Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
dusk arising said:
The scaffold of your mind erected around the nuance of a blueprint brings forth the buyers interest.
September 16th, 2018 17:48
dusk arising said:
The scaffold of your mind erected around the nuance of a blueprint brings forth the buyers interest.
September 16th, 2018 17:48
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
rrodriguez said:
Nicely put... words are for building beautiful ideas and concepts.
September 16th, 2018 17:37
rrodriguez said:
Nicely put... words are for building beautiful ideas and concepts.
September 16th, 2018 17:37
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
fuche_bu said:
love the pictures. Are these models your own constructions? Nice poem too.
September 16th, 2018 08:33
fuche_bu said:
love the pictures. Are these models your own constructions? Nice poem too.
September 16th, 2018 08:33
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well crafted almost a GEO - Metrical composition you might say... Loving the sculptures by the way,
A poem away keeps the rants away?
September 16th, 2018 04:24
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well crafted almost a GEO - Metrical composition you might say... Loving the sculptures by the way,
A poem away keeps the rants away?
September 16th, 2018 04:24
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for reminding us of the fragility of the building blocks of POETRY ~ However thankfully the WHOLE of the WORDS is always GREATER than just the SUM of the WORDS. Alas MODERN POETRY is just WORDS ~ without structure - rhyme - rhythm or reason ! So the WHOLE is worst than the SUM of the WORDS ! CLASSICAL POETRY ~ has Structure - Rhyme - Rhythm & Reason in abundance ! Love the WATER MILL ~ A friend of mine lived in one in YORKSHIRE. Please CHECK ANGELAS poem today ID RATHER HAVE JESUS ~ YOURS AS ALWAYS ~ BRIAN !
September 16th, 2018 03:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for reminding us of the fragility of the building blocks of POETRY ~ However thankfully the WHOLE of the WORDS is always GREATER than just the SUM of the WORDS. Alas MODERN POETRY is just WORDS ~ without structure - rhyme - rhythm or reason ! So the WHOLE is worst than the SUM of the WORDS ! CLASSICAL POETRY ~ has Structure - Rhyme - Rhythm & Reason in abundance ! Love the WATER MILL ~ A friend of mine lived in one in YORKSHIRE. Please CHECK ANGELAS poem today ID RATHER HAVE JESUS ~ YOURS AS ALWAYS ~ BRIAN !
September 16th, 2018 03:38
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
Goldfinch60 said:
Those letters, words and punctuation can show so many ideas.
September 16th, 2018 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those letters, words and punctuation can show so many ideas.
September 16th, 2018 01:35
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
orchidee said:
a fine write and pic Michael. Yes, if no punctuation we may go on and on and on...... Maybe we do anyway.
Ask Mr Punk Tuation. Dunno his real first name.
September 16th, 2018 01:25
orchidee said:
a fine write and pic Michael. Yes, if no punctuation we may go on and on and on...... Maybe we do anyway.
Ask Mr Punk Tuation. Dunno his real first name.
September 16th, 2018 01:25
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
A.H. Browning said:
Thank you for making me smile... really smile... and maybe laugh 😆 a little.
A.H. Browning
September 15th, 2018 22:04
A.H. Browning said:
Thank you for making me smile... really smile... and maybe laugh 😆 a little.
A.H. Browning
September 15th, 2018 22:04
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
dusk arising said:
Women can be awful touchy about other peoples cooking. Now my mum was a terrible cook, i was brought up eating Heinz 57 varieties. My ex on the other hand was a fine cook. I shall never forget when mum and dad came around for sunday tea near christmas (a rare event for them to visit) and Ex had cooked some mince pies, dad was stuffing his face saying how delicious they were, mother was prodding a mince pie around her plate with a fork.
September 15th, 2018 14:55
dusk arising said:
Women can be awful touchy about other peoples cooking. Now my mum was a terrible cook, i was brought up eating Heinz 57 varieties. My ex on the other hand was a fine cook. I shall never forget when mum and dad came around for sunday tea near christmas (a rare event for them to visit) and Ex had cooked some mince pies, dad was stuffing his face saying how delicious they were, mother was prodding a mince pie around her plate with a fork.
