Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
Vic E said:
Wings have been man\'s wish or desire from the dawn of time. Maybe we just want to be like angels. Most of our superheroes can fly, from Superman to Ironman! Who knows, maybe in a million years we\'d evolve into winged creatures. :) Nice poem!
November 3rd, 2016 10:26
Vic E said:
Wings have been man\'s wish or desire from the dawn of time. Maybe we just want to be like angels. Most of our superheroes can fly, from Superman to Ironman! Who knows, maybe in a million years we\'d evolve into winged creatures. :) Nice poem!
November 3rd, 2016 10:26
Suicide is NOT the Solution
paddy68 said:
Definitely thought provoking. Not sure of its beat so stuttered through. To be honest I only do rhyming and entered.
November 3rd, 2016 06:03
paddy68 said:
Definitely thought provoking. Not sure of its beat so stuttered through. To be honest I only do rhyming and entered.
November 3rd, 2016 06:03
SCENERY MEDLEY CONTRASTS
nicolerobinson said:
Actually amsuing. Keep the poetry up.
November 3rd, 2016 04:27
nicolerobinson said:
Actually amsuing. Keep the poetry up.
November 3rd, 2016 04:27
SCENERY MEDLEY CONTRASTS
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much for the review.
November 3rd, 2016 02:57
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much for the review.
November 3rd, 2016 02:57
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
kevin browne said:
swollows built their nest, chaffinch sing, and the sun strolls into town like a long lost king..love your work. it\'s a great write..x.
November 2nd, 2016 05:00
kevin browne said:
swollows built their nest, chaffinch sing, and the sun strolls into town like a long lost king..love your work. it\'s a great write..x.
November 2nd, 2016 05:00
Suicide is NOT the Solution
Liam Lawless said:
Amazing work, I love the ending of the second stanza, It was very dramatic.
October 31st, 2016 03:04
Liam Lawless said:
Amazing work, I love the ending of the second stanza, It was very dramatic.
October 31st, 2016 03:04
Suicide is NOT the Solution
willyweed said:
a good message for those in distress. I can\'t imagine the good of that. nice work ww
October 30th, 2016 16:28
willyweed said:
a good message for those in distress. I can\'t imagine the good of that. nice work ww
October 30th, 2016 16:28
Suicide is NOT the Solution
My Dark Nature said:
I thank you for creating such a great spiritual poem. i have a friend I know this poem would help.
October 30th, 2016 15:51
My Dark Nature said:
I thank you for creating such a great spiritual poem. i have a friend I know this poem would help.
October 30th, 2016 15:51
Suicide is NOT the Solution
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much. Those who hope in God are good folks usually. Cheers.
October 30th, 2016 11:34
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much. Those who hope in God are good folks usually. Cheers.
October 30th, 2016 11:34
Suicide is NOT the Solution
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much poet.
October 30th, 2016 08:44
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Thanx soo much poet.
October 30th, 2016 08:44
Suicide is NOT the Solution
magno1988 said:
Very good insight!!! I feel like these options people may think when contemplating this act!
October 30th, 2016 08:39
magno1988 said:
Very good insight!!! I feel like these options people may think when contemplating this act!
October 30th, 2016 08:39
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem, although I \'m unfamiliar with a jackdaw. Hmm. I like it when your poem rhymes. But wouldn\'t it be lovely to fly? Lovely poem you have here!
October 26th, 2016 11:52
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem, although I \'m unfamiliar with a jackdaw. Hmm. I like it when your poem rhymes. But wouldn\'t it be lovely to fly? Lovely poem you have here!
October 26th, 2016 11:52
The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm
Reivax Camlost said:
Lots of good imagery; I could see a great hall, filled with the men and women of the king\'s court. It drew me in.
I also agree with your take on it-
I\'d rather be a poet for a king than a king who ruled over poets.
October 26th, 2016 07:10
Reivax Camlost said:
Lots of good imagery; I could see a great hall, filled with the men and women of the king\'s court. It drew me in.
