Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Death is indiscriminate
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In Christian eschatology the four last things are: Death, Judgment, Heaven, and Hell. Thank you for a fine write and one which calls each reader to ponder, once again, his or her own understanding of this inevitable reality.
April 18th, 2018 20:53
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In Christian eschatology the four last things are: Death, Judgment, Heaven, and Hell. Thank you for a fine write and one which calls each reader to ponder, once again, his or her own understanding of this inevitable reality.
April 18th, 2018 20:53
Death is indiscriminate
w c said:
A very nice poem. I\'ve heard it said that the only things guaranteed are death and taxes.
April 17th, 2018 15:26
w c said:
A very nice poem. I\'ve heard it said that the only things guaranteed are death and taxes.
April 17th, 2018 15:26
Death is indiscriminate
RiverJordan said:
Death of the flesh, energy flows on! Enjoyed the piece!
April 17th, 2018 14:36
RiverJordan said:
Death of the flesh, energy flows on! Enjoyed the piece!
April 17th, 2018 14:36
Death is indiscriminate
orchidee said:
A fine write zaynab. Yet death in Biblical terms is seen as an enemy.
April 17th, 2018 08:15
orchidee said:
A fine write zaynab. Yet death in Biblical terms is seen as an enemy.
April 17th, 2018 08:15
Death is indiscriminate
Goldfinch60 said:
Death in this human body is expected but I know that the Spirit that runs through my life will digital on to eternity.
April 17th, 2018 08:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Death in this human body is expected but I know that the Spirit that runs through my life will digital on to eternity.
April 17th, 2018 08:10
Death is indiscriminate
Lorna said:
I love your thoughts and clarity of this poem.... these lines are so true and people forget that it wasn\'t much fun showing up: \"We didn\'t enjoy coming into this world either
judging from all that bawling we did as newborns.\" Life can be hard - and maybe death will be much easier!
April 17th, 2018 07:00
Lorna said:
I love your thoughts and clarity of this poem.... these lines are so true and people forget that it wasn\'t much fun showing up: \"We didn\'t enjoy coming into this world either
judging from all that bawling we did as newborns.\" Life can be hard - and maybe death will be much easier!
April 17th, 2018 07:00
Death is indiscriminate
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Doesn\'t matter what you do in life, in the end you die anyway. Well said, and to the point. Very much agreed.
April 17th, 2018 06:46
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Doesn\'t matter what you do in life, in the end you die anyway. Well said, and to the point. Very much agreed.
April 17th, 2018 06:46
Play it on your lips
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely thoughts,made me smile
March 30th, 2018 23:41
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely thoughts,made me smile
March 30th, 2018 23:41
Play it on your lips
rrodriguez said:
This was really, really good. I\'m smiling now as I write. Thank you for this wonderful write.
February 25th, 2018 14:36
rrodriguez said:
This was really, really good. I\'m smiling now as I write. Thank you for this wonderful write.
February 25th, 2018 14:36
Play it on your lips
Jessie said:
Excellent write, I like the message of positivity.
January 15th, 2018 12:36
Jessie said:
Excellent write, I like the message of positivity.
January 15th, 2018 12:36
Play it on your lips
FineB said:
Thsnk you SZaynab a stunning vivid poem on the importance of a smile.
Very symbolic.
I enjoyed it. I need to smile more in life.
Keep writing in 2018
FineB
January 11th, 2018 11:18
FineB said:
Thsnk you SZaynab a stunning vivid poem on the importance of a smile.
Very symbolic.
I enjoyed it. I need to smile more in life.
Keep writing in 2018
FineB
January 11th, 2018 11:18
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Izzi Lynn said:
Lawless was right, this is a very cheerful poem. I like it a lot! You\'ve got a nice writing style!
January 11th, 2018 10:17
Izzi Lynn said:
Lawless was right, this is a very cheerful poem. I like it a lot! You\'ve got a nice writing style!
January 11th, 2018 10:17
Play it on your lips
Poetic Dan said:
First read of the year
The sign is clear
Your beautiful words
Have inspired me
If I feel thoses wrinkles
I\'ll think of this moment
And I\'ll know what to do
Remember it\'s right under my nose
Thank you
January 10th, 2018 12:48
Poetic Dan said:
First read of the year
The sign is clear
Your beautiful words
Have inspired me
If I feel thoses wrinkles
I\'ll think of this moment
And I\'ll know what to do
Remember it\'s right under my nose
Thank you
January 10th, 2018 12:48
Play it on your lips
lasergraph said:
This brought a smile to my face, an inspiration. If you see someone without a smile, give them yours.
January 10th, 2018 08:42
lasergraph said:
This brought a smile to my face, an inspiration. If you see someone without a smile, give them yours.
January 10th, 2018 08:42
Play it on your lips
Shakerite said:
A uplifting poem so inspiring. I\'ve been away after suffering depression lately and you have helped raise my blues .. Thanks Zaynab.
ps your daughter is a credit to.you .
