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How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words, living with nature is sublime.

Andy

February 15th, 2022 01:47

How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
spilleronsheet said:

Beautiful imagery embraces the lovely nature….so vivid…well penned dear poet…

February 14th, 2022 12:59

How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Crowns4Christ said:

Very beautiful, well written, I can imagine relaxing with my husband Dion,in this place you so well describe.

February 14th, 2022 11:34

How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Samer Amin said:

There is a great sense of quietude interwoven into your eloquent poem that has flowed very smoothly emphasising and converting the deep inherent serenity that lies deep into the heart of nature when we can find great solace once we can understand God\'s glorious voice amid His very expressive creation and attain the ultimate peace for our souls. Thank you really for sharing this magnificent and very deep poem.

February 14th, 2022 10:35

How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Rocky Lagou said:

Lovely poem! The descriptions are so vivid and real. I feel as though I am in this paradise, bathing with the sounds of Mother Nature. Beautifully written. 💖👍

February 14th, 2022 09:28

How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, S.Z. A fine read.

February 14th, 2022 08:50

How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
orchidee said:

Good write z.

February 14th, 2022 07:25

How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet

February 14th, 2022 06:34

How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
kitty the naughty poet said:

Great poem

February 14th, 2022 06:27

Ode to the snail
Vamsi Sudha said:

what a beautiful Tale of a Snail....
Loved these lines..
Which of you is the girl,
which of you is the male?
How do I guess your emotions?
You never smile or wail
To thy Creator I whisper,

🐌🐌🐌🐌

to His creativity all hail.

Nice one Poet !!

February 14th, 2022 06:02

How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Rozina said:

Very pretty description of nature. Really enjoyed this poem.

February 14th, 2022 05:57

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
Floreann said:

A beautiful poem thanking God so well written..

October 14th, 2021 11:50

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
DrSafaAamir786 said:

Praise be to Allah
Such satisfying poem with blend of blessing Allah has granted us!

October 14th, 2021 09:08

The value of life and oxygen
L. B. Mek said:

well written, thanks for sharing

October 14th, 2021 02:39

The value of life and oxygen
annonymouswonder said:

Awesome poem, I love the depth and meaning of it! El Shaddai loves us all so dearly that He blesses us everyday and wants to spend eternity with us and that’s simply spectacular!!

October 13th, 2021 16:12

Water is life and seems alive
Fay Slimm. said:

I am so glad to have caught this tribute to water and after a second-time read find it even more engaging as your descriptions of its every-day value to life unfold in line after line. A fine piece of writing my friend.

October 13th, 2021 15:31

The value of life and oxygen
iAli said:

Wow! Liked it so much.
You have written it full of scientific views in the spiritual way with a lot of emotions. 😄

October 13th, 2021 10:14

The value of life and oxygen
Lauretta13 said:

I like the meaning of this poem
I love the last stanza most especially

October 13th, 2021 02:38

The value of life and oxygen
Lauretta13 said:

I like the meaning of this poem
I love the last stanza most especially

October 13th, 2021 02:38

Squash the hate- hate bug
AwHec8 said:

Sometimes I have to STOP & really concentrate on what is being said, on what I am reading.
This is 1 of those times.
Too often most all are quick to anger in a self righteous way, me also. We want that righteous indignation feeling so we can know we are justified in our anger over a perceived evil.
However Love/Grace/Empathy/Kindness in Truth is the cure all, the vaccine as you put it in your poem.

Absolutely Great Write, 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

August 10th, 2021 05:44

Squash the hate- hate bug
Dove said:

Love is the best medicine, next to laughter! A very poignant write

August 7th, 2021 08:19

Squash the hate- hate bug
L. B. Mek said:

when we can see past
those divisive lines, \'We corrupted our humanity with\':
of skin colour
of sexual preferences
of lifestyle choices
and especially
of diverse belief systems
(even accepting those, who choose to not utilise any)
then, maybe
someday, we \'All - as One\' can collectively
start to accept each others worth
by the \'merits of our deeds and words\' - alone
then finally, we can:
\'Swat and squash the hate bug
from your mind and heart
Promote love and compassion
even with words and art

Don\'t constrict your heart
with rancour and hate
Do all you can
so hatred in the world abate\'..
(such a powerful message
and a wonderful write
thanks for sharing!)

July 23rd, 2021 04:07

Squash the hate- hate bug
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good and very true words SZ, hate can only take us down if we all loved life would be so wonderful.

Andy

July 23rd, 2021 01:04

Squash the hate- hate bug
Neville said:


Hate is the foulest of four letter words


July 22nd, 2021 17:04

Squash the hate- hate bug
Poetic Dan said:

I need to come back to this awesome work! To read with less noise around me....

July 22nd, 2021 13:30

Squash the hate- hate bug
orchidee said:

Good write SZ.

July 22nd, 2021 13:30

Squash the hate- hate bug
Samer Amin said:

Just a beautiful wording for propagating peace, blessed are the peacemakers!

You are so right we must Squash these hatred bugs or use an insecticide to eliminate these hatred bugs from our brains, hats, trousers, or whatever.......

It so true, we must do our tiny bit in reducing these resentful sensations of hatred from our hearts and our souls, as much as we could, even help the others to understand the uselessness of keeping these hatred feelings into there hearts in the long run.

These distressing feelings of hatred only cause adverse healthy effects in our bodies, especially to the heart and lung or even the colon, because of the excessive usage of prescribed sedative medications.

Unfortunately, I used to try convince the people who are the inmates of mental institutes because of their relatives who put them in that institutes without any reason except to steal their heritage, or the the people who have been put in prisons by false charges, but I found these people unable to accept the idea of forgiveness, and were so reluctant to hug and kiss their enemies passionately.

July 22nd, 2021 12:28

Squash the hate- hate bug
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, S.Z.


July 22nd, 2021 12:22

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sometimes we forget where it came from.just like our gift of writing

June 22nd, 2021 00:43

A recap and recount of pandemic lockdowns worldwide
ron parrish aka wordman said:

a change of pace for sure

June 14th, 2021 17:20

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