Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
CRAZY COUPLETS (2)
dusk arising said:
For being clever enough to sleep in the cowshed,
He got a pat on the back!
October 23rd, 2018 11:44
dusk arising said:
For being clever enough to sleep in the cowshed,
He got a pat on the back!
October 23rd, 2018 11:44
FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE
sylviasearcher said:
The opening was such a contrast from the image of the title.
Such a beautiful write, it is more than bittersweet. It reminds me of young girls who fall victim to grooming. In the past they would have been demonised and shamed but your falling stars mark the loss of their innocent dreams in a poisonous world.
It reminded me of a song by birdy too.
October 23rd, 2018 07:06
sylviasearcher said:
The opening was such a contrast from the image of the title.
Such a beautiful write, it is more than bittersweet. It reminds me of young girls who fall victim to grooming. In the past they would have been demonised and shamed but your falling stars mark the loss of their innocent dreams in a poisonous world.
It reminded me of a song by birdy too.
October 23rd, 2018 07:06
FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I find the HAREM : SCAREM
I would not risk
To be a Rich Man\'s
ODALISQUE !
Thanks UNCLE MIKE you have excelled
yourself today Pictorally & Poetically
Perfect POEM and I have fallen in Love
With the beautiful CHEE CHEE DUCKS !
Please check my Exercise Poem
Not that you need it : always TRIM !
Love & Blessings : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 23rd, 2018 05:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I find the HAREM : SCAREM
I would not risk
To be a Rich Man\'s
ODALISQUE !
Thanks UNCLE MIKE you have excelled
yourself today Pictorally & Poetically
Perfect POEM and I have fallen in Love
With the beautiful CHEE CHEE DUCKS !
Please check my Exercise Poem
Not that you need it : always TRIM !
Love & Blessings : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 23rd, 2018 05:02
FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Finely seasoned flattery\" phrases the treatment of many on the concubine list in an Eastern Palace and this finely tuned warning of poisoned outcome gives proof which poetically put could not be bettered - - great first read of my morning dear Michael - - - and that wonderful line-art of yours is my daily delight.
October 23rd, 2018 02:44
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Finely seasoned flattery\" phrases the treatment of many on the concubine list in an Eastern Palace and this finely tuned warning of poisoned outcome gives proof which poetically put could not be bettered - - great first read of my morning dear Michael - - - and that wonderful line-art of yours is my daily delight.
October 23rd, 2018 02:44
FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE
orchidee said:
Arggh! Fido barked to warn me of \'odalisque\'. I looked it up and swooned. heehee. Is this about you and Miss Berles? Or me and her?!
October 23rd, 2018 02:22
orchidee said:
Arggh! Fido barked to warn me of \'odalisque\'. I looked it up and swooned. heehee. Is this about you and Miss Berles? Or me and her?!
October 23rd, 2018 02:22
A RAMBLE IN THE BRAMBLE
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Another wonderfully penned verse for the readers to enjoy. :)
Michael, are you an artist, as well. Are those drawings on you page, your own?
October 22nd, 2018 15:18
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Another wonderfully penned verse for the readers to enjoy. :)
Michael, are you an artist, as well. Are those drawings on you page, your own?
October 22nd, 2018 15:18
CRAZY COUPLETS (2)
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
I love these words of wisdom, Michael, especially the one about the lead balloon. I use that all the time. :)
Thanks for posting these, they\'re great.
October 22nd, 2018 15:15
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
I love these words of wisdom, Michael, especially the one about the lead balloon. I use that all the time. :)
Thanks for posting these, they\'re great.
October 22nd, 2018 15:15
CRAZY COUPLETS (2)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Three of lifes PARADOXES !
He liked Wine but could never fathom how
Wine containing 85% water could be termed DRY
My favorite is Number Three ~ because I believe in GRAVITY !
Love the GEESE ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
October 22nd, 2018 10:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Three of lifes PARADOXES !
He liked Wine but could never fathom how
Wine containing 85% water could be termed DRY
My favorite is Number Three ~ because I believe in GRAVITY !
Love the GEESE ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
October 22nd, 2018 10:10
CRAZY COUPLETS (2)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great couplets! 🤣🤣Love them! Keep them coming!
Of course, super artwork!
~Laura~
October 22nd, 2018 07:58
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great couplets! 🤣🤣Love them! Keep them coming!
Of course, super artwork!
~Laura~
October 22nd, 2018 07:58
CRAZY COUPLETS (2)
orchidee said:
Fine writes and pic Michael. Ahh, we should have thought of those things! I got a talking dog - Fido!
October 22nd, 2018 01:46
orchidee said:
Fine writes and pic Michael. Ahh, we should have thought of those things! I got a talking dog - Fido!
October 22nd, 2018 01:46
A RECOLLECTION
dusk arising said:
He he, excellent. What picture my mind creates. Similar to the little girl sports hero on the TV advert for.... blowed if i recall the product but the advert is excellent. Likewise your poem.
October 21st, 2018 16:06
dusk arising said:
He he, excellent. What picture my mind creates. Similar to the little girl sports hero on the TV advert for.... blowed if i recall the product but the advert is excellent. Likewise your poem.
