Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
O\' human heart
livsxxxx said:
Wow. Clever write. Really enjoyed reading this poem.👍🏽
July 13th, 2018 03:18
livsxxxx said:
Wow. Clever write. Really enjoyed reading this poem.👍🏽
July 13th, 2018 03:18
O\' human heart
orchidee said:
A fine write Z. I understand the physical heart, and it being the seat of the emotions, as the \'centre\' of us. Well, our heart is placed centrally in us.
And - oohh - write a poem every day if you wish. This site allows one per day. Some sites allow more per day, but then we would never get time to read them all.
Don\'t be shy of it, if you\'ve got poems there - past or present ones!
July 13th, 2018 02:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Z. I understand the physical heart, and it being the seat of the emotions, as the \'centre\' of us. Well, our heart is placed centrally in us.
And - oohh - write a poem every day if you wish. This site allows one per day. Some sites allow more per day, but then we would never get time to read them all.
Don\'t be shy of it, if you\'ve got poems there - past or present ones!
July 13th, 2018 02:09
O\' human heart
w c said:
A beautiful poem. My favorite part is: \"but in the end forget not to reserve at least a single chamber for its Creator.\"
July 12th, 2018 19:11
w c said:
A beautiful poem. My favorite part is: \"but in the end forget not to reserve at least a single chamber for its Creator.\"
July 12th, 2018 19:11
O\' human heart
ron parrish aka wordman said:
beautiful tribute to God,,loved it
July 12th, 2018 18:07
ron parrish aka wordman said:
beautiful tribute to God,,loved it
July 12th, 2018 18:07
O\' human heart
Poetic Dan said:
Loved the energy of this, thank you for sharing.
July 12th, 2018 17:05
Poetic Dan said:
Loved the energy of this, thank you for sharing.
July 12th, 2018 17:05
O\' human heart
dusk arising said:
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our blood around, all the other stuff is in our brain, our personality and memory. I dont know how this idea of the heart myth got started but we do all use the expressions \'with all my heart\' and \'heartbroken\' don\'t we.
July 12th, 2018 15:27
dusk arising said:
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our blood around, all the other stuff is in our brain, our personality and memory. I dont know how this idea of the heart myth got started but we do all use the expressions \'with all my heart\' and \'heartbroken\' don\'t we.
July 12th, 2018 15:27
O\' human heart
dusk arising said:
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our blood around, all the other stuff is in our brain, our personality and memory. I dont know how this idea of the heart myth got started but we do all use the expressions \'with all my heart\' and \'heartbroken\' don\'t we.
July 12th, 2018 15:21
dusk arising said:
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our blood around, all the other stuff is in our brain, our personality and memory. I dont know how this idea of the heart myth got started but we do all use the expressions \'with all my heart\' and \'heartbroken\' don\'t we.
July 12th, 2018 15:21
O\' human heart
Edthepoet said:
This is beautiful work. Especially \'A mere four chambers, indeed, but spacious are
they, Invite therein, whomsoever in the
world you may\'. If Biffy Clyro wrote poems they would sound like this.
July 12th, 2018 12:50
Edthepoet said:
This is beautiful work. Especially \'A mere four chambers, indeed, but spacious are
they, Invite therein, whomsoever in the
world you may\'. If Biffy Clyro wrote poems they would sound like this.
July 12th, 2018 12:50
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Amazing.....an unique style....Indianness is also there!!
April 29th, 2018 10:52
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Amazing.....an unique style....Indianness is also there!!
April 29th, 2018 10:52
Death is indiscriminate
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In Christian eschatology the four last things are: Death, Judgment, Heaven, and Hell. Thank you for a fine write and one which calls each reader to ponder, once again, his or her own understanding of this inevitable reality.
April 18th, 2018 20:53
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In Christian eschatology the four last things are: Death, Judgment, Heaven, and Hell. Thank you for a fine write and one which calls each reader to ponder, once again, his or her own understanding of this inevitable reality.
April 18th, 2018 20:53
Death is indiscriminate
w c said:
A very nice poem. I\'ve heard it said that the only things guaranteed are death and taxes.
April 17th, 2018 15:26
w c said:
A very nice poem. I\'ve heard it said that the only things guaranteed are death and taxes.
April 17th, 2018 15:26
Death is indiscriminate
RiverJordan said:
Death of the flesh, energy flows on! Enjoyed the piece!
April 17th, 2018 14:36
RiverJordan said:
Death of the flesh, energy flows on! Enjoyed the piece!
