Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



WORDS
Goldfinch60 said:

Those words are there within us just waiting to be assembled on the page.

May 22nd, 2019 00:50

IN LIFE SPARE US
Neville said:

I have a very firm, but not delusional belief you have captured truth here Michael..
the image you provide has awesome colours and a delightful subject too sir....

Neville

May 21st, 2019 01:37

SHE WAITS
MendedFences27 said:

Love the language of your poem. It flows smoothly. A dark scenario of either entrapment and fortuitous fortune, though, rather Poe-like, causes one to wonder who is she? Why is she there? Enjoyed the thought. - Phil A.


May 20th, 2019 18:22

SHE WAITS
Suresh said:

What an entertaining poem and a pic of a village that time forgot

May 20th, 2019 10:20

SHE WAITS
Neville said:

A delightful poem and a smashing watercolour too.... they go together well.... Neville

May 20th, 2019 06:59

SHE WAITS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Very ethnic picture ~ it evokes all the senses ! Great spooky poem ! In my experience the OUTSIDE of a Sepulchare is the best SIDE to be ! We*ve watched too many MUMMY Films !

Blessings & Love in all your POETRY & ART
YOURS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 20th, 2019 05:45

SHE WAITS
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Reminds me of Martha\'s vineyard... let her wait
Excellent Michael goosebumps

May 20th, 2019 05:15

SHE WAITS
dusk arising said:

I had in mind Goldilocks until i realised she had only three bears unlike this lucky girly who had forebears.

Pray there are no tremors for that vaulted door may fall ajar and her whispy form escape.
Who first will fall prey?

Great mystical verse from you today.

May 20th, 2019 02:48

SHE WAITS
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. I keep asking \'Should I meet these gals (any ages) in the poems on this site?!\' Well, I could meet Miss Berles.

May 20th, 2019 02:25

SHE WAITS
Goldfinch60 said:

May she be waiting for a long time. Good write Michael and fabulous artwork.

May 20th, 2019 01:18

IN LIFE SPARE US
MendedFences27 said:

How does the old joke go? \"Once we had a full-length mirror, but now we have to hang it sideways.\" Enough.
Your little poem says a lot about people. Mirrors simply reflect. It\'s the interpretation that is troubling.
Your artwork is amazing. _ Phil A.

May 19th, 2019 16:27

EVOLUTION
Suresh said:

WHAT!!!! You insult the ape, by calling man evolved....

Loved it

May 19th, 2019 14:11

IN LIFE SPARE US
Suresh said:

There is so much I could say
But that will only steer me away

So, it is as you said.

May 19th, 2019 11:29

IN LIFE SPARE US
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE ~ Great Pic ~ love to ascend those steps & see for myself ! A MIRROR IMAGE is reversed (L to R & R to L) which is why some people whose faces are very assymetrical (like QUASIMODO !) never recognise themselves in a photo. Angela likes to use TWO MIRRORS @ 90 degrees (before she ventures out) so she sees what others will see ~ OK For those who failed GCE Physics (do you know anybody who got a C ?) the second mirror reverses the first back to normality ! An interesting thing we do in PHOTOGRAPHY GCSE is to take two identical PORTRAITS and then join the two RHS & the two LHS. The result is interesting ! In my case the two RHS look exactly like my DAD (Slim & Angular) and the two LHS (more Plump & Rounded) ~ GENETICS RULE ~ OK. Thanks for stimulating !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 19th, 2019 10:33

IN LIFE SPARE US
Fay Slimm. said:

I second this view of mirrors - good point made Mike.......... a first rate painting that must be one of your best.

May 19th, 2019 02:50

IN LIFE SPARE US
dusk arising said:

i stopped reading the Mirror. There are so many trashier alternatives.

A mirror only serves to offer the chance to see ourselves as others see us but the other way around... Worthwhile? doubtful. Anyway after a mirror gets to know you it begins to tell lies. Mine has started flashing images og my father back at me.
Begetter of errors indeed.

May 19th, 2019 02:39

IN LIFE SPARE US
Goldfinch60 said:

So true, mirrors always mislead us.

May 19th, 2019 01:44

IN LIFE SPARE US
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.

May 19th, 2019 01:28

BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Michael, I beleive many of us have been on that walk.

May 19th, 2019 00:29

BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD
Suresh said:

Just as in your poem, I\'m sure the structure was made by a craftsman too.
Well crafted

May 18th, 2019 10:43

BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD
dusk arising said:

Here lies a rotting poet
whos quill duth write no more
His rhythm and rhyme so sorely missed
By many a bawdy whore.

May 18th, 2019 08:58

BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

A touching reach back in time to those to whom we are all connected to Michael.
BRAVO

May 18th, 2019 07:01

BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD
Neville said:

How very eloquently expressed Michael and true....... Your watercolour might easily be the St\' Crispin Hospital Chapel I got married in..... Neville

May 18th, 2019 02:36

BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD
Fay Slimm. said:

So appealingly written I felt I was on that distant walk around crumbling gravestones adorned in engravings by long-dead masons - -- another fine piece of artwork too Michael.

May 18th, 2019 02:29

BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Looks like a village church a few miles from us.

May 18th, 2019 01:53

TEA?
orchidee said:

Coffee with me and Miss Berles tomorrow M?

May 17th, 2019 14:22

TEA?
Fay Slimm. said:

Black with no milk but a dash of lemon - that\'s my favourite cuppa and much admiration for your three- liner to a fine drink - - love the example of a paintbox, well used no doubt by your talented brush Michael. Super posting.

May 17th, 2019 10:18

TEA?
Suresh said:

My brother owns tea gardens, and he told me that the white tipped young leaves are the rarest and best, which are even shipped to the Buckingham Palace, and I bet they know how to brew a cup of tea.


May 17th, 2019 09:43

TEA?
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

warm the cup
warm the pot
warm them up
To keep it hot
Let it brew for
Just a while
peppermint or
Chamomile

Thanks Michael for bringing the country together where our politicians have failed, you have the answer... pop\' kettle on mother!

May 17th, 2019 04:18

TEA?
dusk arising said:

Strong Earl Grey in a one pint mug with five sweeteners and milk sat opposite the most wonderful lady who is looking at me with love in her eyes.
Compromise? No.... oh OK if you insist, .....forget the tea.

May 17th, 2019 03:58



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