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Young love is silly
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Liked it very much. Well written.
Like any thought provoking poem this one made me think- what if we don\'t let our younger one don\'t make mistakes, would they learn to choose?
November 27th, 2025 04:56
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Liked it very much. Well written.
Like any thought provoking poem this one made me think- what if we don\'t let our younger one don\'t make mistakes, would they learn to choose?
November 27th, 2025 04:56
Young love is silly
Ellen Marsell said:
You have managed to express important things clearly, warmly, and with great meaning. Excellent work!
November 26th, 2025 13:16
Ellen Marsell said:
You have managed to express important things clearly, warmly, and with great meaning. Excellent work!
November 26th, 2025 13:16
Young love is silly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done. Indeed, it feels less parents are, well, parenting nowadays. As one who did parent and, sure, did not always get it right, I can say that parenting, no matter how imperfect works better than not parenting at all. An excellent poem on an important topic. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 26th, 2025 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done. Indeed, it feels less parents are, well, parenting nowadays. As one who did parent and, sure, did not always get it right, I can say that parenting, no matter how imperfect works better than not parenting at all. An excellent poem on an important topic. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 26th, 2025 08:11
Young love is silly
NafisaSB said:
Love is instantaneous and does not need approval -- it just happens..one cannot guide a teen whom to fall for - though parents can introduce the right type of like minded youngsters for their kids...a lovely write full of caution and good advice...
November 26th, 2025 00:11
NafisaSB said:
Love is instantaneous and does not need approval -- it just happens..one cannot guide a teen whom to fall for - though parents can introduce the right type of like minded youngsters for their kids...a lovely write full of caution and good advice...
November 26th, 2025 00:11
Young love is silly
Doggerel Dave said:
Could not read your poem owing to it\'s deep red background. Answer refers to your comments only. How do you operationalise your wise contention in for example, dysfunctional families?
November 25th, 2025 16:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Could not read your poem owing to it\'s deep red background. Answer refers to your comments only. How do you operationalise your wise contention in for example, dysfunctional families?
November 25th, 2025 16:40
Young love is silly
2781 said:
Train up a child in the way he should go: and when he is old he will not depart from it.
It appears your parents have done a good job!
November 25th, 2025 15:30
2781 said:
Train up a child in the way he should go: and when he is old he will not depart from it.
It appears your parents have done a good job!
November 25th, 2025 15:30
Young love is silly
Bella Shepard said:
Love is a difficult emotion to control. The young often think they are invincible, for lack of experience. It is here that the wisdom of those who have trod the road of love before can be very benificial in honest conversation. A good write my friend!
November 25th, 2025 15:27
Bella Shepard said:
Love is a difficult emotion to control. The young often think they are invincible, for lack of experience. It is here that the wisdom of those who have trod the road of love before can be very benificial in honest conversation. A good write my friend!
November 25th, 2025 15:27
Young love is silly
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very true but I dont think we learn from our mistakes despite our age, good read and a definate like
November 25th, 2025 11:59
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very true but I dont think we learn from our mistakes despite our age, good read and a definate like
November 25th, 2025 11:59
Young love is silly
Soman Ragavan said:
Many pieces of wise advice to those concerned. Love should not be just about seeking pleasure. It should be genuine.
November 25th, 2025 10:02
Soman Ragavan said:
Many pieces of wise advice to those concerned. Love should not be just about seeking pleasure. It should be genuine.
November 25th, 2025 10:02
Young love is silly
sorenbarrett said:
The essence of this poem seems to be to protect children from unprotected sex and its consequences. It also addresses the issue of emotional pain in immature relationships. Well written
November 25th, 2025 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
The essence of this poem seems to be to protect children from unprotected sex and its consequences. It also addresses the issue of emotional pain in immature relationships. Well written
November 25th, 2025 09:00
Man\"s worst enemy
hzugman said:
Well written about this sad reality. For a slightly different aspect you might watch to watch the TV series Life After Man.
August 28th, 2025 09:20
hzugman said:
Well written about this sad reality. For a slightly different aspect you might watch to watch the TV series Life After Man.
August 28th, 2025 09:20
Man\"s worst enemy
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Zay,
There are so many words to describe the horrors of man especially those committed on his fellow man and sadly there is no end to it in sight. This is a powerful poem composed by a big hearted, kind and gifted poet. Excellent, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 11:57
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Zay,
There are so many words to describe the horrors of man especially those committed on his fellow man and sadly there is no end to it in sight. This is a powerful poem composed by a big hearted, kind and gifted poet. Excellent, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 11:57
Man\"s worst enemy
rrodriguez said:
Wonderfully expressed! And full of truth. This is a treatise on human behavior.
July 26th, 2025 06:50
rrodriguez said:
Wonderfully expressed! And full of truth. This is a treatise on human behavior.
