Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
The rise and fall of life\'s notes
IsraaD said:
Very very beautiful poem. I loved reading the hidden messages you put in there! Great job!
December 6th, 2018 09:56
IsraaD said:
Very very beautiful poem. I loved reading the hidden messages you put in there! Great job!
December 6th, 2018 09:56
The rise and fall of life\'s notes
sylviasearcher said:
An uplifting piece encouraging growth.
Ibekndered why you chose to have the words behind green. My brain processed it all more slowly I think.
December 6th, 2018 07:59
sylviasearcher said:
An uplifting piece encouraging growth.
Ibekndered why you chose to have the words behind green. My brain processed it all more slowly I think.
December 6th, 2018 07:59
O\' human heart
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is very well written.the heart idea is not a myth.it is a fact.there is a major chakra situated there.not to mention, our emotions greatly affect the heart and its functions
November 26th, 2018 04:47
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is very well written.the heart idea is not a myth.it is a fact.there is a major chakra situated there.not to mention, our emotions greatly affect the heart and its functions
November 26th, 2018 04:47
Llama Drama
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Llamas are wonderfully made creatures; praise God the Creator! And you; the creator of this piece; laboring with the words, plying with the numbering of syllables- eyes fastened to your interesting subject - make them accessible to audiences thousands of miles away - in pictures and in poetry. Fascinating!
September 15th, 2018 14:32
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Llamas are wonderfully made creatures; praise God the Creator! And you; the creator of this piece; laboring with the words, plying with the numbering of syllables- eyes fastened to your interesting subject - make them accessible to audiences thousands of miles away - in pictures and in poetry. Fascinating!
September 15th, 2018 14:32
Llama Drama
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun write - we need more like this on here - it can be a very somber site at times - great read.
September 7th, 2018 00:55
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun write - we need more like this on here - it can be a very somber site at times - great read.
September 7th, 2018 00:55
Llama Drama
Fay Slimm. said:
So funny and very attractive the llamas I know in Cornwall have just the same haircuts -ha ha - you worded a smile-raising read which I had to read over again and those pics. made me giggle too. Must save this one to my favs.
September 6th, 2018 15:02
Fay Slimm. said:
So funny and very attractive the llamas I know in Cornwall have just the same haircuts -ha ha - you worded a smile-raising read which I had to read over again and those pics. made me giggle too. Must save this one to my favs.
September 6th, 2018 15:02
Llama Drama
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW SISTER ! Love the photos and the Llama Tribute. Yes indeaed they are funny and they seem happy. We don\'t have many Camels in England (One HUMP or two ?} but we do have lots of LLAMAS. We often have them in Children\'s PARKS & FARMS becaus they look non-threatening and can tollerate light stroking. Their wool is nice as is ALPACA ! I South America (Peru etc) I have seen them used as working animals carrying loads etc. How do they use them in TANZANIA ? Do they eat the Meat. When we visited South Africa we ate a lot of different MEAT in the Hotel ~ Impala ~ Zebu ~ Zebra ~ Ostrich etc all delicious and in Peru they eat GUINEA PIGS ! Thanks for love ly POEM \'n PICS. Please check our FUSION on SEASONS. Its AUTUMN here (UK) and SPRING in NEW ZEALAND where ANGELA is on a work exchange ! Yours BRIAN 😎 and ANGELA 🧡
September 6th, 2018 12:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW SISTER ! Love the photos and the Llama Tribute. Yes indeaed they are funny and they seem happy. We don\'t have many Camels in England (One HUMP or two ?} but we do have lots of LLAMAS. We often have them in Children\'s PARKS & FARMS becaus they look non-threatening and can tollerate light stroking. Their wool is nice as is ALPACA ! I South America (Peru etc) I have seen them used as working animals carrying loads etc. How do they use them in TANZANIA ? Do they eat the Meat. When we visited South Africa we ate a lot of different MEAT in the Hotel ~ Impala ~ Zebu ~ Zebra ~ Ostrich etc all delicious and in Peru they eat GUINEA PIGS ! Thanks for love ly POEM \'n PICS. Please check our FUSION on SEASONS. Its AUTUMN here (UK) and SPRING in NEW ZEALAND where ANGELA is on a work exchange ! Yours BRIAN 😎 and ANGELA 🧡
September 6th, 2018 12:52
Llama Drama
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, llamas are very strange creatures.
September 6th, 2018 07:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, llamas are very strange creatures.
September 6th, 2018 07:50
Llama Drama
Lorna said:
Chuckles indeed! I have a friend who owned llamas and pigmy goats and she had to sell the llamas because the vet said they were being dangerously stressed out by the little goats........having nervous breakdowns......... funny !
September 6th, 2018 07:08
Lorna said:
Chuckles indeed! I have a friend who owned llamas and pigmy goats and she had to sell the llamas because the vet said they were being dangerously stressed out by the little goats........having nervous breakdowns......... funny !
September 6th, 2018 07:08
O\' human heart
Izzi Lynn said:
Awww, I love it! The style is so interesting and I love reading it.
July 15th, 2018 18:15
Izzi Lynn said:
Awww, I love it! The style is so interesting and I love reading it.
July 15th, 2018 18:15
O\' human heart
livsxxxx said:
Wow. Clever write. Really enjoyed reading this poem.👍🏽
July 13th, 2018 03:18
livsxxxx said:
Wow. Clever write. Really enjoyed reading this poem.👍🏽
July 13th, 2018 03:18
O\' human heart
orchidee said:
A fine write Z. I understand the physical heart, and it being the seat of the emotions, as the \'centre\' of us. Well, our heart is placed centrally in us.
