Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Mortal Beauty
Doggerel Dave said:
Do not in future contribute to my entries here when the only time you do so is to request a reading of yours.
Having however made the effort, I am confronted with a colour scheme which applies pain to an ageing eyesight. I am no masochist, so Mistress go inflict your torment elsewhere.
(If I reach above your words, the only faint word available to me is \'Allah\' over a bunch of women in traditional dress, so all I can conclude is that this is some religious propaganda not in keeping with my particular set of values)...
May 19th, 2026 20:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Do not in future contribute to my entries here when the only time you do so is to request a reading of yours.
Having however made the effort, I am confronted with a colour scheme which applies pain to an ageing eyesight. I am no masochist, so Mistress go inflict your torment elsewhere.
(If I reach above your words, the only faint word available to me is \'Allah\' over a bunch of women in traditional dress, so all I can conclude is that this is some religious propaganda not in keeping with my particular set of values)...
May 19th, 2026 20:39
Mortal Beauty
Neville said:
The message was eventually clear but the problem I had trying to read it was near insurmountable .. please remember not everyone has perfect vision .. Neville
May 19th, 2026 14:12
Neville said:
The message was eventually clear but the problem I had trying to read it was near insurmountable .. please remember not everyone has perfect vision .. Neville
May 19th, 2026 14:12
Man\"s worst enemy
Paul Bell said:
The builders and the destructors.
The builders have vision, the destructors, low esteem.
Now that we\'ve entered the Drone age of destruction, I would imagine the machines will probably wipe us out.
May 19th, 2026 13:14
Paul Bell said:
The builders and the destructors.
The builders have vision, the destructors, low esteem.
Now that we\'ve entered the Drone age of destruction, I would imagine the machines will probably wipe us out.
May 19th, 2026 13:14
Mortal Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
A lady dressed to the nines in this poem of physical appearance that ends well with a match of a lady killer and femme fatalle
May 19th, 2026 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
A lady dressed to the nines in this poem of physical appearance that ends well with a match of a lady killer and femme fatalle
May 19th, 2026 12:21
To condemn violence with solemn ink
rrodriguez said:
I enjoyed reading your poem. It describes so vividly what\'s going on in our world today. Nicely done!
April 1st, 2026 18:24
rrodriguez said:
I enjoyed reading your poem. It describes so vividly what\'s going on in our world today. Nicely done!
April 1st, 2026 18:24
To condemn violence with solemn ink
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Vivid and sharp.
March 24th, 2026 07:21
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Vivid and sharp.
March 24th, 2026 07:21
To condemn violence with solemn ink
NafisaSB said:
you have captured the brutal slaying of innocents beautifully..
fantastic work
March 24th, 2026 02:16
NafisaSB said:
you have captured the brutal slaying of innocents beautifully..
fantastic work
March 24th, 2026 02:16
To condemn violence with solemn ink
arqios said:
The innocent and defenceless are the “poor” that we always have among and around us and it is only too sad they are inevitably the first to go in hostility. Might doesn’t make right it should defend rights🙏🏻🕊️
March 23rd, 2026 16:19
arqios said:
The innocent and defenceless are the “poor” that we always have among and around us and it is only too sad they are inevitably the first to go in hostility. Might doesn’t make right it should defend rights🙏🏻🕊️
March 23rd, 2026 16:19
To condemn violence with solemn ink
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of violence against the innocent in a senseless or apparently senseless manner (all actions have a motivation). Death and murder with motive often mistaken. Sad that most such are over disputes in beliefs well written
March 23rd, 2026 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of violence against the innocent in a senseless or apparently senseless manner (all actions have a motivation). Death and murder with motive often mistaken. Sad that most such are over disputes in beliefs well written
March 23rd, 2026 13:43
To condemn violence with solemn ink
hzugman said:
To the multitudes of innocents whose lives are ended and many more whose lives are destroyed to gain nothing for the \"winners\" and horrors for the\" losers\". Will we ever learn? Thank you for your poem. Let\'s all spread love and hope it sticks.
March 23rd, 2026 12:35
hzugman said:
To the multitudes of innocents whose lives are ended and many more whose lives are destroyed to gain nothing for the \"winners\" and horrors for the\" losers\". Will we ever learn? Thank you for your poem. Let\'s all spread love and hope it sticks.
March 23rd, 2026 12:35
To condemn violence with solemn ink
Demar Desu said:
These people don’t care about kids it’s unfortunate, but they’re soulless
March 23rd, 2026 12:21
Demar Desu said:
These people don’t care about kids it’s unfortunate, but they’re soulless
March 23rd, 2026 12:21
Love matters need advice
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Liked it very much. Well written.
