Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICKS 127, 128 and 129
Teddy.15 said:
There was a young lady called shirley
Who was always late and not early
She went to the shops
To buy a new mop
Lost her way and ended up in Purley
There was an old man who loved brandy
Fell over because he was bandy
He got a great fright
When along came his wife
and a dog underneath him called Mandy
🤣 I\'m still rubbish but I can always muse you lol ❤️
October 30th, 2024 03:40
Teddy.15 said:
There was a young lady called shirley
Who was always late and not early
She went to the shops
To buy a new mop
Lost her way and ended up in Purley
There was an old man who loved brandy
Fell over because he was bandy
He got a great fright
When along came his wife
and a dog underneath him called Mandy
🤣 I\'m still rubbish but I can always muse you lol ❤️
October 30th, 2024 03:40
LIMERICKS 127, 128 and 129
Doggerel Dave said:
Sure you have the tally right, Michael? Feels like many more..🤣.
October 30th, 2024 03:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Sure you have the tally right, Michael? Feels like many more..🤣.
October 30th, 2024 03:28
ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Neville said:
the next iPhone, diva or so called influencer will surely be among next months demigods .. I think you have made a point I subscribe to extremely well here Michael .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 03:42
Neville said:
the next iPhone, diva or so called influencer will surely be among next months demigods .. I think you have made a point I subscribe to extremely well here Michael .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 03:42
SHE AGREES
Cheeky Missy said:
I used to believe you a mutt
Who seemed quite content in a hut;
When I took you back home
You wrote up a sad tome
And turned out to be quite a slut.
That\'s for your limerick, if you like.
This is very pretty, simply rendered down the page with a delicacy befitting its message which, concluding sweetly in the final lines, amplifies the apt title. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 14:06
Cheeky Missy said:
I used to believe you a mutt
Who seemed quite content in a hut;
When I took you back home
You wrote up a sad tome
And turned out to be quite a slut.
That\'s for your limerick, if you like.
This is very pretty, simply rendered down the page with a delicacy befitting its message which, concluding sweetly in the final lines, amplifies the apt title. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 14:06
SHE AGREES
Neville said:
It\'s great to see another side of you Michael .. I reckon this is must be my most favouwritest of the M. Edwards I have encountered to date .. It really is quite something .. You really are a most accomplished artist with great diversity .. We have guests later so have already dusted off my picture .. not only that, but tis grand to have you back .. Neville
October 26th, 2024 02:24
Neville said:
It\'s great to see another side of you Michael .. I reckon this is must be my most favouwritest of the M. Edwards I have encountered to date .. It really is quite something .. You really are a most accomplished artist with great diversity .. We have guests later so have already dusted off my picture .. not only that, but tis grand to have you back .. Neville
October 26th, 2024 02:24
SHE AGREES
Goldfinch60 said:
We have just come back from the coast Michael and it was wonderful to walk beside the sea.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
We have just come back from the coast Michael and it was wonderful to walk beside the sea.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:00
SHE AGREES
MendedFences27 said:
Enjoyed the scene you\'ve described here, and it ended happily. Loved the setting, along the coast. Seems the couple were vacationing. I also liked your format, it was unique. So, well written, and a pleasant read. - Phil A.
October 25th, 2024 13:41
MendedFences27 said:
Enjoyed the scene you\'ve described here, and it ended happily. Loved the setting, along the coast. Seems the couple were vacationing. I also liked your format, it was unique. So, well written, and a pleasant read. - Phil A.
October 25th, 2024 13:41
SHE AGREES
Teddy.15 said:
There was an old dog called gruffy
Who\'s owner smelt bad and was scruffy
When his dog did a pee
His owner could see
That the dogs balls were all puffy
off the cuff as I never write them unless you turn up friend 🤣 we should do a link only for
Limerick that everyone can join in. ❤️
October 25th, 2024 11:21
Teddy.15 said:
There was an old dog called gruffy
Who\'s owner smelt bad and was scruffy
When his dog did a pee
His owner could see
That the dogs balls were all puffy
off the cuff as I never write them unless you turn up friend 🤣 we should do a link only for
Limerick that everyone can join in. ❤️
October 25th, 2024 11:21
SHE AGREES
Doggerel Dave said:
Great, Michael - you are back. Don\'t make it so long next time.
The tension here is palpable. It reminds me.... Am I in with the chance of something deep and long standing? Turns out, yes I was.
October 25th, 2024 05:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Great, Michael - you are back. Don\'t make it so long next time.
The tension here is palpable. It reminds me.... Am I in with the chance of something deep and long standing? Turns out, yes I was.
