Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸



Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
Mizgeen Berzinari said:

Well written.

March 16th, 2021 05:50

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
Dove said:

Such a beautiful poem! Very well formatted as well! I just the the message and rhymes!

March 8th, 2021 09:21

Ode to the snail
Mizgeen Berzinari said:

Beautifully written. Keep it up.

February 18th, 2021 13:27

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
AwHec8 said:

Absolutely Love it 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸! Don
Plus this Poem caused me to chuckle at the same time I all of a sudden got hungry for all of the listed items, vegetables and all.

Side note here for you if you are a Lord of the Rings fan. The food in this movie called elven bread that is all encompassing nutritious and good tasting is like the Honey Comb with the Honey. I think 95% of all of what we humans need in vitamins & minerals & such is in the Honey Comb. Counting it is \"good\" food and a good source of being anti bacteria or virus type remedy. Point being it is like the eleven bread in the Movies.
Praise the Good Lord indeed.

February 17th, 2021 11:56

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
jarcher54 said:

From one who does not pray or practice any religion, and who (fortunately) missed whatever nasty comments you received that some are referring to, I am blessed to bask in the beautiful humility of this poem-prayer. It reminds me of the familiar little grace my father\'s passed on to him: Thank you for the world so sweet, thank you for the food we eat, thank you for the birds that sing, thank you God for everything, Amen. I love your inventive, playful rhymes and the obvious sincerity of your words. Bon appetite!

February 17th, 2021 05:29

When life was really child\'s play
jarcher54 said:

The innocence you project with this simple, rich, memory-inducing verse perfectly reflects the innocent play of children. Your poem is really a grown-up nursery rhyme. I don\'t know if you did it on purpose, but it\'s clear that, for some like you, composing a little ditty like this is how you continue to play as an adult -- or as a former child, maybe I should say.

February 17th, 2021 05:20

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
heatherbee said:

Well a interesting read made me hungry the mention of a lot of food, it\'s good to be thankful of things its gracious and kind.

February 16th, 2021 10:43

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
thewayiwrite said:

Lovely work!

February 16th, 2021 09:04

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
L. B. Mek said:

it is a divine gift to view reality within such a blinkered scope of existence, cherish it - wholeheartedly..
but please Choose to promote Peace, over - enraged confrontations, destabilising through reactive vehemence, in the face of those that choose wrongly - to knowingly, antagonise and bait you - away: from that grasped acceptance and serenity, you spent so long mining from within..
let us instead find room to respect each other, whatever our belief systems dear Poet,
you write so eloquently, may that be enough of a treasured gift..
Choose to trust, in the wisdom of humility:
\'Peace be unto you\'
\'Wa-Alaikum-Salaam\', indeed!

February 16th, 2021 05:38

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
Goldfinch60 said:

My god is always with me but my god is not the one of any organised religions.

February 16th, 2021 01:30

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
FredPeyer said:

Well written s.z.k.

February 15th, 2021 20:15

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
Jerry Reynolds said:

In the name of Allah,
most benevolent,
ever-merciful.
109-6
Let your poem stand for itself and comments stand for themselves.
An enjoyable write.

February 15th, 2021 18:03

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
Fay Slimm. said:

An inspiring read my friend,.

February 15th, 2021 17:02

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
Samer Amin said:

Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem.

I just want to point out two miraculous Quranic verses about the navigation of bees, and how new scientific research has proven the superior ability of the bee navigation system and their amazing capabilities in searching for nectar and communicating this information to their colleagues.

[16:68] Saheeh International

And your Lord inspired to the bee, \"Take for yourself among the mountains, houses, and among the trees and [in] that which they construct.

[16:69] Saheeh International
Then eat from all the fruits and \'\'Follow The Ways Of Your Lord Laid Down\'\' [for you].\" There emerges from their bellies a drink, varying in colors, in which there is healing for people. Indeed in that is a sign for a people who give thought.


A new study by Srinivasan’s team confirms that bees do look to the sky—even if the sun is obscured by clouds—to collect directional data from polarized light. Foraging bees pass these directions on to their fellow bees through a waggle dance.

It is well known that bees steer by the sun, adjusting their compass as it moves across the sky, and then convert that information into instructions for other bees by waggling their body to signal the direction of the honey.

It is also known that bees can find the honey source even on cloudy days when the sun isn\'t visible.

Other laboratories have shown from studying their eyes that bees can see a pattern of polarized light in the sky even when the sun isn\'t shining.

February 15th, 2021 15:58

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
ron parrish aka wordman said:

the creator of life and all it`s goodness that it brings...a lovely thank you poem to god

February 15th, 2021 13:51

Ode to the snail
Munro said:

Like your poem ,,, Snail, Pleased I’m on its poetry trail

February 15th, 2021 13:03

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
orchidee said:

I will just say, a fine write Z, though I don\'t see Allah as God myself.
I\'m not getting caught up in the \'debate\' on here though.

February 15th, 2021 12:23

Ode to the snail
Robert Southwick Richmond said:

I like your typography - I\'m so tired of middle-axis alignment and tiny print on MyPoeticSide.

I\'m new here. I\'ve been messing with the site\'s text editor - I\'m very fussy about how my verse is displayed. Good Unicode support - I\'ve embedded pointed Hebrew and Arabic-alphabet Farsi already. I\'ll try Devanāgarī next!

December 19th, 2020 23:34

Ode to the snail
Goddess of the Mist said:

Aaawwww 😘 This is absolutely adorable and I love the pictures too!

November 11th, 2020 18:15

Ode to the snail
FineB said:

A witty and entertaining write.

Wonderful szaynab.

Maybe we all need to take a note out of the snail\'s book and stop rushing around in life especially modern life.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

November 11th, 2020 14:57

Ode to the snail
queer-with-a-pen said:

I enjoy the simplicity of this poem, as well as the rhyming. Very well done there. I used to have a pet snail named Tsubu as a young boy, and this delightful little poem made me think fondly of them, and for that I thank you.

November 11th, 2020 11:58

Ode to the snail
Poetic Dan said:

Write up my path ;) thanks for sharing and caring

Much peace and respect

November 10th, 2020 09:18

Ode to the snail
orchidee said:

You seeing more snails?! heehee.

November 9th, 2020 15:14

Ode to the snail
Fay Slimm. said:

A miracle wrapped in an awesome shell is paid special tribute in your interesting posting dear Zaynab-- we may never know the benefits of creatures like snails and why their colouring differs - thank you for sharing their prettiness with us.

November 9th, 2020 11:29

Ode to the snail
AwHec8 said:

Yep a Great Write there s.zaynab.kamoonpuri!
We all have a part to play in this here world and orchidee Thank You for putting me back on a safe Path, so to speak. 🤣 Don

November 9th, 2020 10:54

Ode to the snail
orchidee said:

Yes, I like snails too. I will save them if I see them on paths in damp weather, and move them to the grass. Well, crossing a path for a snail must be like humans trying to cross a motorway.

November 9th, 2020 10:21

Ode to the snail
orchidee said:

Good write Z.

November 9th, 2020 09:58

Water is life and seems alive
nicolibellamont said:

Very beautiful. Water is so important, so versatile. Maybe some day we will figure this out before it is too late

September 12th, 2020 14:15

Water is life and seems alive
Aleem Nasir said:

I hate water splashing around your poem🤧🤧 it makes my clothes all wet😁

September 12th, 2020 14:09

Water is life and seems alive
Neville said:

It seems you have got this most precious of commodities off to a fine art ... a very enjoyable and comprehensive post indeed ...

September 12th, 2020 04:04

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