Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LAVENDER\'S BLUE (No 3)
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. Mss Berles OK? You could write about them for some poems?
March 31st, 2019 01:46
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. Mss Berles OK? You could write about them for some poems?
March 31st, 2019 01:46
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
dusk arising said:
Bloke at the next table sent his meal back.... five minutes later they tried to serve the same meal to me.... oh well i thought.... what goes around - comes around..... \"Thats Kharma\" i said..... \"no boss, it\'s Korma\" said the waiter
March 30th, 2019 23:49
dusk arising said:
Bloke at the next table sent his meal back.... five minutes later they tried to serve the same meal to me.... oh well i thought.... what goes around - comes around..... \"Thats Kharma\" i said..... \"no boss, it\'s Korma\" said the waiter
March 30th, 2019 23:49
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
Neville said:
there is a time and a place for everything.. pop a poppadom on for now and see how it goes ya silly billy dilly dilly ........... phall ing that try a madras........ N
March 30th, 2019 13:16
Neville said:
there is a time and a place for everything.. pop a poppadom on for now and see how it goes ya silly billy dilly dilly ........... phall ing that try a madras........ N
March 30th, 2019 13:16
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
MendedFences27 said:
Reminds me of \"Lavender Blue\" by Sammy Turner. What the hay is vindaloo? I assumed some kind of drain clearer. Wait, . . .now I get it, just an unclogger. I guess I\'m the \"numb\" one. Good chuckle though. Had fun with it. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 11:47
MendedFences27 said:
Reminds me of \"Lavender Blue\" by Sammy Turner. What the hay is vindaloo? I assumed some kind of drain clearer. Wait, . . .now I get it, just an unclogger. I guess I\'m the \"numb\" one. Good chuckle though. Had fun with it. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 11:47
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE for raising the Laughter Tone of MPS ~ especially as BREXIT has now reached the EXIT without a Paddle. Next week \"Over the waterfall !\"
Please check \"I luv me Mudder\" by BZ !
Blessings & Harmony
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 30th, 2019 11:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE for raising the Laughter Tone of MPS ~ especially as BREXIT has now reached the EXIT without a Paddle. Next week \"Over the waterfall !\"
Please check \"I luv me Mudder\" by BZ !
Blessings & Harmony
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 30th, 2019 11:09
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
Fay Slimm. said:
Am wordless with giggle here Michael - - - where on earth do they come from these funny ditties - I am hopeless at wit yet love to read it.
March 30th, 2019 08:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Am wordless with giggle here Michael - - - where on earth do they come from these funny ditties - I am hopeless at wit yet love to read it.
March 30th, 2019 08:14
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m laughing but not sure what at! I guess we all have to give that bum a scratch... Hahaha thanks for that!
March 30th, 2019 04:19
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m laughing but not sure what at! I guess we all have to give that bum a scratch... Hahaha thanks for that!
March 30th, 2019 04:19
LAVENDER\'S BLUE
Goldfinch60 said:
Toilet paper in the \'fridge again eh?
My first laugh of the day Michael, thank you.
Fabulous artwork.
March 30th, 2019 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Toilet paper in the \'fridge again eh?
My first laugh of the day Michael, thank you.
Fabulous artwork.
March 30th, 2019 01:48
BENEATH
Fay Slimm. said:
So glad I caught this one Michael - the quiet you wrote into every line seeps into the psyche - - great read.
March 29th, 2019 16:40
Fay Slimm. said:
So glad I caught this one Michael - the quiet you wrote into every line seeps into the psyche - - great read.
March 29th, 2019 16:40
BENEATH
MendedFences27 said:
Those \"lush green tranquil vales\" seem to be everywhere in England. A beautiful country it is. Your poem describes this scene exactly, such that,I was there looking down at the \"crocheted threads of hedgerows.\" \"Interspersed with hollowed oaks\" of long ago. And \"the quilted patchwork fields\" reminded me of a view from the South of England near where my wife grew up. Maybe, I just need to go back again. Lovely poem. Very nostalgic to me. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:08
MendedFences27 said:
Those \"lush green tranquil vales\" seem to be everywhere in England. A beautiful country it is. Your poem describes this scene exactly, such that,I was there looking down at the \"crocheted threads of hedgerows.\" \"Interspersed with hollowed oaks\" of long ago. And \"the quilted patchwork fields\" reminded me of a view from the South of England near where my wife grew up. Maybe, I just need to go back again. Lovely poem. Very nostalgic to me. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:08
BENEATH
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A beautiful, awesome write.
Keep writing FineB
March 29th, 2019 13:03
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A beautiful, awesome write.
Keep writing FineB
March 29th, 2019 13:03
BENEATH
Suresh said:
Even though the print is black and white, your words have colored the landscape beautifully.
Thnx
March 29th, 2019 09:56
Suresh said:
Even though the print is black and white, your words have colored the landscape beautifully.
Thnx
March 29th, 2019 09:56
BENEATH
dusk arising said:
And then they dropped the bomb!
I could smell the cold earth and picture the forests before they robbed them for the ships with which to rule the waves and create our great empires of subjugated souls.
Sent me on a journey you did.
March 29th, 2019 06:42
dusk arising said:
And then they dropped the bomb!
I could smell the cold earth and picture the forests before they robbed them for the ships with which to rule the waves and create our great empires of subjugated souls.
