Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



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sorenbarrett said:

Short but cautionary and fun to read.

August 28th, 2024 06:43

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Teddy.15 said:

There was an old lady called Shirley
She went to bed very early
When she awoke
The bed springs were broke
and her hair was really rather curly

ah I got there in the end 🤣

August 28th, 2024 03:24

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Doggerel Dave said:

I want me money back - i seed that picture before.
Advice to Ruth, Pete and anyone else who might listen: Motorcycles are inherently unstable vehicles. (I know - I\'ve ridden \'em.)

August 28th, 2024 02:28

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orchidee said:

A fine write M, lol.

August 28th, 2024 01:31

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Teddy.15 said:

When she did wake up
Much to her suprise
Pete was sitting eating
McDonald cheesy fries lol brilliant Michael as ever you nailed this wonderful Limerick 💙

August 28th, 2024 01:23

DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I absolutely love this! It is a piece that is left open to interpretation. I can absolutely relate with it, being a nocturnal creature. An awesome play on words, which I am a huge fan of. Well done! Excellent write and an easy favorite! Oh...and hello Stanley!

August 22nd, 2024 15:31

DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
neckymonky said:

that\'s nice, i love its hidden meaning

August 22nd, 2024 03:47

DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:

the sun and the moon both bring differing light to our lives Michael.

Andy

August 22nd, 2024 01:08

DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 21st, 2024 09:26

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Teddy.15 said:

You will find your light again dearest Michael, it will come back when you least expect it, oh your photo of that gorgeous dog makes my heart warm. 🌹

August 21st, 2024 07:41

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orchidee said:

A fine write M. Who could not like Stanley - ahh!
Yes, is the sun wasted, only coming out when it\'s light already?! lol.
You seen Colonel Berle-Ington (Burlington)? Any relation to Miss Berles?

August 21st, 2024 05:18

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sorenbarrett said:

A great poem whether taken literally or metaphorically nicely done

August 21st, 2024 05:06

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Neville said:



Both absolutely brilliant Michael

August 19th, 2024 16:18

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Goldfinch60 said:

A meaningful tale of loneliness and sadness Michael very well written.

Andy

August 19th, 2024 01:15

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Dan Williams said:

Sounds to me like you might just be in love. Nice work.

August 19th, 2024 00:22

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MendedFences27 said:

One can feel the sadness in this scene you have painted in words. The loneliness came through to me with.
\"Feeble memories of fading rainbows\" and \"Solace found in dull routine.\" A most enjoyable read. _ Phil A.

August 18th, 2024 20:30

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jarcher54 said:

For a moment I thought you\'d been spying on me! Deeply pictorial, you can see and hear the chipped china rattling the saucer. A real treat today!

August 18th, 2024 18:48

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Doggerel Dave said:

Great to see the pastoral theme back again Michael, but I do like the other stuff too.
Sad but enjoyable write.

August 18th, 2024 08:02

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orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.
Is this about Miss Berles?

August 18th, 2024 07:37

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sorenbarrett said:

A painting in words beautiful and set with a dusty feeling of having been there. Very nice

August 18th, 2024 06:49

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Teddy.15 said:

Beautifully composed dear Michael, yes a sad one but poetry is everything every type of emotion your art is superb. 🌹

August 18th, 2024 03:39

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Dan Williams said:

Such economy of words plays well here. Good work.

August 14th, 2024 00:31

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MendedFences27 said:

Welcome back. Hope all is well. Made me chuckle. (A chuckle\'s a whisper of a laugh). Your artwork looks modernistic. A new medium for you?
Enjoyed your little ditty. - Phil A.

August 13th, 2024 12:05

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Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done. This one made me smile. There\'s a phase I hear some of my Welsh friends use, \'I will do it now in a minute.\' That too makes me smile. :-)

August 13th, 2024 08:21

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sorenbarrett said:

Love these old measures Stones, furlongs, gill and cubit for a few. A most fun read well composed

August 13th, 2024 05:33

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Teddy.15 said:

Well that\'s a fun tongue twister dear Mr Edwards 🌹 and strangely I\'m coughing now. 🤣

August 13th, 2024 04:11

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good to see your works again Michael, both writing and art.

Andy

August 13th, 2024 02:17

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2781 said:

I prefer a chug-a-lug

August 13th, 2024 02:03

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Neville said:


Good to have you back my friend .. hope you shall linger .. Neville

August 13th, 2024 01:55

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orchidee said:

Good write M. Seen Miss Berles about?!

August 13th, 2024 01:12



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