Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
The better Gems
Saxon Crow said:
Awesome poem. I love that you focus on the true riches in life from many difgerent perspectives. Brilliant poem!
February 26th, 2020 06:53
Saxon Crow said:
Awesome poem. I love that you focus on the true riches in life from many difgerent perspectives. Brilliant poem!
February 26th, 2020 06:53
The better Gems
dusk arising said:
Heaven has eyes now? What stuff has been taught to you i#m wondering.
Other than the last two lines i found this an excellent piece.
February 26th, 2020 06:11
dusk arising said:
Heaven has eyes now? What stuff has been taught to you i#m wondering.
Other than the last two lines i found this an excellent piece.
February 26th, 2020 06:11
When life was really child\'s play
Syd said:
Nice poem.
Takes me way back to being a kid.
- Syd
February 3rd, 2020 20:38
Syd said:
Nice poem.
Takes me way back to being a kid.
- Syd
February 3rd, 2020 20:38
When life was really child\'s play
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. With six grand-kids I am having the time of my life playing with them.
December 6th, 2019 17:35
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. With six grand-kids I am having the time of my life playing with them.
December 6th, 2019 17:35
When life was really child\'s play
Bragee said:
Great writing. Made me reflect on my childhood and realize just how enjoyable that time period was. Now with my own daughter soon to be born I hope to reccconect with those days with her.
December 6th, 2019 12:03
Bragee said:
Great writing. Made me reflect on my childhood and realize just how enjoyable that time period was. Now with my own daughter soon to be born I hope to reccconect with those days with her.
December 6th, 2019 12:03
When life was really child\'s play
Leaaa said:
sweet reminiscing of all our innocence:) thank you for the memories you popped into my head of my fun childhood moments.
December 4th, 2019 23:39
Leaaa said:
sweet reminiscing of all our innocence:) thank you for the memories you popped into my head of my fun childhood moments.
December 4th, 2019 23:39
When life was really child\'s play
A said:
Honestly this is really good. Perfect stanzas, fantastic beat, smooth rhyme and your vocabulary is executed perfectly.
I really enjoyed the way you captured that nostalgic feeling of childhood.
an honest work of art.
December 4th, 2019 23:29
A said:
Honestly this is really good. Perfect stanzas, fantastic beat, smooth rhyme and your vocabulary is executed perfectly.
I really enjoyed the way you captured that nostalgic feeling of childhood.
an honest work of art.
December 4th, 2019 23:29
When life was really child\'s play
rew4er2nail said:
exceptionally nsync with what I recollect about mine childhood playtime, particularly those prepubescent summer days, when thyself and sisters, more so the youngest versus oldest found me inebriated with unbounded obliviousness, while prancing as an animal of choice such as ponying up antics of a horse.
tell me more about your magical moments merrily mutating from one (in)animate creature and another.
December 4th, 2019 15:40
rew4er2nail said:
exceptionally nsync with what I recollect about mine childhood playtime, particularly those prepubescent summer days, when thyself and sisters, more so the youngest versus oldest found me inebriated with unbounded obliviousness, while prancing as an animal of choice such as ponying up antics of a horse.
tell me more about your magical moments merrily mutating from one (in)animate creature and another.
December 4th, 2019 15:40
When life was really child\'s play
dusk arising said:
Reads like happy memories of childhood. Sadly several poets on MPS were not so fortuneate as innocent children.
December 4th, 2019 10:49
dusk arising said:
Reads like happy memories of childhood. Sadly several poets on MPS were not so fortuneate as innocent children.
December 4th, 2019 10:49
When life was really child\'s play
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic stuff! I did love playing around with my older sister, although I was made to think it was not right! Some adults loose that child light or never got given the right.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
December 4th, 2019 06:52
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic stuff! I did love playing around with my older sister, although I was made to think it was not right! Some adults loose that child light or never got given the right.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
December 4th, 2019 06:52
When life was really child\'s play
orchidee said:
Aww, why they call me a dull boy?! heehee.
A fine write Zaynab, of happy days! We can be child-like though, while being adults.