Martyn
January 10th, 2018 05:36
Shakerite said:
A uplifting poem so inspiring. I\'ve been away after suffering depression lately and you have helped raise my blues .. Thanks Zaynab.
ps your daughter is a credit to.you .
Martyn
January 10th, 2018 05:36
My wee special guest
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i like to watch humming birds and luv birds
January 9th, 2018 16:52
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i like to watch humming birds and luv birds
January 9th, 2018 16:52
Mankind in Dreamland
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lol,sounds like a nice place to visit,dream land,,loved the images
January 9th, 2018 16:50
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lol,sounds like a nice place to visit,dream land,,loved the images
January 9th, 2018 16:50
Play it on your lips
ron parrish aka wordman said:
well it made me smile,and you are right,when you smile people wonder what you are thinking
January 9th, 2018 16:48
ron parrish aka wordman said:
well it made me smile,and you are right,when you smile people wonder what you are thinking
January 9th, 2018 16:48
Mankind in Dreamland
Gino said:
Wow, great write. Your truly talented and blessed such imagination. I truly loved your read and thanks for sharing.
November 30th, 2017 19:01
Gino said:
Wow, great write. Your truly talented and blessed such imagination. I truly loved your read and thanks for sharing.
November 30th, 2017 19:01
Mankind in Dreamland
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A fun read Kamoonpury - a poem of a horizon where everything is probable - the three-fold interpersonal dimension of the human soul (the numinous experience, the religious intuition, and conscience). I enjoyed your poem.
November 29th, 2017 23:58
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A fun read Kamoonpury - a poem of a horizon where everything is probable - the three-fold interpersonal dimension of the human soul (the numinous experience, the religious intuition, and conscience). I enjoyed your poem.
November 29th, 2017 23:58
Mankind in Dreamland
FineB said:
Thank you SZaynab.
What a beautiful poem, so magical, mysterious; awesome and mystical.
I love the colours that you wrote for the text it made your poem even more poignant and vivid
Keep writing
FineB
November 29th, 2017 15:44
FineB said:
Thank you SZaynab.
What a beautiful poem, so magical, mysterious; awesome and mystical.
I love the colours that you wrote for the text it made your poem even more poignant and vivid
Keep writing
FineB
November 29th, 2017 15:44
Mankind in Dreamland
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRIEND ~ Love your visual it stirs my memories of many vivid dreams in the last 30 years ! I started dreaming when I was about 4 ! I forget most of them ~ even the vivid ones ~ but for me most of my DREAMS are more NATURAL than FANTASTIC and relate to situations and scenery that is not unfamiliar ! I meet with people past & present and fictional ~ and some situations are scary but not really \"nightmares\" ! I have looked at interpretations ~ most are rational ~ but it is a big subject and for most of us a \"closed book\" ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
November 29th, 2017 13:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRIEND ~ Love your visual it stirs my memories of many vivid dreams in the last 30 years ! I started dreaming when I was about 4 ! I forget most of them ~ even the vivid ones ~ but for me most of my DREAMS are more NATURAL than FANTASTIC and relate to situations and scenery that is not unfamiliar ! I meet with people past & present and fictional ~ and some situations are scary but not really \"nightmares\" ! I have looked at interpretations ~ most are rational ~ but it is a big subject and for most of us a \"closed book\" ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
November 29th, 2017 13:42
Mankind in Dreamland
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Nice 1! Amazing poetic skill!
November 29th, 2017 12:38
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Nice 1! Amazing poetic skill!
November 29th, 2017 12:38
Mankind in Dreamland
elliechanner said:
Dreams really are complex things, but you described them perfectly. Loved the poem!
November 29th, 2017 12:26
elliechanner said:
Dreams really are complex things, but you described them perfectly. Loved the poem!
November 29th, 2017 12:26
My wee special guest
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love the nature of the people, so lively and warm and full of energy.
Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
November 29th, 2017 06:44
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love the nature of the people, so lively and warm and full of energy.
Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
November 29th, 2017 06:44
Mankind in Dreamland
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love this, perfectly worded. I love how you take you us on a journey of your dream. Very well put togather.
Thanks for sharing such a good write.
November 29th, 2017 06:42
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love this, perfectly worded. I love how you take you us on a journey of your dream. Very well put togather.
Thanks for sharing such a good write.
November 29th, 2017 06:42
Mankind in Dreamland
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, our dreams can send us into many differing worlds both real and unreal.
November 29th, 2017 04:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, our dreams can send us into many differing worlds both real and unreal.
November 29th, 2017 04:14
Mankind in Dreamland
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Cuckoo land eh, yeah true. Love your comment. Warm thanx.
November 29th, 2017 03:46
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Cuckoo land eh, yeah true. Love your comment. Warm thanx.
November 29th, 2017 03:46
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