Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Suicide is NOT the Solution
Zwitterion said:
sometimes words light up a darkness.
December 20th, 2016 20:47
Zwitterion said:
sometimes words light up a darkness.
December 20th, 2016 20:47
Salute the sweet tooth?
poetlife said:
This is amazing!!! :D
Have a great day!
- Gem
December 5th, 2016 13:32
poetlife said:
This is amazing!!! :D
Have a great day!
- Gem
December 5th, 2016 13:32
Salute the sweet tooth?
Izzi Lynn said:
Mmm I\'m really craving something sweet now. Though, I\'m always craving something sweet. Great poem, and thank you for commenting on mine. Anyways, great write.
December 5th, 2016 09:42
Izzi Lynn said:
Mmm I\'m really craving something sweet now. Though, I\'m always craving something sweet. Great poem, and thank you for commenting on mine. Anyways, great write.
December 5th, 2016 09:42
Salute the sweet tooth?
Simple-Man87 said:
Many of what you talked about reminded me of treats I had back in England. Wonderful bit of writing.
December 5th, 2016 01:38
Simple-Man87 said:
Many of what you talked about reminded me of treats I had back in England. Wonderful bit of writing.
December 5th, 2016 01:38
Suicide is NOT the Solution
SharonMoemise said:
This poem hit home, cos I found myself in so many situations where I thought suicide was the only way out. It\'s a wonderful piece of poetry, that\'ll help a lot of others out there to make the right decision. Great writing!
December 4th, 2016 14:40
SharonMoemise said:
This poem hit home, cos I found myself in so many situations where I thought suicide was the only way out. It\'s a wonderful piece of poetry, that\'ll help a lot of others out there to make the right decision. Great writing!
December 4th, 2016 14:40
Salute the sweet tooth?
SabreLi said:
Nice work! This one reminded me of Brian\'s Life Of Pie in some ways but I have a huge sweet tooth so cakes and other sweet desserts hit the soft spot for me any time! Well done xx
December 4th, 2016 14:04
SabreLi said:
Nice work! This one reminded me of Brian\'s Life Of Pie in some ways but I have a huge sweet tooth so cakes and other sweet desserts hit the soft spot for me any time! Well done xx
December 4th, 2016 14:04
Thoughts on turning 36
moontigerntn said:
wow! interesting write, loved it. no doubt, time flies.
December 4th, 2016 09:25
moontigerntn said:
wow! interesting write, loved it. no doubt, time flies.
December 4th, 2016 09:25
Salute the sweet tooth?
willyweed said:
a sweet treat to read
I have a sweet tooth too
Your poem is as always well crafted and clever. peace ww
December 3rd, 2016 13:46
willyweed said:
a sweet treat to read
I have a sweet tooth too
Your poem is as always well crafted and clever. peace ww
December 3rd, 2016 13:46
Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays
Francesco said:
Wishing I could fly... :)
Lovely piece1
Fx
December 2nd, 2016 16:27
Francesco said:
Wishing I could fly... :)
Lovely piece1
Fx
December 2nd, 2016 16:27
Salute the sweet tooth?
SilentLaugh said:
NIce poem! I love it! I have a suggestion for you. There is a poetry website called Allpoetry! cheak it out!
December 2nd, 2016 13:40
SilentLaugh said:
NIce poem! I love it! I have a suggestion for you. There is a poetry website called Allpoetry! cheak it out!
December 2nd, 2016 13:40
Salute the sweet tooth?
Daniel said:
A very clever fun poem, I\'m hungry from reading it. Your poem definitely made me smile!
December 2nd, 2016 08:08
Daniel said:
A very clever fun poem, I\'m hungry from reading it. Your poem definitely made me smile!
December 2nd, 2016 08:08
Salute the sweet tooth?
WriteBeLight said:
That was a very sweet poem! You just about covered everything! Nice job...:)
December 2nd, 2016 06:19
WriteBeLight said:
That was a very sweet poem! You just about covered everything! Nice job...:)
December 2nd, 2016 06:19
Charity starters
iRonnie said:
I loovveeee it. This hits deeply with me. I can relate to the message very heavily... 😕 I have lot of personal qualities I need to work on 😁
Thank you for the art!! 😍
November 23rd, 2016 14:55
iRonnie said:
I loovveeee it. This hits deeply with me. I can relate to the message very heavily... 😕 I have lot of personal qualities I need to work on 😁
Thank you for the art!! 😍
November 23rd, 2016 14:55
Charity starters
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. Good rhymes. I agree with Augustus in that my favorite line is giving the conscience a hug. Thanks for sharing!
November 22nd, 2016 15:23
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. Good rhymes. I agree with Augustus in that my favorite line is giving the conscience a hug. Thanks for sharing!
