Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
The corona catastrophe
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon ZYNZAB - thank you for an elegant & Hearrtfelt Poem on the very NASTY CORONA VIRUS - CORVID 19 - that is blighting the lives of the whole WORLD. I work as a PHYSIO in a big Hospital so I see the devatating effect of *DEATH BY COVID 19* every week. Not only the Patients but also the Dedicated Medical Staff. Im on ORTHOPEDIC not ICU but I do feel all their PAIN. I ama Committed Christian so I do Pray for God to empower the Medical Staff with HEALING and for the Virologists to find a VACCINE ! Prayer changes things and our Church continues the Prayer Meetings on ZOOM - AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
Please vist our SITE - Thanks A & B !
May 8th, 2020 09:59
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon ZYNZAB - thank you for an elegant & Hearrtfelt Poem on the very NASTY CORONA VIRUS - CORVID 19 - that is blighting the lives of the whole WORLD. I work as a PHYSIO in a big Hospital so I see the devatating effect of *DEATH BY COVID 19* every week. Not only the Patients but also the Dedicated Medical Staff. Im on ORTHOPEDIC not ICU but I do feel all their PAIN. I ama Committed Christian so I do Pray for God to empower the Medical Staff with HEALING and for the Virologists to find a VACCINE ! Prayer changes things and our Church continues the Prayer Meetings on ZOOM - AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
Please vist our SITE - Thanks A & B !
May 8th, 2020 09:59
The corona catastrophe
Nafis Light said:
I just think that there is going to be another poem, like a continuation to this one...because the whole thing is not finished yet (lockdown and all). The ending is so far, true though...and there are those who pray as a group to be protected from the virus.
May 8th, 2020 09:42
Nafis Light said:
I just think that there is going to be another poem, like a continuation to this one...because the whole thing is not finished yet (lockdown and all). The ending is so far, true though...and there are those who pray as a group to be protected from the virus.
May 8th, 2020 09:42
The corona catastrophe
dusk arising said:
What do you say to the relatives and loved ones of those who fervently prayed... were ignored ... and died? What incentive is that for anyone to pray?
May 8th, 2020 06:02
dusk arising said:
What do you say to the relatives and loved ones of those who fervently prayed... were ignored ... and died? What incentive is that for anyone to pray?
May 8th, 2020 06:02
The better Gems
rrodriguez said:
Awesome! Beautiful! I enjoy your descriptions so much. Great work!
April 13th, 2020 11:11
rrodriguez said:
Awesome! Beautiful! I enjoy your descriptions so much. Great work!
April 13th, 2020 11:11
The better Gems
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
A beautiful poem with sparkling gems of wisdom.
Keep writing and safe & healthy during these difficult times.
FineB
April 12th, 2020 11:33
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
A beautiful poem with sparkling gems of wisdom.
Keep writing and safe & healthy during these difficult times.
FineB
April 12th, 2020 11:33
The better Gems
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The series of questioning aptly and fittingly resolves in the last line of this piece: the Creator. The Creator is infinitely better than even the most beautiful gem known as Miss Universe (and don\'t we scour the world looking for her most every year?) When I look at my Lord I look at the pinnacle; the apex of ALL that IS (beautiful). Enjoyed reading and contemplating beauty SZK.
March 25th, 2020 22:24
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The series of questioning aptly and fittingly resolves in the last line of this piece: the Creator. The Creator is infinitely better than even the most beautiful gem known as Miss Universe (and don\'t we scour the world looking for her most every year?) When I look at my Lord I look at the pinnacle; the apex of ALL that IS (beautiful). Enjoyed reading and contemplating beauty SZK.
March 25th, 2020 22:24
My favourite anecdote from Urdu
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wonderful - thank you for sharing.
February 29th, 2020 14:41
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wonderful - thank you for sharing.
February 29th, 2020 14:41
When life was really child\'s play
Jon Nakapalau said:
Took me back - inspired.
February 29th, 2020 14:39
Jon Nakapalau said:
Took me back - inspired.
February 29th, 2020 14:39
The better Gems
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wow! Love the many \'cuts\' of this poem!
February 29th, 2020 14:39
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wow! Love the many \'cuts\' of this poem!
