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View from an airplane window
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we need only elevate
our perspective\'s, point of view
to find all that wonder
that made our childhoods, such adventures..
wonderful enthusiasm, such evocative wording
thanks for sharing dear Poet
January 6th, 2023 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we need only elevate
our perspective\'s, point of view
to find all that wonder
that made our childhoods, such adventures..
wonderful enthusiasm, such evocative wording
thanks for sharing dear Poet
January 6th, 2023 04:08
View from an airplane window
thinkerbell said:
In recent times even I\'ve undertaken a lot of air travel and your poem resonated with my feelings in an airplane...wonderful poetry🥰
January 2nd, 2023 01:34
thinkerbell said:
In recent times even I\'ve undertaken a lot of air travel and your poem resonated with my feelings in an airplane...wonderful poetry🥰
January 2nd, 2023 01:34
View from an airplane window
NafisaSB said:
this poem resonates with me because for the past few months have been constantly traveling, and i too have written poems on clouds which i will share in a few days, as again another trip calls..
beautifully expressed - keep on composing..cheers
January 1st, 2023 00:06
NafisaSB said:
this poem resonates with me because for the past few months have been constantly traveling, and i too have written poems on clouds which i will share in a few days, as again another trip calls..
beautifully expressed - keep on composing..cheers
January 1st, 2023 00:06
View from an airplane window
BlessedbyGod said:
Very beautiful,I couldn\'t agree with you more, November 16 was my first time in a plane and I love it also,I got Window seats both planes one somebody swapped with me
December 30th, 2022 19:40
BlessedbyGod said:
Very beautiful,I couldn\'t agree with you more, November 16 was my first time in a plane and I love it also,I got Window seats both planes one somebody swapped with me
December 30th, 2022 19:40
View from an airplane window
hzugman said:
Well done SZK. Reminds me of the last time I was in an airplane some two decades ago. Thanx for the memory. BTW my initials are HSZ (kinda close to yours).
December 30th, 2022 13:21
hzugman said:
Well done SZK. Reminds me of the last time I was in an airplane some two decades ago. Thanx for the memory. BTW my initials are HSZ (kinda close to yours).
December 30th, 2022 13:21
Telly trouble and dangers
Bella Shepard said:
While there are a myriad of forces working against our children in the world today, I can speak somewhat to the gun violence in my own country, the USA. We have a gun lobby, specifically the National Rifle Association, that lobbies our congress to protect gun rights. In other words they are making a lot of money off of gun sales and want to keep things just as they are. The numbers of mass shootings we have each year is unprecedented, and yet each time they preach the same old gospel of more guns for everyone\'s protection. The majority of the American people want reasonable gun legislation, however the gun manufacturers and NRA lobby our congress, donate huge sums of money, and have enough politicians in their pocket to keep any form of reasonable gun legislation from ever happening. Ulvade is the most recent heartbreaking, devastating, unconscionable, act of violence committed against children, and yet it still isn\'t enough to bring about change. Pray for us, for the people seem to have less and less voice as time goes on. I applaud your courage in tackling this difficult subject, and starting a conversation. If we don\'t talk, nothing happens.
December 29th, 2022 17:44
Bella Shepard said:
While there are a myriad of forces working against our children in the world today, I can speak somewhat to the gun violence in my own country, the USA. We have a gun lobby, specifically the National Rifle Association, that lobbies our congress to protect gun rights. In other words they are making a lot of money off of gun sales and want to keep things just as they are. The numbers of mass shootings we have each year is unprecedented, and yet each time they preach the same old gospel of more guns for everyone\'s protection. The majority of the American people want reasonable gun legislation, however the gun manufacturers and NRA lobby our congress, donate huge sums of money, and have enough politicians in their pocket to keep any form of reasonable gun legislation from ever happening. Ulvade is the most recent heartbreaking, devastating, unconscionable, act of violence committed against children, and yet it still isn\'t enough to bring about change. Pray for us, for the people seem to have less and less voice as time goes on. I applaud your courage in tackling this difficult subject, and starting a conversation. If we don\'t talk, nothing happens.
December 29th, 2022 17:44
View from an airplane window
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture so well the thrill of flight over mountains and valleys and compare with good rhyme all the differing sizes when looking down from great height at people and towns. A poem to read over again dear poet so this one goes into my list of favourites and thank you for sharing your your \"view from an airplane window\".
December 29th, 2022 17:27
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture so well the thrill of flight over mountains and valleys and compare with good rhyme all the differing sizes when looking down from great height at people and towns. A poem to read over again dear poet so this one goes into my list of favourites and thank you for sharing your your \"view from an airplane window\".
December 29th, 2022 17:27
View from an airplane window
BoxMyHeart said:
This is a beauty of a poem.
Reminding us that we are so small. In the grand scheme of this generous and ginormous earth.
