Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
575s (3, 4, and 5)
Neville said:
Sir Michal sir .. it would be darn near impossible for anyone who enjoys words as much as I do, to pass this page without leaving their seal of approval behind ... as indeed I do ....................... N
April 16th, 2022 05:04
Neville said:
Sir Michal sir .. it would be darn near impossible for anyone who enjoys words as much as I do, to pass this page without leaving their seal of approval behind ... as indeed I do ....................... N
April 16th, 2022 05:04
575s (3, 4, and 5)
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
A fine use of 51 berles, not one wasted. Miss Berles got enough supply?!
April 16th, 2022 02:28
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
A fine use of 51 berles, not one wasted. Miss Berles got enough supply?!
April 16th, 2022 02:28
LIMERICKS 106, 107 and 108
Neville said:
you just made me make an involuntary funny noise but I think I got away with it by blaming the dog .. :)
April 15th, 2022 03:34
Neville said:
you just made me make an involuntary funny noise but I think I got away with it by blaming the dog .. :)
April 15th, 2022 03:34
LIMERICKS 106, 107 and 108
Rozina said:
Hehe, 3 great limericks. Had a good laugh with these!
April 14th, 2022 22:22
Rozina said:
Hehe, 3 great limericks. Had a good laugh with these!
April 14th, 2022 22:22
LIMERICKS 106, 107 and 108
dusk arising said:
He\'d dream them up whilst aslumber
and each limerick he dreamed had a number
todays one oh six to one oh eight
I view over my breakfast plate
of two rashers and some fine sliced cucumber
B flat was Matt\'s flatulent key
he could play it all day with such glee
but at the fete on the green
he ruptured his spleen
and stank out the entire marquee
there ensued what was surely a risk
some toff could ignite the foul mist
it\'d just take some wag
to light up a fag
and the place would no longer exist
so they called upon fireman Sam
who arrived in his shiney red van
he was quite familiar
he\'d done several things similar
and he told everybody to scram
but the sound of Sams tinkling bell
had done little to cure that foul smell
and true to Sam\'s premonition
a sudden ignition
consigned the whole party to hell
April 14th, 2022 03:47
dusk arising said:
He\'d dream them up whilst aslumber
and each limerick he dreamed had a number
todays one oh six to one oh eight
I view over my breakfast plate
of two rashers and some fine sliced cucumber
B flat was Matt\'s flatulent key
he could play it all day with such glee
but at the fete on the green
he ruptured his spleen
and stank out the entire marquee
there ensued what was surely a risk
some toff could ignite the foul mist
it\'d just take some wag
to light up a fag
and the place would no longer exist
so they called upon fireman Sam
who arrived in his shiney red van
he was quite familiar
he\'d done several things similar
and he told everybody to scram
but the sound of Sams tinkling bell
had done little to cure that foul smell
and true to Sam\'s premonition
a sudden ignition
consigned the whole party to hell
April 14th, 2022 03:47
LIMERICKS 106, 107 and 108
L. B. Mek said:
a read
of b flat
fresh and home grown farts
where the fun\'s to be found...
lol
thanks Michael, needed that chuckle
its been a long week..
(I imagine standing in front of that painting
must feel like
being submerged, within a daydream
that we can get lost within
to feel
and reach for those textured, imbued
brush strokes of escape
as a promise
to this wondrousness, we call life
paused, hovering
in the face of callous, fate...)
April 14th, 2022 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
a read
of b flat
fresh and home grown farts
where the fun\'s to be found...
lol
thanks Michael, needed that chuckle
its been a long week..
(I imagine standing in front of that painting
must feel like
being submerged, within a daydream
that we can get lost within
to feel
and reach for those textured, imbued
brush strokes of escape
as a promise
to this wondrousness, we call life
paused, hovering
in the face of callous, fate...)
April 14th, 2022 03:44
LIMERICKS 106, 107 and 108
orchidee said:
Oh lol. good writes and pic M. Does Miss Berles play in Matt\'s orchestra?! lol.
April 14th, 2022 02:13
orchidee said:
Oh lol. good writes and pic M. Does Miss Berles play in Matt\'s orchestra?! lol.
April 14th, 2022 02:13
GARTREE PRISON
Rozina said:
An interesting story and a fantastic painting. The prisoners are crammed here in the city prison but there is no space to expand outwards, only upwards. There was a plan to build a new prison on a nearby small island but that is now a money making tourist resort.
April 13th, 2022 17:58
Rozina said:
An interesting story and a fantastic painting. The prisoners are crammed here in the city prison but there is no space to expand outwards, only upwards. There was a plan to build a new prison on a nearby small island but that is now a money making tourist resort.
April 13th, 2022 17:58
GARTREE PRISON
Neville said:
Bravo Michael .. I woz gonna say juliet bravo but got a little confused along the way .. that painting of yours is amazing by the way ............. Neville
April 13th, 2022 15:38
Neville said:
Bravo Michael .. I woz gonna say juliet bravo but got a little confused along the way .. that painting of yours is amazing by the way ............. Neville
April 13th, 2022 15:38
GARTREE PRISON
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles got better pixels? Can she help?!
April 13th, 2022 02:01
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles got better pixels? Can she help?!
