Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



BODY DESIGN
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Michael for my first laugh of the day, most grateful.

The way the colours are shown on your artwork intrigue me.

March 23rd, 2019 01:26

DEFINITIONS (4)
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

I especially like your artwork...unique to say the least!
I enjoyed reading yours writes.
“MOUTH” reminded me of the poem “Vitriol”!😉

~Laura~

March 22nd, 2019 18:29

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MendedFences27 said:

\"Ultimatum\" is a fact. On \"Novel\" I have a question, \"Has every possible story been written.\"
Real thought provokers today. Enjoyed them very much. - Phil A.

March 22nd, 2019 10:55

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dusk arising said:

I can see that a conversation with you could be laced with hidden meanings.
I particularly liked Mythology.




March 22nd, 2019 07:48

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Neville said:

An excellent set & extremely well thought through.... Neville

March 22nd, 2019 06:12

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Fay Slimm. said:

A giggle at some of this well written play on definitions has just made my day - - love most the one about novels.

March 22nd, 2019 05:58

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orchidee said:

Good writes and pic Michael. Let\'s pad out. Let\'s say or write 20 words when 5 will do. Aww, why they say \'No change there then?\' lol.

March 22nd, 2019 02:43

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Goldfinch60 said:

More good ones Michael.
Mythology is very true.

March 22nd, 2019 01:23

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Nicholas Browning said:

These are quite nice.
Good show I say!

March 22nd, 2019 00:19

LAST STREET STANDING
Neville said:

A great ob... I consider myself so very lucky.. it seems to be happening almost everywhere these days.... such a shame, such a waste...

March 21st, 2019 15:36

LAST STREET STANDING
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the smooth flow of these lines as they tell their sad tale - your abillity to draw and pen a picture is amazing my friend.

March 21st, 2019 14:07

LAST STREET STANDING
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : A perfect Poem (in structre & sentiment) and complemented by a very stark Painting ! You are setting the bar high again (which I applaud) Seven balanced Quatrains with a consistent Rhyme Pattern (xaxa xbxb etc !). Loved every WORD. Brian tells me that Street Demolition and Rebuilding is de rigour in many Northern Cities. Its gone 10pm here so something to sleep on ! BRIAN & I have gone MICKEY & MINNIE MAD today enjoy !
Blessings & much JOY
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

March 21st, 2019 04:15

LAST STREET STANDING
orchidee said:

I think it could be taken as \'ill\' (fate), with it left in. Or it could be \'I\'ll\' (I will), but with no connection to the poem! I\'m rambling now, with Ram Berles.

March 21st, 2019 04:01

LAST STREET STANDING
Nicholas Browning said:

Good job Michael.
Leaves me in awe every single time.

March 21st, 2019 03:18

LAST STREET STANDING
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. is that \'ill\' (fate) at the end, or did those letters creep in? Part of a town centre street here is becoming semi-derelict, with shop closures, etc.
Meanwhile, I will get me credit card out and have a bash!

March 21st, 2019 03:01

LAST STREET STANDING
Goldfinch60 said:

It is so sad to see communities abandoned and awaiting the money men to destroy them and build pockets fro their money. Good write Michael.

Has that wheel come in use again Michael.

March 21st, 2019 02:02

MARY MARY .....
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks Uncle Mike : nearly 10am Thursday here : free morning as we have a Seminar on Safety on Saturday following the Mosque Massacare : NZ still in mourning !
Love the PIC : Spring Blossom ? 21 march tomorrow ? Autumn is starting here : Foliage is starting to be Rainbowy ! Love the MARY MARYS 1. Q for Massage ? 2. Shades of Lady Godiva ?
Thanks for sharing : Blessings
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

March 20th, 2019 15:57

MARY MARY .....
orchidee said:

Oh goody, time for my weekly visit to the GP - on telly, that is! It\'s difficult to watch all of it now, as they do some small operations too - not for the squeamish!
Some say \'Got enough health problems myself, without tuning in to others on telly\'.

March 20th, 2019 15:05

MARY MARY .....
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Love the painting! Whatever implements you used were certainly effective...and the colors are awesome! Bravo maestro!👏🏻
...and bless that Mary!!

~Laura~

March 20th, 2019 11:11

MARY MARY .....
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

Great write and the lovely picture beautifully illustrates it.

Keep writing FineB.

March 20th, 2019 09:05

MARY MARY .....
Fay Slimm. said:

Interesting picture in acrylic Mike with lots of movement in those dancing leaves - love the chuckle too the Mary verse raised for me.

March 20th, 2019 06:59

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Poetic Dan said:

Thank you for showing all we are capable of, outstandingly inspirational. Words and pictures would be better in more enhanced but still would not replace the vibration.

Really appreciated and blessed to know your work.

March 20th, 2019 04:58

MARY MARY .....
Nicholas Browning said:

That painting is captivating. I would have never guessed the fence was done with a toy tractor wheel though. The poem was quite comical, line at the end got me good. You can paint and write, you sly dog!
Nice work, Michael.

March 20th, 2019 03:28

MARY MARY .....
orchidee said:

A good writes and pic Michael. I don\'t regret missing that ultra-modern Art Show. I don\'t mind some modern though.

March 20th, 2019 03:08

MARY MARY .....
Goldfinch60 said:

Two fun writes Michael.

Clever artwork, there is a depth to it that is intriguing.

March 20th, 2019 02:26

CAGE AND CREED
MendedFences27 said:

What do they do for an encore?
Your poem says it all. My only question is Why? In whose eyes is this art? Oh well to each their own. Loved your poem and cartoon.
P.S. I think I\'ll write a poem entitled \"Ode to Nothingness,\" and leave the page blank. - Phil A.

March 19th, 2019 15:43

CAGE AND CREED
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BON JOUR UNCLE MIKE Ahhhhhhhhhhhh !

The Sound of Silence 4\' 33\'\'
The Vision of nothingness

WE say it best when we say nothing at all !

Love the CARTOON
\"We all like Sheep .................?\"

Blessings with affection
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

March 19th, 2019 06:57

CAGE AND CREED
Fay Slimm. said:


An extraordinary form of \"art\" methinks Michael - would rather by far see your lovely watercolours adorning a room.

March 19th, 2019 06:03

CAGE AND CREED
orchidee said:

Fine writes and pic Michael. And.... you done that work of art \'An Unmade Bed\'? My bed is gonna be in an exhibition. lol.
Oh lol, I saw an exhibit called \'Unmade\' or something. I thought it was a pile of rubbish. I nearly tidied it up!
Now how am I gonna get my bed to the show?

March 19th, 2019 03:45

CAGE AND CREED
Goldfinch60 said:

In 2010 there was a scheme to get 4\'33\" to the top of the charts at Christmas - it nearly came it got to 21 but the BBC refused to play it so it could have got further.

As you know my love of art is very eclectic and I am sure that I would have found something in Work No 227.

In some congregations they can act like sheep.

March 19th, 2019 01:46



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