October 25th, 2024 05:40
DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
A.H. Browning said:
I really like this. And I was smitten that I had no choice but to read when I saw the big puppy eyes :)
September 11th, 2024 13:51
A.H. Browning said:
I really like this. And I was smitten that I had no choice but to read when I saw the big puppy eyes :)
September 11th, 2024 13:51
ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t see the target as the religions - other secular orthodoxies, adhered to by many; rabid belief in markets, capitalism, political parties and so on.....
September 6th, 2024 20:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t see the target as the religions - other secular orthodoxies, adhered to by many; rabid belief in markets, capitalism, political parties and so on.....
September 6th, 2024 20:22
ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Goldfinch60 said:
We must have our own faith in life Michael, not that that others try to force on us.
Andy
September 5th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
We must have our own faith in life Michael, not that that others try to force on us.
Andy
September 5th, 2024 01:25
ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Dan Williams said:
I\'m guessing not a Christian, wanting better explanations?
September 5th, 2024 00:12
Dan Williams said:
I\'m guessing not a Christian, wanting better explanations?
September 5th, 2024 00:12
ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Rocky Lagou said:
As a person of faith, I actually love this poem, lol. \"Arbitrary faiths created with feathers\" is such an intriguing line, very descriptive. Thx for the poem and may you always see the good in life
September 4th, 2024 22:32
Rocky Lagou said:
As a person of faith, I actually love this poem, lol. \"Arbitrary faiths created with feathers\" is such an intriguing line, very descriptive. Thx for the poem and may you always see the good in life
September 4th, 2024 22:32
ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Doggerel Dave said:
In the late sixties and early seventies tin badges were all the go – remember? (no? well neva mind..) One I remember very clearly stated “99% is shit”
No change in the situation and your poem brings it literally up to date in a very literary way, Michael.
September 4th, 2024 17:13
Doggerel Dave said:
In the late sixties and early seventies tin badges were all the go – remember? (no? well neva mind..) One I remember very clearly stated “99% is shit”
No change in the situation and your poem brings it literally up to date in a very literary way, Michael.
September 4th, 2024 17:13
ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
sorenbarrett said:
From this writing, it seems as though change is difficult and tradition is favored. Very nicely expressed.
September 4th, 2024 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
From this writing, it seems as though change is difficult and tradition is favored. Very nicely expressed.
September 4th, 2024 12:58
ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
MendedFences27 said:
Amen. Too many Gods and too little time to sort out who to believe in. Best to choose what suits you. A short poem with a lot of power. Loved it. - Phil A.
September 4th, 2024 11:17
MendedFences27 said:
Amen. Too many Gods and too little time to sort out who to believe in. Best to choose what suits you. A short poem with a lot of power. Loved it. - Phil A.
September 4th, 2024 11:17
ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s all fake as it is true, I guess what we ourselves want to believe. 🌹
September 4th, 2024 08:27
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s all fake as it is true, I guess what we ourselves want to believe. 🌹
September 4th, 2024 08:27
OOPS
Teddy.15 said:
There was an old lady called Shirley
She went to bed very early
When she awoke
The bed springs were broke
and her hair was really rather curly
ah I got there in the end 🤣
August 28th, 2024 03:24
Teddy.15 said:
There was an old lady called Shirley
She went to bed very early
When she awoke
The bed springs were broke
and her hair was really rather curly
ah I got there in the end 🤣
August 28th, 2024 03:24
OOPS
Doggerel Dave said:
I want me money back - i seed that picture before.
Advice to Ruth, Pete and anyone else who might listen: Motorcycles are inherently unstable vehicles. (I know - I\'ve ridden \'em.)
August 28th, 2024 02:28
Doggerel Dave said:
I want me money back - i seed that picture before.
Advice to Ruth, Pete and anyone else who might listen: Motorcycles are inherently unstable vehicles. (I know - I\'ve ridden \'em.)
August 28th, 2024 02:28
OOPS
Teddy.15 said:
When she did wake up
Much to her suprise
Pete was sitting eating
McDonald cheesy fries lol brilliant Michael as ever you nailed this wonderful Limerick 💙
August 28th, 2024 01:23
Teddy.15 said:
When she did wake up
Much to her suprise
Pete was sitting eating
McDonald cheesy fries lol brilliant Michael as ever you nailed this wonderful Limerick 💙
August 28th, 2024 01:23
DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I absolutely love this! It is a piece that is left open to interpretation. I can absolutely relate with it, being a nocturnal creature. An awesome play on words, which I am a huge fan of. Well done! Excellent write and an easy favorite! Oh...and hello Stanley!
August 22nd, 2024 15:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I absolutely love this! It is a piece that is left open to interpretation. I can absolutely relate with it, being a nocturnal creature. An awesome play on words, which I am a huge fan of. Well done! Excellent write and an easy favorite! Oh...and hello Stanley!
August 22nd, 2024 15:31
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