October 21st, 2018 16:06
A RECOLLECTION
A.H. Browning said:
Really enjoyed reading this. Your words are quick to transform into images in my mind as I read.
October 21st, 2018 13:52
A.H. Browning said:
Really enjoyed reading this. Your words are quick to transform into images in my mind as I read.
October 21st, 2018 13:52
A RECOLLECTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Fine line drawing and equally fine ~ poema nostalgica ! Even I remember such freedom in the late 1980\'s when I was SIX ! Alas we seem to have morphed into a pardoxical Lawless but Nannie State ! Most days Im glad Im 35 (not 15) but I sure would not wish to be 55 and miss all the FUN (?) of early matrimony ! Yours as ever BRIAN
October 21st, 2018 11:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Fine line drawing and equally fine ~ poema nostalgica ! Even I remember such freedom in the late 1980\'s when I was SIX ! Alas we seem to have morphed into a pardoxical Lawless but Nannie State ! Most days Im glad Im 35 (not 15) but I sure would not wish to be 55 and miss all the FUN (?) of early matrimony ! Yours as ever BRIAN
October 21st, 2018 11:56
A RECOLLECTION
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Did Reka Lection write this? is she foreign - Reka?
October 21st, 2018 08:13
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Did Reka Lection write this? is she foreign - Reka?
October 21st, 2018 08:13
A RECOLLECTION
Goldfinch60 said:
I could see this Michael - artwork in words.
October 21st, 2018 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
I could see this Michael - artwork in words.
October 21st, 2018 01:45
CRAZY COUPLETS (1)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
My first laugh of the day! 😂
Very clever and entertaining!
Enjoyed it along with your artwork!
~Laura~
October 20th, 2018 13:46
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
My first laugh of the day! 😂
Very clever and entertaining!
Enjoyed it along with your artwork!
~Laura~
October 20th, 2018 13:46
CRAZY COUPLETS (1)
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido here, tried to warn me off reading number two - he would! lol.
October 20th, 2018 11:48
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido here, tried to warn me off reading number two - he would! lol.
October 20th, 2018 11:48
CRAZY COUPLETS (1)
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your wit is evident in these two unique couplets. Great work, Michael. Keep posting. :)
October 20th, 2018 11:19
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your wit is evident in these two unique couplets. Great work, Michael. Keep posting. :)
October 20th, 2018 11:19
CRAZY COUPLETS (1)
dusk arising said:
I had this bird in hand,
but i didn\'t want to in the bush.
October 20th, 2018 10:06
dusk arising said:
I had this bird in hand,
but i didn\'t want to in the bush.
October 20th, 2018 10:06
CRAZY COUPLETS (1)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
He loved to play Shakespeare : HAM - ALOT
He ended up in goofing in : SPAM - ALOT !
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Good to be back for a laugh ! Please check ABSENCE ADVANCES AMORE : Thanks with LOVE : ANGELA 🧡🧡
October 20th, 2018 03:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
He loved to play Shakespeare : HAM - ALOT
He ended up in goofing in : SPAM - ALOT !
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Good to be back for a laugh ! Please check ABSENCE ADVANCES AMORE : Thanks with LOVE : ANGELA 🧡🧡
October 20th, 2018 03:25
CRAZY COUPLETS (1)
orchidee said:
Oh no, seen it! heehee. Oh lol, good writes Michael.
October 20th, 2018 01:12
orchidee said:
Oh no, seen it! heehee. Oh lol, good writes Michael.
October 20th, 2018 01:12
CRAZY COUPLETS (1)
Goldfinch60 said:
Two clever couplets Michael.
Don\'t let Orchi see the second one, he might swoon.
October 20th, 2018 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Two clever couplets Michael.
Don\'t let Orchi see the second one, he might swoon.
October 20th, 2018 00:49
A RAMBLE IN THE BRAMBLE
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - Love all the apt rhyming words in this poetic warning against tumbling into the brambles my friend --- hope you have never been entangled while ambling. - - ouch - just the thought of tumbling in and having to wangle a way out agin.!!!!
October 19th, 2018 11:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - Love all the apt rhyming words in this poetic warning against tumbling into the brambles my friend --- hope you have never been entangled while ambling. - - ouch - just the thought of tumbling in and having to wangle a way out agin.!!!!
October 19th, 2018 11:16
A RAMBLE IN THE BRAMBLE
orchidee said:
Ahh, that one of Miss Berles brothers or sisters - Ram?!
October 19th, 2018 01:28
orchidee said:
Ahh, that one of Miss Berles brothers or sisters - Ram?!
October 19th, 2018 01:28
A RAMBLE IN THE BRAMBLE
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, those brambles take no prisoners - of is it that they DO take prisoners.
October 19th, 2018 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, those brambles take no prisoners - of is it that they DO take prisoners.
October 19th, 2018 01:04
NO MORE
Christina8 said:
I love your sketch and I think your poetry is divine!!
October 18th, 2018 20:43
Christina8 said:
I love your sketch and I think your poetry is divine!!
October 18th, 2018 20:43
NO MORE
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Michael your words reach into the soul of the reader.
Excellent!
October 18th, 2018 11:08
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Michael your words reach into the soul of the reader.
Excellent!
October 18th, 2018 11:08
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