Sent me on a journey you did.
March 29th, 2019 06:42
BENEATH
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Love the SPRING TREES UNCLE MIKE : and the serious POEM ! You have a way with words (which I like !). In NATURE POEMS one should present a PICTURE one cn see & feel. I call them TONE POEMS and I might post one on SUNDAY (BRIAN & I allocate slots for Poems but don\'t dictate Structure or Subject !) Todays Poem is a COLLBORATION on our Mutual Love ! Love the final STANZA : Pulsing Breeze : Lush Green Tranquil Vale : Cobalt Sky : AWESOME ! I sense it : I scent it : I see it : AMEN !
Blessings and much Joyful
Yours ANGELA (10pm) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 03:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Love the SPRING TREES UNCLE MIKE : and the serious POEM ! You have a way with words (which I like !). In NATURE POEMS one should present a PICTURE one cn see & feel. I call them TONE POEMS and I might post one on SUNDAY (BRIAN & I allocate slots for Poems but don\'t dictate Structure or Subject !) Todays Poem is a COLLBORATION on our Mutual Love ! Love the final STANZA : Pulsing Breeze : Lush Green Tranquil Vale : Cobalt Sky : AWESOME ! I sense it : I scent it : I see it : AMEN !
Blessings and much Joyful
Yours ANGELA (10pm) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 03:51
BENEATH
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Got no calcy cliffs rounds here either. You know Cal Cliff?
March 29th, 2019 03:03
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Got no calcy cliffs rounds here either. You know Cal Cliff?
March 29th, 2019 03:03
BENEATH
Goldfinch60 said:
Housman survives.
Great write Michael, I could see it all in my minds eye.
March 29th, 2019 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Housman survives.
Great write Michael, I could see it all in my minds eye.
March 29th, 2019 02:01
GRINLOADS OF 575s (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Michael am glad I did not miss this one today - your 575s are a product of slant-eyed thinking and always leave me with a grin..... as for the exquisite picture well -
-countryside doesn\'t get painted better and proves where your talent lies.
March 28th, 2019 14:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Michael am glad I did not miss this one today - your 575s are a product of slant-eyed thinking and always leave me with a grin..... as for the exquisite picture well -
-countryside doesn\'t get painted better and proves where your talent lies.
March 28th, 2019 14:09
GRINLOADS OF 575s (2)
Neville said:
Excellent Michael, I think probably my favourite yet... Neville
March 28th, 2019 14:04
Neville said:
Excellent Michael, I think probably my favourite yet... Neville
March 28th, 2019 14:04
GRINLOADS OF 575s (2)
orchidee said:
Cooeee early poet! Good writes and pic Michael. You see Stum Berles (stumbles) in my recent poem? What\'s his/her real name. It can\'t be Stum.
March 28th, 2019 02:29
orchidee said:
Cooeee early poet! Good writes and pic Michael. You see Stum Berles (stumbles) in my recent poem? What\'s his/her real name. It can\'t be Stum.
March 28th, 2019 02:29
GRINLOADS OF 575s (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
Three clever ones Michael.
Good artwork as well.
March 28th, 2019 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Three clever ones Michael.
Good artwork as well.
March 28th, 2019 02:26
GRINLOADS OF 575s (1)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I enjoyed your 575s!
Love the artwork! I might have to add this one to my list along with the others! If you keep this up, I might have to secure some wall space at an art gallery to showcase them!
~Laura~
March 27th, 2019 16:42
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I enjoyed your 575s!
Love the artwork! I might have to add this one to my list along with the others! If you keep this up, I might have to secure some wall space at an art gallery to showcase them!
~Laura~
March 27th, 2019 16:42
GRINLOADS OF 575s (1)
MendedFences27 said:
Three very fine and humorous poems. My favorite is the first. It\'s so true.The
artwork is brilliant, especially the coloring. For some unknown reason I see it as blues music wafting through the air, and being resisted by nature. Loved it and all of the poems. - Phil A.
March 27th, 2019 16:04
MendedFences27 said:
Three very fine and humorous poems. My favorite is the first. It\'s so true.The
artwork is brilliant, especially the coloring. For some unknown reason I see it as blues music wafting through the air, and being resisted by nature. Loved it and all of the poems. - Phil A.
March 27th, 2019 16:04
GRINLOADS OF 575s (1)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Finished teaching @ 4pm (importance of VITAMINS with Caterers) so thought Id catch up on MPS ! Love the VISUAL ~ my Title ~ \"Ripples that I find in recesses of my MIND\" or is it a CARDIOGRAPH after running ? ! Love the SENRYU I have titled them ~ Priorities : Choices : Delegation ~ Good title for a BOOK on EFFECTIVE MANAGEMENT.
Blessings & Joy
Yours BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check todays POEM ~ Thanks
March 27th, 2019 11:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Finished teaching @ 4pm (importance of VITAMINS with Caterers) so thought Id catch up on MPS ! Love the VISUAL ~ my Title ~ \"Ripples that I find in recesses of my MIND\" or is it a CARDIOGRAPH after running ? ! Love the SENRYU I have titled them ~ Priorities : Choices : Delegation ~ Good title for a BOOK on EFFECTIVE MANAGEMENT.
Blessings & Joy
Yours BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check todays POEM ~ Thanks
March 27th, 2019 11:36
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