Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
Five Seven Fives (Two)
orchidee said:
Good write M. You know Chak-Ra? Seen him/her lately?!
March 20th, 2022 08:32
orchidee said:
Good write M. You know Chak-Ra? Seen him/her lately?!
March 20th, 2022 08:32
Five Seven Fives (Two)
dean langmuir said:
Good write,harmonised is one of my favourite words.take care
March 20th, 2022 07:15
dean langmuir said:
Good write,harmonised is one of my favourite words.take care
March 20th, 2022 07:15
Five Seven Fives (Two)
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve just written one about Kiev which on reflection could sound quite disrespectful given the tragic circumstances so I\'ve posted this instead. Still hesitant about posting it as I don\'t want to cause hurt even though there is still room for humour in the darkest hours.
March 20th, 2022 03:13
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve just written one about Kiev which on reflection could sound quite disrespectful given the tragic circumstances so I\'ve posted this instead. Still hesitant about posting it as I don\'t want to cause hurt even though there is still room for humour in the darkest hours.
March 20th, 2022 03:13
I MISS YOU
dean langmuir said:
I like this poem but I don\'t know why,thank you,poem on
March 19th, 2022 18:40
dean langmuir said:
I like this poem but I don\'t know why,thank you,poem on
March 19th, 2022 18:40
I MISS YOU
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot, Michael – no limerick double ‘0’, with prefix one?
Surely it would be good to round it out and do the ton?
‘Apologies for previous conflagration -
I will endeavour to avoid future mention:
But this takes restraint, and that’s not easy when all is done.
March 19th, 2022 06:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot, Michael – no limerick double ‘0’, with prefix one?
Surely it would be good to round it out and do the ton?
‘Apologies for previous conflagration -
I will endeavour to avoid future mention:
But this takes restraint, and that’s not easy when all is done.
March 19th, 2022 06:12
I MISS YOU
orchidee said:
Good nonsense M. lol.
We missing Miss Berles? She still around?!
March 19th, 2022 03:17
orchidee said:
Good nonsense M. lol.
We missing Miss Berles? She still around?!
March 19th, 2022 03:17
LIMERICK 91
myself and me said:
Love your limerick. It was such a joy to read them.
March 16th, 2022 18:37
myself and me said:
Love your limerick. It was such a joy to read them.
March 16th, 2022 18:37
LIMERICKS 97, 98 and 99
Christina8 said:
Some of these are quite hilarious, I really liked the last one! These are all great!
March 16th, 2022 12:37
Christina8 said:
Some of these are quite hilarious, I really liked the last one! These are all great!
March 16th, 2022 12:37
LIMERICKS 97, 98 and 99
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow very \"vivid\" limericks you got 😅. The first one was killer! Great job!
March 16th, 2022 09:49
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow very \"vivid\" limericks you got 😅. The first one was killer! Great job!
March 16th, 2022 09:49
LIMERICKS 97, 98 and 99
Doggerel Dave said:
So multi disciplined, Michael: L’s one and three – Relationship[ councellor extraordinaire: L2 – incontinence advisor.
Cross discipline, I know, but one has to diversify in these uncertain times.
Your artworks …complexity rulez. Great.
March 16th, 2022 05:52
Doggerel Dave said:
So multi disciplined, Michael: L’s one and three – Relationship[ councellor extraordinaire: L2 – incontinence advisor.
Cross discipline, I know, but one has to diversify in these uncertain times.
Your artworks …complexity rulez. Great.
March 16th, 2022 05:52
LIMERICKS 97, 98 and 99
dusk arising said:
The passion he felt in his heart
one could see well expressed in his art
his pictures were abstract
like his cow in a cat-flap
and his opticians rorschach eye-chat
his spectacles you could say were bizarre
above both his ears were crowbars
on the bridge of his nose
was a rat decomposed
his lenses - a pair of jamjars
in the finest artistic tradition
came the day of his first exhibition
where a social cross section
approved his collection
he wished now he\'d charged them admission
March 16th, 2022 02:15
dusk arising said:
The passion he felt in his heart
one could see well expressed in his art
his pictures were abstract
like his cow in a cat-flap
and his opticians rorschach eye-chat
his spectacles you could say were bizarre
above both his ears were crowbars
on the bridge of his nose
was a rat decomposed
his lenses - a pair of jamjars
in the finest artistic tradition
came the day of his first exhibition
where a social cross section
approved his collection
he wished now he\'d charged them admission
March 16th, 2022 02:15
LIMERICK 91
L. B. Mek said:
lol
the awkward depth meaning hidden in these words
has a prerequisite of aged life experience, I think..