November 22nd, 2016 15:23
Charity starters
Augustus said:
I just love this, the message, the writing. My favorite line was giving the conscience a tug.
November 21st, 2016 11:56
Augustus said:
I just love this, the message, the writing. My favorite line was giving the conscience a tug.
November 21st, 2016 11:56
Thoughts on turning 36
SilentLaugh said:
This is just fantastic! I feel like this all thetime. Im 15 and I cant wait to be 16. but its always one step closer to being a mother or getting a job. This poem really touches that spot! also how did you change your picture for your profile? I cant figure it out.
November 16th, 2016 12:32
SilentLaugh said:
This is just fantastic! I feel like this all thetime. Im 15 and I cant wait to be 16. but its always one step closer to being a mother or getting a job. This poem really touches that spot! also how did you change your picture for your profile? I cant figure it out.
November 16th, 2016 12:32
Thoughts on turning 36
JustABird said:
I can really relate to this. It was really hard for me when I turned 30 and Alzheimer\'s runs in my family so I am extremely fearful of that as I grow older. I definitely get what you\'re saying but birthdays, when they come also bring with them a feeling of joy because people put a spotlight on you for the day and sometimes it\'s really nice to feel that. Great poem.
November 16th, 2016 10:57
JustABird said:
I can really relate to this. It was really hard for me when I turned 30 and Alzheimer\'s runs in my family so I am extremely fearful of that as I grow older. I definitely get what you\'re saying but birthdays, when they come also bring with them a feeling of joy because people put a spotlight on you for the day and sometimes it\'s really nice to feel that. Great poem.
November 16th, 2016 10:57
Thoughts on turning 36
Quietstorm_Dru said:
Nice poem and be thankful for every bday... wishing you a happy birthday and many more.
November 15th, 2016 15:00
Quietstorm_Dru said:
Nice poem and be thankful for every bday... wishing you a happy birthday and many more.
November 15th, 2016 15:00
SCENERY MEDLEY CONTRASTS
AlitaOpal said:
Beautiful work of art..
You painted an amazing picture with your words.. For a moment I was there 🌳🌾🍂🐺🕷🐻
November 14th, 2016 09:19
AlitaOpal said:
Beautiful work of art..
You painted an amazing picture with your words.. For a moment I was there 🌳🌾🍂🐺🕷🐻
November 14th, 2016 09:19
Thoughts on turning 36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
36 SWEETHEART ~ Like me (33) you are only ONE THIRD through your life ! Lots more rivers to cross ~ lots more mountains to climb ~ lots more experiences of Life & love to enjoy ! Love your peom ~ the highs and the lows ~ Love and Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 14th, 2016 08:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
36 SWEETHEART ~ Like me (33) you are only ONE THIRD through your life ! Lots more rivers to cross ~ lots more mountains to climb ~ lots more experiences of Life & love to enjoy ! Love your peom ~ the highs and the lows ~ Love and Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 14th, 2016 08:29
Thoughts on turning 36
ron parrish aka wordman said:
loved the write,loved the format
welcome to the site
November 13th, 2016 23:53
ron parrish aka wordman said:
loved the write,loved the format
welcome to the site
November 13th, 2016 23:53
SCENERY MEDLEY CONTRASTS
Melody said:
I so love your take on nature all through out your poem, prairies dogs and cactus paint such a vivid memory of the American desert and plains, such a gentle, vivid poem filled with amazing imagery...Bravo my friend! Mel
November 5th, 2016 15:33
Melody said:
I so love your take on nature all through out your poem, prairies dogs and cactus paint such a vivid memory of the American desert and plains, such a gentle, vivid poem filled with amazing imagery...Bravo my friend! Mel
November 5th, 2016 15:33
SCENERY MEDLEY CONTRASTS
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Beautiful picture with corresponding words. (Some new to me :)
Kurt
November 5th, 2016 10:13
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Beautiful picture with corresponding words. (Some new to me :)
Kurt
November 5th, 2016 10:13
SCENERY MEDLEY CONTRASTS
The 2 A.M Writer said:
I like the mental picture i get from this photo, gives me a warm feeling. I feel like they words almost have a trippy, kinda indie rock feel to them. Good write!
November 4th, 2016 13:50
The 2 A.M Writer said:
I like the mental picture i get from this photo, gives me a warm feeling. I feel like they words almost have a trippy, kinda indie rock feel to them. Good write!
November 4th, 2016 13:50
SCENERY MEDLEY CONTRASTS
sincerelyallee said:
good poem! definitely paints a picture.
November 4th, 2016 10:42
sincerelyallee said:
good poem! definitely paints a picture.
November 4th, 2016 10:42
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