Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LET NOT OUR SKIN DIVIDE
Fay Slimm. said:
excellent summary with such a telling title mike -- -- saved this poetic appeal for hope to sever such bigotry
March 2nd, 2022 03:28
Fay Slimm. said:
excellent summary with such a telling title mike -- -- saved this poetic appeal for hope to sever such bigotry
March 2nd, 2022 03:28
LET NOT OUR SKIN DIVIDE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Are they the two fishes Miss Berles fed the (over) 5,000 with, and with with a few loaves too?!
March 2nd, 2022 02:59
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Are they the two fishes Miss Berles fed the (over) 5,000 with, and with with a few loaves too?!
March 2nd, 2022 02:59
LIMERICK 89
dusk arising said:
One of the bestlimericks i have ever seen M.E. nice one and intomy fav\'s
March 1st, 2022 13:31
dusk arising said:
One of the bestlimericks i have ever seen M.E. nice one and intomy fav\'s
March 1st, 2022 13:31
LIMERICK 89
L. B. Mek said:
what symmetry with your artwork and words, dear Poet
\'I might be the only one
but in your art
I can make out, half
of a soaring bird, wings stretched gracefully
and the other half, burdened with
a high peak, grounded mountain obstacle..
resonating, with those moments
of life
where opportunity greets
inside
the doors to our caged existences...\'
(lol
reading back my words, I sound so absurdly pretentious
but I\'ll keep this, maybe
there\'s something here beyond my comprehension)
such a great write!
March 1st, 2022 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
what symmetry with your artwork and words, dear Poet
\'I might be the only one
but in your art
I can make out, half
of a soaring bird, wings stretched gracefully
and the other half, burdened with
a high peak, grounded mountain obstacle..
resonating, with those moments
of life
where opportunity greets
inside
the doors to our caged existences...\'
(lol
reading back my words, I sound so absurdly pretentious
but I\'ll keep this, maybe
there\'s something here beyond my comprehension)
such a great write!
March 1st, 2022 05:33
LIMERICK 89
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah, the story of many a poor innocent human thrust into a dysfunctional world without any choice in the matter.
Limerick away, Michael - all manner of truths may surface in a few succinct lines.....😊
March 1st, 2022 04:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah, the story of many a poor innocent human thrust into a dysfunctional world without any choice in the matter.
Limerick away, Michael - all manner of truths may surface in a few succinct lines.....😊
March 1st, 2022 04:43
LIMERICK 89
Neville said:
... not a word outa place sir .. perfectly penned, poemed & posted ..
... nice drawing of them two mating frigate birds too ...
... Neville :)
March 1st, 2022 03:20
Neville said:
... not a word outa place sir .. perfectly penned, poemed & posted ..
... nice drawing of them two mating frigate birds too ...
... Neville :)
March 1st, 2022 03:20
LIMERICK 89
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write M.
Have supplies of more syllaberles come in now?!
March 1st, 2022 03:04
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write M.
Have supplies of more syllaberles come in now?!
March 1st, 2022 03:04
SHE WALKS ALONE
Rocky Lagou said:
Very expressive and truly crafted finely. I enjoy the images your presenting and the final line is an expression very direct and poignant. \"In sacrifice of sentiment\" 💖
February 28th, 2022 09:39
Rocky Lagou said:
Very expressive and truly crafted finely. I enjoy the images your presenting and the final line is an expression very direct and poignant. \"In sacrifice of sentiment\" 💖
February 28th, 2022 09:39
SHE WALKS ALONE
dusk arising said:
An austere atmosphere in your haunting words today.... or am I being affected by the Ukraine conflict.
February 27th, 2022 09:17
dusk arising said:
An austere atmosphere in your haunting words today.... or am I being affected by the Ukraine conflict.
February 27th, 2022 09:17
SHE WALKS ALONE
Rozina said:
Very expressive lines. I enjoyed reading this.
February 27th, 2022 03:53
Rozina said:
Very expressive lines. I enjoyed reading this.
February 27th, 2022 03:53
SHE WALKS ALONE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
This about Miss Berles, or one of the Berles?
February 27th, 2022 03:47
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
This about Miss Berles, or one of the Berles?
February 27th, 2022 03:47
LIMERICK 90
Neville said:
Okay, get this folks .. Having been born in Northants, which is just about as far from the sea as ya can get on this here Island of ours (sorry for those who live outside, you will just have to imagine it) .. and my only son being born in Leicestershire ......... (same thing in brackets really) .. I was first compelled to savour Mr. M. Edwards cartoon sketch before moving on to the limerick he pinned up there ............. Now given the info I have shared with you guys & galls ... & for no end of obvious and less obvious reasons, that most definitely aint a scribbled J.S pun .. I have to tell you all Limerick # 90 is absolutely spot on ................ Bloomin well limmed MIchael ................ N :)
February 26th, 2022 13:09
Neville said:
Okay, get this folks .. Having been born in Northants, which is just about as far from the sea as ya can get on this here Island of ours (sorry for those who live outside, you will just have to imagine it) .. and my only son being born in Leicestershire ......... (same thing in brackets really) .. I was first compelled to savour Mr. M. Edwards cartoon sketch before moving on to the limerick he pinned up there ............. Now given the info I have shared with you guys & galls ... & for no end of obvious and less obvious reasons, that most definitely aint a scribbled J.S pun .. I have to tell you all Limerick # 90 is absolutely spot on ................ Bloomin well limmed MIchael ................ N :)
February 26th, 2022 13:09
LIMERICK 90
dusk arising said:
In the flat up above dont you know
Theyre aware of the peeing below
to show their bad feeling
punched a hole in that ceiling
stuck their bum through and let one go!