April 13th, 2022 02:01
LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105
Rocky Lagou said:
Lord. That last one was quite the turn of events. Poor Ernie. No but in all seriousness this was great!
April 11th, 2022 08:31
Rocky Lagou said:
Lord. That last one was quite the turn of events. Poor Ernie. No but in all seriousness this was great!
April 11th, 2022 08:31
LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105
Rozina said:
So enjoyable to read your clever and funny limericks. Inspiring me to think up a few too.
April 11th, 2022 00:53
Rozina said:
So enjoyable to read your clever and funny limericks. Inspiring me to think up a few too.
April 11th, 2022 00:53
LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105
Christina8 said:
Good and funny limericks, I really enjoyed them all! :)
April 10th, 2022 11:41
Christina8 said:
Good and funny limericks, I really enjoyed them all! :)
April 10th, 2022 11:41
LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105
dusk arising said:
Love those, especially number one which made me laugh out loud - thank you.
Theres not much to see at our zoo
just a tired monkey and worn out gnu
there used to be plenty
where there\'s cages now empty
oh and a cat who refuses to mew
April 10th, 2022 11:15
dusk arising said:
Love those, especially number one which made me laugh out loud - thank you.
Theres not much to see at our zoo
just a tired monkey and worn out gnu
there used to be plenty
where there\'s cages now empty
oh and a cat who refuses to mew
April 10th, 2022 11:15
LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - you crease me up with every line of these clever limericks - - I am more than useless at humour and love em to bits................
April 10th, 2022 06:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - you crease me up with every line of these clever limericks - - I am more than useless at humour and love em to bits................
April 10th, 2022 06:57
LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105
orchidee said:
Good writes M. lol.
There was a young lady, Miss Berles.....
What next?!
April 10th, 2022 05:22
orchidee said:
Good writes M. lol.
There was a young lady, Miss Berles.....
What next?!
April 10th, 2022 05:22
575s (2)
dusk arising said:
Whilst soothing his energy chakras
he accidently damaged his knak-ras
whilst wailing in pain
accidentally did it again
what an utterly stupid young chap-rah
I\'ve been looking around the bedroom for my libido... I\'m sure it\'s in there somewhere. I think it was last time i had it.
April 8th, 2022 11:11
dusk arising said:
Whilst soothing his energy chakras
he accidently damaged his knak-ras
whilst wailing in pain
accidentally did it again
what an utterly stupid young chap-rah
I\'ve been looking around the bedroom for my libido... I\'m sure it\'s in there somewhere. I think it was last time i had it.
April 8th, 2022 11:11
575s (2)
L. B. Mek said:
libido and chakras...
now, that\'s a pub topic
people can spend an evening
drinking-up theories about
and a whole night.. erm!
testing them
lol
(great fun! thanks Michael)
April 8th, 2022 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
libido and chakras...
now, that\'s a pub topic
people can spend an evening
drinking-up theories about
and a whole night.. erm!
testing them
lol
(great fun! thanks Michael)
April 8th, 2022 05:27
ROSES ARE RED
jarcher54 said:
Goodness, what\'s gotten into all the poet-posters today? Every poem I have opened is about sex. I guess it\'s not a bad thing. (-:
April 5th, 2022 11:26
jarcher54 said:
Goodness, what\'s gotten into all the poet-posters today? Every poem I have opened is about sex. I guess it\'s not a bad thing. (-:
April 5th, 2022 11:26
ROSES ARE RED
Christina8 said:
I\'m laughing at your poems and also dusk arising\'s response! Great job!
April 5th, 2022 05:04
Christina8 said:
I\'m laughing at your poems and also dusk arising\'s response! Great job!
April 5th, 2022 05:04
ROSES ARE RED
L. B. Mek said:
what technique did you use on your picture Michael?
it feels, somewhat pixelated
or
is it my screen, distorting it..
just love your range of art
subtlety, at its most
accessibly relatable..
I never feel a sense of pretentiousness
or elitism, just
a beautiful questing for artistry\'s
whimsical dexterity
April 5th, 2022 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
what technique did you use on your picture Michael?
it feels, somewhat pixelated
or
is it my screen, distorting it..
just love your range of art
subtlety, at its most
accessibly relatable..
I never feel a sense of pretentiousness
or elitism, just
a beautiful questing for artistry\'s
whimsical dexterity
April 5th, 2022 04:53
ROSES ARE RED
dusk arising said:
roses are red
your eyes show atlantis
come closer my dear
says the preying mantice
roses are red
your eyes are like pissholes
get into the kitchen
and make me some rissoles
roses are red
your eyes are dissimilar
one looks like hitler
the other like himmler
roses are red
your eyes are so grey
i\'m wasting my time
you told me youre gay
roses are red
your eyes are so bright
i hope they\'ll look sated
later tonight
April 5th, 2022 03:20
dusk arising said:
roses are red
your eyes show atlantis
come closer my dear
says the preying mantice
roses are red
your eyes are like pissholes
get into the kitchen
and make me some rissoles
roses are red
your eyes are dissimilar
one looks like hitler
the other like himmler
roses are red
your eyes are so grey
i\'m wasting my time
you told me youre gay
roses are red
your eyes are so bright
i hope they\'ll look sated
later tonight
April 5th, 2022 03:20
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