Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
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AlitaOpal said:
Beautiful work of art..
You painted an amazing picture with your words.. For a moment I was there 🌳🌾🍂🐺🕷🐻
November 14th, 2016 09:19
AlitaOpal said:
Beautiful work of art..
You painted an amazing picture with your words.. For a moment I was there 🌳🌾🍂🐺🕷🐻
November 14th, 2016 09:19
Thoughts on turning 36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
36 SWEETHEART ~ Like me (33) you are only ONE THIRD through your life ! Lots more rivers to cross ~ lots more mountains to climb ~ lots more experiences of Life & love to enjoy ! Love your peom ~ the highs and the lows ~ Love and Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 14th, 2016 08:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
36 SWEETHEART ~ Like me (33) you are only ONE THIRD through your life ! Lots more rivers to cross ~ lots more mountains to climb ~ lots more experiences of Life & love to enjoy ! Love your peom ~ the highs and the lows ~ Love and Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 14th, 2016 08:29
Thoughts on turning 36
ron parrish aka wordman said:
loved the write,loved the format
welcome to the site
November 13th, 2016 23:53
ron parrish aka wordman said:
loved the write,loved the format
welcome to the site
November 13th, 2016 23:53
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Melody said:
I so love your take on nature all through out your poem, prairies dogs and cactus paint such a vivid memory of the American desert and plains, such a gentle, vivid poem filled with amazing imagery...Bravo my friend! Mel
November 5th, 2016 15:33
Melody said:
I so love your take on nature all through out your poem, prairies dogs and cactus paint such a vivid memory of the American desert and plains, such a gentle, vivid poem filled with amazing imagery...Bravo my friend! Mel
November 5th, 2016 15:33
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Kurt Philip Behm said:
Beautiful picture with corresponding words. (Some new to me :)
Kurt
November 5th, 2016 10:13
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Beautiful picture with corresponding words. (Some new to me :)
Kurt
November 5th, 2016 10:13
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The 2 A.M Writer said:
I like the mental picture i get from this photo, gives me a warm feeling. I feel like they words almost have a trippy, kinda indie rock feel to them. Good write!
November 4th, 2016 13:50
The 2 A.M Writer said:
I like the mental picture i get from this photo, gives me a warm feeling. I feel like they words almost have a trippy, kinda indie rock feel to them. Good write!
November 4th, 2016 13:50
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sincerelyallee said:
good poem! definitely paints a picture.
November 4th, 2016 10:42
sincerelyallee said:
good poem! definitely paints a picture.
November 4th, 2016 10:42
Suicide is NOT the Solution
WildMoonChild said:
Powerful and thought provoking!
November 4th, 2016 03:08
WildMoonChild said:
Powerful and thought provoking!
November 4th, 2016 03:08
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much for comment. I tink we would be granted wings in heaven.
November 4th, 2016 02:44
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much for comment. I tink we would be granted wings in heaven.
November 4th, 2016 02:44
Suicide is NOT the Solution
sonicpoet said:
I liked this . As someone who suffers from depression and went through a hospital stay for suicidal behavior, I can say that many feeling of suicide can come from wanting the pain to end more than anything else. Yes there are those hoping to hurt others when they do it but situations are so different and depression is such an ugly monster that for some suicide really is the only way out that they see. Such is the power and fatality of depression which is why its the sickness it is. I enjoyed reading this.
November 3rd, 2016 15:25
sonicpoet said:
I liked this . As someone who suffers from depression and went through a hospital stay for suicidal behavior, I can say that many feeling of suicide can come from wanting the pain to end more than anything else. Yes there are those hoping to hurt others when they do it but situations are so different and depression is such an ugly monster that for some suicide really is the only way out that they see. Such is the power and fatality of depression which is why its the sickness it is. I enjoyed reading this.
November 3rd, 2016 15:25
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
Vic E said:
Wings have been man\'s wish or desire from the dawn of time. Maybe we just want to be like angels. Most of our superheroes can fly, from Superman to Ironman! Who knows, maybe in a million years we\'d evolve into winged creatures. :) Nice poem!
November 3rd, 2016 10:26
Vic E said:
Wings have been man\'s wish or desire from the dawn of time. Maybe we just want to be like angels. Most of our superheroes can fly, from Superman to Ironman! Who knows, maybe in a million years we\'d evolve into winged creatures. :) Nice poem!
November 3rd, 2016 10:26
Suicide is NOT the Solution
paddy68 said:
Definitely thought provoking. Not sure of its beat so stuttered through. To be honest I only do rhyming and entered.
November 3rd, 2016 06:03
paddy68 said:
Definitely thought provoking. Not sure of its beat so stuttered through. To be honest I only do rhyming and entered.
