Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Ode to the salty tear
Neilton said:
I \'m speechless! your poem is one of the best i have ever read!I especially loved how you said that our tears can be the reason of sadness or a reason of joy!
May 23rd, 2024 15:46
Neilton said:
I \'m speechless! your poem is one of the best i have ever read!I especially loved how you said that our tears can be the reason of sadness or a reason of joy!
May 23rd, 2024 15:46
Ode to the salty tear
NafisaSB said:
what an awesome poem. delves deep into the heart, and tugs at the heartstrings.
keep them coming - i only wish i had more hours in a day to read the beautiful compositions shared on this site - but always find myself pressed for time
May 17th, 2024 00:24
NafisaSB said:
what an awesome poem. delves deep into the heart, and tugs at the heartstrings.
keep them coming - i only wish i had more hours in a day to read the beautiful compositions shared on this site - but always find myself pressed for time
May 17th, 2024 00:24
Ode to the salty tear
Bella Shepard said:
The emotions of life captured in a single salty teardrop, relatable on every level, in every stanza. It truly tugged at my heart and my mind as I read. Thank you for this exquisite piece my friend, it came at just the right time for me.
May 15th, 2024 08:17
Bella Shepard said:
The emotions of life captured in a single salty teardrop, relatable on every level, in every stanza. It truly tugged at my heart and my mind as I read. Thank you for this exquisite piece my friend, it came at just the right time for me.
May 15th, 2024 08:17
Ode to the salty tear
Petrichor of Love said:
Such a wonderful poem Zaynab! Kudos! Keep writing.
May 15th, 2024 01:04
Petrichor of Love said:
Such a wonderful poem Zaynab! Kudos! Keep writing.
May 15th, 2024 01:04
View from an airplane window
Qurrathul Ain said:
The poem had the power to conjure it all up in my head. It just makes us realize how tiny we are in this big wide world. Beautiful!
May 14th, 2024 20:20
Qurrathul Ain said:
The poem had the power to conjure it all up in my head. It just makes us realize how tiny we are in this big wide world. Beautiful!
May 14th, 2024 20:20
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Qurrathul Ain said:
This poem conveys the truth, in a gentle yet fierce way. It speaks for humanity and peace and makes us look back on our actions. For some reason, this poem soothed the worries in my heart. Wonderful one!
May 14th, 2024 20:16
Qurrathul Ain said:
This poem conveys the truth, in a gentle yet fierce way. It speaks for humanity and peace and makes us look back on our actions. For some reason, this poem soothed the worries in my heart. Wonderful one!
May 14th, 2024 20:16
Ode to the salty tear
hzugman said:
Tears are emotions set free. Very nice picture.
May 14th, 2024 18:56
hzugman said:
Tears are emotions set free. Very nice picture.
May 14th, 2024 18:56
Ode to the salty tear
BlessedbyGod said:
Very good dear friend, I like to think that every tear that we cry are never a waste, it\'s a beautiful release of heartfelt emotion that God catches and cherishes every single teardrop we shed
May 14th, 2024 13:19
BlessedbyGod said:
Very good dear friend, I like to think that every tear that we cry are never a waste, it\'s a beautiful release of heartfelt emotion that God catches and cherishes every single teardrop we shed
May 14th, 2024 13:19
Poetic perfumery
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The views are not showing up. Because there are about 10 comments so how can there be only 5 views as it says up top.
May 14th, 2024 13:05
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The views are not showing up. Because there are about 10 comments so how can there be only 5 views as it says up top.
May 14th, 2024 13:05
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
David Wakeling said:
This is a valiant attempt at trying to understand why there is war.Sadly human beings are animals.Therefore they fight for what they want.That is why I live alone.
January 8th, 2024 15:39
David Wakeling said:
This is a valiant attempt at trying to understand why there is war.Sadly human beings are animals.Therefore they fight for what they want.That is why I live alone.
January 8th, 2024 15:39
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend this poem brought a lump to my throat, tears to my eyes and pain to my heart, for all those who suffer and die because of the ignorance of mankind. As you so eloquently say, why should peace be so hard to find? If only we had the will to give it a try, to look past our differences and embrace our commonalities, we might just make this world the place it was meant to be. A stunning write dear poet!
January 8th, 2024 15:01
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend this poem brought a lump to my throat, tears to my eyes and pain to my heart, for all those who suffer and die because of the ignorance of mankind. As you so eloquently say, why should peace be so hard to find? If only we had the will to give it a try, to look past our differences and embrace our commonalities, we might just make this world the place it was meant to be. A stunning write dear poet!
January 8th, 2024 15:01
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Lorenz said:
Patience and resilience will triumph !
January 8th, 2024 14:27
Lorenz said:
Patience and resilience will triumph !
January 8th, 2024 14:27
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned. War has no place on a planet of so many species of life. Empathy goes a long way with peace at hand.
January 8th, 2024 09:18
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned. War has no place on a planet of so many species of life. Empathy goes a long way with peace at hand.
January 8th, 2024 09:18
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
nephilim56 said:
the world is in a state of madness civilians pay the greatest price. nice write
January 8th, 2024 04:36
nephilim56 said:
the world is in a state of madness civilians pay the greatest price. nice write
January 8th, 2024 04:36
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
NafisaSB said:
@Zainab, i agree with almost all of your views so beautifully expressed. sorry because of catarat surgery in both eyes have not been reading much, just forwarding my old poems..
more power to your pen, and your thoughts, dear, take care
January 8th, 2024 02:09
NafisaSB said:
@Zainab, i agree with almost all of your views so beautifully expressed. sorry because of catarat surgery in both eyes have not been reading much, just forwarding my old poems..
more power to your pen, and your thoughts, dear, take care
January 8th, 2024 02:09
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Bobby O said:
I might be in the minority with this observation but offering truth is best.