September 15th, 2018 14:55
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
orchidee said:
You seen Mr Chris Tation - Christopher? Or is it Miss Chris Tation (Christine)? Maybe it\'s husband and wife, both named Chris? (crustacean).
September 15th, 2018 09:41
orchidee said:
You seen Mr Chris Tation - Christopher? Or is it Miss Chris Tation (Christine)? Maybe it\'s husband and wife, both named Chris? (crustacean).
September 15th, 2018 09:41
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the Houses I love bespoke ART however PRIMITIVE ! Angela and I are both foodies ~ Angela\'s job is very physical so she needs lots of carbs & proteins & enough fats etc. The first time I took her to my Fave Restaurant ~ she chose the WINE (Spanish Rioja of course !) and ate every gram of the three courses (Pate ~ Sirloin Steak ~ Apple & Blackberry Pie with ice cream ~ chocolate mints & coffee ! I fell in love with her appetite ! I don\'t like PICKY EATERS or VEGANS. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
September 15th, 2018 07:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the Houses I love bespoke ART however PRIMITIVE ! Angela and I are both foodies ~ Angela\'s job is very physical so she needs lots of carbs & proteins & enough fats etc. The first time I took her to my Fave Restaurant ~ she chose the WINE (Spanish Rioja of course !) and ate every gram of the three courses (Pate ~ Sirloin Steak ~ Apple & Blackberry Pie with ice cream ~ chocolate mints & coffee ! I fell in love with her appetite ! I don\'t like PICKY EATERS or VEGANS. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
September 15th, 2018 07:33
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Michael!
It\'ll soon be Christmas
September 15th, 2018 06:09
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Michael!
It\'ll soon be Christmas
September 15th, 2018 06:09
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A fun read!
You mouthing something rude?!...
I don’t believe it!
Are “fat balls” like meatballs?
Beautiful art piece!
~Laura~
September 15th, 2018 04:44
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A fun read!
You mouthing something rude?!...
I don’t believe it!
Are “fat balls” like meatballs?
Beautiful art piece!
~Laura~
September 15th, 2018 04:44
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic Michael. You giving her mealworms too?!
September 15th, 2018 01:45
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic Michael. You giving her mealworms too?!
September 15th, 2018 01:45
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
Goldfinch60 said:
So the Beef Wellington with onion gravy, roast potatoes and asparagus was not appreciated then Michael.
September 15th, 2018 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
So the Beef Wellington with onion gravy, roast potatoes and asparagus was not appreciated then Michael.
September 15th, 2018 00:50
REINCARNATION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SQUID PRO QUO !
Thanks UNCLE MIKE loved the droll ditty and the sculpting ~ another CHURCH ~ you\'ll be going inside next ! Blessings & Love BRIAN and ANGELA 🧡🧡
September 14th, 2018 03:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SQUID PRO QUO !
Thanks UNCLE MIKE loved the droll ditty and the sculpting ~ another CHURCH ~ you\'ll be going inside next ! Blessings & Love BRIAN and ANGELA 🧡🧡
September 14th, 2018 03:39
REINCARNATION
onepauly said:
I agree.
and did you know a squid will eat anything? even rocks.
September 14th, 2018 03:21
onepauly said:
I agree.
and did you know a squid will eat anything? even rocks.
September 14th, 2018 03:21
REINCARNATION
dusk arising said:
I swear the taller house has a Formica roof.
An old friend passing in the street suddenly threw a five legged octopus at me saying \'here\'s that sick squid i owe you\'.
Did you now that there are more believers in reincarnation upon planet earth than those who believe in a christian \'heaven\'. In fact until 11th century (or was it 9th) reincarnation was a part of christian belief.
I know your piece is a tease but as a believer in the big \'R\' I felt the need to pontificate a bit.
A good fun write which reminded me of a statement made by a certain Mr Tony Blair \'I dont like predictions, I don\'t make them, and I never will\".
September 14th, 2018 01:59
dusk arising said:
I swear the taller house has a Formica roof.
An old friend passing in the street suddenly threw a five legged octopus at me saying \'here\'s that sick squid i owe you\'.
Did you now that there are more believers in reincarnation upon planet earth than those who believe in a christian \'heaven\'. In fact until 11th century (or was it 9th) reincarnation was a part of christian belief.
