Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



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orchidee said:

Cooeee early poet! Good writes and pic Michael. You see Stum Berles (stumbles) in my recent poem? What\'s his/her real name. It can\'t be Stum.

March 28th, 2019 02:29

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Goldfinch60 said:

Three clever ones Michael.

Good artwork as well.

March 28th, 2019 02:26

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Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

I enjoyed your 575s!
Love the artwork! I might have to add this one to my list along with the others! If you keep this up, I might have to secure some wall space at an art gallery to showcase them!

~Laura~

March 27th, 2019 16:42

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MendedFences27 said:

Three very fine and humorous poems. My favorite is the first. It\'s so true.The
artwork is brilliant, especially the coloring. For some unknown reason I see it as blues music wafting through the air, and being resisted by nature. Loved it and all of the poems. - Phil A.

March 27th, 2019 16:04

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Neville said:

Indeed a very relateable trilogy.... N

March 27th, 2019 12:14

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Finished teaching @ 4pm (importance of VITAMINS with Caterers) so thought Id catch up on MPS ! Love the VISUAL ~ my Title ~ \"Ripples that I find in recesses of my MIND\" or is it a CARDIOGRAPH after running ? ! Love the SENRYU I have titled them ~ Priorities : Choices : Delegation ~ Good title for a BOOK on EFFECTIVE MANAGEMENT.
Blessings & Joy
Yours BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check todays POEM ~ Thanks

March 27th, 2019 11:36

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Suresh said:

What\'s unseen at first, comes into focus with concentration - applies to all in life.

Thnx

March 27th, 2019 11:30

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Fay Slimm. said:

Grins all over me face after reading these fun 575s - - -you have a great sense of humour my friend.

March 27th, 2019 06:32

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dusk arising said:

They\'re the stuff my grins are made of and thats for sure.

March 27th, 2019 04:43

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orchidee said:

Good writes and pic Michael. You ran out of credit cards to chop up?!

March 27th, 2019 02:52

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Goldfinch60 said:

I can relate to all of those Michael.

The new art form is very good Michael, I am seeing more and more within them.

March 27th, 2019 01:28

SWIM WITH ME
Suresh said:

I too want to swim with the Dolphins and soar high with the swallows.

Thnx for this light hearted piece

March 25th, 2019 11:06

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Neville said:

A beautiful poem Michael and a very kind but altogether unnecessary little foot note. at the end... Neville

March 25th, 2019 07:55

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orchidee said:

Happy Christmas there, in case I forget later. It\'s Lady Day, and the festival of The Annunciation - the announcement by the angel Gabriel of Mary of bearing Jesus - therefore 9 months before He was born.
Dunno if Christmas was originally Dec 25th, but...… you seen Gabriel? Gabry Berle? Another one of that family.

March 25th, 2019 04:29

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Fay Slimm. said:

Inspired by such a fine piece your sensual write Mike does more than justice as tribute to Nev\'s poem - love too the well chosen artwork. Great first read of my morning.

March 25th, 2019 04:06

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orchidee said:

And - you got those Christmas presents in yet? A church book reminds me it\'s only 9 months to go.

March 25th, 2019 03:14

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orchidee said:

A good write and pic Michael. I was saying to Gold, there\'s some film where a boy rides off on a dolphin at the end. I forget the name.
Also, we\'re all on the ocean wave today, what with Nicholas sailing, and you swimming! Ya swimming the Channel?
Does Miss Berles like sailors?


March 25th, 2019 02:56

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sylviasearcher said:

Beautiful

March 25th, 2019 02:53

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Goldfinch60 said:

May those dreams always be fulfilled.

Beautiful artwork.

March 25th, 2019 02:18

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Nicholas Browning said:

Ah, a tidied up version of the snippet you left on Nev\'s comment section. I enjoyed the read. The art is nice touch, also.

March 25th, 2019 02:01

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Nicholas Browning said:

Ahh, yes! This is what I\'m talking about!
Gotta love the good stuff.
Quite a ride through a fantasy world. Well done Michael!

March 24th, 2019 19:31

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Neville said:

I immediately thought of Pink Floyd\'s \'obscured by clouds\'
and now.. I just cant get the tune out of my head... good job I like it innit.. and your poem by the way..... N

March 24th, 2019 13:47

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orchidee said:

How\'s that evening, old chap? Jolly spiffing, and top-hat? Or caddish, burdensome, bounder-ish?! Tally-ho and all that rubbish. lol

March 24th, 2019 12:16

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : As you know the MAORI name for NZ is \"Land of the Long White Cloud\" because of the Lenticular Clouds which rest on the Peaks ! We have some lovely Cloud Formations in N Island and I look forward to visiting S Island @ easter when BRIAN comes. We start & finish in Christchurch which still need a lot of support & TLC.
Love this series of \'Abstracts from Scratch\' ! For me today\'s is a RAINBOW (red thru blue) ending in a Field with a Pot o\' Gold ! I love the swirling clouds behind the BOW ! What would you title it \"Abstract 147\" is too facile !
Love the Mystical Poem : Clouds are in a class of their own. Harbingers o\' Weather : Yesterday : Today : Forever : AMEN
Blessings & Peace
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

March 24th, 2019 06:30

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Fay Slimm. said:

Wow - - satyrs seeking prancing nymphs - shall visit your neck of the woods to see for myself what more is revealed - ha - - a spirited write Mike.

March 24th, 2019 04:03

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orchidee said:

A good write and pic Michael. Got many credit cards left?!

March 24th, 2019 02:20

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whisperingquill said:

That second stanza is really phenomenal

March 24th, 2019 02:06

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Goldfinch60 said:

Super write Michael, that first verse reminds me of something that happened a few mornings ago about which I wrote a poem that I will put on here today.

Love the artwork, this style is going well.

March 24th, 2019 01:34

BODY DESIGN
dusk arising said:

For the bum so placed
it was surely an art
to enable a retreat
as we craftily fart

for those silent but deadly ones
i\'ve a trick that\'s new
i cunningly release them
in the check-out queue



March 23rd, 2019 16:35

BODY DESIGN
Neville said:

Many a true word, written in jest and all that jazz.... an anatomically accurate little wimsey and I aint talkin appendage so get down Shep... sorry Fido.......... Neville

March 23rd, 2019 12:45



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