Comments received on poems by Emi
Forgiven
Anna said:
I feel like my soul has just opened up a window, and let out all my feelings and thoughts dance as I read this poem....
Your words are powerful, Emi. I swear you could change the world :)
June 3rd, 2011 22:45
Anna said:
I feel like my soul has just opened up a window, and let out all my feelings and thoughts dance as I read this poem....
Your words are powerful, Emi. I swear you could change the world :)
June 3rd, 2011 22:45
Alone
Anna said:
Oh God, the ending, and the emphases on ALONE was so effective! Gosh, if I spent the rest of my life reading your poems, I would be so dang happy!!
And again, on a more personal note; because of everything that`s going on with my friends, this poem really describes what I feel (although my side is about friendship).
June 3rd, 2011 22:43
Anna said:
Oh God, the ending, and the emphases on ALONE was so effective! Gosh, if I spent the rest of my life reading your poems, I would be so dang happy!!
And again, on a more personal note; because of everything that`s going on with my friends, this poem really describes what I feel (although my side is about friendship).
June 3rd, 2011 22:43
All Along
Anna said:
Cross you heart and hope to die, stick a needle in your eye, and swear! -- Please become a published poet.... I`ll travel around the world on my hands, if it meant I could have your book when I got back!!!
June 3rd, 2011 22:40
Anna said:
Cross you heart and hope to die, stick a needle in your eye, and swear! -- Please become a published poet.... I`ll travel around the world on my hands, if it meant I could have your book when I got back!!!
June 3rd, 2011 22:40
Remember Me
Anna said:
I`m speechless!!! My words have all left me, and I can`t think of anything else to say but; perfect.... because it is :D
June 3rd, 2011 22:36
Anna said:
I`m speechless!!! My words have all left me, and I can`t think of anything else to say but; perfect.... because it is :D
June 3rd, 2011 22:36
No More
Anna said:
Oh gosh... this is embarrassing....
I don`t normally cry when I read something, but this is just too much.... I love this poem.
Gosh, I`ve never felt so many emotions in one night, but by reading your poems.... I think I`ve broken the world record :`)
June 3rd, 2011 22:34
Anna said:
Oh gosh... this is embarrassing....
I don`t normally cry when I read something, but this is just too much.... I love this poem.
Gosh, I`ve never felt so many emotions in one night, but by reading your poems.... I think I`ve broken the world record :`)
June 3rd, 2011 22:34
Imperfection
Anna said:
Again, this is so impossibly beautiful. There`s no other word for it; perfect.
Your poem kind of reminds me of... me. I`m a perfectionist on everything, and this is something I normally see through my eyes; although I try not to...
:)
June 3rd, 2011 22:31
Anna said:
Again, this is so impossibly beautiful. There`s no other word for it; perfect.
Your poem kind of reminds me of... me. I`m a perfectionist on everything, and this is something I normally see through my eyes; although I try not to...
:)
June 3rd, 2011 22:31
Emerald Wings
Anna said:
This is the best poem on earth! Again, I know my comments are getting a bit repetitive, but they`re all utterly true! Your word choice is brilliant, and it supports the poem all the time. You always have the right syllable count, and it`s just amazing. And on a more personal note, I love it because I`m kind of a low self esteem type of girl. I get bullied a lot, and I normally let that all go to my head. I also get per pressured into doing things I don`t want to, and being someone I`m not. This poem really inspires me to stand up for myself, and to shed off my stupid disguise, and just be myself. Thank you- your poems truly are epidemic, and life changing XOXO
June 3rd, 2011 22:28
Anna said:
This is the best poem on earth! Again, I know my comments are getting a bit repetitive, but they`re all utterly true! Your word choice is brilliant, and it supports the poem all the time. You always have the right syllable count, and it`s just amazing. And on a more personal note, I love it because I`m kind of a low self esteem type of girl. I get bullied a lot, and I normally let that all go to my head. I also get per pressured into doing things I don`t want to, and being someone I`m not. This poem really inspires me to stand up for myself, and to shed off my stupid disguise, and just be myself. Thank you- your poems truly are epidemic, and life changing XOXO
June 3rd, 2011 22:28
Almost
Anna said:
I LOVE THIS POEM! In general, I love all your poems... you`re probably my most beloved poet in the entire website! Another job well done to you Emi! But I need a little help... I love your poem, and I understood all of it; but why does it say `I though you enjoyed my company`and so on? Why would he act that way towards her is he didn`t enjoy being with her and stuff?
