Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Incredible India: my motherland
Soman Ragavan said:
India is a land of extremes and contrasts. The Taj Mahal remains an unparalleled wonder of construction. It took 20 years and 20 000 workers to build. At places the marble blocks have impressive acoustics. The Taj has been described as the most costly tomb in the world. It was meant to be the memorial of Mumtaz Begum, the Emperor\'s wife, but after the death of the Emperor it was decided to bury him, too, by the side of his wife. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 05:18
Soman Ragavan said:
India is a land of extremes and contrasts. The Taj Mahal remains an unparalleled wonder of construction. It took 20 years and 20 000 workers to build. At places the marble blocks have impressive acoustics. The Taj has been described as the most costly tomb in the world. It was meant to be the memorial of Mumtaz Begum, the Emperor\'s wife, but after the death of the Emperor it was decided to bury him, too, by the side of his wife. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 05:18
Incredible India: my motherland
Soman Ragavan said:
Link to my poem :
https://allpoetry.com/poem/17375603--At-Nizamuddin-Bridge--a-grieving-father...----15-September--2023-by-Soman-Ragavan/
Soman Ragavan.
January 25th, 2025 05:11
Soman Ragavan said:
Link to my poem :
https://allpoetry.com/poem/17375603--At-Nizamuddin-Bridge--a-grieving-father...----15-September--2023-by-Soman-Ragavan/
Soman Ragavan.
January 25th, 2025 05:11
Incredible India: my motherland
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a few fun lines on this tour of India cleverly constructed it flows very well.
January 25th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a few fun lines on this tour of India cleverly constructed it flows very well.
January 25th, 2025 04:22
Incredible India: my motherland
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the analysis of my poem \"At Nizamuddin Bridge, a grieving father...\" Link to the analysis :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-196464
The poem is about a father who was kept by force at the bridge in New Delhi and prevented from going on to see his dying son at his home village in Bariapur, Bihar. His son died. The father was held up because of the lockdown during Covid. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 03:58
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the analysis of my poem \"At Nizamuddin Bridge, a grieving father...\" Link to the analysis :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-196464
The poem is about a father who was kept by force at the bridge in New Delhi and prevented from going on to see his dying son at his home village in Bariapur, Bihar. His son died. The father was held up because of the lockdown during Covid. Soman Ragavan. 25 January 2025.
January 25th, 2025 03:58
Ode to the salty tear
Neilton said:
I \'m speechless! your poem is one of the best i have ever read!I especially loved how you said that our tears can be the reason of sadness or a reason of joy!
May 23rd, 2024 15:46
Neilton said:
I \'m speechless! your poem is one of the best i have ever read!I especially loved how you said that our tears can be the reason of sadness or a reason of joy!
May 23rd, 2024 15:46
Ode to the salty tear
NafisaSB said:
what an awesome poem. delves deep into the heart, and tugs at the heartstrings.
keep them coming - i only wish i had more hours in a day to read the beautiful compositions shared on this site - but always find myself pressed for time
May 17th, 2024 00:24
NafisaSB said:
what an awesome poem. delves deep into the heart, and tugs at the heartstrings.
keep them coming - i only wish i had more hours in a day to read the beautiful compositions shared on this site - but always find myself pressed for time
May 17th, 2024 00:24
Ode to the salty tear
Bella Shepard said:
The emotions of life captured in a single salty teardrop, relatable on every level, in every stanza. It truly tugged at my heart and my mind as I read. Thank you for this exquisite piece my friend, it came at just the right time for me.
May 15th, 2024 08:17
Bella Shepard said:
The emotions of life captured in a single salty teardrop, relatable on every level, in every stanza. It truly tugged at my heart and my mind as I read. Thank you for this exquisite piece my friend, it came at just the right time for me.
May 15th, 2024 08:17
Ode to the salty tear
Petrichor of Love said:
Such a wonderful poem Zaynab! Kudos! Keep writing.
