Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICKS 109, 110 and 111
dusk arising said:
110 had me in fits on the second line. I love them all.
Finally he\'d realised
and it came as such a surprise
for he gained so much joy
from his newfound toy
which dangled between his thighs
For a while he thought he\'d been bested
After all that time he\'d invested
on close examination
his sole exclamation
indeed she was quite double chested
At once he became quite lovelorn
a new fascination was born
he discovered that boobs
could be viewed on the tube
now he spends everyday watching porn
April 20th, 2022 03:02
dusk arising said:
110 had me in fits on the second line. I love them all.
Finally he\'d realised
and it came as such a surprise
for he gained so much joy
from his newfound toy
which dangled between his thighs
For a while he thought he\'d been bested
After all that time he\'d invested
on close examination
his sole exclamation
indeed she was quite double chested
At once he became quite lovelorn
a new fascination was born
he discovered that boobs
could be viewed on the tube
now he spends everyday watching porn
April 20th, 2022 03:02
LIMERICKS 109, 110 and 111
orchidee said:
Fido\'s saving me from a swoon on the second one! lol.
Good berles there M.
April 20th, 2022 02:19
orchidee said:
Fido\'s saving me from a swoon on the second one! lol.
Good berles there M.
April 20th, 2022 02:19
LIMERICKS 109, 110 and 111
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Michael, especially the third one - so true.
Andy
April 20th, 2022 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Michael, especially the third one - so true.
Andy
April 20th, 2022 01:15
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
DestinysPerspectives said:
I really love this poem! It\'s honest and not a topic I have come across in poetry very often.
April 18th, 2022 17:06
DestinysPerspectives said:
I really love this poem! It\'s honest and not a topic I have come across in poetry very often.
April 18th, 2022 17:06
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Rocky Lagou said:
I swear your artworks are so beautiful and inspiring. You\'ve truly got a talent. And the poem just tying it all together... wonderful job!
April 18th, 2022 08:33
Rocky Lagou said:
I swear your artworks are so beautiful and inspiring. You\'ve truly got a talent. And the poem just tying it all together... wonderful job!
April 18th, 2022 08:33
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Rozina said:
I don\'t know the answer but I know your poem is Amazing. If I sit down doing nothing at all but daydreaming about going on holiday, is that counted as doing nothing at all? The mind is so busy planning an itinerary!
April 17th, 2022 18:01
Rozina said:
I don\'t know the answer but I know your poem is Amazing. If I sit down doing nothing at all but daydreaming about going on holiday, is that counted as doing nothing at all? The mind is so busy planning an itinerary!
April 17th, 2022 18:01
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Ok Waleed said:
Best poem I’ve read in a very long time
April 17th, 2022 15:35
Ok Waleed said:
Best poem I’ve read in a very long time
April 17th, 2022 15:35
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Neville said:
my ma used to say \'its harder where there\'s none\' .... I still don\'t know what the hell it means tho\' .............. I love those iris, or whatever they are Michael ...
April 17th, 2022 10:29
Neville said:
my ma used to say \'its harder where there\'s none\' .... I still don\'t know what the hell it means tho\' .............. I love those iris, or whatever they are Michael ...
April 17th, 2022 10:29
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Paul Bell said:
Doing nothing is an art, and usually requires a clipboard. A clipboard signifies importance, and people keep out your way, I\'ve noticed.
April 17th, 2022 07:25
Paul Bell said:
Doing nothing is an art, and usually requires a clipboard. A clipboard signifies importance, and people keep out your way, I\'ve noticed.
April 17th, 2022 07:25
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
orchidee said:
I was bit miffed. A Bishop said \'Ohh, do nothing at all sometimes\'.
It\'s OK for him, in a pic of him swanning around on a sledge in the snow with his children.
Well, they only works Sundays anyway - don\'t they?!
April 17th, 2022 02:29
orchidee said:
I was bit miffed. A Bishop said \'Ohh, do nothing at all sometimes\'.
It\'s OK for him, in a pic of him swanning around on a sledge in the snow with his children.
Well, they only works Sundays anyway - don\'t they?!
April 17th, 2022 02:29
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Does Miss Berles allocate the sylla-berles, so we know when we\'ve finished? Or at least, we know how many berles are given to us for each poem.
April 17th, 2022 02:27
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Does Miss Berles allocate the sylla-berles, so we know when we\'ve finished? Or at least, we know how many berles are given to us for each poem.
April 17th, 2022 02:27
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Goldfinch60 said:
That passion will keep you going forever in life Michael no matter what you are passionate about.
Andy
April 17th, 2022 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
That passion will keep you going forever in life Michael no matter what you are passionate about.
Andy
April 17th, 2022 01:08
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
dusk arising said:
I is already finished boss, that\'s why i\'m doing nothing at all.
April 17th, 2022 00:42
dusk arising said:
I is already finished boss, that\'s why i\'m doing nothing at all.
April 17th, 2022 00:42
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Caring dove said:
I like your words based on flowers .. I imagine it is difficult feeling such feelings within but just doing ‘ nothing ‘
April 17th, 2022 00:20
Caring dove said:
I like your words based on flowers .. I imagine it is difficult feeling such feelings within but just doing ‘ nothing ‘
April 17th, 2022 00:20
575s (3, 4, and 5)
Neville said:
Sir Michal sir .. it would be darn near impossible for anyone who enjoys words as much as I do, to pass this page without leaving their seal of approval behind ... as indeed I do ....................... N
April 16th, 2022 05:04
Neville said:
Sir Michal sir .. it would be darn near impossible for anyone who enjoys words as much as I do, to pass this page without leaving their seal of approval behind ... as indeed I do ....................... N
April 16th, 2022 05:04
575s (3, 4, and 5)
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
A fine use of 51 berles, not one wasted. Miss Berles got enough supply?!
