Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Mankind in Dreamland
orchidee said:
Good write zaynab. Some dreams can be meaningful. With others, man is in cloud cuckoo land, as they say. Where is that?! lol.
November 29th, 2017 02:56
orchidee said:
Good write zaynab. Some dreams can be meaningful. With others, man is in cloud cuckoo land, as they say. Where is that?! lol.
November 29th, 2017 02:56
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
malubotelho said:
Wonderful romantic writing. Now I have one more place to visit checked on my list. Need to go there.
August 17th, 2017 07:18
malubotelho said:
Wonderful romantic writing. Now I have one more place to visit checked on my list. Need to go there.
August 17th, 2017 07:18
Salute the sweet tooth?
Night Owl said:
Sweet indeed- nicely done! I\'ll pass on the treats but devour your poem instead ;)
August 15th, 2017 14:05
Night Owl said:
Sweet indeed- nicely done! I\'ll pass on the treats but devour your poem instead ;)
August 15th, 2017 14:05
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
private poet said:
You have tempted me to dream that I may get to see this wonderful sight. A goal to aim for, new memories perhaps. It is one day at a time for me but dreaming will do for now.
August 15th, 2017 13:19
private poet said:
You have tempted me to dream that I may get to see this wonderful sight. A goal to aim for, new memories perhaps. It is one day at a time for me but dreaming will do for now.
August 15th, 2017 13:19
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
FredPeyer said:
An imposing building and an imposing poem. You captured the beauty and mystique of the building perfectly! Well written.
August 15th, 2017 11:05
FredPeyer said:
An imposing building and an imposing poem. You captured the beauty and mystique of the building perfectly! Well written.
August 15th, 2017 11:05
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
Simple-Man87 said:
Amazing. That flowed so well and I was happy after I read it. It\'s amazing, the intention to find love, not just an attraction. Well done.
August 15th, 2017 09:31
Simple-Man87 said:
Amazing. That flowed so well and I was happy after I read it. It\'s amazing, the intention to find love, not just an attraction. Well done.
August 15th, 2017 09:31
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i have studied about this marvel all through school,but i`m sure it would be breath taking to really be there,,loved the image
August 15th, 2017 08:12
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i have studied about this marvel all through school,but i`m sure it would be breath taking to really be there,,loved the image
August 15th, 2017 08:12
Sing a song of the Taj Mahal
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Marbled dome\" and \"lover\'s shrine\" - you capture the essence of this place of \"romantic secrets\" - - an inspiring read.
August 15th, 2017 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Marbled dome\" and \"lover\'s shrine\" - you capture the essence of this place of \"romantic secrets\" - - an inspiring read.
August 15th, 2017 04:29
Thoughts on turning 36
Poetic Dan said:
I still claim trees
As if I\'m seventeen
Skateboard with dogs
Like I\'m riding the sea
Age is in the mind
Definitely true
The only problem is
Healing of a bruise
Hope you had a good day and find happiness in age ;)
June 13th, 2017 09:24
Poetic Dan said:
I still claim trees
As if I\'m seventeen
Skateboard with dogs
Like I\'m riding the sea
Age is in the mind
Definitely true
The only problem is
Healing of a bruise
Hope you had a good day and find happiness in age ;)
June 13th, 2017 09:24
Metallic marvels
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Ok.. a month after I promise you I will read your latest I really finally got around to doing so now. Read it 3 times and ewvery time got something deeper out of it. The way that you used colors and shapes and metals together it puts a picture in the mind of these things forming together like in the time of creation...I got a very Genesis lie vibe one time...this is the kind of write that can be interpreted in so many ways and will be depending upon the readers mood at that time, where they are in thir own world..many factors could have possible changes of how it is interpreted. Basically, This write is case sensitive per each reader...unique to everyone who reads it... AMAZING JOB...ANd unlie anything I have ever read...This is brilliant! You are always so respectful when you read my wor. You really pay attention and chose such soothing complimentary words in your replies...I apporeach readers and poetess\' such as yourself. TY for this read and for reading!XXOO
June 7th, 2017 05:17
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Ok.. a month after I promise you I will read your latest I really finally got around to doing so now. Read it 3 times and ewvery time got something deeper out of it. The way that you used colors and shapes and metals together it puts a picture in the mind of these things forming together like in the time of creation...I got a very Genesis lie vibe one time...this is the kind of write that can be interpreted in so many ways and will be depending upon the readers mood at that time, where they are in thir own world..many factors could have possible changes of how it is interpreted. Basically, This write is case sensitive per each reader...unique to everyone who reads it... AMAZING JOB...ANd unlie anything I have ever read...This is brilliant! You are always so respectful when you read my wor. You really pay attention and chose such soothing complimentary words in your replies...I apporeach readers and poetess\' such as yourself. TY for this read and for reading!XXOO
June 7th, 2017 05:17
Metallic marvels
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Definitely brings out the earthy volcanologist/geologist/metallurgist in me. I\'m too new at poetry to make light of your craft techniques. Would it be a pun to say it flows nicely? Or just having fun..
April 27th, 2017 22:50
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Definitely brings out the earthy volcanologist/geologist/metallurgist in me. I\'m too new at poetry to make light of your craft techniques. Would it be a pun to say it flows nicely? Or just having fun..
April 27th, 2017 22:50
Suicide is NOT the Solution
Gary Edward Geraci said:
This is an ever pertinent message; most of us have lost at least one friend or family member to this evil - this suicide. You employ an engaging formatting with the left to right column alternations: created for me a beat (like a living heartbeat) and an ambience for your pro-life message of hope and vitality. I like your choice of the green color scheme. It also reminded me of the life observed during the spring growing season.
