Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
orchidee said:
I will just say, a fine write Z, though I don\'t see Allah as God myself.
I\'m not getting caught up in the \'debate\' on here though.
February 15th, 2021 12:23
orchidee said:
I will just say, a fine write Z, though I don\'t see Allah as God myself.
I\'m not getting caught up in the \'debate\' on here though.
February 15th, 2021 12:23
Ode to the snail
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I like your typography - I\'m so tired of middle-axis alignment and tiny print on MyPoeticSide.
I\'m new here. I\'ve been messing with the site\'s text editor - I\'m very fussy about how my verse is displayed. Good Unicode support - I\'ve embedded pointed Hebrew and Arabic-alphabet Farsi already. I\'ll try Devanāgarī next!
December 19th, 2020 23:34
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I like your typography - I\'m so tired of middle-axis alignment and tiny print on MyPoeticSide.
I\'m new here. I\'ve been messing with the site\'s text editor - I\'m very fussy about how my verse is displayed. Good Unicode support - I\'ve embedded pointed Hebrew and Arabic-alphabet Farsi already. I\'ll try Devanāgarī next!
December 19th, 2020 23:34
Ode to the snail
Goddess of the Mist said:
Aaawwww 😘 This is absolutely adorable and I love the pictures too!
November 11th, 2020 18:15
Goddess of the Mist said:
Aaawwww 😘 This is absolutely adorable and I love the pictures too!
November 11th, 2020 18:15
Ode to the snail
FineB said:
A witty and entertaining write.
Wonderful szaynab.
Maybe we all need to take a note out of the snail\'s book and stop rushing around in life especially modern life.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 11th, 2020 14:57
FineB said:
A witty and entertaining write.
Wonderful szaynab.
Maybe we all need to take a note out of the snail\'s book and stop rushing around in life especially modern life.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 11th, 2020 14:57
Ode to the snail
queer-with-a-pen said:
I enjoy the simplicity of this poem, as well as the rhyming. Very well done there. I used to have a pet snail named Tsubu as a young boy, and this delightful little poem made me think fondly of them, and for that I thank you.
November 11th, 2020 11:58
queer-with-a-pen said:
I enjoy the simplicity of this poem, as well as the rhyming. Very well done there. I used to have a pet snail named Tsubu as a young boy, and this delightful little poem made me think fondly of them, and for that I thank you.
November 11th, 2020 11:58
Ode to the snail
Poetic Dan said:
Write up my path ;) thanks for sharing and caring
Much peace and respect
November 10th, 2020 09:18
Poetic Dan said:
Write up my path ;) thanks for sharing and caring
Much peace and respect
November 10th, 2020 09:18
Ode to the snail
Fay Slimm. said:
A miracle wrapped in an awesome shell is paid special tribute in your interesting posting dear Zaynab-- we may never know the benefits of creatures like snails and why their colouring differs - thank you for sharing their prettiness with us.
November 9th, 2020 11:29
Fay Slimm. said:
A miracle wrapped in an awesome shell is paid special tribute in your interesting posting dear Zaynab-- we may never know the benefits of creatures like snails and why their colouring differs - thank you for sharing their prettiness with us.
November 9th, 2020 11:29
Ode to the snail
AwHec8 said:
Yep a Great Write there s.zaynab.kamoonpuri!
We all have a part to play in this here world and orchidee Thank You for putting me back on a safe Path, so to speak. 🤣 Don
November 9th, 2020 10:54
AwHec8 said:
Yep a Great Write there s.zaynab.kamoonpuri!
We all have a part to play in this here world and orchidee Thank You for putting me back on a safe Path, so to speak. 🤣 Don
November 9th, 2020 10:54
Ode to the snail
orchidee said:
Yes, I like snails too. I will save them if I see them on paths in damp weather, and move them to the grass. Well, crossing a path for a snail must be like humans trying to cross a motorway.
November 9th, 2020 10:21
orchidee said:
Yes, I like snails too. I will save them if I see them on paths in damp weather, and move them to the grass. Well, crossing a path for a snail must be like humans trying to cross a motorway.
