Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A GRAIN OF SAND
Suresh said:
Hey, I like to read from all over the place and this time I went all the way to your first.
I found so much purity and innocence, an experience that most have felt growing up, playing imaginative games, even if far away from a barren landscape.
But those that grow up under your imaginative write, only hear of glorious wars and heroes, and are anxious and eager to play the role.
I am imagining early 1900s either in India or the Boers war in South Africa - and didn\'t feel radicalization, but just coming of age and loss of innocence.
I was transported by your write. I hope you don\'t mind my taking this Liberty.
March 31st, 2019 17:49
Suresh said:
Hey, I like to read from all over the place and this time I went all the way to your first.
I found so much purity and innocence, an experience that most have felt growing up, playing imaginative games, even if far away from a barren landscape.
But those that grow up under your imaginative write, only hear of glorious wars and heroes, and are anxious and eager to play the role.
I am imagining early 1900s either in India or the Boers war in South Africa - and didn\'t feel radicalization, but just coming of age and loss of innocence.
I was transported by your write. I hope you don\'t mind my taking this Liberty.
March 31st, 2019 17:49
LAVENDER\'S BLUE (No 3)
Fay Slimm. said:
When blows the tide inward and nowhere is private I run for home quickly singing this ditty - -Lavender\'s blue when I cant use a Loo and oh Bustin\' Lilly what should I do. Ha ha - great post today again Mike.
March 31st, 2019 12:44
Fay Slimm. said:
When blows the tide inward and nowhere is private I run for home quickly singing this ditty - -Lavender\'s blue when I cant use a Loo and oh Bustin\' Lilly what should I do. Ha ha - great post today again Mike.
March 31st, 2019 12:44
LAVENDER\'S BLUE (No 3)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Nice one! A good morning laugh!😂
Love the painting!
Happy Sunday!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 05:27
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Nice one! A good morning laugh!😂
Love the painting!
Happy Sunday!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 05:27
LAVENDER\'S BLUE (No 3)
dusk arising said:
Lavenders blue silly billy
makes me look quite dapper
all on my own
dilly dilly
sat on the crapper
You inspire me so much, did u know that?
March 31st, 2019 04:51
dusk arising said:
Lavenders blue silly billy
makes me look quite dapper
all on my own
dilly dilly
sat on the crapper
You inspire me so much, did u know that?
March 31st, 2019 04:51
LAVENDER\'S BLUE (No 3)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE !
When the Loo & Sink is NOT
Always us the CHAMBER POT
When out the window ~ You it throw
Always warn the folk below
Blessings in all you undertake !
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 31st, 2019 03:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE !
When the Loo & Sink is NOT
Always us the CHAMBER POT
When out the window ~ You it throw
Always warn the folk below
Blessings in all you undertake !
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 31st, 2019 03:36
LAVENDER\'S BLUE (No 3)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE !
When the Loo & Sink is NOT
Always us the CHAMBER POT
When out the window ~ You it throw
Always warn the folk below
Blessings in all you undertake !
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 31st, 2019 03:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE !
When the Loo & Sink is NOT
Always us the CHAMBER POT
When out the window ~ You it throw
Always warn the folk below
Blessings in all you undertake !
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 31st, 2019 03:36
LAVENDER\'S BLUE (No 3)
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. Mss Berles OK? You could write about them for some poems?
March 31st, 2019 01:46
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. Mss Berles OK? You could write about them for some poems?
March 31st, 2019 01:46
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
dusk arising said:
Bloke at the next table sent his meal back.... five minutes later they tried to serve the same meal to me.... oh well i thought.... what goes around - comes around..... \"Thats Kharma\" i said..... \"no boss, it\'s Korma\" said the waiter
March 30th, 2019 23:49
dusk arising said:
Bloke at the next table sent his meal back.... five minutes later they tried to serve the same meal to me.... oh well i thought.... what goes around - comes around..... \"Thats Kharma\" i said..... \"no boss, it\'s Korma\" said the waiter
March 30th, 2019 23:49
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
Neville said:
there is a time and a place for everything.. pop a poppadom on for now and see how it goes ya silly billy dilly dilly ........... phall ing that try a madras........ N
March 30th, 2019 13:16
Neville said:
there is a time and a place for everything.. pop a poppadom on for now and see how it goes ya silly billy dilly dilly ........... phall ing that try a madras........ N
March 30th, 2019 13:16
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
MendedFences27 said:
Reminds me of \"Lavender Blue\" by Sammy Turner. What the hay is vindaloo? I assumed some kind of drain clearer. Wait, . . .now I get it, just an unclogger. I guess I\'m the \"numb\" one. Good chuckle though. Had fun with it. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 11:47
MendedFences27 said:
Reminds me of \"Lavender Blue\" by Sammy Turner. What the hay is vindaloo? I assumed some kind of drain clearer. Wait, . . .now I get it, just an unclogger. I guess I\'m the \"numb\" one. Good chuckle though. Had fun with it. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 11:47
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE for raising the Laughter Tone of MPS ~ especially as BREXIT has now reached the EXIT without a Paddle. Next week \"Over the waterfall !\"
Please check \"I luv me Mudder\" by BZ !
Blessings & Harmony
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 30th, 2019 11:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE for raising the Laughter Tone of MPS ~ especially as BREXIT has now reached the EXIT without a Paddle. Next week \"Over the waterfall !\"
Please check \"I luv me Mudder\" by BZ !
