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My favourite anecdote from Urdu
Jabberwocky said:
Everybody has to have somebody to look down on.
There’s no act so pure it can’t be criticised piously by those who look for fault.
Good story.
July 18th, 2019 14:32
Jabberwocky said:
Everybody has to have somebody to look down on.
There’s no act so pure it can’t be criticised piously by those who look for fault.
Good story.
July 18th, 2019 14:32
My favourite anecdote from Urdu
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Thank you so much for bringing me here it reminds me of the Chinese story of the son that kept getting hurt!
This was amazing, great synchronisation today. The universe works in beautiful ways
July 18th, 2019 03:00
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Thank you so much for bringing me here it reminds me of the Chinese story of the son that kept getting hurt!
This was amazing, great synchronisation today. The universe works in beautiful ways
July 18th, 2019 03:00
My favourite anecdote from Urdu
orchidee said:
A fine write zaynab. Another donkey tale in summary: A donkey fell into a deep pit. They had no means to get it out. So they shovelled in dirt in the end to bury the donkey, as it was dying in the pit. As they did so, the level of dirt rose after some time, and the donkey eventually was able to climb out of the pit and was saved.
July 18th, 2019 01:49
orchidee said:
A fine write zaynab. Another donkey tale in summary: A donkey fell into a deep pit. They had no means to get it out. So they shovelled in dirt in the end to bury the donkey, as it was dying in the pit. As they did so, the level of dirt rose after some time, and the donkey eventually was able to climb out of the pit and was saved.
July 18th, 2019 01:49
Weighty worries? 😋
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty should always be seen within the eyes of the person, external looks are quite meaningless if the person inside is not beautiful, everyone is beautiful.
May 5th, 2019 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty should always be seen within the eyes of the person, external looks are quite meaningless if the person inside is not beautiful, everyone is beautiful.
May 5th, 2019 00:40
Weighty worries? 😋
MendedFences27 said:
The war rages on, with beauty as the lure, and social acceptance as the weapon. If we all could just be ourselves and not try to be someone else\'s image of beauty. Far better to be beautiful on the inside than outside. Skinny or plump, tall or short, bald or long-haired, etc., those who measure by such things are the problem of this world.
Your poem struck a chord with me. I enjoyed it immensely. A very nice write, very thought provoking. _ Phil A.
May 4th, 2019 13:31
MendedFences27 said:
The war rages on, with beauty as the lure, and social acceptance as the weapon. If we all could just be ourselves and not try to be someone else\'s image of beauty. Far better to be beautiful on the inside than outside. Skinny or plump, tall or short, bald or long-haired, etc., those who measure by such things are the problem of this world.
Your poem struck a chord with me. I enjoyed it immensely. A very nice write, very thought provoking. _ Phil A.
May 4th, 2019 13:31
Weighty worries? 😋
Tia Davis/テイア said:
I completely agree I try my best to give my friends this message next time I\'ll just show them this instead
May 4th, 2019 10:19
Tia Davis/テイア said:
I completely agree I try my best to give my friends this message next time I\'ll just show them this instead
May 4th, 2019 10:19
Weighty worries? 😋
MSA-19 said:
beauty can come in all shapes & sizes. this is a great poem. i\'m sure anyone, especially a female, could take something from it.
May 4th, 2019 09:42
MSA-19 said:
beauty can come in all shapes & sizes. this is a great poem. i\'m sure anyone, especially a female, could take something from it.
May 4th, 2019 09:42
WITCHDOCTORS!
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The papal encyclical “Rerum Novarum” speaks to the detrimental effects of superstition on the masses: “In presence of such mode of life and such example, prejudice gave way, the tongue of malevolence was silenced, and the lying legends of ancient superstition little by little yielded to Christian truth.” Faith without reason leads to fundamentalist superstition and reason without faith leads to Nihilism. Thanks for the thought provoking write SZK.
February 18th, 2019 11:25
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The papal encyclical “Rerum Novarum” speaks to the detrimental effects of superstition on the masses: “In presence of such mode of life and such example, prejudice gave way, the tongue of malevolence was silenced, and the lying legends of ancient superstition little by little yielded to Christian truth.” Faith without reason leads to fundamentalist superstition and reason without faith leads to Nihilism. Thanks for the thought provoking write SZK.