And - oohh - write a poem every day if you wish. This site allows one per day. Some sites allow more per day, but then we would never get time to read them all.
Don\'t be shy of it, if you\'ve got poems there - past or present ones!
July 13th, 2018 02:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Z. I understand the physical heart, and it being the seat of the emotions, as the \'centre\' of us. Well, our heart is placed centrally in us.
And - oohh - write a poem every day if you wish. This site allows one per day. Some sites allow more per day, but then we would never get time to read them all.
Don\'t be shy of it, if you\'ve got poems there - past or present ones!
July 13th, 2018 02:09
O\' human heart
w c said:
A beautiful poem. My favorite part is: \"but in the end forget not to reserve at least a single chamber for its Creator.\"
July 12th, 2018 19:11
w c said:
A beautiful poem. My favorite part is: \"but in the end forget not to reserve at least a single chamber for its Creator.\"
July 12th, 2018 19:11
O\' human heart
ron parrish aka wordman said:
beautiful tribute to God,,loved it
July 12th, 2018 18:07
ron parrish aka wordman said:
beautiful tribute to God,,loved it
July 12th, 2018 18:07
O\' human heart
Poetic Dan said:
Loved the energy of this, thank you for sharing.
July 12th, 2018 17:05
Poetic Dan said:
Loved the energy of this, thank you for sharing.
July 12th, 2018 17:05
O\' human heart
dusk arising said:
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our blood around, all the other stuff is in our brain, our personality and memory. I dont know how this idea of the heart myth got started but we do all use the expressions \'with all my heart\' and \'heartbroken\' don\'t we.
July 12th, 2018 15:27
dusk arising said:
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our blood around, all the other stuff is in our brain, our personality and memory. I dont know how this idea of the heart myth got started but we do all use the expressions \'with all my heart\' and \'heartbroken\' don\'t we.
July 12th, 2018 15:27
O\' human heart
dusk arising said:
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our blood around, all the other stuff is in our brain, our personality and memory. I dont know how this idea of the heart myth got started but we do all use the expressions \'with all my heart\' and \'heartbroken\' don\'t we.
July 12th, 2018 15:21
dusk arising said:
A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our blood around, all the other stuff is in our brain, our personality and memory. I dont know how this idea of the heart myth got started but we do all use the expressions \'with all my heart\' and \'heartbroken\' don\'t we.
July 12th, 2018 15:21
O\' human heart
Edthepoet said:
This is beautiful work. Especially \'A mere four chambers, indeed, but spacious are
they, Invite therein, whomsoever in the
world you may\'. If Biffy Clyro wrote poems they would sound like this.
July 12th, 2018 12:50
Edthepoet said:
This is beautiful work. Especially \'A mere four chambers, indeed, but spacious are
they, Invite therein, whomsoever in the
world you may\'. If Biffy Clyro wrote poems they would sound like this.
July 12th, 2018 12:50
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Amazing.....an unique style....Indianness is also there!!
April 29th, 2018 10:52
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Amazing.....an unique style....Indianness is also there!!
April 29th, 2018 10:52
Death is indiscriminate
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In Christian eschatology the four last things are: Death, Judgment, Heaven, and Hell. Thank you for a fine write and one which calls each reader to ponder, once again, his or her own understanding of this inevitable reality.
April 18th, 2018 20:53
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In Christian eschatology the four last things are: Death, Judgment, Heaven, and Hell. Thank you for a fine write and one which calls each reader to ponder, once again, his or her own understanding of this inevitable reality.
April 18th, 2018 20:53
Death is indiscriminate
w c said:
A very nice poem. I\'ve heard it said that the only things guaranteed are death and taxes.
April 17th, 2018 15:26
w c said:
A very nice poem. I\'ve heard it said that the only things guaranteed are death and taxes.
April 17th, 2018 15:26
Death is indiscriminate
RiverJordan said:
Death of the flesh, energy flows on! Enjoyed the piece!
April 17th, 2018 14:36
RiverJordan said:
Death of the flesh, energy flows on! Enjoyed the piece!
April 17th, 2018 14:36
Death is indiscriminate
orchidee said:
A fine write zaynab. Yet death in Biblical terms is seen as an enemy.
April 17th, 2018 08:15
orchidee said:
A fine write zaynab. Yet death in Biblical terms is seen as an enemy.
April 17th, 2018 08:15
Death is indiscriminate
Goldfinch60 said:
Death in this human body is expected but I know that the Spirit that runs through my life will digital on to eternity.
April 17th, 2018 08:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Death in this human body is expected but I know that the Spirit that runs through my life will digital on to eternity.
April 17th, 2018 08:10
Death is indiscriminate
Lorna said:
I love your thoughts and clarity of this poem.... these lines are so true and people forget that it wasn\'t much fun showing up: \"We didn\'t enjoy coming into this world either
judging from all that bawling we did as newborns.\" Life can be hard - and maybe death will be much easier!
April 17th, 2018 07:00
Lorna said:
I love your thoughts and clarity of this poem.... these lines are so true and people forget that it wasn\'t much fun showing up: \"We didn\'t enjoy coming into this world either
judging from all that bawling we did as newborns.\" Life can be hard - and maybe death will be much easier!
April 17th, 2018 07:00
Death is indiscriminate
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Doesn\'t matter what you do in life, in the end you die anyway. Well said, and to the point. Very much agreed.
April 17th, 2018 06:46
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Doesn\'t matter what you do in life, in the end you die anyway. Well said, and to the point. Very much agreed.
April 17th, 2018 06:46
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