Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸



WITCHDOCTORS!
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - power used badly ends often in sadness for those who need most a healing of ills - - a compelling read where warnings exposed chemicals in most pharmaceuticals.

January 28th, 2019 18:08

WITCHDOCTORS!
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great write deep mysterious subject matter
keep the coming Zaynab

January 28th, 2019 16:17

WITCHDOCTORS!
dusk arising said:

Thats a good fun storyline. Light hearted but poignant.
Made me think of the con men in religion too.

January 28th, 2019 14:24

WITCHDOCTORS!
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, unfortunately those witch doctors can nowadays be heavily disguised.

January 28th, 2019 10:10

WITCHDOCTORS!
Michael Edwards said:

I found it a little difficult to read with the dark background but that didn\'t stop me from enjoying it. Super tale refreshingly written.

January 28th, 2019 09:39

The rise and fall of life\'s notes
Syd said:

Great poem S. Always a pleasure to read your poems. I couldn\'t agree more with the message of this poem. Very well penned.

- Syd

December 7th, 2018 11:26

The rise and fall of life\'s notes
ron parrish aka wordman said:

just ride till you can`t ride no more

December 6th, 2018 22:32

The rise and fall of life\'s notes
w c said:

I enjoyed this poem. Life is a many splended thing and we are lucky to have it.

December 6th, 2018 19:37

The rise and fall of life\'s notes
Theta the scholar said:

What a wonderful and true aspect in life. Keep up the splendid work I look forward to meeting any new poems you write. But I\'m wondering is why aren\'t my legs toned since i\'ve had so many squats in life

December 6th, 2018 11:24

The rise and fall of life\'s notes
Neville said:

an undulating journey of ups and maybe not so downs... reminds me a little of the principle of the unity of opposites... nice flow and easy to follow but I did find the background colour just a little distracting..... Neville

December 6th, 2018 10:27

The rise and fall of life\'s notes
IsraaD said:

Very very beautiful poem. I loved reading the hidden messages you put in there! Great job!

December 6th, 2018 09:56

The rise and fall of life\'s notes
orchidee said:

A fine write Z.

December 6th, 2018 09:06

The rise and fall of life\'s notes
sylviasearcher said:

An uplifting piece encouraging growth.

Ibekndered why you chose to have the words behind green. My brain processed it all more slowly I think.

December 6th, 2018 07:59

O\' human heart
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

This is very well written.the heart idea is not a myth.it is a fact.there is a major chakra situated there.not to mention, our emotions greatly affect the heart and its functions

November 26th, 2018 04:47

Llama Drama
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Llamas are wonderfully made creatures; praise God the Creator! And you; the creator of this piece; laboring with the words, plying with the numbering of syllables- eyes fastened to your interesting subject - make them accessible to audiences thousands of miles away - in pictures and in poetry. Fascinating!

September 15th, 2018 14:32

Llama Drama
Michael Edwards said:

Great fun write - we need more like this on here - it can be a very somber site at times - great read.

September 7th, 2018 00:55

Llama Drama
Fay Slimm. said:

So funny and very attractive the llamas I know in Cornwall have just the same haircuts -ha ha - you worded a smile-raising read which I had to read over again and those pics. made me giggle too. Must save this one to my favs.

September 6th, 2018 15:02

Llama Drama
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW SISTER ! Love the photos and the Llama Tribute. Yes indeaed they are funny and they seem happy. We don\'t have many Camels in England (One HUMP or two ?} but we do have lots of LLAMAS. We often have them in Children\'s PARKS & FARMS becaus they look non-threatening and can tollerate light stroking. Their wool is nice as is ALPACA ! I South America (Peru etc) I have seen them used as working animals carrying loads etc. How do they use them in TANZANIA ? Do they eat the Meat. When we visited South Africa we ate a lot of different MEAT in the Hotel ~ Impala ~ Zebu ~ Zebra ~ Ostrich etc all delicious and in Peru they eat GUINEA PIGS ! Thanks for love ly POEM \'n PICS. Please check our FUSION on SEASONS. Its AUTUMN here (UK) and SPRING in NEW ZEALAND where ANGELA is on a work exchange ! Yours BRIAN 😎 and ANGELA 🧡

September 6th, 2018 12:52

Llama Drama
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write, llamas are very strange creatures.

September 6th, 2018 07:50

Llama Drama
Lorna said:

Chuckles indeed! I have a friend who owned llamas and pigmy goats and she had to sell the llamas because the vet said they were being dangerously stressed out by the little goats........having nervous breakdowns......... funny !

September 6th, 2018 07:08

O\' human heart
Izzi Lynn said:

Awww, I love it! The style is so interesting and I love reading it.

July 15th, 2018 18:15

O\' human heart
Syd said:

A great poem. A beautiful heartfelt piece.

- Syd

July 13th, 2018 12:46

O\' human heart
livsxxxx said:

Wow. Clever write. Really enjoyed reading this poem.👍🏽

July 13th, 2018 03:18

O\' human heart
orchidee said:

A fine write Z. I understand the physical heart, and it being the seat of the emotions, as the \'centre\' of us. Well, our heart is placed centrally in us.
And - oohh - write a poem every day if you wish. This site allows one per day. Some sites allow more per day, but then we would never get time to read them all.
Don\'t be shy of it, if you\'ve got poems there - past or present ones!


July 13th, 2018 02:09

O\' human heart
w c said:

A beautiful poem. My favorite part is: \"but in the end forget not to reserve at least a single chamber for its Creator.\"

July 12th, 2018 19:11

O\' human heart
ron parrish aka wordman said:

beautiful tribute to God,,loved it

July 12th, 2018 18:07

O\' human heart
Poetic Dan said:

Loved the energy of this, thank you for sharing.

July 12th, 2018 17:05

O\' human heart
dusk arising said:

A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our blood around, all the other stuff is in our brain, our personality and memory. I dont know how this idea of the heart myth got started but we do all use the expressions \'with all my heart\' and \'heartbroken\' don\'t we.

July 12th, 2018 15:27

O\' human heart
dusk arising said:

A fun write. The heart of course doesn\'t do anything except pump our blood around, all the other stuff is in our brain, our personality and memory. I dont know how this idea of the heart myth got started but we do all use the expressions \'with all my heart\' and \'heartbroken\' don\'t we.

July 12th, 2018 15:21

O\' human heart
Edthepoet said:

This is beautiful work. Especially \'A mere four chambers, indeed, but spacious are
they, Invite therein, whomsoever in the
world you may\'. If Biffy Clyro wrote poems they would sound like this.

July 12th, 2018 12:50

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