for formerly detested affection, whereas true love never would have crushed it. There's my two bits, for whatever their worth. Anyway.
July 17th, 2011 21:08
Cheeky Missy said:
Thought-provoking and again, very fascinating. It expresses the experience aptly, poignantly evoking a reminder of folly repented too late. We frequently realize our mistakes when it is too late unfortunately. One point I disagree on though, stanza 7, it could not have been but hatred that wanted the separation, seems to me. Now in the loss the speaker cannot but long impossibly for a renewal, but it was indeed odious hate that drove the dagger through. Love would not have done it. Self-love, mayhap craves the return for formerly detested affection, whereas true love never would have crushed it. There's my two bits, for whatever their worth. Anyway.
July 17th, 2011 21:08
Never
Cheeky Missy said:
The conclusion is brilliant for many cannot disagree, never realizing how much they cared until they lost it and the hurt etched indelibly stayed. All your comparisons were fascinating to read and ponder. I enjoyed it.
July 17th, 2011 20:45
Cheeky Missy said:
The conclusion is brilliant for many cannot disagree, never realizing how much they cared until they lost it and the hurt etched indelibly stayed. All your comparisons were fascinating to read and ponder. I enjoyed it.
July 17th, 2011 20:45
Memories
Cheeky Missy said:
For mere random contemplations in miserable moments, this is thought-provoking and hard-hitting. The introduction is examined and revived as a fitting conclusion. The assessment of the proffered "love" as lust is excellent, yet we are all selfish by nature and that is the majority of our romantic love. The memories linger and torment in such cases, yet they are part of all our existence, so in blissful circumstances only renew the pleasures later and seem to be sometimes all that is left anytime of "life."....Just some thoughts on the spur of reading it. Fascinating and well done!
July 16th, 2011 09:53
Cheeky Missy said:
For mere random contemplations in miserable moments, this is thought-provoking and hard-hitting. The introduction is examined and revived as a fitting conclusion. The assessment of the proffered "love" as lust is excellent, yet we are all selfish by nature and that is the majority of our romantic love. The memories linger and torment in such cases, yet they are part of all our existence, so in blissful circumstances only renew the pleasures later and seem to be sometimes all that is left anytime of "life."....Just some thoughts on the spur of reading it. Fascinating and well done!
July 16th, 2011 09:53
Enchantment
Anna said:
Yay! Another pantoum! Hey, you're pretty good at this... REALLY good at this!
July 16th, 2011 09:35
Anna said:
Yay! Another pantoum! Hey, you're pretty good at this... REALLY good at this!
July 16th, 2011 09:35
Star
Anna said:
Ooh! A Haiku, eh? That's awesome XD I love Haiku's, and I think you did an exceptional job here :D
July 16th, 2011 09:32
Anna said:
Ooh! A Haiku, eh? That's awesome XD I love Haiku's, and I think you did an exceptional job here :D
July 16th, 2011 09:32
Hurt
Anna said:
I've read the comments, and if you are sad about the situation, then don't be. Sad things aren't worth our time, and so we shouldn't dwell on them. Now, happy things, on the other hand... keep them for a life time, 'cause they'll always make you smile!
July 16th, 2011 09:31
Anna said:
I've read the comments, and if you are sad about the situation, then don't be. Sad things aren't worth our time, and so we shouldn't dwell on them. Now, happy things, on the other hand... keep them for a life time, 'cause they'll always make you smile!
July 16th, 2011 09:31
Just Right
Anna said:
This is AWESOME! No better word for it! Well, maybe there is; perfect. ^O^
July 16th, 2011 09:28
Anna said:
This is AWESOME! No better word for it! Well, maybe there is; perfect. ^O^
July 16th, 2011 09:28
Everlasting Best Friend
Anna said:
This is so saaaaad~
It reminds me of my dog who died a while ago....
Very well done *tear*.
July 16th, 2011 09:26
Anna said:
This is so saaaaad~
It reminds me of my dog who died a while ago....
Very well done *tear*.
July 16th, 2011 09:26
Name
Anna said:
This... I feel this sometimes.
It really is sad, and brilliantly done.
July 16th, 2011 09:24
Anna said:
This... I feel this sometimes.
It really is sad, and brilliantly done.
July 16th, 2011 09:24
Memories
Anna said:
It's amazing *O*
The way you tied the beginning and the ending together in a way, is really cool! Please publish a boooooook! I swear I'll be the first to buy it!
July 16th, 2011 09:22
Anna said:
It's amazing *O*
The way you tied the beginning and the ending together in a way, is really cool! Please publish a boooooook! I swear I'll be the first to buy it!
July 16th, 2011 09:22
Raindrop
Anna said:
That was awesome! I never quite heard a poem like this before, and it was really cool! A pantoum, you said? I think I want to try it!
July 16th, 2011 09:18
Anna said:
That was awesome! I never quite heard a poem like this before, and it was really cool! A pantoum, you said? I think I want to try it!
July 16th, 2011 09:18
Everlasting Best Friend
broken_dreams23 said:
damn so sweet! :) i love it, good job
July 9th, 2011 14:29
broken_dreams23 said:
damn so sweet! :) i love it, good job
July 9th, 2011 14:29
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