Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



LIMERICK 58
Fay Slimm. said:

You are a marvel with limericks my friend. A loud giggle too after viewing your sketch.

March 10th, 2019 07:25

LIMERICK 58
orchidee said:

Miss Berles know any limericks? Or Mr Berle-Ington?

March 10th, 2019 06:28

LIMERICK 58
Neville said:

very good indeed sir...

March 10th, 2019 06:08

LIMERICK 58
JaydeVictoria said:

I really enjoy limericks although I am no good at writing them!
Very entertaining write and picture to match

March 10th, 2019 04:36

LIMERICK 58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Top o\' the Mornin\' UNCLE MIKE Me Boyo !

WE have an Uncle called MIKE
Who was very proud o\' his BIKE
His brakes failed on day
As he sailed on his way
And His BUM ended up on a SPIKE !

Thanks for CARTOON & LIM

Blessings & Love for Sunday
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

March 10th, 2019 04:22

LIMERICK 58
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.

March 10th, 2019 02:23

LIMERICK 58
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Michael.

Good cartoon as well.

March 10th, 2019 01:16

MARCH 1st 2019
orchidee said:

You given up those choccie biccies for Lent there? What\'s Miss Berles giving up for those 40 days? Cue for a cartoon on Lent?!

March 9th, 2019 12:15

MARCH 1st 2019
MendedFences27 said:

Brilliant and lovely poetry, the real thing. Smoothness, imagery, and rhyme, blended to perfection. LOved this one to keeps. - Phil A.

March 9th, 2019 12:13

MARCH 1st 2019
JaydeVictoria said:

The flow and format of this poem is breathtaking. I really enjoyed it and of course, brilliant imagery!

March 9th, 2019 07:37

MARCH 1st 2019
Neville said:

when spring is sprung like this, you just got to smile.... N )

March 9th, 2019 05:59

MARCH 1st 2019
dusk arising said:

Forget those seasons
global warming\'s here
\'I\'ll be right back\' says Jack Frost
with a sideways sneer

Who needs hot water bottles now we have \'glow-ball\' warming? Turn your central heating off and prepare to bake.

March 9th, 2019 05:47

MARCH 1st 2019
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

AH UNCLE MIKE ~ Better late than never ~ A melodius QUARTET of Rhyming Couplets to herald the incoming of SPRING ~ 21st March is the official day which is why Scotland is still experiencing BLIZZARDS ~ Snow from the West and Oval Hail from the South (WALES !).
Your cartoon reminded me of BETTJEMANS CHRISTMAS

No love that in a Family dwells
No carolling in the frosty air
Nor all the steeple shaking bells
Can with this single Truth compare
That God was Man in Palestine
And lives today in BREAD & WINE !

Blessings & Love as always
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡


March 9th, 2019 04:09

MARCH 1st 2019
orchidee said:

Good write M. Miss Berles like Winter?

March 9th, 2019 02:16

MARCH 1st 2019
Fay Slimm. said:

Sensing each line of flow in your beautiful ode depicting change from cold into Spring gave a smile to my first read of the day dear Michael. My thanks for this lyrical read.

March 9th, 2019 02:10

MARCH 1st 2019
Goldfinch60 said:

Some of us are still waiting for winter!

Super write Michael, wonderful imagery in your words.

March 9th, 2019 01:59

HER VEINS
Neville said:

any port in a storm.. make mine a double... cheers...

March 8th, 2019 10:14

HER VEINS
MendedFences27 said:

The cartoon is almost too close to reality.
The poem ; I like the imagery of the first and last lines especially.
Too much wine and it starts replacing your blood, temporarily one would hope. Nice work. - Phil A.

March 8th, 2019 10:05

HER VEINS
dusk arising said:

Reminded me of an occasion in my youth when the doctor asked for a urine sample and invited me to pee into a bottle over a running tap in his consulting room. Holding my sample up to the light he remarked \"I\'m not quite sure whether i should test this or drink it Mr Dusk\".

March 8th, 2019 05:30

HER VEINS
Fay Slimm. said:

A good lesson in moderation from our talented word-smith and along with the chuckles at your sense of humour in that sketch I have noting but wonder at your constant good output.. Great stuff again my friend.

March 8th, 2019 04:18

HER VEINS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : In Auckland the Weather can get quite warm in Summer (Dec Jan Feb) so they do serve Cold Drinks & ice cream as well as Coffee & Biscuits. I have been in Church in the UK for a film evening and in the interval they did come round selling ice cream for 50p ! Love the POEM : Some Elderly Scots Ladies I visit in the UK : have GLENFIDDICH in their veins which requires a zimmer for upright posture (Sounds like a Stanley Holloway Poem) Thanks for scaring : ANGELA (now 10 pm ! Saturday again tomorrow !)
Blessings in Love :
Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡

March 8th, 2019 04:09

HER VEINS
Poetic Dan said:

Made me think of my mother, thank you

March 8th, 2019 03:56

HER VEINS
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Did she add water to the wine?
A church was not \'raffling\' wine, but, ahem, \'accepting donations, it being a Sunday. It seems one Vicar had a stage in his Vicarage, and not for Communion purposes. Oohh!

March 8th, 2019 02:54

HER VEINS
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope the wine was as good as your words.

As for the cartoon - you\'ve been to our Church then?

March 8th, 2019 02:08

TOFFEE AND COFFEE
MendedFences27 said:

I\'m sure you can get Toffee Coffee at Starbucks, without any sogginess. But if you twist your tongue and ask for Coffee Toffee they probably won\'t have any. We shy away from Toffee, but we have lots of Taffy, and you can get Caffy Taffy....Oops, now I\'m doing it. Well you sure made me smile today. Thanks - Phil A.

March 7th, 2019 22:34

TOFFEE AND COFFEE
dusk arising said:

That\'s beyond a choke!

My coffee is either mocha beans or kenyan.... i don\'t like the bitterness of most beans. Oh yes, i once had blue mountain beans which are four times the price... it wasn\'t four times as good though.

March 7th, 2019 15:01

TOFFEE AND COFFEE
Neville said:

I take mine very strong and black.. no sugar.... I like turkey too, I might add and with loads of sage and onion stuffing and gravy and roast potatoes and and ........ N

March 7th, 2019 06:30

TOFFEE AND COFFEE
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha- your witty sketches have me chuckling again Mike - -- I love the expressions on those surprised faces - -- and as for the verse tis a pleasure to see the juggle of words rhymed to perfection........ a fave for sure.

March 7th, 2019 06:23

TOFFEE AND COFFEE
sylviasearcher said:

Although I’m not that fond of toffee nor coffee they have both got stuck in my mouth. lol

March 7th, 2019 04:02

TOFFEE AND COFFEE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI UNCLE MIKE : We\'re both on a food kick today but I\'ll wager my Lamb & Claret against your COFFEE / TOFFEE any day !
Your cartoon reminded me of BEN ZEPHANIAS : Be kind to Yo Turkey : This Christmas ! Thanks for sharing
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

March 7th, 2019 03:52



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