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Young love is silly
Bella Shepard said:
Love is a difficult emotion to control. The young often think they are invincible, for lack of experience. It is here that the wisdom of those who have trod the road of love before can be very benificial in honest conversation. A good write my friend!
November 25th, 2025 15:27
Bella Shepard said:
Love is a difficult emotion to control. The young often think they are invincible, for lack of experience. It is here that the wisdom of those who have trod the road of love before can be very benificial in honest conversation. A good write my friend!
November 25th, 2025 15:27
Young love is silly
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very true but I dont think we learn from our mistakes despite our age, good read and a definate like
November 25th, 2025 11:59
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very true but I dont think we learn from our mistakes despite our age, good read and a definate like
November 25th, 2025 11:59
Young love is silly
Soman Ragavan said:
Many pieces of wise advice to those concerned. Love should not be just about seeking pleasure. It should be genuine.
November 25th, 2025 10:02
Soman Ragavan said:
Many pieces of wise advice to those concerned. Love should not be just about seeking pleasure. It should be genuine.
November 25th, 2025 10:02
Young love is silly
sorenbarrett said:
The essence of this poem seems to be to protect children from unprotected sex and its consequences. It also addresses the issue of emotional pain in immature relationships. Well written
November 25th, 2025 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
The essence of this poem seems to be to protect children from unprotected sex and its consequences. It also addresses the issue of emotional pain in immature relationships. Well written
November 25th, 2025 09:00
Man\"s worst enemy
hzugman said:
Well written about this sad reality. For a slightly different aspect you might watch to watch the TV series Life After Man.
August 28th, 2025 09:20
hzugman said:
Well written about this sad reality. For a slightly different aspect you might watch to watch the TV series Life After Man.
August 28th, 2025 09:20
Man\"s worst enemy
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Zay,
There are so many words to describe the horrors of man especially those committed on his fellow man and sadly there is no end to it in sight. This is a powerful poem composed by a big hearted, kind and gifted poet. Excellent, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 11:57
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Zay,
There are so many words to describe the horrors of man especially those committed on his fellow man and sadly there is no end to it in sight. This is a powerful poem composed by a big hearted, kind and gifted poet. Excellent, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 11:57
Man\"s worst enemy
rrodriguez said:
Wonderfully expressed! And full of truth. This is a treatise on human behavior.
July 26th, 2025 06:50
rrodriguez said:
Wonderfully expressed! And full of truth. This is a treatise on human behavior.
July 26th, 2025 06:50
Man\"s worst enemy
NafisaSB said:
beautifully rendered how evil man can be - to be more feared than the beasts of the jungle - and yet, there is hope for redemption
well said !!!
July 23rd, 2025 00:12
NafisaSB said:
beautifully rendered how evil man can be - to be more feared than the beasts of the jungle - and yet, there is hope for redemption
well said !!!
July 23rd, 2025 00:12
Man\"s worst enemy
Bella Shepard said:
As a species we are full of contradictions; we lay waste and we create, we starve and yet we survive, we are adept at loving as well as hating. For me, your powerful poem speaks to the nature of man\'s constant struggle to keep the opposing forces of good and bad in balance. A very powerful and thought provoing write.
July 22nd, 2025 13:02
Bella Shepard said:
As a species we are full of contradictions; we lay waste and we create, we starve and yet we survive, we are adept at loving as well as hating. For me, your powerful poem speaks to the nature of man\'s constant struggle to keep the opposing forces of good and bad in balance. A very powerful and thought provoing write.
July 22nd, 2025 13:02
Man\"s worst enemy
BlessedbyGod said:
So very true my friend - it’s sad than man always sabotages himself and is quite honestly the root to his own misery and demise - yet we have the power to be someone great and admirable if we choose to do so and learn from our own mistakes as well as others
July 22nd, 2025 09:33
BlessedbyGod said:
So very true my friend - it’s sad than man always sabotages himself and is quite honestly the root to his own misery and demise - yet we have the power to be someone great and admirable if we choose to do so and learn from our own mistakes as well as others
July 22nd, 2025 09:33
Man\"s worst enemy
hzugman said:
You got that right and I think the only \"solution\" is for man to understand that love for all including those who are different from us is the only way out of our self-made mess. I hope that enough of us get and apply that message while there is still time.
July 22nd, 2025 09:05
hzugman said:
You got that right and I think the only \"solution\" is for man to understand that love for all including those who are different from us is the only way out of our self-made mess. I hope that enough of us get and apply that message while there is still time.
July 22nd, 2025 09:05
Man\"s worst enemy
sorenbarrett said:
A good read and one with which I must agree. I fear little in this life except other people. A good read
July 22nd, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
A good read and one with which I must agree. I fear little in this life except other people. A good read
July 22nd, 2025 08:22
Man\"s worst enemy
arqios said:
Destruction is the inheritance of the house divided from itself.
July 22nd, 2025 08:19
arqios said:
Destruction is the inheritance of the house divided from itself.
July 22nd, 2025 08:19
Man\"s worst enemy
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write of man and his darker side, that will destroy itself in the end, sadly we have been the same since we were created or since we evolved, nicely expressed write
July 22nd, 2025 07:23
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write of man and his darker side, that will destroy itself in the end, sadly we have been the same since we were created or since we evolved, nicely expressed write
July 22nd, 2025 07:23
Incredible India: my motherland
Bella Shepard said:
With your words you paint an incredible picture of the wonderful and exotic place that is India. Such excitement I can only imagine. Thank you so much for sharing.