Blessings & Harmony
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 30th, 2019 11:09
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
Fay Slimm. said:
Am wordless with giggle here Michael - - - where on earth do they come from these funny ditties - I am hopeless at wit yet love to read it.
March 30th, 2019 08:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Am wordless with giggle here Michael - - - where on earth do they come from these funny ditties - I am hopeless at wit yet love to read it.
March 30th, 2019 08:14
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m laughing but not sure what at! I guess we all have to give that bum a scratch... Hahaha thanks for that!
March 30th, 2019 04:19
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m laughing but not sure what at! I guess we all have to give that bum a scratch... Hahaha thanks for that!
March 30th, 2019 04:19
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
Goldfinch60 said:
Toilet paper in the \'fridge again eh?
My first laugh of the day Michael, thank you.
Fabulous artwork.
March 30th, 2019 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Toilet paper in the \'fridge again eh?
My first laugh of the day Michael, thank you.
Fabulous artwork.
March 30th, 2019 01:48
BENEATH
Fay Slimm. said:
So glad I caught this one Michael - the quiet you wrote into every line seeps into the psyche - - great read.
March 29th, 2019 16:40
Fay Slimm. said:
So glad I caught this one Michael - the quiet you wrote into every line seeps into the psyche - - great read.
March 29th, 2019 16:40
BENEATH
MendedFences27 said:
Those \"lush green tranquil vales\" seem to be everywhere in England. A beautiful country it is. Your poem describes this scene exactly, such that,I was there looking down at the \"crocheted threads of hedgerows.\" \"Interspersed with hollowed oaks\" of long ago. And \"the quilted patchwork fields\" reminded me of a view from the South of England near where my wife grew up. Maybe, I just need to go back again. Lovely poem. Very nostalgic to me. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:08
MendedFences27 said:
Those \"lush green tranquil vales\" seem to be everywhere in England. A beautiful country it is. Your poem describes this scene exactly, such that,I was there looking down at the \"crocheted threads of hedgerows.\" \"Interspersed with hollowed oaks\" of long ago. And \"the quilted patchwork fields\" reminded me of a view from the South of England near where my wife grew up. Maybe, I just need to go back again. Lovely poem. Very nostalgic to me. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:08
BENEATH
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A beautiful, awesome write.
Keep writing FineB
March 29th, 2019 13:03
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A beautiful, awesome write.
Keep writing FineB
March 29th, 2019 13:03
BENEATH
Suresh said:
Even though the print is black and white, your words have colored the landscape beautifully.
Thnx
March 29th, 2019 09:56
Suresh said:
Even though the print is black and white, your words have colored the landscape beautifully.
Thnx
March 29th, 2019 09:56
BENEATH
dusk arising said:
And then they dropped the bomb!
I could smell the cold earth and picture the forests before they robbed them for the ships with which to rule the waves and create our great empires of subjugated souls.
Sent me on a journey you did.
March 29th, 2019 06:42
dusk arising said:
And then they dropped the bomb!
I could smell the cold earth and picture the forests before they robbed them for the ships with which to rule the waves and create our great empires of subjugated souls.
Sent me on a journey you did.
March 29th, 2019 06:42
BENEATH
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Love the SPRING TREES UNCLE MIKE : and the serious POEM ! You have a way with words (which I like !). In NATURE POEMS one should present a PICTURE one cn see & feel. I call them TONE POEMS and I might post one on SUNDAY (BRIAN & I allocate slots for Poems but don\'t dictate Structure or Subject !) Todays Poem is a COLLBORATION on our Mutual Love ! Love the final STANZA : Pulsing Breeze : Lush Green Tranquil Vale : Cobalt Sky : AWESOME ! I sense it : I scent it : I see it : AMEN !
Blessings and much Joyful
Yours ANGELA (10pm) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 03:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Love the SPRING TREES UNCLE MIKE : and the serious POEM ! You have a way with words (which I like !). In NATURE POEMS one should present a PICTURE one cn see & feel. I call them TONE POEMS and I might post one on SUNDAY (BRIAN & I allocate slots for Poems but don\'t dictate Structure or Subject !) Todays Poem is a COLLBORATION on our Mutual Love ! Love the final STANZA : Pulsing Breeze : Lush Green Tranquil Vale : Cobalt Sky : AWESOME ! I sense it : I scent it : I see it : AMEN !
Blessings and much Joyful
Yours ANGELA (10pm) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 03:51
BENEATH
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Got no calcy cliffs rounds here either. You know Cal Cliff?
March 29th, 2019 03:03
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Got no calcy cliffs rounds here either. You know Cal Cliff?
March 29th, 2019 03:03
BENEATH
Goldfinch60 said:
Housman survives.
Great write Michael, I could see it all in my minds eye.
March 29th, 2019 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Housman survives.
Great write Michael, I could see it all in my minds eye.
March 29th, 2019 02:01
GRINLOADS OF 575s (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Michael am glad I did not miss this one today - your 575s are a product of slant-eyed thinking and always leave me with a grin..... as for the exquisite picture well -
-countryside doesn\'t get painted better and proves where your talent lies.
March 28th, 2019 14:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Michael am glad I did not miss this one today - your 575s are a product of slant-eyed thinking and always leave me with a grin..... as for the exquisite picture well -
-countryside doesn\'t get painted better and proves where your talent lies.
March 28th, 2019 14:09
GRINLOADS OF 575s (2)
Neville said:
Excellent Michael, I think probably my favourite yet... Neville
March 28th, 2019 14:04
Neville said:
Excellent Michael, I think probably my favourite yet... Neville
March 28th, 2019 14:04
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