Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Be choosy about change
NafisaSB said:
am in agreement with your sentiments - well expressed...
August 21st, 2026 01:57
NafisaSB said:
am in agreement with your sentiments - well expressed...
August 21st, 2026 01:57
Be choosy about change
cellinic said:
Hi, a very good, well-based and rather well-tuned poem. Best wishes,
August 14th, 2026 01:30
cellinic said:
Hi, a very good, well-based and rather well-tuned poem. Best wishes,
August 14th, 2026 01:30
Be choosy about change
hzugman said:
Nice poem. Change is not necessarily good or bad but usually what we make of it.
August 13th, 2026 19:22
hzugman said:
Nice poem. Change is not necessarily good or bad but usually what we make of it.
August 13th, 2026 19:22
Be choosy about change
Allie561 said:
Old things are familiar and represent things of our past! Special poem, nice job
August 13th, 2026 14:19
Allie561 said:
Old things are familiar and represent things of our past! Special poem, nice job
August 13th, 2026 14:19
Be choosy about change
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a clever write with clear message
August 13th, 2026 10:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a clever write with clear message
August 13th, 2026 10:26
Be choosy about change
arqios said:
There are treasures in both new and old. Too much change is debilitating as well.
August 13th, 2026 07:48
arqios said:
There are treasures in both new and old. Too much change is debilitating as well.
August 13th, 2026 07:48
Be choosy about change
sorenbarrett said:
This poem extols the old in favor of the new. With rhyme it makes its point. Not that all new is bad but one needs to know what lamp one is trading and what one is loosing in the trade. Nicely written and with a sound message. Well done
August 13th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem extols the old in favor of the new. With rhyme it makes its point. Not that all new is bad but one needs to know what lamp one is trading and what one is loosing in the trade. Nicely written and with a sound message. Well done
August 13th, 2026 06:40
Be choosy about change
Fränz Müller said:
As someone who loves history and antiques, I could not agree with you more! New is not necessarily better. Very well written!
August 13th, 2026 06:36
Fränz Müller said:
As someone who loves history and antiques, I could not agree with you more! New is not necessarily better. Very well written!
August 13th, 2026 06:36
Mortal Beauty
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . She seems a fine Lady. And her phone number is...😁. A good Poem.
May 21st, 2026 09:04
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . She seems a fine Lady. And her phone number is...😁. A good Poem.
May 21st, 2026 09:04
Mortal Beauty
Bella Shepard said:
They say that beauty is in the eye on the beholder, and that can take on many faces. Who is not drawn the to the perfect face, and marvel how it came to be. Your colorful words capature the essence of the poem, indeed. I enjoyed very much!
May 20th, 2026 07:51
Bella Shepard said:
They say that beauty is in the eye on the beholder, and that can take on many faces. Who is not drawn the to the perfect face, and marvel how it came to be. Your colorful words capature the essence of the poem, indeed. I enjoyed very much!
May 20th, 2026 07:51
Mortal Beauty
Doggerel Dave said:
Do not in future contribute to my entries here when the only time you do so is to request a reading of yours.
Having however made the effort, I am confronted with a colour scheme which applies pain to an ageing eyesight. I am no masochist, so Mistress go inflict your torment elsewhere.
(If I reach above your words, the only faint word available to me is \'Allah\' over a bunch of women in traditional dress, so all I can conclude is that this is some religious propaganda not in keeping with my particular set of values)...
May 19th, 2026 20:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Do not in future contribute to my entries here when the only time you do so is to request a reading of yours.
Having however made the effort, I am confronted with a colour scheme which applies pain to an ageing eyesight. I am no masochist, so Mistress go inflict your torment elsewhere.
(If I reach above your words, the only faint word available to me is \'Allah\' over a bunch of women in traditional dress, so all I can conclude is that this is some religious propaganda not in keeping with my particular set of values)...
May 19th, 2026 20:39
Mortal Beauty
Neville said:
The message was eventually clear but the problem I had trying to read it was near insurmountable .. please remember not everyone has perfect vision .. Neville
May 19th, 2026 14:12
Neville said:
The message was eventually clear but the problem I had trying to read it was near insurmountable .. please remember not everyone has perfect vision .. Neville
May 19th, 2026 14:12
Man\"s worst enemy
Paul Bell said:
The builders and the destructors.
The builders have vision, the destructors, low esteem.
Now that we\'ve entered the Drone age of destruction, I would imagine the machines will probably wipe us out.
May 19th, 2026 13:14
Paul Bell said:
The builders and the destructors.
The builders have vision, the destructors, low esteem.
Now that we\'ve entered the Drone age of destruction, I would imagine the machines will probably wipe us out.
May 19th, 2026 13:14
Mortal Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
A lady dressed to the nines in this poem of physical appearance that ends well with a match of a lady killer and femme fatalle
May 19th, 2026 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
A lady dressed to the nines in this poem of physical appearance that ends well with a match of a lady killer and femme fatalle
May 19th, 2026 12:21
To condemn violence with solemn ink
rrodriguez said:
I enjoyed reading your poem. It describes so vividly what\'s going on in our world today. Nicely done!
April 1st, 2026 18:24
rrodriguez said:
I enjoyed reading your poem. It describes so vividly what\'s going on in our world today. Nicely done!
April 1st, 2026 18:24
To condemn violence with solemn ink
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Vivid and sharp.
March 24th, 2026 07:21
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Vivid and sharp.
March 24th, 2026 07:21
To condemn violence with solemn ink
NafisaSB said:
you have captured the brutal slaying of innocents beautifully..
fantastic work
March 24th, 2026 02:16
NafisaSB said:
you have captured the brutal slaying of innocents beautifully..
fantastic work
March 24th, 2026 02:16
To condemn violence with solemn ink
arqios said:
The innocent and defenceless are the “poor” that we always have among and around us and it is only too sad they are inevitably the first to go in hostility. Might doesn’t make right it should defend rights🙏🏻🕊️
March 23rd, 2026 16:19
arqios said:
The innocent and defenceless are the “poor” that we always have among and around us and it is only too sad they are inevitably the first to go in hostility. Might doesn’t make right it should defend rights🙏🏻🕊️
March 23rd, 2026 16:19
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