Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽



Poetic perfumery
Bella Shepard said:

In extolling the virtues of scent you praise, and rightly so, our extraordinary sensory organ of smell. I have long been a fan of various incense, and used to plug in a lavender air freshener next to my bed every night. I have let those habits slip with age, but you\'ve reminded me in this beautiful poem, of what I\'ve been missing and need to find again. Thank you dear poetess, you\'ve reawakened this old nose, now yearning for those wonderful scents.

October 4th, 2023 10:34

Poetic perfumery
orchidee said:

Good write Z. A whiffy write, but not a pongy one! lol.

October 4th, 2023 09:02

Poetic perfumery
hzugman said:

What a pretty picture you paint in this lovely poem

October 4th, 2023 08:51

Poetic perfumery
BlessedbyGod said:

This is a very well written piece, and the sense of smell is very important,
My favorite is lavender, and sandlewood as well,

You put a very interesting thought in my head about how everyone\'s poetry is like an aroma,
Each has its own distinctive scent,
And gives us an idea about the poets personality and life,
I truly love this piece, it is a favorite

October 4th, 2023 06:15

Bed of roses or thorns
jarcher54 said:

PS I miss your contributions!

September 16th, 2023 01:17

Bed of roses or thorns
jarcher54 said:

I don\'t agree with your premise but I understand what you feel... I\'m married 50 years and still love my spouse. But I know nothing is simple and one size does not fit all. Calm deep long love is a blessing, but sometimes passion and arguing in the rain at 2 am is just what the soul needs...

September 16th, 2023 01:16

Bed of roses or thorns
rew4er2nail said:

requited love manifests over time when the coda, ethos, fiat, et cetera of marriage, which demands obeisance to contractual obligations as pertains to yours truly (me), whose infidelity rent asunder the obligation to abide by the credo of lifelong commitment to one whose company (the missus) gradually became synchronized with mine.

May 30th, 2023 11:33

Bed of roses or thorns
nephilim56 said:

in simple terms i like it, the poem conveys its meaning clearly and precisely well done

May 30th, 2023 03:17

Bed of roses or thorns
thinkerbell said:

Wonderful poem on love and marriage ...

May 29th, 2023 00:51

Squash the hate- hate bug
Firefall said:

I think this is one of my favorite poems that you wrote. It is so important that everyone stomp out hate where you see it and not allow ourselves to get caught up in resentments of others. Very special poem.

May 28th, 2023 15:33

Bed of roses or thorns
Goldfinch60 said:

Love is the way to be in this world szk.

Andy

May 27th, 2023 01:16

Bed of roses or thorns
David Wakeling said:

I did find love once but it flew away like a scared parrot.The poem explores the irony of Love.Well done

May 26th, 2023 17:36

How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Jeannie said:

Enjoyed

May 26th, 2023 14:59

Bed of roses or thorns
Jeannie said:

I loved your poem very much. My husband & I dated in high school. We graduated and went our ways. 27 yrs later we found each other again. We\'ve been together 12 yrs and married for 2. So far this time, it has been roses. My first marriage was both roses and thorns. So I can relate to your poem extremely well

May 26th, 2023 14:54

Bed of roses or thorns
Bella Shepard said:

Dear poet this is such a beautiul take on love everlasting. I can relate to the metaphor of a hose, sprinkling life giving water on the bed of roses. Love, like that bed must be cared for, that weeds may not overtake and prevent it from growing and flourishing. The gardner makes the commitment to always care for his plants, as do husband and wife to each other. Having been married to the same wonderful man for 53 years I can attest the the fact that continualy watering those roses pays off in beautiful blooms year after year. Love this write, it\'s a real fav.

May 26th, 2023 10:51

Bed of roses or thorns
Bobby O said:

Nice write. Good story. One small thought , that line “sprinkled from the hoses” seems out of place. It’s not a corny poem , it’s got substance. And maybe that line is corny?? Maybe try “is what our fate proposes” or almost anything else is better than sprinkled hoses. Change it. Or not ?


