Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸



Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
Francesco said:

Wishing I could fly... :)
Lovely piece1
Fx

December 2nd, 2016 16:27

Salute the sweet tooth?
SilentLaugh said:

NIce poem! I love it! I have a suggestion for you. There is a poetry website called Allpoetry! cheak it out!

December 2nd, 2016 13:40

Salute the sweet tooth?
Tony36 said:

Sweet and tasty write

December 2nd, 2016 12:41

Salute the sweet tooth?
Daniel said:

A very clever fun poem, I\'m hungry from reading it. Your poem definitely made me smile!

December 2nd, 2016 08:08

Salute the sweet tooth?
WriteBeLight said:

That was a very sweet poem! You just about covered everything! Nice job...:)

December 2nd, 2016 06:19

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iRonnie said:

I loovveeee it. This hits deeply with me. I can relate to the message very heavily... 😕 I have lot of personal qualities I need to work on 😁

Thank you for the art!! 😍

November 23rd, 2016 14:55

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nicolerobbo said:

Good write, keep the poets up x

November 23rd, 2016 04:12

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Christina8 said:

Very nice poem. Good rhymes. I agree with Augustus in that my favorite line is giving the conscience a hug. Thanks for sharing!

November 22nd, 2016 15:23

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Gothic_Girl said:

this is so beautiful! I love it!

November 22nd, 2016 07:22

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Tony36 said:

AWESOME write

November 21st, 2016 14:40

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Augustus said:

I just love this, the message, the writing. My favorite line was giving the conscience a tug.

November 21st, 2016 11:56

Thoughts on turning 36
SilentLaugh said:

This is just fantastic! I feel like this all thetime. Im 15 and I cant wait to be 16. but its always one step closer to being a mother or getting a job. This poem really touches that spot! also how did you change your picture for your profile? I cant figure it out.

November 16th, 2016 12:32

Thoughts on turning 36
JustABird said:

I can really relate to this. It was really hard for me when I turned 30 and Alzheimer\'s runs in my family so I am extremely fearful of that as I grow older. I definitely get what you\'re saying but birthdays, when they come also bring with them a feeling of joy because people put a spotlight on you for the day and sometimes it\'s really nice to feel that. Great poem.

November 16th, 2016 10:57

Thoughts on turning 36
Quietstorm_Dru said:

Nice poem and be thankful for every bday... wishing you a happy birthday and many more.

November 15th, 2016 15:00

Thoughts on turning 36
Abu Aeesh said:

It\'s beautiful!!

November 14th, 2016 10:04

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AlitaOpal said:

Beautiful work of art..
You painted an amazing picture with your words.. For a moment I was there 🌳🌾🍂🐺🕷🐻

November 14th, 2016 09:19

Thoughts on turning 36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

36 SWEETHEART ~ Like me (33) you are only ONE THIRD through your life ! Lots more rivers to cross ~ lots more mountains to climb ~ lots more experiences of Life & love to enjoy ! Love your peom ~ the highs and the lows ~ Love and Hugs ~ BRIAN

November 14th, 2016 08:29

Thoughts on turning 36
ron parrish aka wordman said:

loved the write,loved the format
welcome to the site

November 13th, 2016 23:53

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Melody said:

I so love your take on nature all through out your poem, prairies dogs and cactus paint such a vivid memory of the American desert and plains, such a gentle, vivid poem filled with amazing imagery...Bravo my friend! Mel

November 5th, 2016 15:33

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Kurt Philip Behm said:

Beautiful picture with corresponding words. (Some new to me :)

Kurt

November 5th, 2016 10:13

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The 2 A.M Writer said:

I like the mental picture i get from this photo, gives me a warm feeling. I feel like they words almost have a trippy, kinda indie rock feel to them. Good write!

November 4th, 2016 13:50

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sincerelyallee said:

good poem! definitely paints a picture.

November 4th, 2016 10:42

Suicide is NOT the Solution
WildMoonChild said:

Powerful and thought provoking!

November 4th, 2016 03:08

Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Thanx soo much for comment. I tink we would be granted wings in heaven.

November 4th, 2016 02:44

Suicide is NOT the Solution
sonicpoet said:

I liked this . As someone who suffers from depression and went through a hospital stay for suicidal behavior, I can say that many feeling of suicide can come from wanting the pain to end more than anything else. Yes there are those hoping to hurt others when they do it but situations are so different and depression is such an ugly monster that for some suicide really is the only way out that they see. Such is the power and fatality of depression which is why its the sickness it is. I enjoyed reading this.

November 3rd, 2016 15:25

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Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

November 3rd, 2016 13:55

Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
Vic E said:

Wings have been man\'s wish or desire from the dawn of time. Maybe we just want to be like angels. Most of our superheroes can fly, from Superman to Ironman! Who knows, maybe in a million years we\'d evolve into winged creatures. :) Nice poem!

November 3rd, 2016 10:26

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paddy68 said:

Definitely thought provoking. Not sure of its beat so stuttered through. To be honest I only do rhyming and entered.

November 3rd, 2016 06:03

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nicolerobbo said:

Actually amsuing. Keep the poetry up.

November 3rd, 2016 04:27

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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Thanx soo much for the review.

November 3rd, 2016 02:57

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