February 18th, 2019 11:25
WITCHDOCTORS!
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - power used badly ends often in sadness for those who need most a healing of ills - - a compelling read where warnings exposed chemicals in most pharmaceuticals.
January 28th, 2019 18:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - power used badly ends often in sadness for those who need most a healing of ills - - a compelling read where warnings exposed chemicals in most pharmaceuticals.
January 28th, 2019 18:08
WITCHDOCTORS!
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write deep mysterious subject matter
keep the coming Zaynab
January 28th, 2019 16:17
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write deep mysterious subject matter
keep the coming Zaynab
January 28th, 2019 16:17
WITCHDOCTORS!
dusk arising said:
Thats a good fun storyline. Light hearted but poignant.
Made me think of the con men in religion too.
January 28th, 2019 14:24
dusk arising said:
Thats a good fun storyline. Light hearted but poignant.
Made me think of the con men in religion too.
January 28th, 2019 14:24
WITCHDOCTORS!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, unfortunately those witch doctors can nowadays be heavily disguised.
January 28th, 2019 10:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, unfortunately those witch doctors can nowadays be heavily disguised.
January 28th, 2019 10:10
WITCHDOCTORS!
Michael Edwards said:
I found it a little difficult to read with the dark background but that didn\'t stop me from enjoying it. Super tale refreshingly written.
January 28th, 2019 09:39
Michael Edwards said:
I found it a little difficult to read with the dark background but that didn\'t stop me from enjoying it. Super tale refreshingly written.
January 28th, 2019 09:39
The rise and fall of life\'s notes
Syd said:
Great poem S. Always a pleasure to read your poems. I couldn\'t agree more with the message of this poem. Very well penned.
- Syd
December 7th, 2018 11:26
Syd said:
Great poem S. Always a pleasure to read your poems. I couldn\'t agree more with the message of this poem. Very well penned.
- Syd
December 7th, 2018 11:26
The rise and fall of life\'s notes
ron parrish aka wordman said:
just ride till you can`t ride no more
December 6th, 2018 22:32
ron parrish aka wordman said:
just ride till you can`t ride no more
December 6th, 2018 22:32
The rise and fall of life\'s notes
w c said:
I enjoyed this poem. Life is a many splended thing and we are lucky to have it.
December 6th, 2018 19:37
w c said:
I enjoyed this poem. Life is a many splended thing and we are lucky to have it.
December 6th, 2018 19:37
The rise and fall of life\'s notes
Netashi said:
What a wonderful and true aspect in life. Keep up the splendid work I look forward to meeting any new poems you write. But I\'m wondering is why aren\'t my legs toned since i\'ve had so many squats in life
December 6th, 2018 11:24
Netashi said:
What a wonderful and true aspect in life. Keep up the splendid work I look forward to meeting any new poems you write. But I\'m wondering is why aren\'t my legs toned since i\'ve had so many squats in life
December 6th, 2018 11:24
The rise and fall of life\'s notes
Neville said:
an undulating journey of ups and maybe not so downs... reminds me a little of the principle of the unity of opposites... nice flow and easy to follow but I did find the background colour just a little distracting..... Neville
December 6th, 2018 10:27
Neville said:
an undulating journey of ups and maybe not so downs... reminds me a little of the principle of the unity of opposites... nice flow and easy to follow but I did find the background colour just a little distracting..... Neville
December 6th, 2018 10:27
The rise and fall of life\'s notes
IsraaD said:
Very very beautiful poem. I loved reading the hidden messages you put in there! Great job!
December 6th, 2018 09:56
IsraaD said:
Very very beautiful poem. I loved reading the hidden messages you put in there! Great job!
December 6th, 2018 09:56
The rise and fall of life\'s notes
sylviasearcher said:
An uplifting piece encouraging growth.
Ibekndered why you chose to have the words behind green. My brain processed it all more slowly I think.
December 6th, 2018 07:59
sylviasearcher said:
An uplifting piece encouraging growth.
Ibekndered why you chose to have the words behind green. My brain processed it all more slowly I think.
