Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Mankind in Dreamland
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lol,sounds like a nice place to visit,dream land,,loved the images
January 9th, 2018 16:50
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lol,sounds like a nice place to visit,dream land,,loved the images
January 9th, 2018 16:50
Play it on your lips
ron parrish aka wordman said:
well it made me smile,and you are right,when you smile people wonder what you are thinking
January 9th, 2018 16:48
ron parrish aka wordman said:
well it made me smile,and you are right,when you smile people wonder what you are thinking
January 9th, 2018 16:48
Mankind in Dreamland
Gino said:
Wow, great write. Your truly talented and blessed such imagination. I truly loved your read and thanks for sharing.
November 30th, 2017 19:01
Gino said:
Wow, great write. Your truly talented and blessed such imagination. I truly loved your read and thanks for sharing.
November 30th, 2017 19:01
Mankind in Dreamland
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A fun read Kamoonpury - a poem of a horizon where everything is probable - the three-fold interpersonal dimension of the human soul (the numinous experience, the religious intuition, and conscience). I enjoyed your poem.
November 29th, 2017 23:58
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A fun read Kamoonpury - a poem of a horizon where everything is probable - the three-fold interpersonal dimension of the human soul (the numinous experience, the religious intuition, and conscience). I enjoyed your poem.
November 29th, 2017 23:58
Mankind in Dreamland
FineB said:
Thank you SZaynab.
What a beautiful poem, so magical, mysterious; awesome and mystical.
I love the colours that you wrote for the text it made your poem even more poignant and vivid
Keep writing
FineB
November 29th, 2017 15:44
FineB said:
Thank you SZaynab.
What a beautiful poem, so magical, mysterious; awesome and mystical.
I love the colours that you wrote for the text it made your poem even more poignant and vivid
Keep writing
FineB
November 29th, 2017 15:44
Mankind in Dreamland
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRIEND ~ Love your visual it stirs my memories of many vivid dreams in the last 30 years ! I started dreaming when I was about 4 ! I forget most of them ~ even the vivid ones ~ but for me most of my DREAMS are more NATURAL than FANTASTIC and relate to situations and scenery that is not unfamiliar ! I meet with people past & present and fictional ~ and some situations are scary but not really \"nightmares\" ! I have looked at interpretations ~ most are rational ~ but it is a big subject and for most of us a \"closed book\" ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
November 29th, 2017 13:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRIEND ~ Love your visual it stirs my memories of many vivid dreams in the last 30 years ! I started dreaming when I was about 4 ! I forget most of them ~ even the vivid ones ~ but for me most of my DREAMS are more NATURAL than FANTASTIC and relate to situations and scenery that is not unfamiliar ! I meet with people past & present and fictional ~ and some situations are scary but not really \"nightmares\" ! I have looked at interpretations ~ most are rational ~ but it is a big subject and for most of us a \"closed book\" ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
November 29th, 2017 13:42
Mankind in Dreamland
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Nice 1! Amazing poetic skill!
November 29th, 2017 12:38
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Nice 1! Amazing poetic skill!
November 29th, 2017 12:38
Mankind in Dreamland
elliechanner said:
Dreams really are complex things, but you described them perfectly. Loved the poem!
November 29th, 2017 12:26
elliechanner said:
Dreams really are complex things, but you described them perfectly. Loved the poem!
November 29th, 2017 12:26
My wee special guest
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love the nature of the people, so lively and warm and full of energy.
Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
November 29th, 2017 06:44
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love the nature of the people, so lively and warm and full of energy.
Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
November 29th, 2017 06:44
Mankind in Dreamland
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love this, perfectly worded. I love how you take you us on a journey of your dream. Very well put togather.
Thanks for sharing such a good write.
November 29th, 2017 06:42
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love this, perfectly worded. I love how you take you us on a journey of your dream. Very well put togather.
Thanks for sharing such a good write.
November 29th, 2017 06:42
Mankind in Dreamland
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, our dreams can send us into many differing worlds both real and unreal.
November 29th, 2017 04:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, our dreams can send us into many differing worlds both real and unreal.
November 29th, 2017 04:14
Mankind in Dreamland
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Cuckoo land eh, yeah true. Love your comment. Warm thanx.
November 29th, 2017 03:46
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Cuckoo land eh, yeah true. Love your comment. Warm thanx.
November 29th, 2017 03:46
Mankind in Dreamland
orchidee said:
Good write zaynab. Some dreams can be meaningful. With others, man is in cloud cuckoo land, as they say. Where is that?! lol.
November 29th, 2017 02:56
orchidee said:
Good write zaynab. Some dreams can be meaningful. With others, man is in cloud cuckoo land, as they say. Where is that?! lol.
November 29th, 2017 02:56
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
malubotelho said:
Wonderful romantic writing. Now I have one more place to visit checked on my list. Need to go there.
August 17th, 2017 07:18
malubotelho said:
Wonderful romantic writing. Now I have one more place to visit checked on my list. Need to go there.
August 17th, 2017 07:18
Salute the sweet tooth?
Night Owl said:
Sweet indeed- nicely done! I\'ll pass on the treats but devour your poem instead ;)
August 15th, 2017 14:05
Night Owl said:
Sweet indeed- nicely done! I\'ll pass on the treats but devour your poem instead ;)
August 15th, 2017 14:05
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
private poet said:
You have tempted me to dream that I may get to see this wonderful sight. A goal to aim for, new memories perhaps. It is one day at a time for me but dreaming will do for now.
August 15th, 2017 13:19
private poet said:
You have tempted me to dream that I may get to see this wonderful sight. A goal to aim for, new memories perhaps. It is one day at a time for me but dreaming will do for now.