I know your piece is a tease but as a believer in the big \'R\' I felt the need to pontificate a bit.
A good fun write which reminded me of a statement made by a certain Mr Tony Blair \'I dont like predictions, I don\'t make them, and I never will\".
September 14th, 2018 01:59
REINCARNATION
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic Michael. Did we meet? I was a fellow squid too. But seriously, reincarnation is bunkum to me! Bah humbug!
September 14th, 2018 01:32
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic Michael. Did we meet? I was a fellow squid too. But seriously, reincarnation is bunkum to me! Bah humbug!
September 14th, 2018 01:32
IRONY
dusk arising said:
I got caught out around this time last year when i\'d had my new car a few days. I put it down to unfamiliarity.
I was offered the choice of points and a fine or a speeding course.
The course turned out to be the second most boring four hours of my life but i was very surprised by how many drivers had no clue of speed restrictions on our roads.
So many drivers appear to regard the highway code as a crib book on how to get a driving licence and then forget its contents.
September 13th, 2018 09:25
dusk arising said:
I got caught out around this time last year when i\'d had my new car a few days. I put it down to unfamiliarity.
I was offered the choice of points and a fine or a speeding course.
The course turned out to be the second most boring four hours of my life but i was very surprised by how many drivers had no clue of speed restrictions on our roads.
So many drivers appear to regard the highway code as a crib book on how to get a driving licence and then forget its contents.
September 13th, 2018 09:25
IRONY
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Michael, i guess the Police just wanted a picture of your nice new car too? you can\'t blame them I bet it\'s very nice.
You\'re in good company
September 13th, 2018 02:55
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Michael, i guess the Police just wanted a picture of your nice new car too? you can\'t blame them I bet it\'s very nice.
You\'re in good company
September 13th, 2018 02:55
IRONY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : In my opinion when a MAN gets a New Car he becomes a Teenager again! Ignores the SPEEDO : His Passengers and sadly speed restriction signs and SPEED CAMERAS. I\'m not laughing : but I do find it amusing! Please check my Poem today MAORI RELIGION : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love the Carving : One of the MAORI Janitors at the Hospital : who is a wood carver : has promised to make me one !
September 13th, 2018 02:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : In my opinion when a MAN gets a New Car he becomes a Teenager again! Ignores the SPEEDO : His Passengers and sadly speed restriction signs and SPEED CAMERAS. I\'m not laughing : but I do find it amusing! Please check my Poem today MAORI RELIGION : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love the Carving : One of the MAORI Janitors at the Hospital : who is a wood carver : has promised to make me one !
September 13th, 2018 02:50
IRONY
orchidee said:
Well, in high-speed trains, we don\'t realise we may be going 100mph. If on a platform and one whizzes by, we realise how fast it is actually going.
Miss Berles doing 200mph on the motorway?
September 13th, 2018 01:43
orchidee said:
Well, in high-speed trains, we don\'t realise we may be going 100mph. If on a platform and one whizzes by, we realise how fast it is actually going.
Miss Berles doing 200mph on the motorway?
September 13th, 2018 01:43
IRONY
Goldfinch60 said:
Well if you will buy these new fangled Austin 7\'s! You will have to be more careful.
Seriously though I was caught speeding and went on a Speed Awareness Course, it was very good and I came away with the opinion that it was so good that everyone should go on one.
September 13th, 2018 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Well if you will buy these new fangled Austin 7\'s! You will have to be more careful.
Seriously though I was caught speeding and went on a Speed Awareness Course, it was very good and I came away with the opinion that it was so good that everyone should go on one.
September 13th, 2018 00:59
IRONY
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh you don\'t strike me as a regular speedster my friend - what a depressing welcome for your new car - - hope that awaited post never comes..... love the driftwood cottage and bench .
September 13th, 2018 00:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh you don\'t strike me as a regular speedster my friend - what a depressing welcome for your new car - - hope that awaited post never comes..... love the driftwood cottage and bench .
September 13th, 2018 00:26
A FULL HEAD OF HAIR
Fay Slimm. said:
Still giggling at this Mike - I know quite a few in that category too.
September 12th, 2018 04:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Still giggling at this Mike - I know quite a few in that category too.
September 12th, 2018 04:40
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