Comments received on poems by Tris Eaton
Obsession
clair jane said:
growing up in this society as a teen right now, i can relate. i don\'t have OCD but i do have anxiety and that causes me to be obsessive and always feel like i\'m doing somthing wrong, your poem is so beautiful and easy to relate to, and i think that\'s what makes it so beautiful
September 26th, 2018 23:05
clair jane said:
growing up in this society as a teen right now, i can relate. i don\'t have OCD but i do have anxiety and that causes me to be obsessive and always feel like i\'m doing somthing wrong, your poem is so beautiful and easy to relate to, and i think that\'s what makes it so beautiful
September 26th, 2018 23:05
Why Can\'t You See?
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Most definitely, your writing, will prove to be a form of therapy when it seems no-one else is listening. Should more serious symptoms present check out NAMI USA’s free online resources.
February 19th, 2018 23:09
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Most definitely, your writing, will prove to be a form of therapy when it seems no-one else is listening. Should more serious symptoms present check out NAMI USA’s free online resources.
February 19th, 2018 23:09
Wish I had something nice for you...
rrodriguez said:
I fight those demons too.. I believe we all have this awful thought. Work on substituting them with happy wholesome ones. I liked your poem. Thank you for sharing.
October 15th, 2017 22:24
rrodriguez said:
I fight those demons too.. I believe we all have this awful thought. Work on substituting them with happy wholesome ones. I liked your poem. Thank you for sharing.
October 15th, 2017 22:24
you and I
cynah Rae said:
Suicide? Slitting of wrists.. my interpretation. Well written. Am I on the right path with that?
March 15th, 2017 22:09
cynah Rae said:
Suicide? Slitting of wrists.. my interpretation. Well written. Am I on the right path with that?
March 15th, 2017 22:09
Sleep
Goldfinch60 said:
May your dreams be filled with joy and love. Good write.
March 10th, 2017 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
May your dreams be filled with joy and love. Good write.
March 10th, 2017 02:47
Sleep
Augustus said:
Being unable to do,anything is a common theme in dreams, especially those terrifying ones. Nicely done.
March 9th, 2017 22:51
Augustus said:
Being unable to do,anything is a common theme in dreams, especially those terrifying ones. Nicely done.
March 9th, 2017 22:51
Blue Sky
Michael Edwards said:
This is so good and so much reminds me of a visit to Hitlers Eagles nest high up in the Bavarian Alps. I went there on the first day it was opened in late spring with the melting of the snow - the snow was still there on the ground and yet people were sunbathing. There were eagles flying round and I was enthralled despite its place in History.
March 3rd, 2017 09:16
Michael Edwards said:
This is so good and so much reminds me of a visit to Hitlers Eagles nest high up in the Bavarian Alps. I went there on the first day it was opened in late spring with the melting of the snow - the snow was still there on the ground and yet people were sunbathing. There were eagles flying round and I was enthralled despite its place in History.
March 3rd, 2017 09:16
Blue Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I too would like to fly like a buzzard, just sail around on my still outstretched wings.
March 3rd, 2017 09:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I too would like to fly like a buzzard, just sail around on my still outstretched wings.
March 3rd, 2017 09:08
Crosses by the road
Goldfinch60 said:
Very poignant write. There seem to be so many tributes by the side of the roads in this day and age.
March 3rd, 2017 03:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Very poignant write. There seem to be so many tributes by the side of the roads in this day and age.
March 3rd, 2017 03:13
Opinions
Reivax Camlost said:
This is very true. I often realize, right before I say something cruel / insensitive, that wisdom and knowledge should be taken into account before whimsy and opinion.
February 25th, 2017 16:13
Reivax Camlost said:
This is very true. I often realize, right before I say something cruel / insensitive, that wisdom and knowledge should be taken into account before whimsy and opinion.
February 25th, 2017 16:13
Opinions
willyweed said:
opinions are well like toes and fingers if we all just counted the digits first well what a wonderful world this could be. very clever for an old lady or a young girl too? nice one ww
February 23rd, 2017 22:05
willyweed said:
opinions are well like toes and fingers if we all just counted the digits first well what a wonderful world this could be. very clever for an old lady or a young girl too? nice one ww
February 23rd, 2017 22:05
Opinions
Augustus said:
Yes, please engage brain before opening mouth. You are exactly right. Nice.
February 23rd, 2017 19:24
Augustus said:
Yes, please engage brain before opening mouth. You are exactly right. Nice.
February 23rd, 2017 19:24
Remembering
Lana D said:
I ask myself the same thing everyday. I love this poem. Ive read it 3 times & it hits me every time I read it.
February 20th, 2017 23:06
Lana D said:
I ask myself the same thing everyday. I love this poem. Ive read it 3 times & it hits me every time I read it.
February 20th, 2017 23:06
Remembering
Augustus said:
The mind is a curious thing. Great piece of self analysis. Very readable, and thought provoking. Good work.
February 20th, 2017 21:52
Augustus said:
The mind is a curious thing. Great piece of self analysis. Very readable, and thought provoking. Good work.
February 20th, 2017 21:52
Melody
Hopey_xx said:
Lovely poem! Music does the exact thing with me, sometimes I will just listen to loads of things for ages and let my emotions go wild!
February 20th, 2017 02:19
Hopey_xx said:
Lovely poem! Music does the exact thing with me, sometimes I will just listen to loads of things for ages and let my emotions go wild!
February 20th, 2017 02:19
Melody
Severus Alexander said:
Falling into quiet, from whence all music springs. For only beyond sound, can be heard from the heart, of the most dearly cherished things.. (Luci ~ Here\'s some music that should bring you joy, rather than grief). https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acvIVA9-FMQ
February 19th, 2017 20:21
Severus Alexander said:
Falling into quiet, from whence all music springs. For only beyond sound, can be heard from the heart, of the most dearly cherished things.. (Luci ~ Here\'s some music that should bring you joy, rather than grief). https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acvIVA9-FMQ
February 19th, 2017 20:21
Stuck
Reivax Camlost said:
This was nice. What ifs are my greatest fear, other than fire, and I sometimes get lost in them... but, if there were no hard choices, I suppose life wouldn\'t be worth living. If it were easy, anyone could do it... and if we relinquish our choices, what do we have left?
Great write. Write more.
December 19th, 2016 13:46
Reivax Camlost said:
This was nice. What ifs are my greatest fear, other than fire, and I sometimes get lost in them... but, if there were no hard choices, I suppose life wouldn\'t be worth living. If it were easy, anyone could do it... and if we relinquish our choices, what do we have left?
Great write. Write more.
December 19th, 2016 13:46
What if?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW LUCI ~ Thanks for sharing an awesome first poem cram full with WHAT IFS ! We are a very caring site and we all empathise with you ~ I\'m 33 still growing up but I was a confused teenager 20 years ago ! There is a GOD and on MPS we are all Friends and there are some posts parallel wit yours ~ Every BLESSING ~ Your Friend on MPS BRIAN
December 1st, 2016 15:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW LUCI ~ Thanks for sharing an awesome first poem cram full with WHAT IFS ! We are a very caring site and we all empathise with you ~ I\'m 33 still growing up but I was a confused teenager 20 years ago ! There is a GOD and on MPS we are all Friends and there are some posts parallel wit yours ~ Every BLESSING ~ Your Friend on MPS BRIAN
December 1st, 2016 15:42