June 3rd, 2011 22:24
Anna said:
I LOVE THIS POEM! In general, I love all your poems... you`re probably my most beloved poet in the entire website! Another job well done to you Emi! But I need a little help... I love your poem, and I understood all of it; but why does it say `I though you enjoyed my company`and so on? Why would he act that way towards her is he didn`t enjoy being with her and stuff?
June 3rd, 2011 22:24
Innocence of Love
Anna said:
Your poems are all organized in a way that is so creative and clever! I think I like your love poems the best XD
June 3rd, 2011 22:19
Anna said:
Your poems are all organized in a way that is so creative and clever! I think I like your love poems the best XD
June 3rd, 2011 22:19
First
Anna said:
Wow, you go deep (don`t worry, it`s a good thing). They way you write.... I can`t believe you`re a 14 year old! Wow...
Just a few questions, please. How do you write such amazing poems? What inspires you? How do you do it in general? And... just, whoa.
June 3rd, 2011 22:17
Anna said:
Wow, you go deep (don`t worry, it`s a good thing). They way you write.... I can`t believe you`re a 14 year old! Wow...
Just a few questions, please. How do you write such amazing poems? What inspires you? How do you do it in general? And... just, whoa.
June 3rd, 2011 22:17
The Fool
Anna said:
This is amazing! I swear on my life that you`ll get an A++ (if they`re possible) on this! Or, you already got it :) The bold words had a nice effect in the poem XD
June 3rd, 2011 22:10
Anna said:
This is amazing! I swear on my life that you`ll get an A++ (if they`re possible) on this! Or, you already got it :) The bold words had a nice effect in the poem XD
June 3rd, 2011 22:10
Unloved
Anna said:
Holy cow.... like, seriously, how? How is such beautiful writing possible?! I loved this so much, it`s ridiculous! Your writing is so creative, expressive, and perfect.... it`s just so crazy (in a good way, of course)! :)
June 3rd, 2011 22:08
Anna said:
Holy cow.... like, seriously, how? How is such beautiful writing possible?! I loved this so much, it`s ridiculous! Your writing is so creative, expressive, and perfect.... it`s just so crazy (in a good way, of course)! :)
June 3rd, 2011 22:08
I Remember
Anna said:
Wow! I always think about the days when I was younger than I am now. I remember how I first learned to ride my bike (ouch) I remember how I asked my mom to wait five minutes, and was surprised how fast it ended, and I still remember singing for my class, and doing the monkey bars.... oh, I wish I could go back.... this poem is so so true :)
June 3rd, 2011 22:05
Anna said:
Wow! I always think about the days when I was younger than I am now. I remember how I first learned to ride my bike (ouch) I remember how I asked my mom to wait five minutes, and was surprised how fast it ended, and I still remember singing for my class, and doing the monkey bars.... oh, I wish I could go back.... this poem is so so true :)
June 3rd, 2011 22:05
Broken Love
Anna said:
.... This really made me sad....
You know how I said that your poems all give off an aura? This one make me feel as if my boyfriend (who happens to be imaginary at this point) just ripped out my heart (ooh, violent) and threw it onto the ground; where it smashed into pieces....
You seriously have a gift, my friend.
June 3rd, 2011 22:03
Anna said:
.... This really made me sad....
You know how I said that your poems all give off an aura? This one make me feel as if my boyfriend (who happens to be imaginary at this point) just ripped out my heart (ooh, violent) and threw it onto the ground; where it smashed into pieces....
You seriously have a gift, my friend.
June 3rd, 2011 22:03
Secrets
Anna said:
Once again, you`ve taken my breath away.... I really hope that I`ll become just as good as you! You deserve all these 10s you`re getting! ........ I`m gonna go read it again!!
June 3rd, 2011 21:58
Anna said:
Once again, you`ve taken my breath away.... I really hope that I`ll become just as good as you! You deserve all these 10s you`re getting! ........ I`m gonna go read it again!!
June 3rd, 2011 21:58
Melancholy Music Box
Anna said:
This is just too good! I honestly stare at each of your poems for 5 minutes, then read it 2 more times, and then comment.... Can you please do me a favor though? Please tell me; how did you get to be so good??? You`re like a prodigy!
