Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Ode to the snail
Fay Slimm. said:
A miracle wrapped in an awesome shell is paid special tribute in your interesting posting dear Zaynab-- we may never know the benefits of creatures like snails and why their colouring differs - thank you for sharing their prettiness with us.
November 9th, 2020 11:29
Fay Slimm. said:
A miracle wrapped in an awesome shell is paid special tribute in your interesting posting dear Zaynab-- we may never know the benefits of creatures like snails and why their colouring differs - thank you for sharing their prettiness with us.
November 9th, 2020 11:29
Ode to the snail
AwHec8 said:
Yep a Great Write there s.zaynab.kamoonpuri!
We all have a part to play in this here world and orchidee Thank You for putting me back on a safe Path, so to speak. 🤣 Don
November 9th, 2020 10:54
AwHec8 said:
Yep a Great Write there s.zaynab.kamoonpuri!
We all have a part to play in this here world and orchidee Thank You for putting me back on a safe Path, so to speak. 🤣 Don
November 9th, 2020 10:54
Ode to the snail
orchidee said:
Yes, I like snails too. I will save them if I see them on paths in damp weather, and move them to the grass. Well, crossing a path for a snail must be like humans trying to cross a motorway.
November 9th, 2020 10:21
orchidee said:
Yes, I like snails too. I will save them if I see them on paths in damp weather, and move them to the grass. Well, crossing a path for a snail must be like humans trying to cross a motorway.
November 9th, 2020 10:21
Water is life and seems alive
MrNobody40 said:
Very beautiful. Water is so important, so versatile. Maybe some day we will figure this out before it is too late
September 12th, 2020 14:15
MrNobody40 said:
Very beautiful. Water is so important, so versatile. Maybe some day we will figure this out before it is too late
September 12th, 2020 14:15
Water is life and seems alive
Aleem Nasir said:
I hate water splashing around your poem🤧🤧 it makes my clothes all wet😁
September 12th, 2020 14:09
Aleem Nasir said:
I hate water splashing around your poem🤧🤧 it makes my clothes all wet😁
September 12th, 2020 14:09
Water is life and seems alive
Neville said:
It seems you have got this most precious of commodities off to a fine art ... a very enjoyable and comprehensive post indeed ...
September 12th, 2020 04:04
Neville said:
It seems you have got this most precious of commodities off to a fine art ... a very enjoyable and comprehensive post indeed ...
September 12th, 2020 04:04
Water is life and seems alive
jarcher54 said:
Very liquid as others have observed... I had to smile at the blue highlighting... nice touch. The repetition of -ing is very smart, giving a sense of speed. Swirling is much more active than swirl. At the end I felt like I had been carried along in a rushing stream!
September 12th, 2020 01:48
jarcher54 said:
Very liquid as others have observed... I had to smile at the blue highlighting... nice touch. The repetition of -ing is very smart, giving a sense of speed. Swirling is much more active than swirl. At the end I felt like I had been carried along in a rushing stream!
September 12th, 2020 01:48
Water is life and seems alive
MelissaJA said:
Love the flow of this! Its very well written
September 11th, 2020 23:06
MelissaJA said:
Love the flow of this! Its very well written
September 11th, 2020 23:06
Water is life and seems alive
Dove said:
My liquid gift to you a single tear!
Excellent write! You Just about captured
Water stirring every where! Nice format
As well!!!
September 11th, 2020 21:53
Dove said:
My liquid gift to you a single tear!
Excellent write! You Just about captured
Water stirring every where! Nice format
As well!!!
September 11th, 2020 21:53
Water is life and seems alive
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely imagery of the movement and critters living everyday lives,i liked it
September 11th, 2020 13:11
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely imagery of the movement and critters living everyday lives,i liked it
September 11th, 2020 13:11
Water is life and seems alive
AwHec8 said:
Very Great Write there s.zaynab.kamoonpuri. Don
Please forgive me if this sounds too lighthearted but this Poem immediately caused me to think of a quote from the Movie Dune
\"the water of Life\"
Which really is quite deep if you think about it, just like your words of wisdom here!
September 11th, 2020 07:39
AwHec8 said:
Very Great Write there s.zaynab.kamoonpuri. Don
Please forgive me if this sounds too lighthearted but this Poem immediately caused me to think of a quote from the Movie Dune
\"the water of Life\"
Which really is quite deep if you think about it, just like your words of wisdom here!
September 11th, 2020 07:39
When life was really child\'s play
FineB said:
Hi szaynab,
The innocence of childhood.
I am glad I grew up when I did.
Being a child now is tough.
A wonderful unforgettable poem.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
September 11th, 2020 04:47
FineB said:
Hi szaynab,
The innocence of childhood.
I am glad I grew up when I did.
Being a child now is tough.