February 29th, 2020 14:39
The better Gems
Gino said:
This is a great write my friend, brilliant work!
February 29th, 2020 11:21
Gino said:
This is a great write my friend, brilliant work!
February 29th, 2020 11:21
The better Gems
xeina said:
What a gem of a poem this is. Very heartfelt and well-written.
February 27th, 2020 03:34
xeina said:
What a gem of a poem this is. Very heartfelt and well-written.
February 27th, 2020 03:34
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Seek said:
What a gem of a poem, S. Zaynab. Hongera! You do such a marvellous job of replacing those \"precious\" metals that many of us worship, with precious qualities most should aspire to. Thoroughly enjoyed this and thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2020 21:16
Seek said:
What a gem of a poem, S. Zaynab. Hongera! You do such a marvellous job of replacing those \"precious\" metals that many of us worship, with precious qualities most should aspire to. Thoroughly enjoyed this and thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2020 21:16
The better Gems
Nemo said:
And through kindness hearts are owned, very well written 🌹
February 26th, 2020 15:31
Nemo said:
And through kindness hearts are owned, very well written 🌹
February 26th, 2020 15:31
The better Gems
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s a lot of beauty in this poem: Comparisons that are heart-felt, the value of human consideration over sparkling gems, and the transient nature of mankind.
However, let me say this knowing I and everyone else is guilty of this, your poem would be all the more powerful if reduced down to its basic elements. Consider this: just the first two lines of each stanza, and even those somewhat condensed, and the final stanza cut to just one line.
Although the rest are beautiful words they do not add to what you were trying to achieve.
A beautiful poem none the less but more powerful if cut to the quick. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2020 11:18
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s a lot of beauty in this poem: Comparisons that are heart-felt, the value of human consideration over sparkling gems, and the transient nature of mankind.
However, let me say this knowing I and everyone else is guilty of this, your poem would be all the more powerful if reduced down to its basic elements. Consider this: just the first two lines of each stanza, and even those somewhat condensed, and the final stanza cut to just one line.
Although the rest are beautiful words they do not add to what you were trying to achieve.
A beautiful poem none the less but more powerful if cut to the quick. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2020 11:18
The better Gems
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND ~ BRIAN HERE ! I love every word of your exquisite Poem. I have studied Geology and I love Gemstones. We teach Gemology @ College and it is a wonderful subject. They are beautiful in their rough state and even more beautiful when they are cut & polished ~ just as people are. I have a collection of semi-precious gemstones which I use to give talks to Seniors (60+). Every Gemstone you mention has its own *Quality & Mystique*. They all have their own application in Jewelry & Religion. I like the way you mention the Spiritual Aspect of Gemstones in your elegant *ODE to GEMSTONES*. Many of them are mentioned in our Holy Book the BIBLE. Each of us are like *Gemstones* and we can be honed & polished ~ as your poem suggests ~ and fitted for Gods Service. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ We have saved it as a Fave ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💛🤍🧡💚💙💜🤎
February 26th, 2020 10:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND ~ BRIAN HERE ! I love every word of your exquisite Poem. I have studied Geology and I love Gemstones. We teach Gemology @ College and it is a wonderful subject. They are beautiful in their rough state and even more beautiful when they are cut & polished ~ just as people are. I have a collection of semi-precious gemstones which I use to give talks to Seniors (60+). Every Gemstone you mention has its own *Quality & Mystique*. They all have their own application in Jewelry & Religion. I like the way you mention the Spiritual Aspect of Gemstones in your elegant *ODE to GEMSTONES*. Many of them are mentioned in our Holy Book the BIBLE. Each of us are like *Gemstones* and we can be honed & polished ~ as your poem suggests ~ and fitted for Gods Service. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ We have saved it as a Fave ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💛🤍🧡💚💙💜🤎
February 26th, 2020 10:32
The better Gems
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful string of reasons for shining like gems while we have life and breath. This poetic jewel is very inspiring - It goes now into my favourites and thank you for sharing it.
February 26th, 2020 09:06
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful string of reasons for shining like gems while we have life and breath. This poetic jewel is very inspiring - It goes now into my favourites and thank you for sharing it.