December 4th, 2019 02:30
orchidee said:
Aww, why they call me a dull boy?! heehee.
A fine write Zaynab, of happy days! We can be child-like though, while being adults.
December 4th, 2019 02:30
When life was really child\'s play
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes I was there back in the day many, many years ago. The time of innocence in our lives.
December 4th, 2019 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes I was there back in the day many, many years ago. The time of innocence in our lives.
December 4th, 2019 01:29
When life was really child\'s play
Nafis Light said:
Not sure how you did it, but as soon as I started looking at it, a woman\'s voice started reciting/singing the whole poem.
Interesting. :-)
December 3rd, 2019 18:47
Nafis Light said:
Not sure how you did it, but as soon as I started looking at it, a woman\'s voice started reciting/singing the whole poem.
Interesting. :-)
December 3rd, 2019 18:47
When life was really child\'s play
Michael Edwards said:
What an uplifting write which takes me right back to my childhood - thanks so much for posting this gem.
December 3rd, 2019 14:58
Michael Edwards said:
What an uplifting write which takes me right back to my childhood - thanks so much for posting this gem.
December 3rd, 2019 14:58
O\' human heart
Reivax Camlost said:
It\'s been a fair while since this was written, but I do recall you once asking me to comment on your most recent poem, and I never did; by my calculations this was the poem that was written most recently at that time. And it\'s quite a wonderful piece; I especially appreciate the notes of assonance and dissonance that you wove together between the lines. You preserve the lyrical quality of the poem when read aloud through cleverly arranging the meter and the rhymescheme to act continuously between transitions—a delightful stroke. The subject matter also really resonates, the nature of the heart troubles me often; how we can hold both love and hatred, violence and beauty, all seemingly equally sublime in nature or else equally base when considered against the weight of whatever things we hold as truly pure or good. To resolve that question with a return to the simple intuitions of humanity in such a noble fashion, that\'s admirable, I think.
November 19th, 2019 12:39
Reivax Camlost said:
It\'s been a fair while since this was written, but I do recall you once asking me to comment on your most recent poem, and I never did; by my calculations this was the poem that was written most recently at that time. And it\'s quite a wonderful piece; I especially appreciate the notes of assonance and dissonance that you wove together between the lines. You preserve the lyrical quality of the poem when read aloud through cleverly arranging the meter and the rhymescheme to act continuously between transitions—a delightful stroke. The subject matter also really resonates, the nature of the heart troubles me often; how we can hold both love and hatred, violence and beauty, all seemingly equally sublime in nature or else equally base when considered against the weight of whatever things we hold as truly pure or good. To resolve that question with a return to the simple intuitions of humanity in such a noble fashion, that\'s admirable, I think.
November 19th, 2019 12:39
O\' human heart
AlitaOpal said:
Fantastic piece, the heart indeed is a powerful organ thank you x
November 3rd, 2019 17:57
AlitaOpal said:
Fantastic piece, the heart indeed is a powerful organ thank you x
November 3rd, 2019 17:57
Mankind in Dreamland
AlitaOpal said:
conscious and subconscious dreaming.. the one you speak off like the pictures of Salvador Dali, can look surreal and make sense and on the flip-side looks like it makes sense but feels surreal.. Amazing master piece x
October 30th, 2019 11:23
AlitaOpal said:
conscious and subconscious dreaming.. the one you speak off like the pictures of Salvador Dali, can look surreal and make sense and on the flip-side looks like it makes sense but feels surreal.. Amazing master piece x
October 30th, 2019 11:23
Human hues
Reivax Camlost said:
A work of emotional ultraviolet, methinks. Bright; exciting. It glows. Alternatively witty and deep, this one doesn\'t compromise feeling or genuineness for literary appeal, but then, it doesn\'t really need to.
October 30th, 2019 09:43
Reivax Camlost said:
A work of emotional ultraviolet, methinks. Bright; exciting. It glows. Alternatively witty and deep, this one doesn\'t compromise feeling or genuineness for literary appeal, but then, it doesn\'t really need to.