April 17th, 2018 14:36
Death is indiscriminate
orchidee said:
A fine write zaynab. Yet death in Biblical terms is seen as an enemy.
April 17th, 2018 08:15
orchidee said:
A fine write zaynab. Yet death in Biblical terms is seen as an enemy.
April 17th, 2018 08:15
Death is indiscriminate
Goldfinch60 said:
Death in this human body is expected but I know that the Spirit that runs through my life will digital on to eternity.
April 17th, 2018 08:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Death in this human body is expected but I know that the Spirit that runs through my life will digital on to eternity.
April 17th, 2018 08:10
Death is indiscriminate
Lorna said:
I love your thoughts and clarity of this poem.... these lines are so true and people forget that it wasn\'t much fun showing up: \"We didn\'t enjoy coming into this world either
judging from all that bawling we did as newborns.\" Life can be hard - and maybe death will be much easier!
April 17th, 2018 07:00
Lorna said:
I love your thoughts and clarity of this poem.... these lines are so true and people forget that it wasn\'t much fun showing up: \"We didn\'t enjoy coming into this world either
judging from all that bawling we did as newborns.\" Life can be hard - and maybe death will be much easier!
April 17th, 2018 07:00
Death is indiscriminate
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Doesn\'t matter what you do in life, in the end you die anyway. Well said, and to the point. Very much agreed.
April 17th, 2018 06:46
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Doesn\'t matter what you do in life, in the end you die anyway. Well said, and to the point. Very much agreed.
April 17th, 2018 06:46
Play it on your lips
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely thoughts,made me smile
March 30th, 2018 23:41
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely thoughts,made me smile
March 30th, 2018 23:41
Play it on your lips
rrodriguez said:
This was really, really good. I\'m smiling now as I write. Thank you for this wonderful write.
February 25th, 2018 14:36
rrodriguez said:
This was really, really good. I\'m smiling now as I write. Thank you for this wonderful write.
February 25th, 2018 14:36
Play it on your lips
Jessie said:
Excellent write, I like the message of positivity.
January 15th, 2018 12:36
Jessie said:
Excellent write, I like the message of positivity.
January 15th, 2018 12:36
Play it on your lips
FineB said:
Thsnk you SZaynab a stunning vivid poem on the importance of a smile.
Very symbolic.
I enjoyed it. I need to smile more in life.
Keep writing in 2018
FineB
January 11th, 2018 11:18
FineB said:
Thsnk you SZaynab a stunning vivid poem on the importance of a smile.
Very symbolic.
I enjoyed it. I need to smile more in life.
Keep writing in 2018
FineB
January 11th, 2018 11:18
Play it on your lips
Izzi Lynn said:
Lawless was right, this is a very cheerful poem. I like it a lot! You\'ve got a nice writing style!
January 11th, 2018 10:17
Izzi Lynn said:
Lawless was right, this is a very cheerful poem. I like it a lot! You\'ve got a nice writing style!
January 11th, 2018 10:17
Play it on your lips
Poetic Dan said:
First read of the year
The sign is clear
Your beautiful words
Have inspired me
If I feel thoses wrinkles
I\'ll think of this moment
And I\'ll know what to do
Remember it\'s right under my nose
Thank you
January 10th, 2018 12:48
Poetic Dan said:
First read of the year
The sign is clear
Your beautiful words
Have inspired me
If I feel thoses wrinkles
I\'ll think of this moment
And I\'ll know what to do
Remember it\'s right under my nose
Thank you
January 10th, 2018 12:48
Play it on your lips
lasergraph said:
This brought a smile to my face, an inspiration. If you see someone without a smile, give them yours.
January 10th, 2018 08:42
lasergraph said:
This brought a smile to my face, an inspiration. If you see someone without a smile, give them yours.
January 10th, 2018 08:42
Play it on your lips
Shakerite said:
A uplifting poem so inspiring. I\'ve been away after suffering depression lately and you have helped raise my blues .. Thanks Zaynab.
ps your daughter is a credit to.you .
Martyn
January 10th, 2018 05:36
Shakerite said:
A uplifting poem so inspiring. I\'ve been away after suffering depression lately and you have helped raise my blues .. Thanks Zaynab.
ps your daughter is a credit to.you .
Martyn
January 10th, 2018 05:36
My wee special guest
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i like to watch humming birds and luv birds
January 9th, 2018 16:52
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i like to watch humming birds and luv birds
January 9th, 2018 16:52
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