July 26th, 2025 06:50
Man\"s worst enemy
NafisaSB said:
beautifully rendered how evil man can be - to be more feared than the beasts of the jungle - and yet, there is hope for redemption
well said !!!
July 23rd, 2025 00:12
NafisaSB said:
beautifully rendered how evil man can be - to be more feared than the beasts of the jungle - and yet, there is hope for redemption
well said !!!
July 23rd, 2025 00:12
Man\"s worst enemy
Bella Shepard said:
As a species we are full of contradictions; we lay waste and we create, we starve and yet we survive, we are adept at loving as well as hating. For me, your powerful poem speaks to the nature of man\'s constant struggle to keep the opposing forces of good and bad in balance. A very powerful and thought provoing write.
July 22nd, 2025 13:02
Bella Shepard said:
As a species we are full of contradictions; we lay waste and we create, we starve and yet we survive, we are adept at loving as well as hating. For me, your powerful poem speaks to the nature of man\'s constant struggle to keep the opposing forces of good and bad in balance. A very powerful and thought provoing write.
July 22nd, 2025 13:02
Man\"s worst enemy
BlessedbyGod said:
So very true my friend - it’s sad than man always sabotages himself and is quite honestly the root to his own misery and demise - yet we have the power to be someone great and admirable if we choose to do so and learn from our own mistakes as well as others
July 22nd, 2025 09:33
BlessedbyGod said:
So very true my friend - it’s sad than man always sabotages himself and is quite honestly the root to his own misery and demise - yet we have the power to be someone great and admirable if we choose to do so and learn from our own mistakes as well as others
July 22nd, 2025 09:33
Man\"s worst enemy
hzugman said:
You got that right and I think the only \"solution\" is for man to understand that love for all including those who are different from us is the only way out of our self-made mess. I hope that enough of us get and apply that message while there is still time.
July 22nd, 2025 09:05
hzugman said:
You got that right and I think the only \"solution\" is for man to understand that love for all including those who are different from us is the only way out of our self-made mess. I hope that enough of us get and apply that message while there is still time.
July 22nd, 2025 09:05
Man\"s worst enemy
sorenbarrett said:
A good read and one with which I must agree. I fear little in this life except other people. A good read
July 22nd, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
A good read and one with which I must agree. I fear little in this life except other people. A good read
July 22nd, 2025 08:22
Man\"s worst enemy
arqios said:
Destruction is the inheritance of the house divided from itself.
July 22nd, 2025 08:19
arqios said:
Destruction is the inheritance of the house divided from itself.
July 22nd, 2025 08:19
Man\"s worst enemy
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write of man and his darker side, that will destroy itself in the end, sadly we have been the same since we were created or since we evolved, nicely expressed write
July 22nd, 2025 07:23
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write of man and his darker side, that will destroy itself in the end, sadly we have been the same since we were created or since we evolved, nicely expressed write
July 22nd, 2025 07:23
Incredible India: my motherland
Bella Shepard said:
With your words you paint an incredible picture of the wonderful and exotic place that is India. Such excitement I can only imagine. Thank you so much for sharing.
January 28th, 2025 18:11
Bella Shepard said:
With your words you paint an incredible picture of the wonderful and exotic place that is India. Such excitement I can only imagine. Thank you so much for sharing.
January 28th, 2025 18:11
Incredible India: my motherland
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Very well constructed poem and liked its flow
January 26th, 2025 04:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Very well constructed poem and liked its flow
January 26th, 2025 04:34
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
NafisaSB said:
i share your sentiments about war, power and am glad that at least the mid-east war has come to a close. now waiting for ukraine to stop suffering
beautiful poem
January 25th, 2025 23:56
NafisaSB said:
i share your sentiments about war, power and am glad that at least the mid-east war has come to a close. now waiting for ukraine to stop suffering
beautiful poem
January 25th, 2025 23:56
Incredible India: my motherland
NafisaSB said:
you have almost completely captured the diversity that makes up our country - wonderful work, keep it up
today, as we celebrate our Republic day, when the Constitution came into being, i salute my country and am proud to be called Indian
January 25th, 2025 23:54
NafisaSB said:
you have almost completely captured the diversity that makes up our country - wonderful work, keep it up
today, as we celebrate our Republic day, when the Constitution came into being, i salute my country and am proud to be called Indian
January 25th, 2025 23:54
Incredible India: my motherland
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a magical place.Certainly old and modern mixed together.Wonderful poem
January 25th, 2025 14:53
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a magical place.Certainly old and modern mixed together.Wonderful poem
January 25th, 2025 14:53
Incredible India: my motherland
2781 said:
A good tribute to a land loved by everyone I know that has been there an ancient land, with a rich history.
Well done
January 25th, 2025 06:29
2781 said:
A good tribute to a land loved by everyone I know that has been there an ancient land, with a rich history.
Well done
January 25th, 2025 06:29
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