Comments received on poems by erin wynette
confession's of the heart
Cheeky Missy said:
Very sweet impassioned confession of an ardent lover....may the promise of forever and the sweetness never die, but strengthen all through time, I suppose, only by the merciful gracious allowance of the Lord, to keep the two so true forever.
March 1st, 2011 23:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Very sweet impassioned confession of an ardent lover....may the promise of forever and the sweetness never die, but strengthen all through time, I suppose, only by the merciful gracious allowance of the Lord, to keep the two so true forever.
March 1st, 2011 23:11
my love, my life, my everything
Cheeky Missy said:
Great title, beautiful depiction of your consuming, eager love, I quite enjoyed all except the fourth stanza...while it expresses your intense desire, it seems too erotic or explicit...if I may say so without offending. Bet he enjoyed it!
February 23rd, 2011 23:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Great title, beautiful depiction of your consuming, eager love, I quite enjoyed all except the fourth stanza...while it expresses your intense desire, it seems too erotic or explicit...if I may say so without offending. Bet he enjoyed it!
February 23rd, 2011 23:30
stay
erin wynette said:
sad to say, it is for me..but no it' a past tense so i should say, it WAS...i wrote this poem 8 or 9 years ago when i was still in college...i was sick and i was begging my bf (dunno where he is now) to stay but he went home, not in their boarding house which is just a 5-minute walk but to their house, almost 2 hours by bus...but anyway, past is past..what's important now is m ok and i have my erwin.he is far from me also coz he's working in korea and am in middle east but were fine.i can feel his love and care and thanks to ym and skype as well as fb, we are talking everyday!!!whew!!!this is my life sissy!...tnx
February 17th, 2011 01:16
erin wynette said:
sad to say, it is for me..but no it' a past tense so i should say, it WAS...i wrote this poem 8 or 9 years ago when i was still in college...i was sick and i was begging my bf (dunno where he is now) to stay but he went home, not in their boarding house which is just a 5-minute walk but to their house, almost 2 hours by bus...but anyway, past is past..what's important now is m ok and i have my erwin.he is far from me also coz he's working in korea and am in middle east but were fine.i can feel his love and care and thanks to ym and skype as well as fb, we are talking everyday!!!whew!!!this is my life sissy!...tnx
February 17th, 2011 01:16
stay
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, this is very sad, especially after your sweet poems of blooming romance and love....are things well with you two? I hope so. This is well-written, aptly expressing the sore sentiments of the broken-hearted. Hope it is not for real for you.
February 17th, 2011 00:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, this is very sad, especially after your sweet poems of blooming romance and love....are things well with you two? I hope so. This is well-written, aptly expressing the sore sentiments of the broken-hearted. Hope it is not for real for you.
February 17th, 2011 00:34
stay
erin wynette said:
thanks so much dear!!!i know am not an expert but yeah here i can be myself..here i can express myself!!!God bless!
February 16th, 2011 10:02
erin wynette said:
thanks so much dear!!!i know am not an expert but yeah here i can be myself..here i can express myself!!!God bless!
February 16th, 2011 10:02
stay
Dolphine29 said:
Hi! Very nice and sad poem.
Welcome to a place where you can be yourself and write it down.
Best
Dolphine
February 16th, 2011 09:52
Dolphine29 said:
Hi! Very nice and sad poem.
Welcome to a place where you can be yourself and write it down.
Best
Dolphine
February 16th, 2011 09:52
the one
erin wynette said:
how i wanted to share all my poems for him but then, some are written in our dialect (ILOCANO, coz am from ILOCOS..northern philippines) and some in TAGALOG/FILIPINO, our national language...
February 13th, 2011 12:55
erin wynette said:
how i wanted to share all my poems for him but then, some are written in our dialect (ILOCANO, coz am from ILOCOS..northern philippines) and some in TAGALOG/FILIPINO, our national language...
February 13th, 2011 12:55
the one
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet....I quite enjoyed your "author comment" offering further insight on this....made me smile...yup! He is delightful inspiration...I know how that goes.....it'll be fun to see what all he inspires your pen to share. "The One" is a fine title; since you indicated indecision, you could also use "eyes" in the title...maybe "Your Eyes"?
February 12th, 2011 23:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet....I quite enjoyed your "author comment" offering further insight on this....made me smile...yup! He is delightful inspiration...I know how that goes.....it'll be fun to see what all he inspires your pen to share. "The One" is a fine title; since you indicated indecision, you could also use "eyes" in the title...maybe "Your Eyes"?
February 12th, 2011 23:48
hold tight
Cheeky Missy said:
Made me smile....how sweet! I quite enjoyed his poem for you, his precious beloved. Sounds like he has an inkling of reality....enshrined in each other's hearts, holding tight, yet also likely to face some fights...it's a beautiful snapshot of his courtship and a tender one. As for folk trying to pull you apart, that is very miserable, and yet, if possible, be wise and try to hear what their contentions are (ya, I know you can't when you're in love)....perhaps they see more realistically and farther into the future than you two, perhaps not. And God's Word alone will give you guidance. Thanks again for sharing!
