Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Michael. On another poetry site that I was on a new person joined and I read about her and she said she was reading English. Her words were
“Studying English, I haven’t wrote many poems.”
I wrote a poem about that of course:
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Me, A Pedant?
Andy Brister (Goldfinch60) – October 2015.
A new poet came to the site,
Not unusual, many join
This wonderful poetry enclave.
I looked at their profile
And it made me laugh.
“Studying English,
I haven’t wrote many poems.”
I wouldn’t want to stay
On that English course.
Or is it just
That I am a pedant.
June 21st, 2019 03:07
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Michael. On another poetry site that I was on a new person joined and I read about her and she said she was reading English. Her words were
“Studying English, I haven’t wrote many poems.”
I wrote a poem about that of course:
----------------------------------------------------
Me, A Pedant?
Andy Brister (Goldfinch60) – October 2015.
A new poet came to the site,
Not unusual, many join
This wonderful poetry enclave.
I looked at their profile
And it made me laugh.
“Studying English,
I haven’t wrote many poems.”
I wouldn’t want to stay
On that English course.
Or is it just
That I am a pedant.
June 21st, 2019 03:07
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (2)
orchidee said:
Yes, even \'I woz ere\' carved or written on tree trunks! You seen Mr Berle-Ington?
June 21st, 2019 02:10
orchidee said:
Yes, even \'I woz ere\' carved or written on tree trunks! You seen Mr Berle-Ington?
June 21st, 2019 02:10
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - am still giggling at Neville\'s comment - - sad that dictionaries seem to have had their day Mike - - such a shame as our language is full of wordy delights. Love your exquisite artwork which I have had to miss for a few days.
June 21st, 2019 01:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - am still giggling at Neville\'s comment - - sad that dictionaries seem to have had their day Mike - - such a shame as our language is full of wordy delights. Love your exquisite artwork which I have had to miss for a few days.
June 21st, 2019 01:59
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (2)
Neville said:
it irks me two sire.. but am shure eye am as guilty as fork.. May bee eyven more sew than moist..... Nipple
June 21st, 2019 01:46
Neville said:
it irks me two sire.. but am shure eye am as guilty as fork.. May bee eyven more sew than moist..... Nipple
June 21st, 2019 01:46
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY
orchidee said:
Oh no, he saw it - woof, woof, woofity-woof - a poetic woof there. No end to his talents! heehee.
June 20th, 2019 13:27
orchidee said:
Oh no, he saw it - woof, woof, woofity-woof - a poetic woof there. No end to his talents! heehee.
June 20th, 2019 13:27
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY
Neville said:
I like these words.. I like em a lot.. I do, I do, I do...... N
June 20th, 2019 11:38
Neville said:
I like these words.. I like em a lot.. I do, I do, I do...... N
June 20th, 2019 11:38
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY
marijoy said:
I can see you guys having a lot of fun with this writing site. I love short poems or just words dripping from a pen. Every word counts.
Thanks Michael. Lovely water color paints.
June 20th, 2019 10:19
marijoy said:
I can see you guys having a lot of fun with this writing site. I love short poems or just words dripping from a pen. Every word counts.
Thanks Michael. Lovely water color paints.
June 20th, 2019 10:19
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY
Suresh said:
Poetry has become a form of expression
For many a platform to release depression
Whether call it art, fart or a craft
Unlike most, I know I\'m not that smart
June 20th, 2019 10:17
Suresh said:
Poetry has become a form of expression
For many a platform to release depression
Whether call it art, fart or a craft
Unlike most, I know I\'m not that smart
June 20th, 2019 10:17
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY
dusk arising said:
For some poetry is art. For some a poet is a boring old fart. For me, i\'m a plumber.
June 20th, 2019 07:46
dusk arising said:
For some poetry is art. For some a poet is a boring old fart. For me, i\'m a plumber.
June 20th, 2019 07:46
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE MICHAEL ! Its 10pm Thursday here ! I like to comment on MPS Poems at the end of the the Day : gives me time to meditate ! Love the COTTAGE Im hoping BRIAN will buy one like that for when we are married ! In your elegant POEM you use the word FORM twice ! BRIAN has been teaching me that a PROPER POEM must have FORM & FUNCTION (as distinct from MODERN POETRY which lacks both !). BRIAN HE SAY *A Proper Poem must have Something to say (Subject & Title) and say it in a Poetic Form (Structure) ! Brian & I try to stick to that MANTRA but (Because we are Encourgers) we dont castigate those who DONT. Brian & I were taught Poetry & Literature @ School ! 20 years on (the Cultural Paucity of the 21st C) the emphasis on EXCELLENCE has dissappeared ! Thanks for sharing : Please check my poen today : PINK !
