Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Autumnal ceremony
Rocky Lagou said:
This is the awakening of a glorious being. I love how many twists and turns this poem took, like one moment I\'m a leaf, the next I\'m a fairy, and then a bride, like what?! Spectacular. Seriously, your imagery is of superb refinement and you describe yourself with such divine finesse, it\'s honestly admirable. I also adore your ample diction, like I had no idea what \"houris\" or \"nuptial\" was prior to reading this, but you\'ve enlightened me. Thanks for such a marvel!
September 22nd, 2022 12:48
Rocky Lagou said:
This is the awakening of a glorious being. I love how many twists and turns this poem took, like one moment I\'m a leaf, the next I\'m a fairy, and then a bride, like what?! Spectacular. Seriously, your imagery is of superb refinement and you describe yourself with such divine finesse, it\'s honestly admirable. I also adore your ample diction, like I had no idea what \"houris\" or \"nuptial\" was prior to reading this, but you\'ve enlightened me. Thanks for such a marvel!
September 22nd, 2022 12:48
Ode to the snail
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Like it!
September 9th, 2022 09:20
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Like it!
September 9th, 2022 09:20
Autumnal ceremony
jarcher54 said:
Playful and a bit haunting... it all holds together so nicely! The pictures aren\'t even necessary... you drew it up better than any brush or camera.
September 9th, 2022 01:30
jarcher54 said:
Playful and a bit haunting... it all holds together so nicely! The pictures aren\'t even necessary... you drew it up better than any brush or camera.
September 9th, 2022 01:30
Autumnal ceremony
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I find this piece very cultured, colorful and oriental in bringing out the season to life. There\'s so much \"fabric\" in your writing here, gifted one. A beautiful piece indeed!
September 9th, 2022 01:28
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I find this piece very cultured, colorful and oriental in bringing out the season to life. There\'s so much \"fabric\" in your writing here, gifted one. A beautiful piece indeed!
September 9th, 2022 01:28
Autumnal ceremony
spilleronsheet said:
Commendable poetry to mark the fall…when the leaves painted in golden hue, such words could imprison and justify the beauty in words…well penned dear poet…
September 8th, 2022 19:53
spilleronsheet said:
Commendable poetry to mark the fall…when the leaves painted in golden hue, such words could imprison and justify the beauty in words…well penned dear poet…
September 8th, 2022 19:53
Autumnal ceremony
madalynsamantha said:
Beautiful,fall is my favorite season.❤️
September 8th, 2022 18:28
madalynsamantha said:
Beautiful,fall is my favorite season.❤️
September 8th, 2022 18:28
Autumnal ceremony
Jerry Reynolds said:
A delightful read, S.Z.K. Fall is a wonderful season of color.
September 8th, 2022 17:04
Jerry Reynolds said:
A delightful read, S.Z.K. Fall is a wonderful season of color.
September 8th, 2022 17:04
Autumnal ceremony
Bella Shepard said:
Words describing beautiful colors, hues, textures, magical creatures, painting a vibrant picture of my very favorite season. Thank you, thank you, thank you for loving it in verse!
September 8th, 2022 15:58
Bella Shepard said:
Words describing beautiful colors, hues, textures, magical creatures, painting a vibrant picture of my very favorite season. Thank you, thank you, thank you for loving it in verse!
September 8th, 2022 15:58
Autumnal ceremony
Neville said:
quite possibly my favourite season so well portrayed in all of her golden finery ............................ Neville
September 8th, 2022 15:09
Neville said:
quite possibly my favourite season so well portrayed in all of her golden finery ............................ Neville
September 8th, 2022 15:09
The value of life and oxygen
AlitaOpal said:
insha\'Allah and Amen 🌹❤️ totally missed your work but glad to have the opportunity to read it now... I totally felt this like a prayer in my core.. Blessings 🙏❤️
July 20th, 2022 13:47
AlitaOpal said:
insha\'Allah and Amen 🌹❤️ totally missed your work but glad to have the opportunity to read it now... I totally felt this like a prayer in my core.. Blessings 🙏❤️
July 20th, 2022 13:47
Telly trouble and dangers
Vaughn Walker said:
Very sad how frequent the shootings and violent acts are happening lately. I do think less TV and social media is a good thing for children. It’s good for them to unplug from the virtual and explore the beautiful world around them.
However, I don’t know that TV and social media are the cause. They may influence, but they don’t cause the crimes, the violence etc. Nor would banning them (guns) make people suddenly not be able to attain them (only slightly more difficult) If people want to do something bad enough they will find a way to do it.
It’s a burden upon the ones that raise you to give you the best shot at living a fulfilling life. Everyone’s family life growing up is different. Where you were born, your social economic status (things you were born into) education, all play a part into the person you will become. Most of all your upbringing in my opinion, is learned from your parents and social interaction (your peers). Which is another huge part of how kids learn. Of course, there are outliers in any case, but take a teenager (as an example). This kid wasn’t socialized well as a child, went to school and was bullied everyday. The parents paid no attention to them and didnt care to, and there was an abusive home life. It’s no wonder these things are happening. It’s sad to see so much hate and violence, and makes me hate the human race sometimes. I agree something should be done, but I don’t know the answer. Maybe, more troubled people should learn to write poetry. It’s helped me immensely. This community on PoeticSide has some of the loveliest people I have come across online, and we need more of that.