April 16th, 2022 02:28
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
A fine use of 51 berles, not one wasted. Miss Berles got enough supply?!
April 16th, 2022 02:28
LIMERICKS 106, 107 and 108
Neville said:
you just made me make an involuntary funny noise but I think I got away with it by blaming the dog .. :)
April 15th, 2022 03:34
Neville said:
you just made me make an involuntary funny noise but I think I got away with it by blaming the dog .. :)
April 15th, 2022 03:34
LIMERICKS 106, 107 and 108
Rozina said:
Hehe, 3 great limericks. Had a good laugh with these!
April 14th, 2022 22:22
Rozina said:
Hehe, 3 great limericks. Had a good laugh with these!
April 14th, 2022 22:22
LIMERICKS 106, 107 and 108
dusk arising said:
He\'d dream them up whilst aslumber
and each limerick he dreamed had a number
todays one oh six to one oh eight
I view over my breakfast plate
of two rashers and some fine sliced cucumber
B flat was Matt\'s flatulent key
he could play it all day with such glee
but at the fete on the green
he ruptured his spleen
and stank out the entire marquee
there ensued what was surely a risk
some toff could ignite the foul mist
it\'d just take some wag
to light up a fag
and the place would no longer exist
so they called upon fireman Sam
who arrived in his shiney red van
he was quite familiar
he\'d done several things similar
and he told everybody to scram
but the sound of Sams tinkling bell
had done little to cure that foul smell
and true to Sam\'s premonition
a sudden ignition
consigned the whole party to hell
April 14th, 2022 03:47
dusk arising said:
He\'d dream them up whilst aslumber
and each limerick he dreamed had a number
todays one oh six to one oh eight
I view over my breakfast plate
of two rashers and some fine sliced cucumber
B flat was Matt\'s flatulent key
he could play it all day with such glee
but at the fete on the green
he ruptured his spleen
and stank out the entire marquee
there ensued what was surely a risk
some toff could ignite the foul mist
it\'d just take some wag
to light up a fag
and the place would no longer exist
so they called upon fireman Sam
who arrived in his shiney red van
he was quite familiar
he\'d done several things similar
and he told everybody to scram
but the sound of Sams tinkling bell
had done little to cure that foul smell
and true to Sam\'s premonition
a sudden ignition
consigned the whole party to hell
April 14th, 2022 03:47
LIMERICKS 106, 107 and 108
L. B. Mek said:
a read
of b flat
fresh and home grown farts
where the fun\'s to be found...
lol
thanks Michael, needed that chuckle
its been a long week..
(I imagine standing in front of that painting
must feel like
being submerged, within a daydream
that we can get lost within
to feel
and reach for those textured, imbued
brush strokes of escape
as a promise
to this wondrousness, we call life
paused, hovering
in the face of callous, fate...)
April 14th, 2022 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
a read
of b flat
fresh and home grown farts
where the fun\'s to be found...
lol
thanks Michael, needed that chuckle
its been a long week..
(I imagine standing in front of that painting
must feel like
being submerged, within a daydream
that we can get lost within
to feel
and reach for those textured, imbued
brush strokes of escape
as a promise
to this wondrousness, we call life
paused, hovering
in the face of callous, fate...)
April 14th, 2022 03:44
LIMERICKS 106, 107 and 108
orchidee said:
Oh lol. good writes and pic M. Does Miss Berles play in Matt\'s orchestra?! lol.
April 14th, 2022 02:13
orchidee said:
Oh lol. good writes and pic M. Does Miss Berles play in Matt\'s orchestra?! lol.
April 14th, 2022 02:13
GARTREE PRISON
Rozina said:
An interesting story and a fantastic painting. The prisoners are crammed here in the city prison but there is no space to expand outwards, only upwards. There was a plan to build a new prison on a nearby small island but that is now a money making tourist resort.
April 13th, 2022 17:58
Rozina said:
An interesting story and a fantastic painting. The prisoners are crammed here in the city prison but there is no space to expand outwards, only upwards. There was a plan to build a new prison on a nearby small island but that is now a money making tourist resort.
April 13th, 2022 17:58
GARTREE PRISON
Neville said:
Bravo Michael .. I woz gonna say juliet bravo but got a little confused along the way .. that painting of yours is amazing by the way ............. Neville
April 13th, 2022 15:38
Neville said:
Bravo Michael .. I woz gonna say juliet bravo but got a little confused along the way .. that painting of yours is amazing by the way ............. Neville
April 13th, 2022 15:38
GARTREE PRISON
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles got better pixels? Can she help?!
April 13th, 2022 02:01
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles got better pixels? Can she help?!
April 13th, 2022 02:01
LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105
Rocky Lagou said:
Lord. That last one was quite the turn of events. Poor Ernie. No but in all seriousness this was great!
April 11th, 2022 08:31
Rocky Lagou said:
Lord. That last one was quite the turn of events. Poor Ernie. No but in all seriousness this was great!
April 11th, 2022 08:31
LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105
Rozina said:
So enjoyable to read your clever and funny limericks. Inspiring me to think up a few too.
April 11th, 2022 00:53
Rozina said:
So enjoyable to read your clever and funny limericks. Inspiring me to think up a few too.
April 11th, 2022 00:53
LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105
Christina8 said:
Good and funny limericks, I really enjoyed them all! :)
April 10th, 2022 11:41
Christina8 said:
Good and funny limericks, I really enjoyed them all! :)
April 10th, 2022 11:41
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