February 12th, 2011 23:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Made me smile....how sweet! I quite enjoyed his poem for you, his precious beloved. Sounds like he has an inkling of reality....enshrined in each other's hearts, holding tight, yet also likely to face some fights...it's a beautiful snapshot of his courtship and a tender one. As for folk trying to pull you apart, that is very miserable, and yet, if possible, be wise and try to hear what their contentions are (ya, I know you can't when you're in love)....perhaps they see more realistically and farther into the future than you two, perhaps not. And God's Word alone will give you guidance. Thanks again for sharing!
February 12th, 2011 23:43
addicted
erin wynette said:
thanks again sissy!!!though am always having trouble with titles...
February 9th, 2011 04:13
erin wynette said:
thanks again sissy!!!though am always having trouble with titles...
February 9th, 2011 04:13
addicted
Cheeky Missy said:
Wonderful! I am very happy for you two! This is a delightful and beautiful romantic love piece...your title is too perfect! I quite enjoyed this!!
February 8th, 2011 22:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Wonderful! I am very happy for you two! This is a delightful and beautiful romantic love piece...your title is too perfect! I quite enjoyed this!!
February 8th, 2011 22:42
addicted
erin wynette said:
wow thank you!!!hope he also appreciate it like you do!God bless
February 8th, 2011 13:23
erin wynette said:
wow thank you!!!hope he also appreciate it like you do!God bless
February 8th, 2011 13:23
hold tight
erin wynette said:
like any other relationship, ours also was put to test...some were happy, some were not and the worst thing is they tried to pull us apart...i wonder why some people are like that..can't they just support a person who is happy?.i really don't understand sometimes.but anyway, thanks God were still together till now!we remained true to each other and kept the love and trust and most of all, we're always asking for God's guidance!!
February 8th, 2011 13:19
erin wynette said:
like any other relationship, ours also was put to test...some were happy, some were not and the worst thing is they tried to pull us apart...i wonder why some people are like that..can't they just support a person who is happy?.i really don't understand sometimes.but anyway, thanks God were still together till now!we remained true to each other and kept the love and trust and most of all, we're always asking for God's guidance!!
February 8th, 2011 13:19
my life
erin wynette said:
thanks so much!!!may God shower you more with his blessings!!!take care always!!
February 8th, 2011 08:05
erin wynette said:
thanks so much!!!may God shower you more with his blessings!!!take care always!!
February 8th, 2011 08:05
Drained
erin wynette said:
am glad to have met you too!!!serving the Lord is really the best!!!but sad to say, going to church is impossible for me now since am working in saudi arabia but as soon as i get home i would continue serving Him like i use to do....sing, teach children at sunday school,go to missions..whew!!miss those things!!!
February 8th, 2011 08:04
erin wynette said:
am glad to have met you too!!!serving the Lord is really the best!!!but sad to say, going to church is impossible for me now since am working in saudi arabia but as soon as i get home i would continue serving Him like i use to do....sing, teach children at sunday school,go to missions..whew!!miss those things!!!
February 8th, 2011 08:04
my life
Cheeky Missy said:
"....thanks to poetry" If we can just get it out, written down, we do feel momentary relief, but only in the Lord you appear to call upon in the concluding lines of your last stanza will we find the ability to overcome....ever seek His face! I am sorry you've suffered so much and so early, glad you've not given up and thankfully seem to call on the Lord for deliverance...that's excellent since He is our only salvation. La, I hope my comments don't offend you....Your poem is very nicely written....great job!
February 6th, 2011 18:25
Cheeky Missy said:
"....thanks to poetry" If we can just get it out, written down, we do feel momentary relief, but only in the Lord you appear to call upon in the concluding lines of your last stanza will we find the ability to overcome....ever seek His face! I am sorry you've suffered so much and so early, glad you've not given up and thankfully seem to call on the Lord for deliverance...that's excellent since He is our only salvation. La, I hope my comments don't offend you....Your poem is very nicely written....great job!
February 6th, 2011 18:25
Drained
Cheeky Missy said:
Well-written, excellently described.....and of course you're not alone in this tortured existence of the mind, the thing none can see that can twist and torture, destroy, make high.....only the Lord can deliver any of us, and give us the peace of God to rule in our hearts. You described the situation very well....we're not "friends," yet may I say, call on the Lord and seek His face?
February 6th, 2011 18:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Well-written, excellently described.....and of course you're not alone in this tortured existence of the mind, the thing none can see that can twist and torture, destroy, make high.....only the Lord can deliver any of us, and give us the peace of God to rule in our hearts. You described the situation very well....we're not "friends," yet may I say, call on the Lord and seek His face?
February 6th, 2011 18:19
my life
erin wynette said:
despite all my pains, i still believe that i would overcome all the trials that come my way!!!thanks to poetry!!!
February 6th, 2011 14:20
erin wynette said:
despite all my pains, i still believe that i would overcome all the trials that come my way!!!thanks to poetry!!!
February 6th, 2011 14:20
