Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
AN UPDATE
Rocky Lagou said:
This is heartbreaking Michael.
I pray that you regain the strength to pour your heart onto what you love most again soon.
I know where you\'re coming from on a personal level as my mom passed away nearly 4 years ago.
I\'m telling you, you have to stay strong.
Never forget the memories that you had with her.
They will forever bear the person you loved so dearly.
And she will forever be the love of your life.
May her soul rest in peace.
November 29th, 2022 14:55
Rocky Lagou said:
This is heartbreaking Michael.
I pray that you regain the strength to pour your heart onto what you love most again soon.
I know where you\'re coming from on a personal level as my mom passed away nearly 4 years ago.
I\'m telling you, you have to stay strong.
Never forget the memories that you had with her.
They will forever bear the person you loved so dearly.
And she will forever be the love of your life.
May her soul rest in peace.
November 29th, 2022 14:55
AN UPDATE
Doggerel Dave said:
Rules are pointless in your position, Michael.
My wishes are as Neville\'s above. (Later - as Rocky\'s below also)
It will be good to see you back.
Regards, Dave.
November 29th, 2022 08:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Rules are pointless in your position, Michael.
My wishes are as Neville\'s above. (Later - as Rocky\'s below also)
It will be good to see you back.
Regards, Dave.
November 29th, 2022 08:26
AN UPDATE
Neville said:
Hello Michael, I had been wondering ..
I am so sorry to learn of your loss .. My thoughts & condolences are with you and yours sir ..
May your dear Jeanne now rest in peace ..
Neville
November 29th, 2022 07:05
Neville said:
Hello Michael, I had been wondering ..
I am so sorry to learn of your loss .. My thoughts & condolences are with you and yours sir ..
May your dear Jeanne now rest in peace ..
Neville
November 29th, 2022 07:05
LIMERICK 121
Fay Slimm. said:
Good is this rhyme dear Mike - A chuckle a minute with your clever limerick..
July 21st, 2022 09:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Good is this rhyme dear Mike - A chuckle a minute with your clever limerick..
July 21st, 2022 09:00
LIMERICK 121
L. B. Mek said:
such a striking image!
I couldn\'t help but react viscerally
move back, frowning
then eventually, peer ever-closer
wondering...
I just love your art, dear poet
thank you!
hope you\'re staying cool
lol
July 21st, 2022 02:24
L. B. Mek said:
such a striking image!
I couldn\'t help but react viscerally
move back, frowning
then eventually, peer ever-closer
wondering...
I just love your art, dear poet
thank you!
hope you\'re staying cool
lol
July 21st, 2022 02:24
LIMERICK 121
Doggerel Dave said:
Good fun, Michael.
My quick contribution (I failed with the humour bit - I\'m sorry!):
Young Peter needled himself in the arse
His first try at smack but we’ll let that pass
Now he was just beginning
To find his road to ruin:
Veins were better until they became sparse….
July 21st, 2022 02:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Good fun, Michael.
My quick contribution (I failed with the humour bit - I\'m sorry!):
Young Peter needled himself in the arse
His first try at smack but we’ll let that pass
Now he was just beginning
To find his road to ruin:
Veins were better until they became sparse….
July 21st, 2022 02:07
SO AM I WRONG?
L. B. Mek said:
neither Michael
dear friend, don\'t you know
this was never a question
that involved, you
since, she
will always, be right
about you, being wrong..
(\'marriage\' the only sanctum
within Justice\'s, prism
where double jeopardy
is a law, empowered
to establish, causality
aside
theoretical impossibilities..)
we simply lose
when choosing to contest
at that specific
time n place
best
to wait, till its all settled
and we\'re more likely
to get
that: \'oh\' .. \'right you are, dear\'
gifted Condescension, as our
aspired-for, best result..
(and you know, we know it too
rule is
they were right, in being wrong..)
lol
July 8th, 2022 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
neither Michael
dear friend, don\'t you know
this was never a question
that involved, you
since, she
will always, be right
about you, being wrong..
