Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Metallic marvels
WriteBeLight said:
Yes a Lava Lamp sounds perfect. Very nice imagery in this poem SZK.
April 26th, 2017 05:22
WriteBeLight said:
Yes a Lava Lamp sounds perfect. Very nice imagery in this poem SZK.
April 26th, 2017 05:22
Humans need a HEREAFTER
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for this inspirational read to pursue the belief in a Hereafter. I love the free style you use here and the force of short line adds to its prayerful message to \"work for thy hereafter\" and ask at our earth-end to be placed in \"palatial paradise\" A fine poetic example of faith in the caring and loving unseen.
April 26th, 2017 02:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for this inspirational read to pursue the belief in a Hereafter. I love the free style you use here and the force of short line adds to its prayerful message to \"work for thy hereafter\" and ask at our earth-end to be placed in \"palatial paradise\" A fine poetic example of faith in the caring and loving unseen.
April 26th, 2017 02:00
My wee special guest
Fay Slimm. said:
A charm of a tribute to the lovely canary - in Cornwall U.K. we have no wild yellow-wings but built an aviary for canaries and love to listen to their trilling songs. As a bird-lover this is a delightful read and thanks for sharing your welcome visitor.
April 26th, 2017 01:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A charm of a tribute to the lovely canary - in Cornwall U.K. we have no wild yellow-wings but built an aviary for canaries and love to listen to their trilling songs. As a bird-lover this is a delightful read and thanks for sharing your welcome visitor.
April 26th, 2017 01:52
Metallic marvels
Fay Slimm. said:
Your verse aptly captures the attraction of slow, sensuous melt from solid to dazzling , fragmental mass. Love the image and colour used too. Great read.
April 26th, 2017 01:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Your verse aptly captures the attraction of slow, sensuous melt from solid to dazzling , fragmental mass. Love the image and colour used too. Great read.
April 26th, 2017 01:45
Metallic marvels
orchidee said:
Good write. Yes, similar to water - it can be liquid, steam, or solid.
April 25th, 2017 14:38
orchidee said:
Good write. Yes, similar to water - it can be liquid, steam, or solid.
April 25th, 2017 14:38
Metallic marvels
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow nice to know. w. U had them for real.! I couldn\'t find any in shops here where I live. Thanxx so much for comment.
April 25th, 2017 14:21
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow nice to know. w. U had them for real.! I couldn\'t find any in shops here where I live. Thanxx so much for comment.
April 25th, 2017 14:21
My wee special guest
Shakerite said:
That\'s a really good effort S.Zaynab .
Enjoyed it . I also love birds. Especially Robins
March 11th, 2017 00:34
Shakerite said:
That\'s a really good effort S.Zaynab .
Enjoyed it . I also love birds. Especially Robins
March 11th, 2017 00:34
Humans need a HEREAFTER
Hypothesis said:
Yes some of these events are quite unfortunate to be exact. Death is a timely heist. For beliefs if there is truly a afterlife in existence. Only that particular individual him/herself can envision that journey solely alone.
Good read poet.
March 9th, 2017 05:06
Hypothesis said:
Yes some of these events are quite unfortunate to be exact. Death is a timely heist. For beliefs if there is truly a afterlife in existence. Only that particular individual him/herself can envision that journey solely alone.
Good read poet.
March 9th, 2017 05:06
My wee special guest
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I encourage birds into my garden and my wife and I get lost in their antics and their songs.
March 9th, 2017 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I encourage birds into my garden and my wife and I get lost in their antics and their songs.
March 9th, 2017 01:45
My wee special guest
Simple-Man87 said:
Love it. Reminds me of a happy Edgar Allen Poe
March 8th, 2017 16:01
Simple-Man87 said:
Love it. Reminds me of a happy Edgar Allen Poe
March 8th, 2017 16:01
My wee special guest
WG7 said:
This is a beautiful poem. It was short and sweet and I think it\'s amazing.
March 8th, 2017 11:43
WG7 said:
This is a beautiful poem. It was short and sweet and I think it\'s amazing.
March 8th, 2017 11:43
My wee special guest
willyweed said:
he rocks in the tree tops all day long rockin and a boppin and a singing his song, all the little birdies on J bird street love to hear the birdie go tweet tweet tweet. welcome back WW
March 8th, 2017 11:36
willyweed said:
he rocks in the tree tops all day long rockin and a boppin and a singing his song, all the little birdies on J bird street love to hear the birdie go tweet tweet tweet. welcome back WW
March 8th, 2017 11:36
Salute the sweet tooth?