A wonderful unforgettable poem.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
September 11th, 2020 04:47
The better Gems
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully written, imbued with so much passion and packed with creative metaphors
September 11th, 2020 03:00
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully written, imbued with so much passion and packed with creative metaphors
September 11th, 2020 03:00
Water is life and seems alive
orchidee said:
Good write, and erm, yes, all what Brian & Angela said. It\'s true you know, though I don\'t know all the scientific explanations myself!
September 11th, 2020 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write, and erm, yes, all what Brian & Angela said. It\'s true you know, though I don\'t know all the scientific explanations myself!
September 11th, 2020 01:53
Water is life and seems alive
Trenz Pruca said:
I liked the rhythm, movement, and sensibility. Keep it up.
September 11th, 2020 01:15
Trenz Pruca said:
I liked the rhythm, movement, and sensibility. Keep it up.
September 11th, 2020 01:15
Water is life and seems alive
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture the movement of water so well with your tempo and style - a wonderful look at the gift water is to the wide world of culture and how we should measure its value as precious to life. Full marks for such an engaging read.
September 10th, 2020 15:58
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture the movement of water so well with your tempo and style - a wonderful look at the gift water is to the wide world of culture and how we should measure its value as precious to life. Full marks for such an engaging read.
September 10th, 2020 15:58
Water is life and seems alive
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening Friend ! The FOUR main things that make the Earth *The only Living Planet in the Solar System* are Fertile Soil ~ 21% Oxygen in the Atmosphere ~ an abundance of Liquid Water & an average temperature of 16C (= 61F) These four factors support the lives of the thousands of species of Flora & Fauna living in equilibrium on Planet Earth. Our two Neighbours in Space VENUS & MARS are lifeless & barren ! Molecules of WATER (H2O) are too big to escape the Earths Gravity so the Amount of Water on Earth remains CONSTANT and cycles round the Earth in the WATER CYCLE. It is a Good Servant - as you say - and we use millions of gallons every day - In the Home - Industry - Agriculture and for Transport & Recreation. Without Water there could be NO LIFE on EARTH. But it is a BAD MASTER ! If it gets out of control it causes Flooding & Coastal Erosion Global Warming is causing the Ice Caps to melt & Sea Level to raise. We all enjoy water but need to keep an Eye on it. Thnaks for Sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN & SMOKEY CAT ! ! !
September 10th, 2020 14:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening Friend ! The FOUR main things that make the Earth *The only Living Planet in the Solar System* are Fertile Soil ~ 21% Oxygen in the Atmosphere ~ an abundance of Liquid Water & an average temperature of 16C (= 61F) These four factors support the lives of the thousands of species of Flora & Fauna living in equilibrium on Planet Earth. Our two Neighbours in Space VENUS & MARS are lifeless & barren ! Molecules of WATER (H2O) are too big to escape the Earths Gravity so the Amount of Water on Earth remains CONSTANT and cycles round the Earth in the WATER CYCLE. It is a Good Servant - as you say - and we use millions of gallons every day - In the Home - Industry - Agriculture and for Transport & Recreation. Without Water there could be NO LIFE on EARTH. But it is a BAD MASTER ! If it gets out of control it causes Flooding & Coastal Erosion Global Warming is causing the Ice Caps to melt & Sea Level to raise. We all enjoy water but need to keep an Eye on it. Thnaks for Sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN & SMOKEY CAT ! ! !
September 10th, 2020 14:47
Rhymester muses
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for us and the love of birds will fly you towards that light.
Andy
July 8th, 2020 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for us and the love of birds will fly you towards that light.
Andy
July 8th, 2020 00:29
Rhymester muses
PoeticBiscuit said:
A lovely little poem that makes you feel as if you’re flying along with the birds. With a good little thought at the end. Very well done.
July 7th, 2020 10:43
PoeticBiscuit said:
A lovely little poem that makes you feel as if you’re flying along with the birds. With a good little thought at the end. Very well done.
July 7th, 2020 10:43
Rhymester muses
Michael Edwards said:
You have a refreshing style all of your own which comes across so well in this superb write - great work.
July 7th, 2020 09:10
Michael Edwards said:
You have a refreshing style all of your own which comes across so well in this superb write - great work.
July 7th, 2020 09:10
Rhymester muses
AwHec8 said:
Wow! I Love it, the write, the rhythm and rhyme, the pictures to go with, the way you used editing tools to write it in almost cursive and to put a nice background hue. Don
So you copyright your poems?
July 7th, 2020 06:08
AwHec8 said:
Wow! I Love it, the write, the rhythm and rhyme, the pictures to go with, the way you used editing tools to write it in almost cursive and to put a nice background hue. Don
So you copyright your poems?