June 3rd, 2011 21:56
Anna said:
This is just too good! I honestly stare at each of your poems for 5 minutes, then read it 2 more times, and then comment.... Can you please do me a favor though? Please tell me; how did you get to be so good??? You`re like a prodigy!
June 3rd, 2011 21:56
Saving Grace
Anna said:
I`m sorry I keep on making your poems my favorites, and rating as 10, and giving complements each time, but it`s true! I`ve never seen someone write quite like this before. I wish I had your talent. You`ve inspired me, and I`ve decided to read all of your poems, so you can expect a lot from me! Loved this :)
June 3rd, 2011 21:52
Anna said:
I`m sorry I keep on making your poems my favorites, and rating as 10, and giving complements each time, but it`s true! I`ve never seen someone write quite like this before. I wish I had your talent. You`ve inspired me, and I`ve decided to read all of your poems, so you can expect a lot from me! Loved this :)
June 3rd, 2011 21:52
Flightless Bird
Anna said:
Your poem is amazing, and I`m really sorry about your friend :( I`m hope that she`s alright now. I`ll pray for her if she still isn`t. I`l ask God to grant her a speedy recovery!
June 3rd, 2011 21:49
Anna said:
Your poem is amazing, and I`m really sorry about your friend :( I`m hope that she`s alright now. I`ll pray for her if she still isn`t. I`l ask God to grant her a speedy recovery!
June 3rd, 2011 21:49
Exceptions
Anna said:
My gosh! I can`t do anything but stare at this point... How is it possible that there is actually someone who can write such magnificent poems that are so high class at age 14?! Your poems honestly (as I have realized a little while ago) create an amazing aura that floats off the page, and just makes my soul jump with joy! Your poems make my day, and they make me so happy, even in my dark moods! :) I can`t wait for the next one, and I wish that I`ll be able to write like you, someday :D
June 3rd, 2011 21:45
Anna said:
My gosh! I can`t do anything but stare at this point... How is it possible that there is actually someone who can write such magnificent poems that are so high class at age 14?! Your poems honestly (as I have realized a little while ago) create an amazing aura that floats off the page, and just makes my soul jump with joy! Your poems make my day, and they make me so happy, even in my dark moods! :) I can`t wait for the next one, and I wish that I`ll be able to write like you, someday :D
June 3rd, 2011 21:45
Take a Risk
Anna said:
Oh my gosh! This was a beautiful poem. I can`t really explain, but somehow, this poem makes me feel a lot better after all my friend drama. This poem is.... well, there isn`t really any words to describe it, or how it makes me really feel. All I can say is that; it`s so vibrant, colorful, happy and delicate. I love it to bits!
June 3rd, 2011 21:40
Anna said:
Oh my gosh! This was a beautiful poem. I can`t really explain, but somehow, this poem makes me feel a lot better after all my friend drama. This poem is.... well, there isn`t really any words to describe it, or how it makes me really feel. All I can say is that; it`s so vibrant, colorful, happy and delicate. I love it to bits!
June 3rd, 2011 21:40
Flightless Bird
Hribhu Dey said:
HOPE UR FLIGHTLESS BIRD WILL FLY ONEDAY...ENJOYED SO MUCH DEAR..
May 22nd, 2011 11:42
Hribhu Dey said:
HOPE UR FLIGHTLESS BIRD WILL FLY ONEDAY...ENJOYED SO MUCH DEAR..
May 22nd, 2011 11:42
Flightless Bird
broken_dreams23 said:
awwww! I hope your friend is ok!
Great job though :)
May 19th, 2011 19:58
broken_dreams23 said:
awwww! I hope your friend is ok!
Great job though :)
May 19th, 2011 19:58
Saving Grace
Hribhu Dey said:
HELLO EMI,YOU COMMENTED ON ONE POEM WRITTEN BY CHHUTAN...THAT WAS ME..NOW I HAVE CHANGED MY NAME...NEW NAME IS "HRIBHU DEY"...PLZ READ MY POEM "YOU TOUCH ME" THANKS
May 15th, 2011 06:51
Hribhu Dey said:
HELLO EMI,YOU COMMENTED ON ONE POEM WRITTEN BY CHHUTAN...THAT WAS ME..NOW I HAVE CHANGED MY NAME...NEW NAME IS "HRIBHU DEY"...PLZ READ MY POEM "YOU TOUCH ME" THANKS
May 15th, 2011 06:51
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