Shakerite said:
Love all the treats you mention but alas rounded belly does occur .
Ice cream I my fave yummy.
Good poem
February 1st, 2017 19:52
Shakerite said:
Love all the treats you mention but alas rounded belly does occur .
Ice cream I my fave yummy.
Good poem
February 1st, 2017 19:52
Humans need a HEREAFTER
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely thoughts,and i`m sure it`s very true,
January 29th, 2017 20:03
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely thoughts,and i`m sure it`s very true,
January 29th, 2017 20:03
Humans need a HEREAFTER
Corey said:
I believe in the hereafter, when our best lives will be lived. Your words are pleasantly encouraging. Great write!
January 29th, 2017 12:46
Corey said:
I believe in the hereafter, when our best lives will be lived. Your words are pleasantly encouraging. Great write!
January 29th, 2017 12:46
Humans need a HEREAFTER
janetaylor said:
beautifully woven words that uplift and give hope!
January 29th, 2017 12:30
janetaylor said:
beautifully woven words that uplift and give hope!
January 29th, 2017 12:30
SCENERY MEDLEY CONTRASTS
Corey said:
You\'re a beautiful word painter! I enjoyed the images. Thank you.
January 29th, 2017 12:30
Corey said:
You\'re a beautiful word painter! I enjoyed the images. Thank you.
January 29th, 2017 12:30
Humans need a HEREAFTER
Hopey_xx said:
Love it! The way it is layed out is awesome too
January 29th, 2017 11:41
Hopey_xx said:
Love it! The way it is layed out is awesome too
January 29th, 2017 11:41
Humans need a HEREAFTER
Michael Edwards said:
This is so well drafted and makes the message in such elegant prose. Thanks for your kind comments against my latest posting.
January 29th, 2017 03:57
Michael Edwards said:
This is so well drafted and makes the message in such elegant prose. Thanks for your kind comments against my latest posting.
January 29th, 2017 03:57
Humans need a HEREAFTER
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes pal heaven will be a place where no disasters happen. I like your thoughts on this.
My warmest thanx, take care. It Wud be nice to meet there though it would be nice to meet u here too pal.
January 29th, 2017 03:06
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes pal heaven will be a place where no disasters happen. I like your thoughts on this.
My warmest thanx, take care. It Wud be nice to meet there though it would be nice to meet u here too pal.
January 29th, 2017 03:06
Salute the sweet tooth?
P.H.Rose said:
Love this poem
Love sweets
Very well done sir
January 5th, 2017 15:49
P.H.Rose said:
Love this poem
Love sweets
Very well done sir
January 5th, 2017 15:49
Thoughts on turning 36
P.H.Rose said:
I have real fear of death,
On some occasions
I lose all control,
I cry like a baby...
It\'s usually at night..
Old age does not
Worry me, I love being
A grandad..it\'s the end
Game that I\'m most frightened
Of.... Great write..
Well done !!!!
January 5th, 2017 15:47
P.H.Rose said:
I have real fear of death,
On some occasions
I lose all control,
I cry like a baby...
It\'s usually at night..
Old age does not
Worry me, I love being
A grandad..it\'s the end
Game that I\'m most frightened
Of.... Great write..
Well done !!!!
January 5th, 2017 15:47
Salute the sweet tooth?
Michael Edwards said:
Good \'un and yes - I\'ve eaten too many - just crave for fruit and vegetables and china tea right now.
December 28th, 2016 08:49
Michael Edwards said:
Good \'un and yes - I\'ve eaten too many - just crave for fruit and vegetables and china tea right now.
December 28th, 2016 08:49
Suicide is NOT the Solution
Zwitterion said:
sometimes words light up a darkness.
December 20th, 2016 20:47
Zwitterion said:
sometimes words light up a darkness.
December 20th, 2016 20:47
Salute the sweet tooth?
poetlife said:
This is amazing!!! :D
Have a great day!
- Gem
December 5th, 2016 13:32
poetlife said:
This is amazing!!! :D
Have a great day!
- Gem
December 5th, 2016 13:32
Salute the sweet tooth?
Izzi Lynn said:
Mmm I\'m really craving something sweet now. Though, I\'m always craving something sweet. Great poem, and thank you for commenting on mine. Anyways, great write.
December 5th, 2016 09:42
Izzi Lynn said:
Mmm I\'m really craving something sweet now. Though, I\'m always craving something sweet. Great poem, and thank you for commenting on mine. Anyways, great write.
December 5th, 2016 09:42
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