I also agree with your take on it-
I\'d rather be a poet for a king than a king who ruled over poets.
October 26th, 2016 07:10
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ZAYNAB (love all your names !) Or would you rather b a FISH ! H. Sapiens lives in the 2 Dimensional lithosphere while BIRDS live in a 3D atmosphere and FISH in the 3D hydrosphere. We envy these creatures their extra degree of freedom. We can build submarines and jet planes but we ALWAYS hae to return to Terra Firma ! Even if we poppulatr MARS we will still be rooted to MARSA FIRMA . Thanks for a well penned poem replete with rhyme & rhythm ! I found the subject nostalgic ans challenging ! O FOR THE WINGS ~ FOR THE WINGS OF A DOVE ......... ! Yours BRIAN
October 26th, 2016 03:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ZAYNAB (love all your names !) Or would you rather b a FISH ! H. Sapiens lives in the 2 Dimensional lithosphere while BIRDS live in a 3D atmosphere and FISH in the 3D hydrosphere. We envy these creatures their extra degree of freedom. We can build submarines and jet planes but we ALWAYS hae to return to Terra Firma ! Even if we poppulatr MARS we will still be rooted to MARSA FIRMA . Thanks for a well penned poem replete with rhyme & rhythm ! I found the subject nostalgic ans challenging ! O FOR THE WINGS ~ FOR THE WINGS OF A DOVE ......... ! Yours BRIAN
October 26th, 2016 03:58
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
SilentLaugh said:
This is great! OMG! I think that rhyming really adds to the beuty of the poem. Keep up the good work!
October 25th, 2016 15:24
SilentLaugh said:
This is great! OMG! I think that rhyming really adds to the beuty of the poem. Keep up the good work!
October 25th, 2016 15:24
The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm
Wolf2778 said:
Bro...awsome...just awsome... Nice writeing stlye i enjoyed it alot👍👍👍👍
October 24th, 2016 01:58
Wolf2778 said:
Bro...awsome...just awsome... Nice writeing stlye i enjoyed it alot👍👍👍👍
October 24th, 2016 01:58
The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm
BSmooth said:
Great work and keep them coming. Truly a great write
October 23rd, 2016 09:47
BSmooth said:
Great work and keep them coming. Truly a great write
October 23rd, 2016 09:47
The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm
Augustus said:
SZW: I must apologize. I took one look at the bold, large, black print and did not read your poem. I missed a treasure.I am glad I came back to it. I can understand how you feel about the privileged class. I feel that way about politicians in the USA. I have always felt attracted to and most comfortable with the creative folk. Musicians, actors, writers, painters. Some are a little weird and crazy, but lovable. Thanks for sharing.
October 23rd, 2016 08:31
Augustus said:
SZW: I must apologize. I took one look at the bold, large, black print and did not read your poem. I missed a treasure.I am glad I came back to it. I can understand how you feel about the privileged class. I feel that way about politicians in the USA. I have always felt attracted to and most comfortable with the creative folk. Musicians, actors, writers, painters. Some are a little weird and crazy, but lovable. Thanks for sharing.
October 23rd, 2016 08:31
The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Yes yes yes...your writing style reminds me of my own, and the content I understand and agree with completely...very well written! looking forward to more!
October 22nd, 2016 18:47
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Yes yes yes...your writing style reminds me of my own, and the content I understand and agree with completely...very well written! looking forward to more!
October 22nd, 2016 18:47
The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oh warm thanx, nice to meet yah
October 22nd, 2016 12:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oh warm thanx, nice to meet yah
October 22nd, 2016 12:13
The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm
LynnBlackwell said:
Great poem, I really enjoy it!
October 22nd, 2016 12:00
LynnBlackwell said:
Great poem, I really enjoy it!
October 22nd, 2016 12:00
The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm
willyweed said:
clever poem with a dip in the river of truth! nice work! ww
October 22nd, 2016 09:28
willyweed said:
clever poem with a dip in the river of truth! nice work! ww
October 22nd, 2016 09:28
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