May 26th, 2023 06:43

View from an airplane window
Rocky Lagou said:

This is so marvelously depicted!
Dubai is breathtaking, and your descriptions are, too!
I love the way you described the scenery as \"poetic,\" a word you wouldn\'t usually attribute to something visual, but it\'s so apt in this context.
Thanks for this beautiful poem,
And Happy New Year!


January 9th, 2023 15:24

View from an airplane window
AwHec8 said:

Sweet, Sweet, Sweet Poem you have there and I absolutely Love It! Ah the beauty of travel, especially when you’re seat has a windows view! Don

January 7th, 2023 11:58

Centipede scare
BoxMyHeart said:

Awesomely thoughtful reading yet again!

Have you any poems about your heritage or history? I think they would be interesting.

January 7th, 2023 08:24

View from an airplane window
L. B. Mek said:

indeed, we need only elevate
our perspective\'s, point of view
to find all that wonder
that made our childhoods, such adventures..
wonderful enthusiasm, such evocative wording
thanks for sharing dear Poet



January 6th, 2023 04:08

View from an airplane window
thinkerbell said:

In recent times even I\'ve undertaken a lot of air travel and your poem resonated with my feelings in an airplane...wonderful poetry🥰

January 2nd, 2023 01:34

View from an airplane window
NafisaSB said:

this poem resonates with me because for the past few months have been constantly traveling, and i too have written poems on clouds which i will share in a few days, as again another trip calls..
beautifully expressed - keep on composing..cheers

January 1st, 2023 00:06

View from an airplane window
BlessedbyGod said:

Very beautiful,I couldn\'t agree with you more, November 16 was my first time in a plane and I love it also,I got Window seats both planes one somebody swapped with me

December 30th, 2022 19:40

View from an airplane window
hzugman said:

Well done SZK. Reminds me of the last time I was in an airplane some two decades ago. Thanx for the memory. BTW my initials are HSZ (kinda close to yours).

December 30th, 2022 13:21

View from an airplane window
orchidee said:

Good write Z.

December 30th, 2022 03:12

Telly trouble and dangers
Bella Shepard said:

While there are a myriad of forces working against our children in the world today, I can speak somewhat to the gun violence in my own country, the USA. We have a gun lobby, specifically the National Rifle Association, that lobbies our congress to protect gun rights. In other words they are making a lot of money off of gun sales and want to keep things just as they are. The numbers of mass shootings we have each year is unprecedented, and yet each time they preach the same old gospel of more guns for everyone\'s protection. The majority of the American people want reasonable gun legislation, however the gun manufacturers and NRA lobby our congress, donate huge sums of money, and have enough politicians in their pocket to keep any form of reasonable gun legislation from ever happening. Ulvade is the most recent heartbreaking, devastating, unconscionable, act of violence committed against children, and yet it still isn\'t enough to bring about change. Pray for us, for the people seem to have less and less voice as time goes on. I applaud your courage in tackling this difficult subject, and starting a conversation. If we don\'t talk, nothing happens.

December 29th, 2022 17:44

View from an airplane window
Fay Slimm. said:

You capture so well the thrill of flight over mountains and valleys and compare with good rhyme all the differing sizes when looking down from great height at people and towns. A poem to read over again dear poet so this one goes into my list of favourites and thank you for sharing your your \"view from an airplane window\".

December 29th, 2022 17:27

View from an airplane window
BoxMyHeart said:

This is a beauty of a poem.

Reminding us that we are so small. In the grand scheme of this generous and ginormous earth.

:)

December 29th, 2022 14:31

View from an airplane window
Bella Shepard said:

What a beautiful poem dear poet. The rhyming scheme flows so peacefully and lyrically. Seen from afar, our world is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing this wonderful view in verse!

December 29th, 2022 12:31

View from an airplane window
Crys <3 said:

aaah its such a nice poem!

December 29th, 2022 11:52

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