Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Kaleidoscope cocktail
Syd said:
Hi there,
I really enjoyed the clever wordplay in this, particularly the alliteration. I liked the bookworms buried in books and the horoscopes being hocus pocus. A very enjoyable read.
- Syd 🍄
October 17th, 2026 04:28
Syd said:
Hi there,
I really enjoyed the clever wordplay in this, particularly the alliteration. I liked the bookworms buried in books and the horoscopes being hocus pocus. A very enjoyable read.
- Syd 🍄
October 17th, 2026 04:28
Kaleidoscope cocktail
NafisaSB said:
One poem and you have covered such a vast territory 👌✌️wow
October 13th, 2026 09:43
NafisaSB said:
One poem and you have covered such a vast territory 👌✌️wow
October 13th, 2026 09:43
Kaleidoscope cocktail
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. Meadows reminds me of the Summer that - Alas - has now gone.
October 10th, 2026 18:22
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. Meadows reminds me of the Summer that - Alas - has now gone.
October 10th, 2026 18:22
Kaleidoscope cocktail
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Those beavers cracked me up, Zaynab. I\'d be demanding a nap and some recognition after that much work! Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 18:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Those beavers cracked me up, Zaynab. I\'d be demanding a nap and some recognition after that much work! Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 18:07
Kaleidoscope cocktail
Fränz Müller said:
What a wonderful poem! Nicely done.
October 10th, 2026 17:06
Fränz Müller said:
What a wonderful poem! Nicely done.
October 10th, 2026 17:06
Kaleidoscope cocktail
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Zay,
A cacophony of sounds and a kaleidoscope of colours in your own unique style. Lovely to read your poetry again. Excellent!
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 10th, 2026 16:25
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Zay,
A cacophony of sounds and a kaleidoscope of colours in your own unique style. Lovely to read your poetry again. Excellent!
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 10th, 2026 16:25
Kaleidoscope cocktail
2781 said:
Reading your profile, I see you are speaking from experience.
October 10th, 2026 16:14
2781 said:
Reading your profile, I see you are speaking from experience.
October 10th, 2026 16:14
Incredible India: my motherland
rrodriguez said:
I really enjoyed your poem! You took me on a lively journey through India, from its wonderfully chaotic streets to its magnificent landmarks. I loved your playful tone and the humor woven into your observations, but what touched me most was your ending, where family becomes the best part of the journey. Thank you for sharing this colorful, personal glimpse of India with us!
October 10th, 2026 16:03
rrodriguez said:
I really enjoyed your poem! You took me on a lively journey through India, from its wonderfully chaotic streets to its magnificent landmarks. I loved your playful tone and the humor woven into your observations, but what touched me most was your ending, where family becomes the best part of the journey. Thank you for sharing this colorful, personal glimpse of India with us!
October 10th, 2026 16:03
Kaleidoscope cocktail
rrodriguez said:
I really enjoyed reading your poem, my friend. I smiled at the playful sounds, the clever word combinations, and the vivid, unexpected images. You have a lovely way of making words dance and bringing ordinary scenes to life in such an imaginative way. I especially enjoyed the sheer delight you take in language. Thank you for sharing this little gem with us!
October 10th, 2026 15:52
rrodriguez said:
I really enjoyed reading your poem, my friend. I smiled at the playful sounds, the clever word combinations, and the vivid, unexpected images. You have a lovely way of making words dance and bringing ordinary scenes to life in such an imaginative way. I especially enjoyed the sheer delight you take in language. Thank you for sharing this little gem with us!
October 10th, 2026 15:52
Kaleidoscope cocktail
Ladywithaquill said:
Love the use of alliteration and imagery as a poetic kaleidoscope😊
October 10th, 2026 15:37
Ladywithaquill said:
Love the use of alliteration and imagery as a poetic kaleidoscope😊
October 10th, 2026 15:37
Kaleidoscope cocktail
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds like Alice\'s garden in wonderland in a surreal world and indeed that is where we live. Nicely written with great images and a fun trip indeed.
October 10th, 2026 13:26
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds like Alice\'s garden in wonderland in a surreal world and indeed that is where we live. Nicely written with great images and a fun trip indeed.
October 10th, 2026 13:26
Be choosy about change
NafisaSB said:
am in agreement with your sentiments - well expressed...
August 21st, 2026 01:57
NafisaSB said:
am in agreement with your sentiments - well expressed...
August 21st, 2026 01:57
Be choosy about change
cellinic said:
Hi, a very good, well-based and rather well-tuned poem. Best wishes,
August 14th, 2026 01:30
cellinic said:
Hi, a very good, well-based and rather well-tuned poem. Best wishes,
August 14th, 2026 01:30
Be choosy about change
hzugman said:
Nice poem. Change is not necessarily good or bad but usually what we make of it.
August 13th, 2026 19:22
hzugman said:
Nice poem. Change is not necessarily good or bad but usually what we make of it.
August 13th, 2026 19:22
Be choosy about change
Allie561 said:
Old things are familiar and represent things of our past! Special poem, nice job
August 13th, 2026 14:19
Allie561 said:
Old things are familiar and represent things of our past! Special poem, nice job
August 13th, 2026 14:19
Be choosy about change
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a clever write with clear message
August 13th, 2026 10:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a clever write with clear message
August 13th, 2026 10:26
Be choosy about change
arqios said:
There are treasures in both new and old. Too much change is debilitating as well.
August 13th, 2026 07:48
arqios said:
There are treasures in both new and old. Too much change is debilitating as well.
August 13th, 2026 07:48
Be choosy about change
sorenbarrett said:
This poem extols the old in favor of the new. With rhyme it makes its point. Not that all new is bad but one needs to know what lamp one is trading and what one is loosing in the trade. Nicely written and with a sound message. Well done
August 13th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem extols the old in favor of the new. With rhyme it makes its point. Not that all new is bad but one needs to know what lamp one is trading and what one is loosing in the trade. Nicely written and with a sound message. Well done
August 13th, 2026 06:40
Be choosy about change
Fränz Müller said:
As someone who loves history and antiques, I could not agree with you more! New is not necessarily better. Very well written!
August 13th, 2026 06:36
Fränz Müller said:
As someone who loves history and antiques, I could not agree with you more! New is not necessarily better. Very well written!
August 13th, 2026 06:36
Mortal Beauty
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . She seems a fine Lady. And her phone number is...😁. A good Poem.
May 21st, 2026 09:04
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . She seems a fine Lady. And her phone number is...😁. A good Poem.
May 21st, 2026 09:04
Mortal Beauty
Bella Shepard said:
They say that beauty is in the eye on the beholder, and that can take on many faces. Who is not drawn the to the perfect face, and marvel how it came to be. Your colorful words capature the essence of the poem, indeed. I enjoyed very much!
May 20th, 2026 07:51
Bella Shepard said:
They say that beauty is in the eye on the beholder, and that can take on many faces. Who is not drawn the to the perfect face, and marvel how it came to be. Your colorful words capature the essence of the poem, indeed. I enjoyed very much!
May 20th, 2026 07:51
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