November 3rd, 2016 06:03
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nicolerobinson said:
Actually amsuing. Keep the poetry up.
November 3rd, 2016 04:27
nicolerobinson said:
Actually amsuing. Keep the poetry up.
November 3rd, 2016 04:27
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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much for the review.
November 3rd, 2016 02:57
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much for the review.
November 3rd, 2016 02:57
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
kevin browne said:
swollows built their nest, chaffinch sing, and the sun strolls into town like a long lost king..love your work. it\'s a great write..x.
November 2nd, 2016 05:00
kevin browne said:
swollows built their nest, chaffinch sing, and the sun strolls into town like a long lost king..love your work. it\'s a great write..x.
November 2nd, 2016 05:00
Suicide is NOT the Solution
Liam Lawless said:
Amazing work, I love the ending of the second stanza, It was very dramatic.
October 31st, 2016 03:04
Liam Lawless said:
Amazing work, I love the ending of the second stanza, It was very dramatic.
October 31st, 2016 03:04
Suicide is NOT the Solution
willyweed said:
a good message for those in distress. I can\'t imagine the good of that. nice work ww
October 30th, 2016 16:28
willyweed said:
a good message for those in distress. I can\'t imagine the good of that. nice work ww
October 30th, 2016 16:28
Suicide is NOT the Solution
My Dark Nature said:
I thank you for creating such a great spiritual poem. i have a friend I know this poem would help.
October 30th, 2016 15:51
My Dark Nature said:
I thank you for creating such a great spiritual poem. i have a friend I know this poem would help.
October 30th, 2016 15:51
Suicide is NOT the Solution
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much. Those who hope in God are good folks usually. Cheers.
October 30th, 2016 11:34
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much. Those who hope in God are good folks usually. Cheers.
October 30th, 2016 11:34
Suicide is NOT the Solution
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much poet.
October 30th, 2016 08:44
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much poet.
October 30th, 2016 08:44
Suicide is NOT the Solution
magno1988 said:
Very good insight!!! I feel like these options people may think when contemplating this act!
October 30th, 2016 08:39
magno1988 said:
Very good insight!!! I feel like these options people may think when contemplating this act!
October 30th, 2016 08:39
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem, although I \'m unfamiliar with a jackdaw. Hmm. I like it when your poem rhymes. But wouldn\'t it be lovely to fly? Lovely poem you have here!
October 26th, 2016 11:52
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem, although I \'m unfamiliar with a jackdaw. Hmm. I like it when your poem rhymes. But wouldn\'t it be lovely to fly? Lovely poem you have here!
October 26th, 2016 11:52
The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm
Reivax Camlost said:
Lots of good imagery; I could see a great hall, filled with the men and women of the king\'s court. It drew me in.
I also agree with your take on it-
I\'d rather be a poet for a king than a king who ruled over poets.
October 26th, 2016 07:10
Reivax Camlost said:
Lots of good imagery; I could see a great hall, filled with the men and women of the king\'s court. It drew me in.
I also agree with your take on it-
I\'d rather be a poet for a king than a king who ruled over poets.
October 26th, 2016 07:10
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ZAYNAB (love all your names !) Or would you rather b a FISH ! H. Sapiens lives in the 2 Dimensional lithosphere while BIRDS live in a 3D atmosphere and FISH in the 3D hydrosphere. We envy these creatures their extra degree of freedom. We can build submarines and jet planes but we ALWAYS hae to return to Terra Firma ! Even if we poppulatr MARS we will still be rooted to MARSA FIRMA . Thanks for a well penned poem replete with rhyme & rhythm ! I found the subject nostalgic ans challenging ! O FOR THE WINGS ~ FOR THE WINGS OF A DOVE ......... ! Yours BRIAN
October 26th, 2016 03:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ZAYNAB (love all your names !) Or would you rather b a FISH ! H. Sapiens lives in the 2 Dimensional lithosphere while BIRDS live in a 3D atmosphere and FISH in the 3D hydrosphere. We envy these creatures their extra degree of freedom. We can build submarines and jet planes but we ALWAYS hae to return to Terra Firma ! Even if we poppulatr MARS we will still be rooted to MARSA FIRMA . Thanks for a well penned poem replete with rhyme & rhythm ! I found the subject nostalgic ans challenging ! O FOR THE WINGS ~ FOR THE WINGS OF A DOVE ......... ! Yours BRIAN
October 26th, 2016 03:58
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
SilentLaugh said:
This is great! OMG! I think that rhyming really adds to the beuty of the poem. Keep up the good work!
October 25th, 2016 15:24
SilentLaugh said:
This is great! OMG! I think that rhyming really adds to the beuty of the poem. Keep up the good work!
October 25th, 2016 15:24
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