January 28th, 2025 18:11
Bella Shepard said:
With your words you paint an incredible picture of the wonderful and exotic place that is India. Such excitement I can only imagine. Thank you so much for sharing.
January 28th, 2025 18:11
Incredible India: my motherland
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Very well constructed poem and liked its flow
January 26th, 2025 04:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Very well constructed poem and liked its flow
January 26th, 2025 04:34
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
NafisaSB said:
i share your sentiments about war, power and am glad that at least the mid-east war has come to a close. now waiting for ukraine to stop suffering
beautiful poem
January 25th, 2025 23:56
NafisaSB said:
i share your sentiments about war, power and am glad that at least the mid-east war has come to a close. now waiting for ukraine to stop suffering
beautiful poem
January 25th, 2025 23:56
Incredible India: my motherland
NafisaSB said:
you have almost completely captured the diversity that makes up our country - wonderful work, keep it up
today, as we celebrate our Republic day, when the Constitution came into being, i salute my country and am proud to be called Indian
January 25th, 2025 23:54
NafisaSB said:
you have almost completely captured the diversity that makes up our country - wonderful work, keep it up
today, as we celebrate our Republic day, when the Constitution came into being, i salute my country and am proud to be called Indian
January 25th, 2025 23:54
Incredible India: my motherland
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a magical place.Certainly old and modern mixed together.Wonderful poem
January 25th, 2025 14:53
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a magical place.Certainly old and modern mixed together.Wonderful poem
January 25th, 2025 14:53
Incredible India: my motherland
2781 said:
A good tribute to a land loved by everyone I know that has been there an ancient land, with a rich history.
Well done
January 25th, 2025 06:29
2781 said:
A good tribute to a land loved by everyone I know that has been there an ancient land, with a rich history.
Well done
January 25th, 2025 06:29
Incredible India: my motherland
Soman Ragavan said:
India is a land of extremes and contrasts. The Taj Mahal remains an unparalleled wonder of construction. It took 20 years and 20 000 workers to build. At places the marble blocks have impressive acoustics. The Taj has been described as the most costly tomb in the world. It was meant to be the memorial of Mumtaz Begum, the Emperor\'s wife, but after the death of the Emperor it was decided to bury him, too, by the side of his wife. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 05:18
Soman Ragavan said:
India is a land of extremes and contrasts. The Taj Mahal remains an unparalleled wonder of construction. It took 20 years and 20 000 workers to build. At places the marble blocks have impressive acoustics. The Taj has been described as the most costly tomb in the world. It was meant to be the memorial of Mumtaz Begum, the Emperor\'s wife, but after the death of the Emperor it was decided to bury him, too, by the side of his wife. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 05:18
Incredible India: my motherland
Soman Ragavan said:
Link to my poem :
https://allpoetry.com/poem/17375603--At-Nizamuddin-Bridge--a-grieving-father...----15-September--2023-by-Soman-Ragavan/
Soman Ragavan.
January 25th, 2025 05:11
Soman Ragavan said:
Link to my poem :
https://allpoetry.com/poem/17375603--At-Nizamuddin-Bridge--a-grieving-father...----15-September--2023-by-Soman-Ragavan/
Soman Ragavan.
January 25th, 2025 05:11
Incredible India: my motherland
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a few fun lines on this tour of India cleverly constructed it flows very well.
January 25th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a few fun lines on this tour of India cleverly constructed it flows very well.
January 25th, 2025 04:22
Incredible India: my motherland
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the analysis of my poem \"At Nizamuddin Bridge, a grieving father...\" Link to the analysis :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-196464
The poem is about a father who was kept by force at the bridge in New Delhi and prevented from going on to see his dying son at his home village in Bariapur, Bihar. His son died. The father was held up because of the lockdown during Covid. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 03:58
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the analysis of my poem \"At Nizamuddin Bridge, a grieving father...\" Link to the analysis :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-196464
The poem is about a father who was kept by force at the bridge in New Delhi and prevented from going on to see his dying son at his home village in Bariapur, Bihar. His son died. The father was held up because of the lockdown during Covid. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 03:58
Ode to the salty tear
Neilton said:
I \'m speechless! your poem is one of the best i have ever read!I especially loved how you said that our tears can be the reason of sadness or a reason of joy!
May 23rd, 2024 15:46
Neilton said:
I \'m speechless! your poem is one of the best i have ever read!I especially loved how you said that our tears can be the reason of sadness or a reason of joy!
May 23rd, 2024 15:46
Ode to the salty tear
NafisaSB said:
what an awesome poem. delves deep into the heart, and tugs at the heartstrings.
keep them coming - i only wish i had more hours in a day to read the beautiful compositions shared on this site - but always find myself pressed for time
May 17th, 2024 00:24
NafisaSB said:
what an awesome poem. delves deep into the heart, and tugs at the heartstrings.
keep them coming - i only wish i had more hours in a day to read the beautiful compositions shared on this site - but always find myself pressed for time
May 17th, 2024 00:24
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