as fast as you like - in a wink
Ealing was full of the stink
the air had turned foul
dogs started to howl
and the tellies all went on the blink
the worker was hauled up in court
for the occasion when he was caught short
to pee on the ceiling
was the wrong place i\'m feeling
for a bladder containing one quart
he didnt half feel unwell
when they hauled him off to a cell
like little jack horner
he peed in the corner
and emptied his bowels as well
the gov\'ner would have none of this
the worker was takin the piss
whilst you\'re in prison care
we\'ll have none of that here
but from his trousers there came a loud hiss
don\'t get me started....
February 26th, 2022 10:16
dusk arising said:
In the flat up above dont you know
Theyre aware of the peeing below
to show their bad feeling
punched a hole in that ceiling
stuck their bum through and let one go!
as fast as you like - in a wink
Ealing was full of the stink
the air had turned foul
dogs started to howl
and the tellies all went on the blink
the worker was hauled up in court
for the occasion when he was caught short
to pee on the ceiling
was the wrong place i\'m feeling
for a bladder containing one quart
he didnt half feel unwell
when they hauled him off to a cell
like little jack horner
he peed in the corner
and emptied his bowels as well
the gov\'ner would have none of this
the worker was takin the piss
whilst you\'re in prison care
we\'ll have none of that here
but from his trousers there came a loud hiss
don\'t get me started....
February 26th, 2022 10:16
LIMERICK 90
Doggerel Dave said:
Like yer little \'Wot no...\' man (presumably \'man\') in car, Michael...
February 26th, 2022 05:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Like yer little \'Wot no...\' man (presumably \'man\') in car, Michael...
February 26th, 2022 05:13
LIMERICK 90
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
Who\'s that character, a bit like your in the pic, who peers over walls, I think?
February 26th, 2022 03:18
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
Who\'s that character, a bit like your in the pic, who peers over walls, I think?
February 26th, 2022 03:18
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
‘Closed minds have no sight.’
So true…
‘closed minds’ will never see;
but, of course, that is never you.☺️
Love the painting.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
February 25th, 2022 16:57
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
‘Closed minds have no sight.’
So true…
‘closed minds’ will never see;
but, of course, that is never you.☺️
Love the painting.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
February 25th, 2022 16:57
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
dusk arising said:
Great words ME. Brought to mind how wasted is all our poetry in a world where so few see the poetic.
February 25th, 2022 10:28
dusk arising said:
Great words ME. Brought to mind how wasted is all our poetry in a world where so few see the poetic.
February 25th, 2022 10:28
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
As simple as it needs to be.
February 25th, 2022 10:02
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
As simple as it needs to be.
February 25th, 2022 10:02
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness, Michael
I meant no disrespect, initially
your art took me
to seashore rock faces
and then your words inspired me
to pen a little poetic reply..
thanks for sharing, dear Poetic Artist
such work of deeply insightful commentary..
(hard to budge
dense stubbornness
but formed of, of
survival\'s, pure minerals
so they know
change, is inevitable
but those humane Truth\'s
of life
can never be negotiated,
so let progression\'s moss
cover
and seasonal raindrops
bombard:
\'Rocks wet and shining
Unseen by those who won’t see
Closed minds have no sight.\')
February 25th, 2022 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness, Michael
I meant no disrespect, initially
your art took me
to seashore rock faces
and then your words inspired me
to pen a little poetic reply..
thanks for sharing, dear Poetic Artist
such work of deeply insightful commentary..
(hard to budge
dense stubbornness
but formed of, of
survival\'s, pure minerals
so they know
change, is inevitable
but those humane Truth\'s
of life
can never be negotiated,
so let progression\'s moss
cover
and seasonal raindrops
bombard:
\'Rocks wet and shining
Unseen by those who won’t see
Closed minds have no sight.\')
February 25th, 2022 05:34
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
Rozina said:
I like the message in your haiku/senryu. So true.
February 25th, 2022 04:28
Rozina said:
I like the message in your haiku/senryu. So true.
February 25th, 2022 04:28
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles seeing?
February 25th, 2022 03:27
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles seeing?
February 25th, 2022 03:27
LIMERICK 88
Rozina said:
Hehehe good one! There’s actually a runner in our nearby park who runs backwards.
February 24th, 2022 18:18
Rozina said:
Hehehe good one! There’s actually a runner in our nearby park who runs backwards.
February 24th, 2022 18:18
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