(\'marriage\' the only sanctum
within Justice\'s, prism
where double jeopardy
is a law, empowered
to establish, causality
aside
theoretical impossibilities..)
we simply lose
when choosing to contest
at that specific
time n place
best
to wait, till its all settled
and we\'re more likely
to get
that: \'oh\' .. \'right you are, dear\'
gifted Condescension, as our
aspired-for, best result..
(and you know, we know it too
rule is
they were right, in being wrong..)
lol
July 8th, 2022 05:18
SO AM I WRONG?
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Happy wife happy life\"
Pragmatism is all...... You know the score, Michael.
July 8th, 2022 04:00
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Happy wife happy life\"
Pragmatism is all...... You know the score, Michael.
July 8th, 2022 04:00
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 2
Morwenna said:
Total agreement, but either a red or a scotch please.
July 1st, 2022 15:29
Morwenna said:
Total agreement, but either a red or a scotch please.
July 1st, 2022 15:29
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 2
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but mine is a Rioja please.
Andy
June 30th, 2022 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but mine is a Rioja please.
Andy
June 30th, 2022 00:57
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 2
Doggerel Dave said:
Make mine a dry white if you would be so kind; but there\'s nothing wrong with your concept.... liked v. much Michael.
June 29th, 2022 18:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Make mine a dry white if you would be so kind; but there\'s nothing wrong with your concept.... liked v. much Michael.
June 29th, 2022 18:53
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 2
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Michael.
I am about to go onto my terrace and write in my journal. Early for Gin. Gummy? Maybe.
June 29th, 2022 09:07
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Michael.
I am about to go onto my terrace and write in my journal. Early for Gin. Gummy? Maybe.
June 29th, 2022 09:07
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 2
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles sunning herself in the garden with deckchair, pencil and paper? Does she overdo the gin? Does it cause her to ram-berle if she gets on the gin?! lol.
June 29th, 2022 01:57
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles sunning herself in the garden with deckchair, pencil and paper? Does she overdo the gin? Does it cause her to ram-berle if she gets on the gin?! lol.
June 29th, 2022 01:57
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 1
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Michael and an intriguing artwork.
Andy
June 25th, 2022 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Michael and an intriguing artwork.
Andy
June 25th, 2022 00:22
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 1
Saxon Crow said:
A very understated little poem Mike. Into my faves it goes.
June 24th, 2022 05:16
Saxon Crow said:
A very understated little poem Mike. Into my faves it goes.
June 24th, 2022 05:16
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 1
L. B. Mek said:
\'mother\'s, learn to knit
by watching mothers, knit
painstakingly, passing
one thread though another
to fix those holes, in human
connections
skilfully balancing aesthetic worth
with the tangible practicality\'s
needed, to maintain togetherness
in everyday life..
Nature, too
let spiders, weave
their own cobweb paths to survival
but, Time\'s
change
and windswept, cultures begin
to get warped..
now, knitting
is a mass produced
machine, action
and family\'s
have lost the trick, to knit
nuclear, together
like, they once did
yet
that lowly spider
still
curate their, cobwebbed
paths
like their mother\'s did
...\'
(simply Brilliant, Michael
forgive me I couldn\'t help trying
to poetically express
what your artistry communicated to me)
June 24th, 2022 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'mother\'s, learn to knit
by watching mothers, knit
painstakingly, passing
one thread though another
to fix those holes, in human
connections
skilfully balancing aesthetic worth
with the tangible practicality\'s
needed, to maintain togetherness
in everyday life..
Nature, too
let spiders, weave
their own cobweb paths to survival
but, Time\'s
change
and windswept, cultures begin
to get warped..
now, knitting
is a mass produced
machine, action
and family\'s
have lost the trick, to knit
nuclear, together
like, they once did
yet
that lowly spider
still
curate their, cobwebbed
paths
like their mother\'s did
...\'
(simply Brilliant, Michael
forgive me I couldn\'t help trying
to poetically express
what your artistry communicated to me)
June 24th, 2022 04:27
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 1
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles know that susurr-wotsit word?!