or maybe that\'s just me
(I\'m still chuckling btw)
thanks Michael
March 15th, 2022 06:45
L. B. Mek said:
lol
the awkward depth meaning hidden in these words
has a prerequisite of aged life experience, I think..
or maybe that\'s just me
(I\'m still chuckling btw)
thanks Michael
March 15th, 2022 06:45
LIMERICK 91
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - - good one again Mike - - Super image that adds its points to your limerick- fun - - and I will stop star-wishing from now on.
March 15th, 2022 04:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - - good one again Mike - - Super image that adds its points to your limerick- fun - - and I will stop star-wishing from now on.
March 15th, 2022 04:36
LIMERICK 91
dusk arising said:
He wished upon a wishbone
wanting not to be alone
his wish came true
he\'s got a silly moo
and all she does is moan
he wished he\'d wished upon that star
cos he\'d rather he\'d wished for a red sports car
it could come true
either red or blue
to rush his wife to the abbotoir
March 15th, 2022 03:34
dusk arising said:
He wished upon a wishbone
wanting not to be alone
his wish came true
he\'s got a silly moo
and all she does is moan
he wished he\'d wished upon that star
cos he\'d rather he\'d wished for a red sports car
it could come true
either red or blue
to rush his wife to the abbotoir
March 15th, 2022 03:34
LIMERICK 91
Doggerel Dave said:
Limited number of orifices available, Michael...but corr... the picture you provide on the packet don\'t half make one ache....
March 15th, 2022 03:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Limited number of orifices available, Michael...but corr... the picture you provide on the packet don\'t half make one ache....
March 15th, 2022 03:32
LIMERICK 91
orchidee said:
Oh loll good write and pic M.
Miss Berles got any stars named after her?
March 15th, 2022 02:57
orchidee said:
Oh loll good write and pic M.
Miss Berles got any stars named after her?
March 15th, 2022 02:57
SNIPPETS (3& 4)
SureshG said:
What, I’m not allowed to spit in the wind, no more
jolly good, my friend
March 6th, 2022 13:35
SureshG said:
What, I’m not allowed to spit in the wind, no more
jolly good, my friend
March 6th, 2022 13:35
SNIPPETS (3& 4)
Doggerel Dave said:
Three is me; I need to put that somewhere - got a fridge magnet?
Four, I\'m not sure; for me, the consumption of baked beans can have a deleterious effect on interactions with someone known only formally.
Have you commenced a new naive style with respect to your art, Michael? Enjoy that very much.
March 6th, 2022 05:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Three is me; I need to put that somewhere - got a fridge magnet?
Four, I\'m not sure; for me, the consumption of baked beans can have a deleterious effect on interactions with someone known only formally.
Have you commenced a new naive style with respect to your art, Michael? Enjoy that very much.
March 6th, 2022 05:58
SNIPPETS (3& 4)
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes and pic M.
Miss Berles have beans?!
March 6th, 2022 03:01
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes and pic M.
Miss Berles have beans?!
March 6th, 2022 03:01
SNIPPETS (3& 4)
Neville said:
Ha ... I made an involuntary funny noise upon reading these lines .. twice in fart ......................... :)
March 6th, 2022 03:00
Neville said:
Ha ... I made an involuntary funny noise upon reading these lines .. twice in fart ......................... :)
March 6th, 2022 03:00
SNIPPETS (1 & 2)
Rozina said:
I googled it! You got me wondering too. I have so many of such questions. No one has dared to say anything to my face, yet!
March 5th, 2022 23:20
Rozina said:
I googled it! You got me wondering too. I have so many of such questions. No one has dared to say anything to my face, yet!
March 5th, 2022 23:20
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