Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Incredible India: my motherland
Bella Shepard said:
With your words you paint an incredible picture of the wonderful and exotic place that is India. Such excitement I can only imagine. Thank you so much for sharing.
January 28th, 2025 18:11
Bella Shepard said:
With your words you paint an incredible picture of the wonderful and exotic place that is India. Such excitement I can only imagine. Thank you so much for sharing.
January 28th, 2025 18:11
Incredible India: my motherland
nephilim56 said:
Very well constructed poem and liked its flow
January 26th, 2025 04:34
nephilim56 said:
Very well constructed poem and liked its flow
January 26th, 2025 04:34
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
NafisaSB said:
i share your sentiments about war, power and am glad that at least the mid-east war has come to a close. now waiting for ukraine to stop suffering
beautiful poem
January 25th, 2025 23:56
NafisaSB said:
i share your sentiments about war, power and am glad that at least the mid-east war has come to a close. now waiting for ukraine to stop suffering
beautiful poem
January 25th, 2025 23:56
Incredible India: my motherland
NafisaSB said:
you have almost completely captured the diversity that makes up our country - wonderful work, keep it up
today, as we celebrate our Republic day, when the Constitution came into being, i salute my country and am proud to be called Indian
January 25th, 2025 23:54
NafisaSB said:
you have almost completely captured the diversity that makes up our country - wonderful work, keep it up
today, as we celebrate our Republic day, when the Constitution came into being, i salute my country and am proud to be called Indian
January 25th, 2025 23:54
Incredible India: my motherland
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a magical place.Certainly old and modern mixed together.Wonderful poem
January 25th, 2025 14:53
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a magical place.Certainly old and modern mixed together.Wonderful poem
January 25th, 2025 14:53
Incredible India: my motherland
2781 said:
A good tribute to a land loved by everyone I know that has been there an ancient land, with a rich history.
Well done
January 25th, 2025 06:29
2781 said:
A good tribute to a land loved by everyone I know that has been there an ancient land, with a rich history.
Well done
January 25th, 2025 06:29
Incredible India: my motherland
Soman Ragavan said:
India is a land of extremes and contrasts. The Taj Mahal remains an unparalleled wonder of construction. It took 20 years and 20 000 workers to build. At places the marble blocks have impressive acoustics. The Taj has been described as the most costly tomb in the world. It was meant to be the memorial of Mumtaz Begum, the Emperor\'s wife, but after the death of the Emperor it was decided to bury him, too, by the side of his wife. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 05:18
Soman Ragavan said:
India is a land of extremes and contrasts. The Taj Mahal remains an unparalleled wonder of construction. It took 20 years and 20 000 workers to build. At places the marble blocks have impressive acoustics. The Taj has been described as the most costly tomb in the world. It was meant to be the memorial of Mumtaz Begum, the Emperor\'s wife, but after the death of the Emperor it was decided to bury him, too, by the side of his wife. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 05:18
Incredible India: my motherland
Soman Ragavan said:
Link to my poem :
https://allpoetry.com/poem/17375603--At-Nizamuddin-Bridge--a-grieving-father...----15-September--2023-by-Soman-Ragavan/
Soman Ragavan.
January 25th, 2025 05:11
Soman Ragavan said:
Link to my poem :
https://allpoetry.com/poem/17375603--At-Nizamuddin-Bridge--a-grieving-father...----15-September--2023-by-Soman-Ragavan/
Soman Ragavan.
January 25th, 2025 05:11
Incredible India: my motherland
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a few fun lines on this tour of India cleverly constructed it flows very well.
January 25th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a few fun lines on this tour of India cleverly constructed it flows very well.
January 25th, 2025 04:22
Incredible India: my motherland
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the analysis of my poem \"At Nizamuddin Bridge, a grieving father...\" Link to the analysis :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-196464
The poem is about a father who was kept by force at the bridge in New Delhi and prevented from going on to see his dying son at his home village in Bariapur, Bihar. His son died. The father was held up because of the lockdown during Covid. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 03:58
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the analysis of my poem \"At Nizamuddin Bridge, a grieving father...\" Link to the analysis :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-196464
The poem is about a father who was kept by force at the bridge in New Delhi and prevented from going on to see his dying son at his home village in Bariapur, Bihar. His son died. The father was held up because of the lockdown during Covid. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 03:58
Ode to the salty tear
Neilton said:
I \'m speechless! your poem is one of the best i have ever read!I especially loved how you said that our tears can be the reason of sadness or a reason of joy!
May 23rd, 2024 15:46
Neilton said:
I \'m speechless! your poem is one of the best i have ever read!I especially loved how you said that our tears can be the reason of sadness or a reason of joy!