Thank you for sharing this poem. I love the message. 🖤🖤🖤
June 25th, 2022 06:44
Vaughn Walker said:
Very sad how frequent the shootings and violent acts are happening lately. I do think less TV and social media is a good thing for children. It’s good for them to unplug from the virtual and explore the beautiful world around them.
However, I don’t know that TV and social media are the cause. They may influence, but they don’t cause the crimes, the violence etc. Nor would banning them (guns) make people suddenly not be able to attain them (only slightly more difficult) If people want to do something bad enough they will find a way to do it.
It’s a burden upon the ones that raise you to give you the best shot at living a fulfilling life. Everyone’s family life growing up is different. Where you were born, your social economic status (things you were born into) education, all play a part into the person you will become. Most of all your upbringing in my opinion, is learned from your parents and social interaction (your peers). Which is another huge part of how kids learn. Of course, there are outliers in any case, but take a teenager (as an example). This kid wasn’t socialized well as a child, went to school and was bullied everyday. The parents paid no attention to them and didnt care to, and there was an abusive home life. It’s no wonder these things are happening. It’s sad to see so much hate and violence, and makes me hate the human race sometimes. I agree something should be done, but I don’t know the answer. Maybe, more troubled people should learn to write poetry. It’s helped me immensely. This community on PoeticSide has some of the loveliest people I have come across online, and we need more of that.
Thank you for sharing this poem. I love the message. 🖤🖤🖤
June 25th, 2022 06:44
Telly trouble and dangers
Jeannie said:
Yes the Telly does contribute to the violence, but also the rap music. The lyrics are just so vulgar. Talking about killing police officers. What they want to do to women. We glorify this disgusting so called music with awards for best song of the year and look as these so called artist heroes. Scary as too our world has become.
June 24th, 2022 17:51
Jeannie said:
Yes the Telly does contribute to the violence, but also the rap music. The lyrics are just so vulgar. Talking about killing police officers. What they want to do to women. We glorify this disgusting so called music with awards for best song of the year and look as these so called artist heroes. Scary as too our world has become.
June 24th, 2022 17:51
Squash the hate- hate bug
iAli said:
Just read it. Feel the same way as you do.
Thanks for sharing.
June 24th, 2022 08:11
iAli said:
Just read it. Feel the same way as you do.
Thanks for sharing.
June 24th, 2022 08:11
Water is life and seems alive
NafisaSB said:
yes my friend, water is so precious, and yet we are so careless about its consumption.
lovely poem, keep it up
will read your other poems as and when i get time, but do continue composing..you are a natural
June 24th, 2022 01:14
NafisaSB said:
yes my friend, water is so precious, and yet we are so careless about its consumption.
lovely poem, keep it up
will read your other poems as and when i get time, but do continue composing..you are a natural
June 24th, 2022 01:14
Telly trouble and dangers
Saxon Crow said:
A VERY good point. Cultural society is very much broken and this is just another well written example.
June 23rd, 2022 11:53
Saxon Crow said:
A VERY good point. Cultural society is very much broken and this is just another well written example.
June 23rd, 2022 11:53
Telly trouble and dangers
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned! your sincere willingness to contribute, to help
in whatever way
is so admirable, dear poet
and yes, for sure
the imagery
we subject our children to, plays
a pivotal role in manufacturing
such heinous tragedies, in-to reality
but we all have to remember
applying a blinkered solution
to a nuanced and complex problem
will only worsen the situation..
beyond our reactionary grief and passion
to affect change and end to this plague of modernity
we must, first
understand the true roots of the problem
for example
a lot fewer children, in modernity
have a father-figure in their lives
let alone one, that imparts such wise advise..
we have to understand
children need a support system
that\'s not paid to put up with them
or else
they hide their true selves and project
the person they people want them to be
and all the time, inside
all those issues their incapable of dealing with
are festering and being warped
into impossible levels of magnitude
and the more they eternalise, devoid
of guidance
the more their reality is warped
and life is devoid of worth
because they blame themselves
and so
in this embattled condition
fantasy gets merged with reality
and impossible
becomes, those everyday things
me and you take for granted
like a \'hey, how are you\'
from someone that genuinely, knows you
like
a hug, with words alone
delivered at no price...
these are just a tip of the depthless
pool of misery
we have to understand, first
before we even begin to contemplate
a sustained solution, turning the images off
from screens and books, would just be treating the symptoms and not the actual disease itself..