The piece had a point of view based on solid logic provided by declarative phrasing and snd well timed rhythm. Then there is a technique you chose to employ that I don’t understand and I feel it works against the strength of your message and significantly diminishes the power of the poem. There is a school of thought that I’ve come to agree with and it suggests that the use of interrogatories (?question marks) do not add anything worthwhile and in fact can be rewritten is such a way that the technique be completely avoided and the piece is strengthened when all the silly question marks ARE REMOVED. you chose to include 11 of them in my opinion that’s a cutesy style that would serve you well if you skipped it forever.
January 8th, 2024 01:52
Bobby O said:
I might be in the minority with this observation but offering truth is best.
The piece had a point of view based on solid logic provided by declarative phrasing and snd well timed rhythm. Then there is a technique you chose to employ that I don’t understand and I feel it works against the strength of your message and significantly diminishes the power of the poem. There is a school of thought that I’ve come to agree with and it suggests that the use of interrogatories (?question marks) do not add anything worthwhile and in fact can be rewritten is such a way that the technique be completely avoided and the piece is strengthened when all the silly question marks ARE REMOVED. you chose to include 11 of them in my opinion that’s a cutesy style that would serve you well if you skipped it forever.
January 8th, 2024 01:52
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Doggerel Dave said:
Why when and how indeed.
Your passion, anger and sickness at this and all other war situations comes through clearly. What more can I, totally on your side, add to your words?
January 8th, 2024 01:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Why when and how indeed.
Your passion, anger and sickness at this and all other war situations comes through clearly. What more can I, totally on your side, add to your words?
January 8th, 2024 01:43
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
2781 said:
Not by might, not by power,but by my Spirit saith the Lord.
January 8th, 2024 01:28
2781 said:
Not by might, not by power,but by my Spirit saith the Lord.
January 8th, 2024 01:28
Poetic perfumery
L. B. Mek said:
\'treasuring it to form scented hints of sweet memory\'
Brilliant!
A great write, so well researched
and crafted with genuine enthusiasm and sincerity
a beautiful read..
May I humbly recommend you read
\'The Cinnamon Peeler\' poem
by Michael Ondaatje
so you may see for yourself how favourably your poem compares
to one of the great modern
love poems
(
https://www.lyrikline.org/en/poems/cinnamon-peeler-6570
)
October 6th, 2023 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'treasuring it to form scented hints of sweet memory\'
Brilliant!
A great write, so well researched
and crafted with genuine enthusiasm and sincerity
a beautiful read..
May I humbly recommend you read
\'The Cinnamon Peeler\' poem
by Michael Ondaatje
so you may see for yourself how favourably your poem compares
to one of the great modern
love poems
(
https://www.lyrikline.org/en/poems/cinnamon-peeler-6570
)
October 6th, 2023 05:17
Poetic perfumery
jarcher54 said:
These days many people turn their noses up at strong perfumes. I understand, but I am one of those enchanted by a nice fragrance. Maybe you did not mean it exactly, but this is a very sexy poem! When I enter a room or elevator and there\'s no one there but the scent of a nice perfume lingers in the air... it intoxicates me! I cannot help imagining the woman whom I just missed...
October 5th, 2023 19:56
jarcher54 said:
These days many people turn their noses up at strong perfumes. I understand, but I am one of those enchanted by a nice fragrance. Maybe you did not mean it exactly, but this is a very sexy poem! When I enter a room or elevator and there\'s no one there but the scent of a nice perfume lingers in the air... it intoxicates me! I cannot help imagining the woman whom I just missed...
October 5th, 2023 19:56
Poetic perfumery
Petrichor of Love said:
Wondrously written ma\'am. The essence of the fragrance could be sensed very well💕
October 5th, 2023 11:51
Petrichor of Love said:
Wondrously written ma\'am. The essence of the fragrance could be sensed very well💕
October 5th, 2023 11:51
The corona catastrophe
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"The corona catastrophe” by s.zaynab.kamoonpuri
Covid was a worldwide catastrophe of immense magnitude. It even caused people to suspect each other in the house… There were about 6 922 866 deaths; about 668 127 779 recovered. Many people died a horrible death, struggling to breathe. Many died without having been able to write a Will…
Even if you yourself stay at home, you can’t compel others at home to do so : they will go out and bring Covid to you…. On Covid, see my poems “Advance leave, advancing death” and “Jabbing Shakespeare” on this site. Soman Ragavan. 5 October, 2023.
https://www.worldometers.info/coronavirus/
October 5th, 2023 00:23
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"The corona catastrophe” by s.zaynab.kamoonpuri
Covid was a worldwide catastrophe of immense magnitude. It even caused people to suspect each other in the house… There were about 6 922 866 deaths; about 668 127 779 recovered. Many people died a horrible death, struggling to breathe. Many died without having been able to write a Will…
Even if you yourself stay at home, you can’t compel others at home to do so : they will go out and bring Covid to you…. On Covid, see my poems “Advance leave, advancing death” and “Jabbing Shakespeare” on this site. Soman Ragavan. 5 October, 2023.
https://www.worldometers.info/coronavirus/
October 5th, 2023 00:23
Poetic perfumery
AwHec8 said:
Beautiful 😍 Poem, can smell the fragrance of it in my mind because of your writing. Don
October 4th, 2023 11:26
AwHec8 said:
Beautiful 😍 Poem, can smell the fragrance of it in my mind because of your writing. Don
October 4th, 2023 11:26
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