May 23rd, 2024 15:46
Ode to the salty tear
NafisaSB said:
what an awesome poem. delves deep into the heart, and tugs at the heartstrings.
keep them coming - i only wish i had more hours in a day to read the beautiful compositions shared on this site - but always find myself pressed for time
May 17th, 2024 00:24
NafisaSB said:
what an awesome poem. delves deep into the heart, and tugs at the heartstrings.
keep them coming - i only wish i had more hours in a day to read the beautiful compositions shared on this site - but always find myself pressed for time
May 17th, 2024 00:24
Ode to the salty tear
Bella Shepard said:
The emotions of life captured in a single salty teardrop, relatable on every level, in every stanza. It truly tugged at my heart and my mind as I read. Thank you for this exquisite piece my friend, it came at just the right time for me.
May 15th, 2024 08:17
Bella Shepard said:
The emotions of life captured in a single salty teardrop, relatable on every level, in every stanza. It truly tugged at my heart and my mind as I read. Thank you for this exquisite piece my friend, it came at just the right time for me.
May 15th, 2024 08:17
Ode to the salty tear
Petrichor of Love said:
Such a wonderful poem Zaynab! Kudos! Keep writing.
May 15th, 2024 01:04
Petrichor of Love said:
Such a wonderful poem Zaynab! Kudos! Keep writing.
May 15th, 2024 01:04
View from an airplane window
Qurrathul Ain said:
The poem had the power to conjure it all up in my head. It just makes us realize how tiny we are in this big wide world. Beautiful!
May 14th, 2024 20:20
Qurrathul Ain said:
The poem had the power to conjure it all up in my head. It just makes us realize how tiny we are in this big wide world. Beautiful!
May 14th, 2024 20:20
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Qurrathul Ain said:
This poem conveys the truth, in a gentle yet fierce way. It speaks for humanity and peace and makes us look back on our actions. For some reason, this poem soothed the worries in my heart. Wonderful one!
May 14th, 2024 20:16
Qurrathul Ain said:
This poem conveys the truth, in a gentle yet fierce way. It speaks for humanity and peace and makes us look back on our actions. For some reason, this poem soothed the worries in my heart. Wonderful one!
May 14th, 2024 20:16
Ode to the salty tear
hzugman said:
Tears are emotions set free. Very nice picture.
May 14th, 2024 18:56
hzugman said:
Tears are emotions set free. Very nice picture.
May 14th, 2024 18:56
Ode to the salty tear
BlessedbyGod said:
Very good dear friend, I like to think that every tear that we cry are never a waste, it\'s a beautiful release of heartfelt emotion that God catches and cherishes every single teardrop we shed
May 14th, 2024 13:19
BlessedbyGod said:
Very good dear friend, I like to think that every tear that we cry are never a waste, it\'s a beautiful release of heartfelt emotion that God catches and cherishes every single teardrop we shed
May 14th, 2024 13:19
Poetic perfumery
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The views are not showing up. Because there are about 10 comments so how can there be only 5 views as it says up top.
May 14th, 2024 13:05
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The views are not showing up. Because there are about 10 comments so how can there be only 5 views as it says up top.
May 14th, 2024 13:05
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
David Wakeling said:
This is a valiant attempt at trying to understand why there is war.Sadly human beings are animals.Therefore they fight for what they want.That is why I live alone.
January 8th, 2024 15:39
David Wakeling said:
This is a valiant attempt at trying to understand why there is war.Sadly human beings are animals.Therefore they fight for what they want.That is why I live alone.
January 8th, 2024 15:39
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend this poem brought a lump to my throat, tears to my eyes and pain to my heart, for all those who suffer and die because of the ignorance of mankind. As you so eloquently say, why should peace be so hard to find? If only we had the will to give it a try, to look past our differences and embrace our commonalities, we might just make this world the place it was meant to be. A stunning write dear poet!
January 8th, 2024 15:01
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend this poem brought a lump to my throat, tears to my eyes and pain to my heart, for all those who suffer and die because of the ignorance of mankind. As you so eloquently say, why should peace be so hard to find? If only we had the will to give it a try, to look past our differences and embrace our commonalities, we might just make this world the place it was meant to be. A stunning write dear poet!
January 8th, 2024 15:01
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Lorenz said:
Patience and resilience will triumph !
January 8th, 2024 14:27
Lorenz said:
Patience and resilience will triumph !
January 8th, 2024 14:27
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned. War has no place on a planet of so many species of life. Empathy goes a long way with peace at hand.
January 8th, 2024 09:18
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned. War has no place on a planet of so many species of life. Empathy goes a long way with peace at hand.
January 8th, 2024 09:18
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
nephilim56 said:
the world is in a state of madness civilians pay the greatest price. nice write
January 8th, 2024 04:36
nephilim56 said:
the world is in a state of madness civilians pay the greatest price. nice write
January 8th, 2024 04:36
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
NafisaSB said:
@Zainab, i agree with almost all of your views so beautifully expressed. sorry because of catarat surgery in both eyes have not been reading much, just forwarding my old poems..
more power to your pen, and your thoughts, dear, take care
January 8th, 2024 02:09
NafisaSB said:
@Zainab, i agree with almost all of your views so beautifully expressed. sorry because of catarat surgery in both eyes have not been reading much, just forwarding my old poems..
more power to your pen, and your thoughts, dear, take care
January 8th, 2024 02:09
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