February 26th, 2020 09:06
The better Gems
Saxon Crow said:
Awesome poem. I love that you focus on the true riches in life from many difgerent perspectives. Brilliant poem!
February 26th, 2020 06:53
Saxon Crow said:
Awesome poem. I love that you focus on the true riches in life from many difgerent perspectives. Brilliant poem!
February 26th, 2020 06:53
The better Gems
dusk arising said:
Heaven has eyes now? What stuff has been taught to you i#m wondering.
Other than the last two lines i found this an excellent piece.
February 26th, 2020 06:11
dusk arising said:
Heaven has eyes now? What stuff has been taught to you i#m wondering.
Other than the last two lines i found this an excellent piece.
February 26th, 2020 06:11
When life was really child\'s play
Syd said:
Nice poem.
Takes me way back to being a kid.
- Syd
February 3rd, 2020 20:38
Syd said:
Nice poem.
Takes me way back to being a kid.
- Syd
February 3rd, 2020 20:38
When life was really child\'s play
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. With six grand-kids I am having the time of my life playing with them.
December 6th, 2019 17:35
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. With six grand-kids I am having the time of my life playing with them.
December 6th, 2019 17:35
When life was really child\'s play
Bragee said:
Great writing. Made me reflect on my childhood and realize just how enjoyable that time period was. Now with my own daughter soon to be born I hope to reccconect with those days with her.
December 6th, 2019 12:03
Bragee said:
Great writing. Made me reflect on my childhood and realize just how enjoyable that time period was. Now with my own daughter soon to be born I hope to reccconect with those days with her.
December 6th, 2019 12:03
When life was really child\'s play
Leaaa said:
sweet reminiscing of all our innocence:) thank you for the memories you popped into my head of my fun childhood moments.
December 4th, 2019 23:39
Leaaa said:
sweet reminiscing of all our innocence:) thank you for the memories you popped into my head of my fun childhood moments.
December 4th, 2019 23:39
When life was really child\'s play
A said:
Honestly this is really good. Perfect stanzas, fantastic beat, smooth rhyme and your vocabulary is executed perfectly.
I really enjoyed the way you captured that nostalgic feeling of childhood.
an honest work of art.
December 4th, 2019 23:29
A said:
Honestly this is really good. Perfect stanzas, fantastic beat, smooth rhyme and your vocabulary is executed perfectly.
I really enjoyed the way you captured that nostalgic feeling of childhood.
an honest work of art.
December 4th, 2019 23:29
When life was really child\'s play
rew4er2nail said:
exceptionally nsync with what I recollect about mine childhood playtime, particularly those prepubescent summer days, when thyself and sisters, more so the youngest versus oldest found me inebriated with unbounded obliviousness, while prancing as an animal of choice such as ponying up antics of a horse.
tell me more about your magical moments merrily mutating from one (in)animate creature and another.
December 4th, 2019 15:40
rew4er2nail said:
exceptionally nsync with what I recollect about mine childhood playtime, particularly those prepubescent summer days, when thyself and sisters, more so the youngest versus oldest found me inebriated with unbounded obliviousness, while prancing as an animal of choice such as ponying up antics of a horse.
tell me more about your magical moments merrily mutating from one (in)animate creature and another.
December 4th, 2019 15:40
When life was really child\'s play
dusk arising said:
Reads like happy memories of childhood. Sadly several poets on MPS were not so fortuneate as innocent children.
December 4th, 2019 10:49
dusk arising said:
Reads like happy memories of childhood. Sadly several poets on MPS were not so fortuneate as innocent children.
December 4th, 2019 10:49
When life was really child\'s play
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic stuff! I did love playing around with my older sister, although I was made to think it was not right! Some adults loose that child light or never got given the right.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
December 4th, 2019 06:52
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic stuff! I did love playing around with my older sister, although I was made to think it was not right! Some adults loose that child light or never got given the right.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
December 4th, 2019 06:52
When life was really child\'s play
orchidee said:
Aww, why they call me a dull boy?! heehee.
A fine write Zaynab, of happy days! We can be child-like though, while being adults.
December 4th, 2019 02:30
orchidee said:
Aww, why they call me a dull boy?! heehee.
A fine write Zaynab, of happy days! We can be child-like though, while being adults.
December 4th, 2019 02:30
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