(if you must, then
just send me a private message when you post a new write
and i\'ll come and read it, if i want
but
you don\'t have to comment on my writing
just to get me to read your work)
June 23rd, 2022 03:21
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned! your sincere willingness to contribute, to help
in whatever way
is so admirable, dear poet
and yes, for sure
the imagery
we subject our children to, plays
a pivotal role in manufacturing
such heinous tragedies, in-to reality
but we all have to remember
applying a blinkered solution
to a nuanced and complex problem
will only worsen the situation..
beyond our reactionary grief and passion
to affect change and end to this plague of modernity
we must, first
understand the true roots of the problem
for example
a lot fewer children, in modernity
have a father-figure in their lives
let alone one, that imparts such wise advise..
we have to understand
children need a support system
that\'s not paid to put up with them
or else
they hide their true selves and project
the person they people want them to be
and all the time, inside
all those issues their incapable of dealing with
are festering and being warped
into impossible levels of magnitude
and the more they eternalise, devoid
of guidance
the more their reality is warped
and life is devoid of worth
because they blame themselves
and so
in this embattled condition
fantasy gets merged with reality
and impossible
becomes, those everyday things
me and you take for granted
like a \'hey, how are you\'
from someone that genuinely, knows you
like
a hug, with words alone
delivered at no price...
these are just a tip of the depthless
pool of misery
we have to understand, first
before we even begin to contemplate
a sustained solution, turning the images off
from screens and books, would just be treating the symptoms and not the actual disease itself..
(if you must, then
just send me a private message when you post a new write
and i\'ll come and read it, if i want
but
you don\'t have to comment on my writing
just to get me to read your work)
June 23rd, 2022 03:21
Telly trouble and dangers
tallisman said:
All the comments above I agree with. I don’t understand gun laws in the us! Crazy…
June 22nd, 2022 15:35
tallisman said:
All the comments above I agree with. I don’t understand gun laws in the us! Crazy…
June 22nd, 2022 15:35
Telly trouble and dangers
Raven333 said:
Wow, explosive read, I loved it. I felt the anger, the passion and the message was clear. great write!!!
June 22nd, 2022 14:50
Raven333 said:
Wow, explosive read, I loved it. I felt the anger, the passion and the message was clear. great write!!!
June 22nd, 2022 14:50
Telly trouble and dangers
sadkw33n said:
Your poem is indeed telling a sad truth, which you put into words very well. It\'s not news that violence appears everywhere on tv movies or series, video games ect. We should be careful what we \"feed\" the minds of the young. The consequences can be enormous. A great poem and a very interesting and important topic.
Congrats 👏
June 22nd, 2022 14:20
sadkw33n said:
Your poem is indeed telling a sad truth, which you put into words very well. It\'s not news that violence appears everywhere on tv movies or series, video games ect. We should be careful what we \"feed\" the minds of the young. The consequences can be enormous. A great poem and a very interesting and important topic.
Congrats 👏
June 22nd, 2022 14:20
Telly trouble and dangers
JudyStella said:
When kids watch their movie heroes
shoot down people with the gun
they are incited to do the same
to achieve some thrill and fun.
I love this stanza! The poem spits facts! From the beginning to the end you vividly describe the situation, the causes and how to avoid such detrimental effects. Very informative and is timely! Great poem! One to share with the youth of today and tomorrow! 👏
June 22nd, 2022 14:06
JudyStella said:
When kids watch their movie heroes
shoot down people with the gun
they are incited to do the same
to achieve some thrill and fun.
I love this stanza! The poem spits facts! From the beginning to the end you vividly describe the situation, the causes and how to avoid such detrimental effects. Very informative and is timely! Great poem! One to share with the youth of today and tomorrow! 👏
June 22nd, 2022 14:06
Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
AwHec8 said:
I absolutely Love this, Poem.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 you have made me very hungry indeed. For more of your Poetry and maybe a snack to go with! LOL 🤣
By the way did you know that the 1st meal Jesus had after resurrecting from the dead was Honey & Fish with a little Wine to wash it all down. Because Honeycomb is a very most complete food. Don
May 22nd, 2022 07:41
AwHec8 said:
I absolutely Love this, Poem.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 you have made me very hungry indeed. For more of your Poetry and maybe a snack to go with! LOL 🤣
By the way did you know that the 1st meal Jesus had after resurrecting from the dead was Honey & Fish with a little Wine to wash it all down. Because Honeycomb is a very most complete food. Don
May 22nd, 2022 07:41
The better Gems
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like this poem 🙂nice words !
March 8th, 2022 02:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like this poem 🙂nice words !
March 8th, 2022 02:29
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Neville said:
I leave this page with my head filled with colours & the gentle & relaxing therapeutic hum of a hundred different brightly hued flying creatures .. very much enjoyed ................................... N
February 18th, 2022 14:36
Neville said:
I leave this page with my head filled with colours & the gentle & relaxing therapeutic hum of a hundred different brightly hued flying creatures .. very much enjoyed ................................... N
February 18th, 2022 14:36
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A very vividly descriptive piece. It paint quite a clear picture. Well written.
February 15th, 2022 07:09
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A very vividly descriptive piece. It paint quite a clear picture. Well written.
February 15th, 2022 07:09
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