December 6th, 2018 07:59
O\' human heart
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is very well written.the heart idea is not a myth.it is a fact.there is a major chakra situated there.not to mention, our emotions greatly affect the heart and its functions
November 26th, 2018 04:47
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is very well written.the heart idea is not a myth.it is a fact.there is a major chakra situated there.not to mention, our emotions greatly affect the heart and its functions
November 26th, 2018 04:47
Llama Drama
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Llamas are wonderfully made creatures; praise God the Creator! And you; the creator of this piece; laboring with the words, plying with the numbering of syllables- eyes fastened to your interesting subject - make them accessible to audiences thousands of miles away - in pictures and in poetry. Fascinating!
September 15th, 2018 14:32
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Llamas are wonderfully made creatures; praise God the Creator! And you; the creator of this piece; laboring with the words, plying with the numbering of syllables- eyes fastened to your interesting subject - make them accessible to audiences thousands of miles away - in pictures and in poetry. Fascinating!
September 15th, 2018 14:32
Llama Drama
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun write - we need more like this on here - it can be a very somber site at times - great read.
September 7th, 2018 00:55
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun write - we need more like this on here - it can be a very somber site at times - great read.
September 7th, 2018 00:55
Llama Drama
Fay Slimm. said:
So funny and very attractive the llamas I know in Cornwall have just the same haircuts -ha ha - you worded a smile-raising read which I had to read over again and those pics. made me giggle too. Must save this one to my favs.
September 6th, 2018 15:02
Fay Slimm. said:
So funny and very attractive the llamas I know in Cornwall have just the same haircuts -ha ha - you worded a smile-raising read which I had to read over again and those pics. made me giggle too. Must save this one to my favs.
September 6th, 2018 15:02
Llama Drama
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW SISTER ! Love the photos and the Llama Tribute. Yes indeaed they are funny and they seem happy. We don\'t have many Camels in England (One HUMP or two ?} but we do have lots of LLAMAS. We often have them in Children\'s PARKS & FARMS becaus they look non-threatening and can tollerate light stroking. Their wool is nice as is ALPACA ! I South America (Peru etc) I have seen them used as working animals carrying loads etc. How do they use them in TANZANIA ? Do they eat the Meat. When we visited South Africa we ate a lot of different MEAT in the Hotel ~ Impala ~ Zebu ~ Zebra ~ Ostrich etc all delicious and in Peru they eat GUINEA PIGS ! Thanks for love ly POEM \'n PICS. Please check our FUSION on SEASONS. Its AUTUMN here (UK) and SPRING in NEW ZEALAND where ANGELA is on a work exchange ! Yours BRIAN 😎 and ANGELA 🧡
September 6th, 2018 12:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW SISTER ! Love the photos and the Llama Tribute. Yes indeaed they are funny and they seem happy. We don\'t have many Camels in England (One HUMP or two ?} but we do have lots of LLAMAS. We often have them in Children\'s PARKS & FARMS becaus they look non-threatening and can tollerate light stroking. Their wool is nice as is ALPACA ! I South America (Peru etc) I have seen them used as working animals carrying loads etc. How do they use them in TANZANIA ? Do they eat the Meat. When we visited South Africa we ate a lot of different MEAT in the Hotel ~ Impala ~ Zebu ~ Zebra ~ Ostrich etc all delicious and in Peru they eat GUINEA PIGS ! Thanks for love ly POEM \'n PICS. Please check our FUSION on SEASONS. Its AUTUMN here (UK) and SPRING in NEW ZEALAND where ANGELA is on a work exchange ! Yours BRIAN 😎 and ANGELA 🧡
September 6th, 2018 12:52
Llama Drama
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, llamas are very strange creatures.
September 6th, 2018 07:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, llamas are very strange creatures.
September 6th, 2018 07:50
Llama Drama
Lorna said:
Chuckles indeed! I have a friend who owned llamas and pigmy goats and she had to sell the llamas because the vet said they were being dangerously stressed out by the little goats........having nervous breakdowns......... funny !
September 6th, 2018 07:08
Lorna said:
Chuckles indeed! I have a friend who owned llamas and pigmy goats and she had to sell the llamas because the vet said they were being dangerously stressed out by the little goats........having nervous breakdowns......... funny !
September 6th, 2018 07:08
O\' human heart
Izzi Lynn said:
Awww, I love it! The style is so interesting and I love reading it.
July 15th, 2018 18:15
Izzi Lynn said:
Awww, I love it! The style is so interesting and I love reading it.
July 15th, 2018 18:15
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