November 9th, 2020 10:21
Water is life and seems alive
MrNobody40 said:
Very beautiful. Water is so important, so versatile. Maybe some day we will figure this out before it is too late
September 12th, 2020 14:15
MrNobody40 said:
Very beautiful. Water is so important, so versatile. Maybe some day we will figure this out before it is too late
September 12th, 2020 14:15
Water is life and seems alive
Aleem Nasir said:
I hate water splashing around your poem🤧🤧 it makes my clothes all wet😁
September 12th, 2020 14:09
Aleem Nasir said:
I hate water splashing around your poem🤧🤧 it makes my clothes all wet😁
September 12th, 2020 14:09
Water is life and seems alive
Neville said:
It seems you have got this most precious of commodities off to a fine art ... a very enjoyable and comprehensive post indeed ...
September 12th, 2020 04:04
Neville said:
It seems you have got this most precious of commodities off to a fine art ... a very enjoyable and comprehensive post indeed ...
September 12th, 2020 04:04
Water is life and seems alive
jarcher54 said:
Very liquid as others have observed... I had to smile at the blue highlighting... nice touch. The repetition of -ing is very smart, giving a sense of speed. Swirling is much more active than swirl. At the end I felt like I had been carried along in a rushing stream!
September 12th, 2020 01:48
jarcher54 said:
Very liquid as others have observed... I had to smile at the blue highlighting... nice touch. The repetition of -ing is very smart, giving a sense of speed. Swirling is much more active than swirl. At the end I felt like I had been carried along in a rushing stream!
September 12th, 2020 01:48
Water is life and seems alive
MelissaJA said:
Love the flow of this! Its very well written
September 11th, 2020 23:06
MelissaJA said:
Love the flow of this! Its very well written
September 11th, 2020 23:06
Water is life and seems alive
Dove said:
My liquid gift to you a single tear!
Excellent write! You Just about captured
Water stirring every where! Nice format
As well!!!
September 11th, 2020 21:53
Dove said:
My liquid gift to you a single tear!
Excellent write! You Just about captured
Water stirring every where! Nice format
As well!!!
September 11th, 2020 21:53
Water is life and seems alive
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely imagery of the movement and critters living everyday lives,i liked it
September 11th, 2020 13:11
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely imagery of the movement and critters living everyday lives,i liked it
September 11th, 2020 13:11
Water is life and seems alive
AwHec8 said:
Very Great Write there s.zaynab.kamoonpuri. Don
Please forgive me if this sounds too lighthearted but this Poem immediately caused me to think of a quote from the Movie Dune
\"the water of Life\"
Which really is quite deep if you think about it, just like your words of wisdom here!
September 11th, 2020 07:39
AwHec8 said:
Very Great Write there s.zaynab.kamoonpuri. Don
Please forgive me if this sounds too lighthearted but this Poem immediately caused me to think of a quote from the Movie Dune
\"the water of Life\"
Which really is quite deep if you think about it, just like your words of wisdom here!
September 11th, 2020 07:39
When life was really child\'s play
FineB said:
Hi szaynab,
The innocence of childhood.
I am glad I grew up when I did.
Being a child now is tough.
A wonderful unforgettable poem.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
September 11th, 2020 04:47
FineB said:
Hi szaynab,
The innocence of childhood.
I am glad I grew up when I did.
Being a child now is tough.
A wonderful unforgettable poem.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
September 11th, 2020 04:47
The better Gems
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully written, imbued with so much passion and packed with creative metaphors
September 11th, 2020 03:00
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully written, imbued with so much passion and packed with creative metaphors
September 11th, 2020 03:00
Water is life and seems alive
orchidee said:
Good write, and erm, yes, all what Brian & Angela said. It\'s true you know, though I don\'t know all the scientific explanations myself!
September 11th, 2020 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write, and erm, yes, all what Brian & Angela said. It\'s true you know, though I don\'t know all the scientific explanations myself!
September 11th, 2020 01:53
Water is life and seems alive
Trenz Pruca said:
I liked the rhythm, movement, and sensibility. Keep it up.
September 11th, 2020 01:15
Trenz Pruca said:
I liked the rhythm, movement, and sensibility. Keep it up.
September 11th, 2020 01:15
Water is life and seems alive
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture the movement of water so well with your tempo and style - a wonderful look at the gift water is to the wide world of culture and how we should measure its value as precious to life. Full marks for such an engaging read.
September 10th, 2020 15:58
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture the movement of water so well with your tempo and style - a wonderful look at the gift water is to the wide world of culture and how we should measure its value as precious to life. Full marks for such an engaging read.