August 15th, 2017 13:19
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
FredPeyer said:
An imposing building and an imposing poem. You captured the beauty and mystique of the building perfectly! Well written.
August 15th, 2017 11:05
FredPeyer said:
An imposing building and an imposing poem. You captured the beauty and mystique of the building perfectly! Well written.
August 15th, 2017 11:05
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
Simple-Man87 said:
Amazing. That flowed so well and I was happy after I read it. It\'s amazing, the intention to find love, not just an attraction. Well done.
August 15th, 2017 09:31
Simple-Man87 said:
Amazing. That flowed so well and I was happy after I read it. It\'s amazing, the intention to find love, not just an attraction. Well done.
August 15th, 2017 09:31
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i have studied about this marvel all through school,but i`m sure it would be breath taking to really be there,,loved the image
August 15th, 2017 08:12
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i have studied about this marvel all through school,but i`m sure it would be breath taking to really be there,,loved the image
August 15th, 2017 08:12
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Marbled dome\" and \"lover\'s shrine\" - you capture the essence of this place of \"romantic secrets\" - - an inspiring read.
August 15th, 2017 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Marbled dome\" and \"lover\'s shrine\" - you capture the essence of this place of \"romantic secrets\" - - an inspiring read.
August 15th, 2017 04:29
Thoughts on turning 36
Poetic Dan said:
I still claim trees
As if I\'m seventeen
Skateboard with dogs
Like I\'m riding the sea
Age is in the mind
Definitely true
The only problem is
Healing of a bruise
Hope you had a good day and find happiness in age ;)
June 13th, 2017 09:24
Poetic Dan said:
I still claim trees
As if I\'m seventeen
Skateboard with dogs
Like I\'m riding the sea
Age is in the mind
Definitely true
The only problem is
Healing of a bruise
Hope you had a good day and find happiness in age ;)
June 13th, 2017 09:24
Metallic marvels
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Ok.. a month after I promise you I will read your latest I really finally got around to doing so now. Read it 3 times and ewvery time got something deeper out of it. The way that you used colors and shapes and metals together it puts a picture in the mind of these things forming together like in the time of creation...I got a very Genesis lie vibe one time...this is the kind of write that can be interpreted in so many ways and will be depending upon the readers mood at that time, where they are in thir own world..many factors could have possible changes of how it is interpreted. Basically, This write is case sensitive per each reader...unique to everyone who reads it... AMAZING JOB...ANd unlie anything I have ever read...This is brilliant! You are always so respectful when you read my wor. You really pay attention and chose such soothing complimentary words in your replies...I apporeach readers and poetess\' such as yourself. TY for this read and for reading!XXOO
June 7th, 2017 05:17
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Ok.. a month after I promise you I will read your latest I really finally got around to doing so now. Read it 3 times and ewvery time got something deeper out of it. The way that you used colors and shapes and metals together it puts a picture in the mind of these things forming together like in the time of creation...I got a very Genesis lie vibe one time...this is the kind of write that can be interpreted in so many ways and will be depending upon the readers mood at that time, where they are in thir own world..many factors could have possible changes of how it is interpreted. Basically, This write is case sensitive per each reader...unique to everyone who reads it... AMAZING JOB...ANd unlie anything I have ever read...This is brilliant! You are always so respectful when you read my wor. You really pay attention and chose such soothing complimentary words in your replies...I apporeach readers and poetess\' such as yourself. TY for this read and for reading!XXOO
June 7th, 2017 05:17
Metallic marvels
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Definitely brings out the earthy volcanologist/geologist/metallurgist in me. I\'m too new at poetry to make light of your craft techniques. Would it be a pun to say it flows nicely? Or just having fun..
April 27th, 2017 22:50
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Definitely brings out the earthy volcanologist/geologist/metallurgist in me. I\'m too new at poetry to make light of your craft techniques. Would it be a pun to say it flows nicely? Or just having fun..
April 27th, 2017 22:50
Suicide is NOT the Solution
Gary Edward Geraci said:
This is an ever pertinent message; most of us have lost at least one friend or family member to this evil - this suicide. You employ an engaging formatting with the left to right column alternations: created for me a beat (like a living heartbeat) and an ambience for your pro-life message of hope and vitality. I like your choice of the green color scheme. It also reminded me of the life observed during the spring growing season.
April 27th, 2017 22:30
Gary Edward Geraci said:
This is an ever pertinent message; most of us have lost at least one friend or family member to this evil - this suicide. You employ an engaging formatting with the left to right column alternations: created for me a beat (like a living heartbeat) and an ambience for your pro-life message of hope and vitality. I like your choice of the green color scheme. It also reminded me of the life observed during the spring growing season.
April 27th, 2017 22:30
Metallic marvels
Adrianna Kjeld said:
I absolutely love this, the visual is so appealing. ^~^ Great job!
April 27th, 2017 16:50
Adrianna Kjeld said:
I absolutely love this, the visual is so appealing. ^~^ Great job!
April 27th, 2017 16:50
Metallic marvels
rrodriguez said:
This is quite nice... I love the imagery of the lava flowing... nicely done!
April 27th, 2017 16:20
rrodriguez said:
This is quite nice... I love the imagery of the lava flowing... nicely done!
April 27th, 2017 16:20
Metallic marvels
Michael Edwards said:
Great read - conjures up such great images.
April 27th, 2017 15:36
Michael Edwards said:
Great read - conjures up such great images.
April 27th, 2017 15:36
Metallic marvels
Gino said:
Very nice poem. Very descriptive in the melting of elements,....Love your poem, thanks for sharing.
April 27th, 2017 00:56
Gino said:
Very nice poem. Very descriptive in the melting of elements,....Love your poem, thanks for sharing.
April 27th, 2017 00:56
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