Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



LUSCIOUS LUCY
Goldfinch60 said:

Likely looking
like a layout
leading lewd
Lively likings.

March 15th, 2019 02:01

ATHENA\'S FLUTE
dusk arising said:

I think you have expressed the loneliness inside most people of great age who, prime long passed, exist in phases of reflection and waiting.

March 14th, 2019 12:28

ATHENA\'S FLUTE
orchidee said:

Aww, I don\'t feel like a drenching of unceasing woe meself (doh!). Maybe I will take a couple of them over-40 (?) pills to help out.

March 14th, 2019 07:21

ATHENA\'S FLUTE
Fay Slimm. said:

More than just super this little jewel - has to be one of your very best....... both in drawing, colour and first rate verse. - into my faves it goes .

March 14th, 2019 07:03

ATHENA\'S FLUTE
sylviasearcher said:

Oh I love a good drenching of unceasing woe in a morning.
Good job of it too.

Love the picture, I like the haziness of it, it somehow adds to the sense of loss or perhaps hopeless yearning, when placed next to the poem.

The use of shadows/shading ? and colour intrigued me and I wondered what of it.

The more I look at it the more melancholy I feel. Not sure that was what it was supposed to do or just mr channeling my inner demons!

March 14th, 2019 03:09

ATHENA\'S FLUTE
orchidee said:

a fine write and pic M. We\'ll torment people - me singing, and Athena on her flute - for ever! lol.

March 14th, 2019 02:45

ATHENA\'S FLUTE
Nicholas Browning said:

I enjoyed this very much. Wrenching description and a darker tone. This is good work.

March 14th, 2019 01:41

ATHENA\'S FLUTE
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive write Michael.

Like the artwork there is a great deal in it to see.

March 14th, 2019 01:36

ATHENA\'S FLUTE
Michael Edwards said:

Somehow a cartoon doesn\'t really sit comfortably with today\'s poem so something a bit different. Cartoons to resume tomorrow.

March 14th, 2019 01:13

DEFINITIONS (1)
orchidee said:

To be serious - ooh! I\'ve wondered about monks and nuns too. Maybe not all, but some, do charitable work reaching out to the community. I supposed they are called to the devotional life, hopefully not being unaffected, nor seeing the rest of us a \'lesser mortals\'.
The Salvation Army I have a lot of time for, and folk like that. They say \'Belief In Action\' and so it is.
Now, where\'s me trombone?!

March 13th, 2019 10:54

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Fay Slimm. said:

Your clever quips make the day more lighthearted and that\'s what it should be dear friend. - - - and thanks Mike for another sketchy smile - - \" Art in Heaven\"indeed !!

March 13th, 2019 04:56

LIMERICK No.60
dusk arising said:

A mental picture suddenly flikkers
of egg yolk all over her knickers
and the yolk down the leg
of lovely young Meg
brought a race to everyone\'s tikkers


March 13th, 2019 04:32

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Neville said:

every one a winner sir and that\'s a fact.. great little sketch too, I might add.... Neville

March 13th, 2019 03:47

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dusk arising said:

The wonders of the English language made real before our eyes. I particularly liked the worms.

March 13th, 2019 02:52

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Nicholas Browning said:

Your serious stuff tends to get me motivated, but these little bits are full of wonder of their own.

March 13th, 2019 02:48

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orchidee said:

That art (These are) good writes M. Terrible grammar there! lol.

March 13th, 2019 02:36

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Goldfinch60 said:

Some very meaningful writes there Michael, liked them all.

March 13th, 2019 02:11

LIMERICK No.60
fuche_bu said:

nice picture and fine limerick

March 12th, 2019 18:38

LIMERICK No.60
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

There was a Young Poet called STEVE
Who wore his GOD on his SLEEVE
Each day with some PSALMS
And Poem about PALMS
And a JOKE about ADAM & EVE !

Thanks for Cartoon Uncle Mike
No dubt a very pressing Sermon !

Love the LIM ~ Nothing worse than
a Shell bursting under ones derierre !

Please check our FUSION on SEASONS
VIVALDIS AUTUMN now playing ~ OK
Blessing for every Season
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

March 12th, 2019 09:55

LIMERICK No.60
Fay Slimm. said:

What a mess for young Meg....and . the sketch is so funny -wonder whether that happens ........... ha ha

March 12th, 2019 05:18

LIMERICK No.60
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Michael, the yolk is on her!

Those cassocks need a great deal of ironing.

March 12th, 2019 03:04

LIMERICK No.60
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write and pic M. In one church (men in suits, not robes), there were some back rooms. Some men were actually ironing clothes ready for the service. The cartoon is not so far-fetched! lol. Not heard of Meg Berles. Was it her?

March 12th, 2019 02:47

LIMERICK 59
orchidee said:

Oohh I\'m not going to Manchester then - swoon! (DA limerick). Banner?!

March 11th, 2019 07:20

LIMERICK 59
Neville said:

police be seated until the next verse.... which I hope shall be tomorra.. nice one squire... Neville

March 11th, 2019 07:03

LIMERICK 59
JaydeVictoria said:

Haha enjoyed this one as much as the last Michael. Well done!

March 11th, 2019 03:51

LIMERICK 59
dusk arising said:

Good one, OK my juices are flowing...here\'s one off the cuff:-

a demonstrative lassie from manchester
fell in love with a fellow protestor
her amourous manner
at the sight of his banner
turned her into a sexual molester

ho-hum

March 11th, 2019 02:34

LIMERICK 59
orchidee said:

Oh lol a good write and pic M.

March 11th, 2019 02:26

LIMERICK 59
Goldfinch60 said:

Good limerick Michael.

You certainly need the candles to warm some Churches.

March 11th, 2019 01:44

LIMERICK 58
Suresh said:

I got a bro
Who\'s no pro
Goes fishing at the hole
With worms, but no pole

Poor try
You\'re too good

March 10th, 2019 17:00

LIMERICK 58
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

That was good.

You\'ve certainly brought a smile to my face on this cold blustery day!

Keep writing FineB!

March 10th, 2019 12:12



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