September 10th, 2020 15:58
Water is life and seems alive
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening Friend ! The FOUR main things that make the Earth *The only Living Planet in the Solar System* are Fertile Soil ~ 21% Oxygen in the Atmosphere ~ an abundance of Liquid Water & an average temperature of 16C (= 61F) These four factors support the lives of the thousands of species of Flora & Fauna living in equilibrium on Planet Earth. Our two Neighbours in Space VENUS & MARS are lifeless & barren ! Molecules of WATER (H2O) are too big to escape the Earths Gravity so the Amount of Water on Earth remains CONSTANT and cycles round the Earth in the WATER CYCLE. It is a Good Servant - as you say - and we use millions of gallons every day - In the Home - Industry - Agriculture and for Transport & Recreation. Without Water there could be NO LIFE on EARTH. But it is a BAD MASTER ! If it gets out of control it causes Flooding & Coastal Erosion Global Warming is causing the Ice Caps to melt & Sea Level to raise. We all enjoy water but need to keep an Eye on it. Thnaks for Sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN & SMOKEY CAT ! ! !
September 10th, 2020 14:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening Friend ! The FOUR main things that make the Earth *The only Living Planet in the Solar System* are Fertile Soil ~ 21% Oxygen in the Atmosphere ~ an abundance of Liquid Water & an average temperature of 16C (= 61F) These four factors support the lives of the thousands of species of Flora & Fauna living in equilibrium on Planet Earth. Our two Neighbours in Space VENUS & MARS are lifeless & barren ! Molecules of WATER (H2O) are too big to escape the Earths Gravity so the Amount of Water on Earth remains CONSTANT and cycles round the Earth in the WATER CYCLE. It is a Good Servant - as you say - and we use millions of gallons every day - In the Home - Industry - Agriculture and for Transport & Recreation. Without Water there could be NO LIFE on EARTH. But it is a BAD MASTER ! If it gets out of control it causes Flooding & Coastal Erosion Global Warming is causing the Ice Caps to melt & Sea Level to raise. We all enjoy water but need to keep an Eye on it. Thnaks for Sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN & SMOKEY CAT ! ! !
September 10th, 2020 14:47
Rhymester muses
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for us and the love of birds will fly you towards that light.
Andy
July 8th, 2020 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for us and the love of birds will fly you towards that light.
Andy
July 8th, 2020 00:29
Rhymester muses
PoeticBiscuit said:
A lovely little poem that makes you feel as if you’re flying along with the birds. With a good little thought at the end. Very well done.
July 7th, 2020 10:43
PoeticBiscuit said:
A lovely little poem that makes you feel as if you’re flying along with the birds. With a good little thought at the end. Very well done.
July 7th, 2020 10:43
Rhymester muses
Michael Edwards said:
You have a refreshing style all of your own which comes across so well in this superb write - great work.
July 7th, 2020 09:10
Michael Edwards said:
You have a refreshing style all of your own which comes across so well in this superb write - great work.
July 7th, 2020 09:10
Rhymester muses
AwHec8 said:
Wow! I Love it, the write, the rhythm and rhyme, the pictures to go with, the way you used editing tools to write it in almost cursive and to put a nice background hue. Don
So you copyright your poems?
July 7th, 2020 06:08
AwHec8 said:
Wow! I Love it, the write, the rhythm and rhyme, the pictures to go with, the way you used editing tools to write it in almost cursive and to put a nice background hue. Don
So you copyright your poems?
July 7th, 2020 06:08
Rhymester muses
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD MORNING BROTHER ! Thanks for you uplifting Muse ~ Poetically & Spiritually on this sunny Essex Morning ! The Scriptures exhort us to Consider & Conserve the Birds of the Air ~ Birdwatching & Pictures of Birds always stir my MUSE ! Please check *PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILITY* Thanks.
Love - Peace - Joy to You & Yours
Brian - Angela & Smokey Cat ~ AMEN !
July 7th, 2020 04:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD MORNING BROTHER ! Thanks for you uplifting Muse ~ Poetically & Spiritually on this sunny Essex Morning ! The Scriptures exhort us to Consider & Conserve the Birds of the Air ~ Birdwatching & Pictures of Birds always stir my MUSE ! Please check *PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILITY* Thanks.
Love - Peace - Joy to You & Yours
Brian - Angela & Smokey Cat ~ AMEN !
July 7th, 2020 04:29
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