June 24th, 2022 01:48
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles know that susurr-wotsit word?!
June 24th, 2022 01:48
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 1
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles know that susurr-wotsit word?!
June 24th, 2022 01:48
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles know that susurr-wotsit word?!
June 24th, 2022 01:48
WHAT IS IT?
dusk arising said:
ROFL now that is a fun write.
Unlike other birds, this one has class
not chomping crusts on unmown grass
such scraps for him provide no thrill
finer things be destined for his bill
he finds rich pickings outside Kentucky Fried
our connoisseur\'s gained weight since last he flyed
now he flaps his wings but to no avail
for flight we know, has economies of scale
June 16th, 2022 08:38
dusk arising said:
ROFL now that is a fun write.
Unlike other birds, this one has class
not chomping crusts on unmown grass
such scraps for him provide no thrill
finer things be destined for his bill
he finds rich pickings outside Kentucky Fried
our connoisseur\'s gained weight since last he flyed
now he flaps his wings but to no avail
for flight we know, has economies of scale
June 16th, 2022 08:38
WHAT IS IT?
L. B. Mek said:
\'The cock assumes frankfurter shape\'
🤣
so witty, Michael
thanks for the chuckles..
(I\'m surprised you haven\'t sold that artwork yet
one of your most peaceful, to look upon)
\'in my humble opinion\'
June 16th, 2022 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'The cock assumes frankfurter shape\'
🤣
so witty, Michael
thanks for the chuckles..
(I\'m surprised you haven\'t sold that artwork yet
one of your most peaceful, to look upon)
\'in my humble opinion\'
June 16th, 2022 04:48
WHAT IS IT?
Morwenna said:
Beautiful picture, lovely nonsense poem that made me laugh.
June 16th, 2022 02:23
Morwenna said:
Beautiful picture, lovely nonsense poem that made me laugh.
June 16th, 2022 02:23
WHAT IS IT?
Goldfinch60 said:
I\'ll have to look out for one of those on my birdwatching days.
Andy
June 16th, 2022 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
I\'ll have to look out for one of those on my birdwatching days.
Andy
June 16th, 2022 00:19
HER LAST RESTING PLACE
Morwenna said:
Lovely images - hoar frost to dew in the context of old age to death (a kind of renewal??). And lovely unforced rhymes.
June 9th, 2022 15:58
Morwenna said:
Lovely images - hoar frost to dew in the context of old age to death (a kind of renewal??). And lovely unforced rhymes.
June 9th, 2022 15:58
HER LAST RESTING PLACE
dusk arising said:
Upon a churchyard green
My surname was seen
upon a weathered old stone
with its R.I.P. tome
A forebear unmet
from a 19th century set
a farmer dad said
finally sown in deathsbed
where\'ere i roam
whatever i bring to lifes fest
I\'ll arrive here in peace
at last finding rest
Your writing always inspires me M.E. You have a unique quality with word as well as those brushes.
June 8th, 2022 05:05
dusk arising said:
Upon a churchyard green
My surname was seen
upon a weathered old stone
with its R.I.P. tome
A forebear unmet
from a 19th century set
a farmer dad said
finally sown in deathsbed
where\'ere i roam
whatever i bring to lifes fest
I\'ll arrive here in peace
at last finding rest
Your writing always inspires me M.E. You have a unique quality with word as well as those brushes.
June 8th, 2022 05:05
HER LAST RESTING PLACE
Fay Slimm. said:
A few perfectly set lines of quiet scene to touch readers\' hearts Mike and the wonderful watercolour adds even more poignancy.
June 8th, 2022 02:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A few perfectly set lines of quiet scene to touch readers\' hearts Mike and the wonderful watercolour adds even more poignancy.
June 8th, 2022 02:39
HER LAST RESTING PLACE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles got a mattock?
June 8th, 2022 02:07
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles got a mattock?
June 8th, 2022 02:07
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