April 27th, 2017 22:30
Gary Edward Geraci said:
This is an ever pertinent message; most of us have lost at least one friend or family member to this evil - this suicide. You employ an engaging formatting with the left to right column alternations: created for me a beat (like a living heartbeat) and an ambience for your pro-life message of hope and vitality. I like your choice of the green color scheme. It also reminded me of the life observed during the spring growing season.
April 27th, 2017 22:30
Metallic marvels
Adrianna Kjeld said:
I absolutely love this, the visual is so appealing. ^~^ Great job!
April 27th, 2017 16:50
Adrianna Kjeld said:
I absolutely love this, the visual is so appealing. ^~^ Great job!
April 27th, 2017 16:50
Metallic marvels
rrodriguez said:
This is quite nice... I love the imagery of the lava flowing... nicely done!
April 27th, 2017 16:20
rrodriguez said:
This is quite nice... I love the imagery of the lava flowing... nicely done!
April 27th, 2017 16:20
Metallic marvels
Michael Edwards said:
Great read - conjures up such great images.
April 27th, 2017 15:36
Michael Edwards said:
Great read - conjures up such great images.
April 27th, 2017 15:36
Metallic marvels
Gino said:
Very nice poem. Very descriptive in the melting of elements,....Love your poem, thanks for sharing.
April 27th, 2017 00:56
Gino said:
Very nice poem. Very descriptive in the melting of elements,....Love your poem, thanks for sharing.
April 27th, 2017 00:56
Metallic marvels
WriteBeLight said:
Yes a Lava Lamp sounds perfect. Very nice imagery in this poem SZK.
April 26th, 2017 05:22
WriteBeLight said:
Yes a Lava Lamp sounds perfect. Very nice imagery in this poem SZK.
April 26th, 2017 05:22
Humans need a HEREAFTER
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for this inspirational read to pursue the belief in a Hereafter. I love the free style you use here and the force of short line adds to its prayerful message to \"work for thy hereafter\" and ask at our earth-end to be placed in \"palatial paradise\" A fine poetic example of faith in the caring and loving unseen.
April 26th, 2017 02:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for this inspirational read to pursue the belief in a Hereafter. I love the free style you use here and the force of short line adds to its prayerful message to \"work for thy hereafter\" and ask at our earth-end to be placed in \"palatial paradise\" A fine poetic example of faith in the caring and loving unseen.
April 26th, 2017 02:00
My wee special guest
Fay Slimm. said:
A charm of a tribute to the lovely canary - in Cornwall U.K. we have no wild yellow-wings but built an aviary for canaries and love to listen to their trilling songs. As a bird-lover this is a delightful read and thanks for sharing your welcome visitor.
April 26th, 2017 01:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A charm of a tribute to the lovely canary - in Cornwall U.K. we have no wild yellow-wings but built an aviary for canaries and love to listen to their trilling songs. As a bird-lover this is a delightful read and thanks for sharing your welcome visitor.
April 26th, 2017 01:52
Metallic marvels
Fay Slimm. said:
Your verse aptly captures the attraction of slow, sensuous melt from solid to dazzling , fragmental mass. Love the image and colour used too. Great read.
April 26th, 2017 01:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Your verse aptly captures the attraction of slow, sensuous melt from solid to dazzling , fragmental mass. Love the image and colour used too. Great read.
April 26th, 2017 01:45
Metallic marvels
orchidee said:
Good write. Yes, similar to water - it can be liquid, steam, or solid.
April 25th, 2017 14:38
orchidee said:
Good write. Yes, similar to water - it can be liquid, steam, or solid.
April 25th, 2017 14:38
Metallic marvels
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow nice to know. w. U had them for real.! I couldn\'t find any in shops here where I live. Thanxx so much for comment.
April 25th, 2017 14:21
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow nice to know. w. U had them for real.! I couldn\'t find any in shops here where I live. Thanxx so much for comment.
April 25th, 2017 14:21
My wee special guest
Shakerite said:
That\'s a really good effort S.Zaynab .
Enjoyed it . I also love birds. Especially Robins
March 11th, 2017 00:34
Shakerite said:
That\'s a really good effort S.Zaynab .
Enjoyed it . I also love birds. Especially Robins
March 11th, 2017 00:34
Humans need a HEREAFTER
Hypothesis said:
Yes some of these events are quite unfortunate to be exact. Death is a timely heist. For beliefs if there is truly a afterlife in existence. Only that particular individual him/herself can envision that journey solely alone.
Good read poet.
March 9th, 2017 05:06
Hypothesis said:
Yes some of these events are quite unfortunate to be exact. Death is a timely heist. For beliefs if there is truly a afterlife in existence. Only that particular individual him/herself can envision that journey solely alone.
Good read poet.
March 9th, 2017 05:06
My wee special guest
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I encourage birds into my garden and my wife and I get lost in their antics and their songs.
March 9th, 2017 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I encourage birds into my garden and my wife and I get lost in their antics and their songs.
March 9th, 2017 01:45
My wee special guest
Simple-Man87 said:
Love it. Reminds me of a happy Edgar Allen Poe
March 8th, 2017 16:01
Simple-Man87 said:
Love it. Reminds me of a happy Edgar Allen Poe
March 8th, 2017 16:01
My wee special guest
WG7 said:
This is a beautiful poem. It was short and sweet and I think it\'s amazing.
March 8th, 2017 11:43
WG7 said:
This is a beautiful poem. It was short and sweet and I think it\'s amazing.
March 8th, 2017 11:43
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