October 30th, 2019 09:43
Human hues
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Hello dear wordsmith.
I enjoy how you include at least one of the colours in each stanza. However I think that you have missed out two. Your piece is silver and gold.
Kind regards to you and your rich culture, Alan
October 23rd, 2019 06:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Hello dear wordsmith.
I enjoy how you include at least one of the colours in each stanza. However I think that you have missed out two. Your piece is silver and gold.
Kind regards to you and your rich culture, Alan
October 23rd, 2019 06:58
Llama Drama
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
A great write.
I enjoyed that. Llamas are cute.
Keep writing FineB
October 22nd, 2019 15:18
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
A great write.
I enjoyed that. Llamas are cute.
Keep writing FineB
October 22nd, 2019 15:18
Human hues
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
A powerful evocative write.
Very good.
Human hues we all get them but we must not let them destroy us.
Keep writing FineB
October 22nd, 2019 15:16
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
A powerful evocative write.
Very good.
Human hues we all get them but we must not let them destroy us.
Keep writing FineB
October 22nd, 2019 15:16
Human hues
Tia Davis/テイア said:
I love this it\'s like your telling a story expressing all the emotions at the same time in a clever way. I like the words you use like hues and pigmentation to describe emotions and not the literal thing~❤
October 22nd, 2019 10:11
Tia Davis/テイア said:
I love this it\'s like your telling a story expressing all the emotions at the same time in a clever way. I like the words you use like hues and pigmentation to describe emotions and not the literal thing~❤
October 22nd, 2019 10:11
The rise and fall of life\'s notes
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent advice on how to take life as it\'s ups and downs are a challenge to all............. you outline the positive and suggest how to avoid falls in a most interesting manner - thank you zaynab for sharing this well written verse.
October 22nd, 2019 08:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent advice on how to take life as it\'s ups and downs are a challenge to all............. you outline the positive and suggest how to avoid falls in a most interesting manner - thank you zaynab for sharing this well written verse.
October 22nd, 2019 08:31
Human hues
Neville said:
an interesting prose post with some excellent lines running throughout... N
October 22nd, 2019 07:56
Neville said:
an interesting prose post with some excellent lines running throughout... N
October 22nd, 2019 07:56
WITCHDOCTORS!
Gino said:
Good write my friend. Really enjoyed it, and can relate to the witchings of big pharma...
August 10th, 2019 01:31
Gino said:
Good write my friend. Really enjoyed it, and can relate to the witchings of big pharma...
August 10th, 2019 01:31
My favourite anecdote from Urdu
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A resounding Amen, SZK - a cultural gem worth repeating to every culture. Although we all enjoy consensus, we must often plod on as rebels and cultural mercenaries. Grounded in prayer and guided by the Holy Spirit it’s a joyful endeavor!
July 24th, 2019 19:24
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A resounding Amen, SZK - a cultural gem worth repeating to every culture. Although we all enjoy consensus, we must often plod on as rebels and cultural mercenaries. Grounded in prayer and guided by the Holy Spirit it’s a joyful endeavor!
July 24th, 2019 19:24
My favourite anecdote from Urdu
sylviasearcher said:
Outsiders will always be judged by the crowds
July 19th, 2019 02:27
sylviasearcher said:
Outsiders will always be judged by the crowds
July 19th, 2019 02:27
My favourite anecdote from Urdu
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing ZAYNAB a very intersting PARABLE which reminds us that none of us can please *All of the PEOPLE All of the Time* BUT we must at all times seek to please GOD because He pleases us 24/7 with the Blessings of his wonderful Creation ~ incuding DONKEYS !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
We are engaged & share this site ~ OK
July 18th, 2019 18:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing ZAYNAB a very intersting PARABLE which reminds us that none of us can please *All of the PEOPLE All of the Time* BUT we must at all times seek to please GOD because He pleases us 24/7 with the Blessings of his wonderful Creation ~ incuding DONKEYS !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
We are engaged & share this site ~ OK
July 18th, 2019 18:40
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