Like any thought provoking poem this one made me think- what if we don\'t let our younger one don\'t make mistakes, would they learn to choose?
November 27th, 2025 04:56
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Liked it very much. Well written.
Like any thought provoking poem this one made me think- what if we don\'t let our younger one don\'t make mistakes, would they learn to choose?
November 27th, 2025 04:56
Love matters need advice
Ellen Marsell said:
You have managed to express important things clearly, warmly, and with great meaning. Excellent work!
November 26th, 2025 13:16
Ellen Marsell said:
You have managed to express important things clearly, warmly, and with great meaning. Excellent work!
November 26th, 2025 13:16
Love matters need advice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done. Indeed, it feels less parents are, well, parenting nowadays. As one who did parent and, sure, did not always get it right, I can say that parenting, no matter how imperfect works better than not parenting at all. An excellent poem on an important topic. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 26th, 2025 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done. Indeed, it feels less parents are, well, parenting nowadays. As one who did parent and, sure, did not always get it right, I can say that parenting, no matter how imperfect works better than not parenting at all. An excellent poem on an important topic. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 26th, 2025 08:11
Love matters need advice
NafisaSB said:
Love is instantaneous and does not need approval -- it just happens..one cannot guide a teen whom to fall for - though parents can introduce the right type of like minded youngsters for their kids...a lovely write full of caution and good advice...
November 26th, 2025 00:11
NafisaSB said:
Love is instantaneous and does not need approval -- it just happens..one cannot guide a teen whom to fall for - though parents can introduce the right type of like minded youngsters for their kids...a lovely write full of caution and good advice...
November 26th, 2025 00:11
Love matters need advice
Doggerel Dave said:
Could not read your poem owing to it\'s deep red background. Answer refers to your comments only. How do you operationalise your wise contention in for example, dysfunctional families?
November 25th, 2025 16:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Could not read your poem owing to it\'s deep red background. Answer refers to your comments only. How do you operationalise your wise contention in for example, dysfunctional families?
November 25th, 2025 16:40
Love matters need advice
2781 said:
Train up a child in the way he should go: and when he is old he will not depart from it.
It appears your parents have done a good job!
November 25th, 2025 15:30
2781 said:
Train up a child in the way he should go: and when he is old he will not depart from it.
It appears your parents have done a good job!
November 25th, 2025 15:30
Love matters need advice
Bella Shepard said:
Love is a difficult emotion to control. The young often think they are invincible, for lack of experience. It is here that the wisdom of those who have trod the road of love before can be very benificial in honest conversation. A good write my friend!
November 25th, 2025 15:27
Bella Shepard said:
Love is a difficult emotion to control. The young often think they are invincible, for lack of experience. It is here that the wisdom of those who have trod the road of love before can be very benificial in honest conversation. A good write my friend!
November 25th, 2025 15:27
Love matters need advice
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very true but I dont think we learn from our mistakes despite our age, good read and a definate like
November 25th, 2025 11:59
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very true but I dont think we learn from our mistakes despite our age, good read and a definate like
November 25th, 2025 11:59
Love matters need advice
Soman Ragavan said:
Many pieces of wise advice to those concerned. Love should not be just about seeking pleasure. It should be genuine.
November 25th, 2025 10:02
Soman Ragavan said:
Many pieces of wise advice to those concerned. Love should not be just about seeking pleasure. It should be genuine.
November 25th, 2025 10:02
Love matters need advice
sorenbarrett said:
The essence of this poem seems to be to protect children from unprotected sex and its consequences. It also addresses the issue of emotional pain in immature relationships. Well written
November 25th, 2025 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
The essence of this poem seems to be to protect children from unprotected sex and its consequences. It also addresses the issue of emotional pain in immature relationships. Well written
November 25th, 2025 09:00
Man\"s worst enemy
hzugman said:
Well written about this sad reality. For a slightly different aspect you might watch to watch the TV series Life After Man.
August 28th, 2025 09:20
hzugman said:
Well written about this sad reality. For a slightly different aspect you might watch to watch the TV series Life After Man.
August 28th, 2025 09:20
Man\"s worst enemy
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Zay,
There are so many words to describe the horrors of man especially those committed on his fellow man and sadly there is no end to it in sight. This is a powerful poem composed by a big hearted, kind and gifted poet. Excellent, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 11:57
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Zay,
There are so many words to describe the horrors of man especially those committed on his fellow man and sadly there is no end to it in sight. This is a powerful poem composed by a big hearted, kind and gifted poet. Excellent, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 11:57
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