May 15th, 2024 01:04
Petrichor of Love said:
Such a wonderful poem Zaynab! Kudos! Keep writing.
May 15th, 2024 01:04
View from an airplane window
Qurrathul Ain said:
The poem had the power to conjure it all up in my head. It just makes us realize how tiny we are in this big wide world. Beautiful!
May 14th, 2024 20:20
Qurrathul Ain said:
The poem had the power to conjure it all up in my head. It just makes us realize how tiny we are in this big wide world. Beautiful!
May 14th, 2024 20:20
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Qurrathul Ain said:
This poem conveys the truth, in a gentle yet fierce way. It speaks for humanity and peace and makes us look back on our actions. For some reason, this poem soothed the worries in my heart. Wonderful one!
May 14th, 2024 20:16
Qurrathul Ain said:
This poem conveys the truth, in a gentle yet fierce way. It speaks for humanity and peace and makes us look back on our actions. For some reason, this poem soothed the worries in my heart. Wonderful one!
May 14th, 2024 20:16
Ode to the salty tear
hzugman said:
Tears are emotions set free. Very nice picture.
May 14th, 2024 18:56
hzugman said:
Tears are emotions set free. Very nice picture.
May 14th, 2024 18:56
Ode to the salty tear
BlessedbyGod said:
Very good dear friend, I like to think that every tear that we cry are never a waste, it\'s a beautiful release of heartfelt emotion that God catches and cherishes every single teardrop we shed
May 14th, 2024 13:19
BlessedbyGod said:
Very good dear friend, I like to think that every tear that we cry are never a waste, it\'s a beautiful release of heartfelt emotion that God catches and cherishes every single teardrop we shed
May 14th, 2024 13:19
Poetic perfumery
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The views are not showing up. Because there are about 10 comments so how can there be only 5 views as it says up top.
May 14th, 2024 13:05
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The views are not showing up. Because there are about 10 comments so how can there be only 5 views as it says up top.
May 14th, 2024 13:05
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
David Wakeling said:
This is a valiant attempt at trying to understand why there is war.Sadly human beings are animals.Therefore they fight for what they want.That is why I live alone.
January 8th, 2024 15:39
David Wakeling said:
This is a valiant attempt at trying to understand why there is war.Sadly human beings are animals.Therefore they fight for what they want.That is why I live alone.
January 8th, 2024 15:39
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend this poem brought a lump to my throat, tears to my eyes and pain to my heart, for all those who suffer and die because of the ignorance of mankind. As you so eloquently say, why should peace be so hard to find? If only we had the will to give it a try, to look past our differences and embrace our commonalities, we might just make this world the place it was meant to be. A stunning write dear poet!
January 8th, 2024 15:01
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend this poem brought a lump to my throat, tears to my eyes and pain to my heart, for all those who suffer and die because of the ignorance of mankind. As you so eloquently say, why should peace be so hard to find? If only we had the will to give it a try, to look past our differences and embrace our commonalities, we might just make this world the place it was meant to be. A stunning write dear poet!
January 8th, 2024 15:01
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Lorenz said:
Patience and resilience will triumph !
January 8th, 2024 14:27
Lorenz said:
Patience and resilience will triumph !
January 8th, 2024 14:27
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the world is in a state of madness civilians pay the greatest price. nice write
January 8th, 2024 04:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the world is in a state of madness civilians pay the greatest price. nice write
January 8th, 2024 04:36
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
NafisaSB said:
@Zainab, i agree with almost all of your views so beautifully expressed. sorry because of catarat surgery in both eyes have not been reading much, just forwarding my old poems..
more power to your pen, and your thoughts, dear, take care
January 8th, 2024 02:09
NafisaSB said:
@Zainab, i agree with almost all of your views so beautifully expressed. sorry because of catarat surgery in both eyes have not been reading much, just forwarding my old poems..
more power to your pen, and your thoughts, dear, take care
January 8th, 2024 02:09
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Bobby O said:
I might be in the minority with this observation but offering truth is best.