Blessings & love to You & Yours
Yours in the PINK ! ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 20th, 2019 04:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE MICHAEL ! Its 10pm Thursday here ! I like to comment on MPS Poems at the end of the the Day : gives me time to meditate ! Love the COTTAGE Im hoping BRIAN will buy one like that for when we are married ! In your elegant POEM you use the word FORM twice ! BRIAN has been teaching me that a PROPER POEM must have FORM & FUNCTION (as distinct from MODERN POETRY which lacks both !). BRIAN HE SAY *A Proper Poem must have Something to say (Subject & Title) and say it in a Poetic Form (Structure) ! Brian & I try to stick to that MANTRA but (Because we are Encourgers) we dont castigate those who DONT. Brian & I were taught Poetry & Literature @ School ! 20 years on (the Cultural Paucity of the 21st C) the emphasis on EXCELLENCE has dissappeared ! Thanks for sharing : Please check my poen today : PINK !
Blessings & love to You & Yours
Yours in the PINK ! ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 20th, 2019 04:10
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY
Poetic Dan said:
Words from the heart, some see as art. While others just scoff and keep walking by.
Great work
June 20th, 2019 02:36
Poetic Dan said:
Words from the heart, some see as art. While others just scoff and keep walking by.
Great work
June 20th, 2019 02:36
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Poetry might be about B& B (Bed & Breakfast); but not F&B (****** and ******). Too much of it is just laziness in poetry sometimes, I think.
June 20th, 2019 01:53
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Poetry might be about B& B (Bed & Breakfast); but not F&B (****** and ******). Too much of it is just laziness in poetry sometimes, I think.
June 20th, 2019 01:53
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY
Goldfinch60 said:
We may be guardians but our words we hope will shine for others as yours do Michael.
June 20th, 2019 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
We may be guardians but our words we hope will shine for others as yours do Michael.
June 20th, 2019 00:34
EARTH
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THNAKS UNCLE MIKE : ANGELA HERE ! 8:30 pm and another day done & dusted ! Love the CHURCH & the PACK HORSE BRIDGE makes me homesick ! Love soil an incredible substance : It really is the *PROVIDER OF LIFE !* It would cost the EARTH if we had to manufacture it : but like the SUN & MOON its just there for our use (or misuse !) Please check BRIANS POEM *This Old House* thanks.
Blessings to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 19th, 2019 02:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THNAKS UNCLE MIKE : ANGELA HERE ! 8:30 pm and another day done & dusted ! Love the CHURCH & the PACK HORSE BRIDGE makes me homesick ! Love soil an incredible substance : It really is the *PROVIDER OF LIFE !* It would cost the EARTH if we had to manufacture it : but like the SUN & MOON its just there for our use (or misuse !) Please check BRIANS POEM *This Old House* thanks.
Blessings to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 19th, 2019 02:36
EARTH
orchidee said:
A good write and pic M. You crumbling? Another Berles - Crum Berles!
June 19th, 2019 01:38
orchidee said:
A good write and pic M. You crumbling? Another Berles - Crum Berles!
June 19th, 2019 01:38
EARTH
dusk arising said:
I grabbed a clod and shook the sod off.
Provider of big holes for the dead to give life.
Once again your short pieces inspire.
June 19th, 2019 01:34
dusk arising said:
I grabbed a clod and shook the sod off.
Provider of big holes for the dead to give life.
Once again your short pieces inspire.
June 19th, 2019 01:34
MY STAFF
dusk arising said:
The essential staff for life yes. Great thought expressed, great composition.
Put it upon a plaque and sell it by the thousand.
June 18th, 2019 12:35
dusk arising said:
The essential staff for life yes. Great thought expressed, great composition.
Put it upon a plaque and sell it by the thousand.
June 18th, 2019 12:35
MY STAFF
Suresh said:
\"Lean on me\", says the staff, and if you can hear that then you are truly listening to your inner voice.
June 18th, 2019 10:58
Suresh said:
\"Lean on me\", says the staff, and if you can hear that then you are truly listening to your inner voice.
