Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



IN TRANSCENDENCE
Lorna said:

Does your last stanza mean a happy ending? In other words, all doubts are gone, burned up?

June 4th, 2019 06:34

IN TRANSCENDENCE
dusk arising said:

Four verses of considering... how am i gonna fix my motorbike - memories of halcyon days with pillion lovers - and the finale - a solution - scrap it!

June 4th, 2019 04:15

IN TRANSCENDENCE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M, away from the Hurley Berley of life. You met him/her - that Berley person?!

June 4th, 2019 02:24

IN TRANSCENDENCE
Goldfinch60 said:

Our sights can certainly transcend each other into the mystery of life.

Wonderful artwork Michael.

June 4th, 2019 00:44

LIMPET LUCY
Suresh said:

I\'d have no problem if Limpet Lucy with ya permission cuddled up to me.

Lighthearted all the way around

June 3rd, 2019 16:18

LIMPET LUCY
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

“Limpet Lucy” is quite a gal!
I enjoyed the read!

Love the painting! The colors are matching today’s sky...in my part of town! Very beautiful and soothing!

~Laura~

June 3rd, 2019 14:59

LIMPET LUCY
Fay Slimm. said:

This smile your verse left behind get bigger the more I think of Lucy the Limpet......... ha - good-on-ya Mike and thanks for the grin.

June 3rd, 2019 04:47

LIMPET LUCY
Neville said:

sounds like my kinda woman.....another chuckle here Michael... thank you...

Neville

June 3rd, 2019 04:18

LIMPET LUCY
dusk arising said:

Reminds me of Orchi\'s dog Fido
He lost his left ear to a Flymo
His pee ruined the lawn
But now that he\'s gawn
Orchi\'s dug a 6ft deep Lido

And i\'ve read that since that wee skirmish at Hastings
Time has gone simply a-wasting
But time spent with Berles
And some other girls
He\'s still ready to give Harold a pasting

I loved your limpet piece today.

June 3rd, 2019 02:10

LIMPET LUCY
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Would this be Lucy Limpet-Berles?!

June 3rd, 2019 01:27

LIMPET LUCY
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Limpet Lucy ~ sounds quite JUICY
Holds on tight ~ ALL NIGHT !

Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the BLUES on BLUES ~ very cool & soothing ~ ideal for a Dentists or a GPs Surgery ! Preferable to the *SCREAM* or *GUERNICA* !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 3rd, 2019 00:52

LIMPET LUCY
Goldfinch60 said:

Great artwork, the colours are increasing.

June 3rd, 2019 00:50

LIMPET LUCY
Goldfinch60 said:

I sometimes have to be \'Hold-on Andy\' as Joyce is an edge of the bed sleeper.

June 3rd, 2019 00:50

ANOTHER DAY
Suresh said:

At first I thought, lost daydreaming, \'blacked toast, cold coffee\', but then I am lost with the words \'empty chair and abandoned slippers\'.
Enjoyed reading it.

June 2nd, 2019 12:10

From \'A COLLECTION\' (4)
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A good and poignant write. Beautiful picture with all the shades of colour.

Keep writing
FineB

May 31st, 2019 04:10

From \'A COLLECTION\' (3)
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A good write.

Put it this way the way modern life is at times you have to be on your guard at all times there seems to a knife in every gutter.

I like the picture - the clarity of the blue symbolises hope.

Keep writing
FineB

May 31st, 2019 04:08

From \'A COLLECTION\' (4)
Neville said:

seriously enjoyed.... and so bloomin true.

Neville

May 30th, 2019 15:08

From \'A COLLECTION\' (4)
Suresh said:

I got it, I think!

May 30th, 2019 11:29

From \'A COLLECTION\' (4)
Fay Slimm. said:

Not knowing what to ask I will keep silent on the question of what I will be told.... or at least I think so......... great feel of the blue blue yonder in your artwork today Mike.........

May 30th, 2019 09:19

From \'A COLLECTION\' (4)
dusk arising said:

You didn\'t tell me to expect this.

May 30th, 2019 08:31

From \'A COLLECTION\' (4)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : 9:30pm here : chance to reflect. Love the ABSTRACT : It leaves much to the imagination : as it should ! We are on the same wavelength again : please check our POEM on INDECISION !

Bleassings Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 30th, 2019 03:25

From \'A COLLECTION\' (4)
orchidee said:

Erm, yes, true M. Good pic too.
I got one:
He who knows not what He is looking for
How will he know when he has found it?

May 30th, 2019 01:38

From \'A COLLECTION\' (4)
Goldfinch60 said:

He who knows what to ask
may not like what he is told.

I see what you mean about the green addition to the the blue, it gives me something else to think about. Good artwork.

May 30th, 2019 01:18

From \'A COLLECTION\' (4)
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Sorry Michael what are you saying? LOL
Excellent Loving the series of abstracts

May 30th, 2019 01:08

From \'A COLLECTION\' (3)
Neville said:

very good sir.... N

May 29th, 2019 15:16

From \'A COLLECTION\' (3)
Suresh said:

Knife in the gutter is to keep the vermins away, now we don\'t them to distract us...not the pleasant way your paintings do


May 29th, 2019 10:43

From \'A COLLECTION\' (3)
dusk arising said:

A knife could come in handy.

May 29th, 2019 05:39

From \'A COLLECTION\' (3)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Always beware ~ when a knifes in the air
It could spread you out out like BUTTER !

Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Great pic \'n poem to start the DAY in UK (9:30am) and end it in NZ (9:30pm) very cool ! Love BLUE on BLUE were taking it as OCEAN (not Blue Skies) to complement our WEDNESDAY offering on RAIN (please visit) You get a mention (In praise of Rhyme) because MICHAEL rhymes with WATER CYCLE ~ OK ! Love your Poem and extract from the CANTOS of EZRA POUND *50 Reasons why every Silver Lining has a Cloud !* No. 37 Never sweet talk with a FORK ~ His wife is always is always a TWO-EDGED KNIFE
No. 38 You\'ll SWOON if you CROON with a SPOON (one for ORCHII !)

Blessings and PEACE and LOVE
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 29th, 2019 03:51

From \'A COLLECTION\' (3)
Poetic Dan said:

Great stuff

May 29th, 2019 02:51

From \'A COLLECTION\' (3)
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Was there a spade there too?!

May 29th, 2019 02:05



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