Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



SHORELINE
Caring dove said:

Good writing .. like the use of personification in this .. nicely expressed , especially like the mention of ‘ flirting with the gentle winds ‘ and ‘ whispering grass ‘

Nice way with words tho sad

June 28th, 2023 01:00

ARCHERY CLASSES
Teddy.15 said:

LOL erm... Try wine tasting it\'s a luxury hobby lol ❤️

June 27th, 2023 12:18

ARCHERY CLASSES
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Michael,
Thank you for sharing and making me smile. You certainly delivered with your poem and your artwork. Love it.😊

Laura 🌻

June 27th, 2023 09:08

ARCHERY CLASSES
Neville said:



an excellently executed bit o fun M .. good to see you posting again sir .. I used to be a keen archer and although it has been a while I still maintain my old English yew & orange wood longbow .. Neville

June 27th, 2023 03:35

ARCHERY CLASSES
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write M.
Will you try Miss Berles\' classes on \'The hunt for missing syllables\' or \'Archaic syllables dating back to 3000BC\'?!

June 27th, 2023 01:48

ARCHERY CLASSES
David Wakeling said:

This is a bit of fun.Well done

June 27th, 2023 00:27

SPILT FOOD
L. B. Mek said:

if only life was as easy
as having our spilt milk of life
licked clean by a keen cat..
plastic on fingertips
as our distance from those
sht stains of life..
(brevity, exemplified
with aplomb wise Poet
thanks Michael
hope you have a lovely weekend)

June 23rd, 2023 02:16

SPILT FOOD
Doggerel Dave said:

Took a couple of reads to work it out (mental constipation?). Indisputably true though.
New painting,, new style? Naïve charm.

June 20th, 2023 20:55

SPILT FOOD
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Michael,
This one deserves a belly laugh! 😂😂

I love your painting.

Laura🌻


June 20th, 2023 06:25

SPILT FOOD
Teddy.15 said:

lol

June 20th, 2023 02:42

SPILT FOOD
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Michael.

Andy

June 20th, 2023 01:56

SPILT FOOD
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write M. Processed peas?!

June 20th, 2023 01:55

SOUND ADVICE
Goldfinch60 said:

Great to see that you are writing more again.
I must clean my teeth! LOL

Andy

June 20th, 2023 01:55

SOUND ADVICE
LIZ said:

Thank you for the laugh...this early. 😆

June 19th, 2023 04:50

SOUND ADVICE
L. B. Mek said:

Michael for some reason that artwork
had my eyes getting a little teary
an impactful piece
and a wonderfully quirky write
but just seeing your name
on my screen has made my day
thank you!

June 19th, 2023 03:59

SOUND ADVICE
orchidee said:

Good write M. lol. You been on holiday with Miss Berles?

June 19th, 2023 01:52

SOUND ADVICE
Teddy.15 said:

My dear Michael, lol as ever so very funny and this early in the morning before breakfast. Love the paintings. Biggest of hugs to you 🤗

June 19th, 2023 01:16

HAIKUS ARE EASY
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

\'Haiku\' is a beautiful and challenging form of poetry that rewards careful observation and attention to detail.

May 5th, 2023 13:42

HAIKUS ARE EASY
Rocky Lagou said:

This is literally the epitome of poetic comedy gold. Thanks so much dear witty poet.

May 5th, 2023 07:47

HAIKUS ARE EASY
Ok Waleed said:

Funny

May 5th, 2023 07:25

HAIKUS ARE EASY
L. B. Mek said:

How I\'ve missed your unique voice
dear cherished Poet and friend
thank you Michael, you\'ve made my day

May 5th, 2023 04:55

HAIKUS ARE EASY
Fay Slimm. said:

So good to see you penning again Mike --- loving the cork art-work cork too.

May 5th, 2023 04:41

HAIKUS ARE EASY
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Miss Berles checked those syllables? She could not allow more than 5.7.5. lol.

May 5th, 2023 02:05

WHERE THE BALLS OF HELL HANG LOW
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Sir🙏 The poem conveys a sense of despair and hopelessness, and it is not suitable for all audiences.

April 17th, 2023 05:37

WHERE THE BALLS OF HELL HANG LOW
MendedFences27 said:

Graphic title. Wonderful words expressing the darkness before the light, when sorrow awaits the saving joy of life.
Enjoyed the artwork as well - saw a little gecko fella in it - maybe I hallucinate.

April 16th, 2023 11:59

WHERE THE BALLS OF HELL HANG LOW
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.

April 16th, 2023 02:46

WHERE THE BALLS OF HELL HANG LOW
2781 said:

The times they are a changin.

April 16th, 2023 02:11

WHERE THE BALLS OF HELL HANG LOW
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Michael, I do hope though that the twilight becomes a light in your life.

Love the artwork.

Andy

April 16th, 2023 01:11

FOOTBALL PUNDITS
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

The poem is a commentary on the media industry and the way in which commentators and pundits use language to describe sporting events. It is also a reflection on the importance of education and the need for individuals to have a solid understanding of grammar and language.....Good write Sir❤️

March 31st, 2023 01:26

LIMERICKS 121, 122 & 123
Doggerel Dave said:

That picture is quite erotic, Michael. Reminds me of a lady i knew very very well a very long time ago....

March 29th, 2023 07:52



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