June 18th, 2019 10:58
MY STAFF
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the Village Scene makes me Hungry to get on the Housing Ladder with Angela ! Its OK for Folk like you to talk about Staff. In my post as Head of Applied Science I have four Academic Staff and Two Technicians working under me ! So like MOSES Im leaning on MY STAFF ! I inherited TWO Academics and a Technician and the others I appointed ! We all work well together and they are satisfied with their Grades (SO FAR !) Together with me thats a perfect number SEVEN STAFF ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check BALANCED DIET !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 18th, 2019 10:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the Village Scene makes me Hungry to get on the Housing Ladder with Angela ! Its OK for Folk like you to talk about Staff. In my post as Head of Applied Science I have four Academic Staff and Two Technicians working under me ! So like MOSES Im leaning on MY STAFF ! I inherited TWO Academics and a Technician and the others I appointed ! We all work well together and they are satisfied with their Grades (SO FAR !) Together with me thats a perfect number SEVEN STAFF ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check BALANCED DIET !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 18th, 2019 10:42
MY STAFF
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I love this poem and painting!
‘The strength of self-belief’
has pulled me out of many perilous situations!
~Laura~
P.S.- If this painting is not available, I’d like to commission you to paint one just like it for me! Thank you!
June 18th, 2019 02:20
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I love this poem and painting!
‘The strength of self-belief’
has pulled me out of many perilous situations!
~Laura~
P.S.- If this painting is not available, I’d like to commission you to paint one just like it for me! Thank you!
June 18th, 2019 02:20
MY STAFF
orchidee said:
A nice write and pic Michael. I dunno - I thought of the song \'My faith it is an oaken staff\' first sung at Primary School - millions of years ago then! I understand the need for self-belief, but I wouldn\'t want to rely entirely on me.
Meanwhile - Is Miss Berles on your staff work-team?
June 18th, 2019 01:48
orchidee said:
A nice write and pic Michael. I dunno - I thought of the song \'My faith it is an oaken staff\' first sung at Primary School - millions of years ago then! I understand the need for self-belief, but I wouldn\'t want to rely entirely on me.
Meanwhile - Is Miss Berles on your staff work-team?
June 18th, 2019 01:48
MY STAFF
Neville said:
I am a great believer in relying only on oneself......
nice words and a great painting Michael..
June 18th, 2019 01:17
Neville said:
I am a great believer in relying only on oneself......
nice words and a great painting Michael..
June 18th, 2019 01:17
MY STAFF
Goldfinch60 said:
May that self belief always be with you Michael. I am sure that it will.
June 18th, 2019 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
May that self belief always be with you Michael. I am sure that it will.
June 18th, 2019 00:31
From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
dusk arising said:
And when his python head arrives we shall all chant \" Nice to see you - to see you nice\".
June 17th, 2019 05:39
dusk arising said:
And when his python head arrives we shall all chant \" Nice to see you - to see you nice\".
June 17th, 2019 05:39
From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
Neville said:
I rarely look at what my reviewing peers post.. but on this occasion, I have come to rest firmly on Goldfinch60\'s perch... and I aint talkin fish.. I reckon if we aint careful we could be up the creek without a decent paddle.....
June 17th, 2019 04:43
Neville said:
I rarely look at what my reviewing peers post.. but on this occasion, I have come to rest firmly on Goldfinch60\'s perch... and I aint talkin fish.. I reckon if we aint careful we could be up the creek without a decent paddle.....
June 17th, 2019 04:43
From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the RURAL SCENE ! Back @ work again today : its 10pm and Im shattered after 2 clinics and AQUAROBICS ! Your Poem sounds PAINFUL ~ They would need a bit of Chiropracty and Spinal manipulation after that anal manouvre !
BLESSINGS & Love to you and Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check POSITIVITY !
June 17th, 2019 03:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the RURAL SCENE ! Back @ work again today : its 10pm and Im shattered after 2 clinics and AQUAROBICS ! Your Poem sounds PAINFUL ~ They would need a bit of Chiropracty and Spinal manipulation after that anal manouvre !
BLESSINGS & Love to you and Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check POSITIVITY !
June 17th, 2019 03:56
From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
Goldfinch60 said:
Now I wonder who you are talking about, I have two people in mind and it could be either of them.
June 17th, 2019 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Now I wonder who you are talking about, I have two people in mind and it could be either of them.
June 17th, 2019 01:01
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