:)
December 29th, 2022 14:31
BoxMyHeart said:
This is a beauty of a poem.
Reminding us that we are so small. In the grand scheme of this generous and ginormous earth.
:)
December 29th, 2022 14:31
View from an airplane window
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful poem dear poet. The rhyming scheme flows so peacefully and lyrically. Seen from afar, our world is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing this wonderful view in verse!
December 29th, 2022 12:31
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful poem dear poet. The rhyming scheme flows so peacefully and lyrically. Seen from afar, our world is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing this wonderful view in verse!
December 29th, 2022 12:31
Autumnal ceremony
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful my friend I can imagine it in my mind\'s eye,you paint a very beautiful picture and story
November 17th, 2022 03:48
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful my friend I can imagine it in my mind\'s eye,you paint a very beautiful picture and story
November 17th, 2022 03:48
Centipede scare
rrodriguez said:
Excellent! I read the poem with my grandson giving a suspenseful twist.
November 10th, 2022 15:02
rrodriguez said:
Excellent! I read the poem with my grandson giving a suspenseful twist.
November 10th, 2022 15:02
Autumnal ceremony
rrodriguez said:
The imagery is spectacular. The use of alliteration is awesome!
November 10th, 2022 14:57
rrodriguez said:
The imagery is spectacular. The use of alliteration is awesome!
November 10th, 2022 14:57
Autumnal ceremony
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
November 7th, 2022 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
November 7th, 2022 04:32
Centipede scare
Doggerel Dave said:
While I\'m all for live and let live, there are times when a strong insect spray just might be applicable.....
Your poem creeped me out a little...
PS I could do without your invitations - I visit other poets all the time - look at my read rate. Your poems are usually interesting enough to include on my rounds.
November 6th, 2022 17:13
Doggerel Dave said:
While I\'m all for live and let live, there are times when a strong insect spray just might be applicable.....
Your poem creeped me out a little...
PS I could do without your invitations - I visit other poets all the time - look at my read rate. Your poems are usually interesting enough to include on my rounds.
November 6th, 2022 17:13
Centipede scare
sorenbarrett said:
We. as people, seem attracted to danger and what can cause pain. Nature paints such creatures vividly with dramatic colors to warn, but we find great beauty in them. The closer we come to disaster the more entertaining. Think of bull fights if you would or parachuting or just the roller coaster. Maybe this was not intended in this most entertaining story and sometimes a cigar is just a cigar.
November 6th, 2022 14:27
sorenbarrett said:
We. as people, seem attracted to danger and what can cause pain. Nature paints such creatures vividly with dramatic colors to warn, but we find great beauty in them. The closer we come to disaster the more entertaining. Think of bull fights if you would or parachuting or just the roller coaster. Maybe this was not intended in this most entertaining story and sometimes a cigar is just a cigar.
November 6th, 2022 14:27
Centipede scare
arqios said:
The pretty ones are said to be the most dangerous ones! TFS
November 6th, 2022 10:17
arqios said:
The pretty ones are said to be the most dangerous ones! TFS
November 6th, 2022 10:17
Autumnal ceremony
thinkerbell said:
You\'ve beautifully described the intricacies of a season and its natural beauty🥰
November 6th, 2022 09:47
thinkerbell said:
You\'ve beautifully described the intricacies of a season and its natural beauty🥰
November 6th, 2022 09:47
Autumnal ceremony
Rocky Lagou said:
This is the awakening of a glorious being. I love how many twists and turns this poem took, like one moment I\'m a leaf, the next I\'m a fairy, and then a bride, like what?! Spectacular. Seriously, your imagery is of superb refinement and you describe yourself with such divine finesse, it\'s honestly admirable. I also adore your ample diction, like I had no idea what \"houris\" or \"nuptial\" was prior to reading this, but you\'ve enlightened me. Thanks for such a marvel!
September 22nd, 2022 12:48
Rocky Lagou said:
This is the awakening of a glorious being. I love how many twists and turns this poem took, like one moment I\'m a leaf, the next I\'m a fairy, and then a bride, like what?! Spectacular. Seriously, your imagery is of superb refinement and you describe yourself with such divine finesse, it\'s honestly admirable. I also adore your ample diction, like I had no idea what \"houris\" or \"nuptial\" was prior to reading this, but you\'ve enlightened me. Thanks for such a marvel!
September 22nd, 2022 12:48
Ode to the snail
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Like it!
September 9th, 2022 09:20
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Like it!
September 9th, 2022 09:20
Autumnal ceremony
jarcher54 said:
Playful and a bit haunting... it all holds together so nicely! The pictures aren\'t even necessary... you drew it up better than any brush or camera.
September 9th, 2022 01:30
jarcher54 said:
Playful and a bit haunting... it all holds together so nicely! The pictures aren\'t even necessary... you drew it up better than any brush or camera.
September 9th, 2022 01:30
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