The piece had a point of view based on solid logic provided by declarative phrasing and snd well timed rhythm. Then there is a technique you chose to employ that I don’t understand and I feel it works against the strength of your message and significantly diminishes the power of the poem. There is a school of thought that I’ve come to agree with and it suggests that the use of interrogatories (?question marks) do not add anything worthwhile and in fact can be rewritten is such a way that the technique be completely avoided and the piece is strengthened when all the silly question marks ARE REMOVED. you chose to include 11 of them in my opinion that’s a cutesy style that would serve you well if you skipped it forever.
January 8th, 2024 01:52
Bobby O said:
I might be in the minority with this observation but offering truth is best.
The piece had a point of view based on solid logic provided by declarative phrasing and snd well timed rhythm. Then there is a technique you chose to employ that I don’t understand and I feel it works against the strength of your message and significantly diminishes the power of the poem. There is a school of thought that I’ve come to agree with and it suggests that the use of interrogatories (?question marks) do not add anything worthwhile and in fact can be rewritten is such a way that the technique be completely avoided and the piece is strengthened when all the silly question marks ARE REMOVED. you chose to include 11 of them in my opinion that’s a cutesy style that would serve you well if you skipped it forever.
January 8th, 2024 01:52
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
Doggerel Dave said:
Why when and how indeed.
Your passion, anger and sickness at this and all other war situations comes through clearly. What more can I, totally on your side, add to your words?
January 8th, 2024 01:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Why when and how indeed.
Your passion, anger and sickness at this and all other war situations comes through clearly. What more can I, totally on your side, add to your words?
January 8th, 2024 01:43
Stop the warmongers and aggressors
2781 said:
Not by might, not by power,but by my Spirit saith the Lord.
January 8th, 2024 01:28
2781 said:
Not by might, not by power,but by my Spirit saith the Lord.
January 8th, 2024 01:28
Poetic perfumery
L. B. Mek said:
\'treasuring it to form scented hints of sweet memory\'
Brilliant!
A great write, so well researched
and crafted with genuine enthusiasm and sincerity
a beautiful read..
May I humbly recommend you read
\'The Cinnamon Peeler\' poem
by Michael Ondaatje
so you may see for yourself how favourably your poem compares
to one of the great modern
love poems
(
https://www.lyrikline.org/en/poems/cinnamon-peeler-6570
)
October 6th, 2023 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'treasuring it to form scented hints of sweet memory\'
Brilliant!
A great write, so well researched
and crafted with genuine enthusiasm and sincerity
a beautiful read..
May I humbly recommend you read
\'The Cinnamon Peeler\' poem
by Michael Ondaatje
so you may see for yourself how favourably your poem compares
to one of the great modern
love poems
(
https://www.lyrikline.org/en/poems/cinnamon-peeler-6570
)
October 6th, 2023 05:17
Poetic perfumery
jarcher54 said:
These days many people turn their noses up at strong perfumes. I understand, but I am one of those enchanted by a nice fragrance. Maybe you did not mean it exactly, but this is a very sexy poem! When I enter a room or elevator and there\'s no one there but the scent of a nice perfume lingers in the air... it intoxicates me! I cannot help imagining the woman whom I just missed...
October 5th, 2023 19:56
jarcher54 said:
These days many people turn their noses up at strong perfumes. I understand, but I am one of those enchanted by a nice fragrance. Maybe you did not mean it exactly, but this is a very sexy poem! When I enter a room or elevator and there\'s no one there but the scent of a nice perfume lingers in the air... it intoxicates me! I cannot help imagining the woman whom I just missed...
October 5th, 2023 19:56
Poetic perfumery
Petrichor of Love said:
Wondrously written ma\'am. The essence of the fragrance could be sensed very well💕
October 5th, 2023 11:51
Petrichor of Love said:
Wondrously written ma\'am. The essence of the fragrance could be sensed very well💕
October 5th, 2023 11:51
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