July 7th, 2020 06:08
Rhymester muses
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD MORNING BROTHER ! Thanks for you uplifting Muse ~ Poetically & Spiritually on this sunny Essex Morning ! The Scriptures exhort us to Consider & Conserve the Birds of the Air ~ Birdwatching & Pictures of Birds always stir my MUSE ! Please check *PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILITY* Thanks.
Love - Peace - Joy to You & Yours
Brian - Angela & Smokey Cat ~ AMEN !
July 7th, 2020 04:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD MORNING BROTHER ! Thanks for you uplifting Muse ~ Poetically & Spiritually on this sunny Essex Morning ! The Scriptures exhort us to Consider & Conserve the Birds of the Air ~ Birdwatching & Pictures of Birds always stir my MUSE ! Please check *PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILITY* Thanks.
Love - Peace - Joy to You & Yours
Brian - Angela & Smokey Cat ~ AMEN !
July 7th, 2020 04:29
The corona catastrophe
jarcher54 said:
I\'m with dusk on the praying thing but I respect you trying to make sense of it all. Whether it\'s God or Mother Nature, the pandemic does render us humble and literally to our knees. My favorite comment on praying is from the lyrics to \"Tom Ames\' Prayer\" by Robert Earl Keen:
… And you know I ain\'t never prayed before
cause it always seemed to me
that prayin\'s the same as beggin\' Lord
I don\'t take no charity
But right now I\'d take some divine charity if not for me for so many others.
It is frightening when there is \"nil a pill.\" Well said!
July 2nd, 2020 06:36
jarcher54 said:
I\'m with dusk on the praying thing but I respect you trying to make sense of it all. Whether it\'s God or Mother Nature, the pandemic does render us humble and literally to our knees. My favorite comment on praying is from the lyrics to \"Tom Ames\' Prayer\" by Robert Earl Keen:
… And you know I ain\'t never prayed before
cause it always seemed to me
that prayin\'s the same as beggin\' Lord
I don\'t take no charity
But right now I\'d take some divine charity if not for me for so many others.
It is frightening when there is \"nil a pill.\" Well said!
July 2nd, 2020 06:36
The corona catastrophe
Bragee said:
No better place to put hope and faith than in prayer.
Science and politics have failed us in an area we should have never trusted them in.
May 16th, 2020 11:21
Bragee said:
No better place to put hope and faith than in prayer.
Science and politics have failed us in an area we should have never trusted them in.
May 16th, 2020 11:21
The corona catastrophe
Poetic Dan said:
I love your spirit but mine will never sit by a window sill.... We are souls with this organism as a body, so complex we are still yet to understand it! If we was ever ment to at all! As all life on this planet is in harmony but humans, although we are the smartest most eloquent thing on this planet, if we so choose to be....
Thanks for this inspiring me to write another and post one I\'ve been a bit hesitate too.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
May 13th, 2020 01:35
Poetic Dan said:
I love your spirit but mine will never sit by a window sill.... We are souls with this organism as a body, so complex we are still yet to understand it! If we was ever ment to at all! As all life on this planet is in harmony but humans, although we are the smartest most eloquent thing on this planet, if we so choose to be....
Thanks for this inspiring me to write another and post one I\'ve been a bit hesitate too.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
May 13th, 2020 01:35
The corona catastrophe
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
An excellent write, so deep, poignant and it captures brilliantly the ravages of Covid 19 and its devastating effects worldwide.
God is in control and hopefully his timing will come soon when there is a cure.
Keep fit, healthy, well and safe and writing.
FineB
May 9th, 2020 08:39
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
An excellent write, so deep, poignant and it captures brilliantly the ravages of Covid 19 and its devastating effects worldwide.
God is in control and hopefully his timing will come soon when there is a cure.
Keep fit, healthy, well and safe and writing.
FineB
May 9th, 2020 08:39
The corona catastrophe
myself and me said:
Pandemic is a world tragedy. I am not sure that it will be exterminated. We might better learn to live with it. Well done.
May 8th, 2020 23:13
myself and me said:
Pandemic is a world tragedy. I am not sure that it will be exterminated. We might better learn to live with it. Well done.
May 8th, 2020 23:13
The corona catastrophe
rew4er2nail said:
honorable to be privy reading poetic resonance stoked courtesy coronavirus (COVID-19) well nigh said organism a household name, and inexplicable death sentence no matter age, gender, orientation (sexual)...
plus laudatory to commend those first responders, whose every life and limb risked in a valiant attempt to eradicate those unfortunate persons afflicted with mutating cellular nemesis.
May 8th, 2020 21:37
rew4er2nail said:
honorable to be privy reading poetic resonance stoked courtesy coronavirus (COVID-19) well nigh said organism a household name, and inexplicable death sentence no matter age, gender, orientation (sexual)...
plus laudatory to commend those first responders, whose every life and limb risked in a valiant attempt to eradicate those unfortunate persons afflicted with mutating cellular nemesis.
May 8th, 2020 21:37
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