Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE DEWS OF DAWN
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Was she French - dishabille?!
I\'m off to see some artist\'s works now, at some Open Studios. Ooh!
November 17th, 2018 02:22
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Was she French - dishabille?!
I\'m off to see some artist\'s works now, at some Open Studios. Ooh!
November 17th, 2018 02:22
THE DEWS OF DAWN
onepauly said:
a love story?
if its not
I love the morning dew
in the summertime.
November 17th, 2018 02:08
onepauly said:
a love story?
if its not
I love the morning dew
in the summertime.
November 17th, 2018 02:08
KNOCK KNOCK
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
KNOCK KNOCK
Who\'s there ?
Cash
Cash who ?
No thanks ~ I\'ll have a PEANUT !
HI UNCLE MKE ~ Pleased your are recovering. Love your BALON ROUGE Painting a Classic. I\'ll commission one when Angela & I start a Family ! Angela has posted ~ A Seasonal Octet of Doublets ~ Seasons of My Mind ~ please check ~ THANKS ~ Yours BRIAN
November 16th, 2018 09:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
KNOCK KNOCK
Who\'s there ?
Cash
Cash who ?
No thanks ~ I\'ll have a PEANUT !
HI UNCLE MKE ~ Pleased your are recovering. Love your BALON ROUGE Painting a Classic. I\'ll commission one when Angela & I start a Family ! Angela has posted ~ A Seasonal Octet of Doublets ~ Seasons of My Mind ~ please check ~ THANKS ~ Yours BRIAN
November 16th, 2018 09:37
KNOCK KNOCK
dusk arising said:
Aww for a moment there i thought it was going to be your pet dawg come home and overjoyed at seeing you.
It will all end in tears.
November 16th, 2018 09:29
dusk arising said:
Aww for a moment there i thought it was going to be your pet dawg come home and overjoyed at seeing you.
It will all end in tears.
November 16th, 2018 09:29
KNOCK KNOCK
orchidee said:
Are these two fine stanzas linked? Was it (1)Miss Berles knocking at the door, and then (2) you let her in?!
Another daft thing people say: \'I wonder who that is at the door?\' But how will they know unless they open the door? It does help to do that!
Best wishes M.
November 16th, 2018 02:32
orchidee said:
Are these two fine stanzas linked? Was it (1)Miss Berles knocking at the door, and then (2) you let her in?!
Another daft thing people say: \'I wonder who that is at the door?\' But how will they know unless they open the door? It does help to do that!
Best wishes M.
November 16th, 2018 02:32
Seasonals
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
So glad you’re on a roll again!😉
Great doublets! Fun to read!
Thank you for sharing!
All the best!
~Laura~
November 15th, 2018 11:50
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
So glad you’re on a roll again!😉
Great doublets! Fun to read!
Thank you for sharing!
All the best!
~Laura~
November 15th, 2018 11:50
Seasonals
orchidee said:
Oohh, *staggers back in amazement* now you and your witticisms have returned! Is there a Mr De Witt E. Sizum? And why I am talking rubbish?! heehee.
November 15th, 2018 07:17
orchidee said:
Oohh, *staggers back in amazement* now you and your witticisms have returned! Is there a Mr De Witt E. Sizum? And why I am talking rubbish?! heehee.
November 15th, 2018 07:17
Seasonals
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine array of the follow-ups as season gives way to season in these enthralling lines Michael. So so pleased to read you are up and about again after your recent ordeal --hope things go on now according to expectations keep taking care my friend.
November 15th, 2018 06:26
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine array of the follow-ups as season gives way to season in these enthralling lines Michael. So so pleased to read you are up and about again after your recent ordeal --hope things go on now according to expectations keep taking care my friend.
November 15th, 2018 06:26
Seasonals
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW UNCLE MIKE : You and Brian are always teaching me new poetic FORMS ! Its 11 pm (Thursday) so Im catching up in MPS before I hit the SACK ! I love this form because : like me : its Trim & Slim ! It is OBVIOUS but also SUBTLE ! Spring : Summer (x 2) Summer : Autumn (x 2) Autumn : Winter (x 2) and Winter : Spring (x 2) An OCTET of four DOUBLETS ! The Season is followed by a single word descriptor. Also the First Line & the Last Line must be IDENTICAL : I have a very analytical mind ! I have written mine to post tomorrow : please judge it on its structure ! I love all facets of MPS : it keeps me POETICAL ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 15th, 2018 05:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW UNCLE MIKE : You and Brian are always teaching me new poetic FORMS ! Its 11 pm (Thursday) so Im catching up in MPS before I hit the SACK ! I love this form because : like me : its Trim & Slim ! It is OBVIOUS but also SUBTLE ! Spring : Summer (x 2) Summer : Autumn (x 2) Autumn : Winter (x 2) and Winter : Spring (x 2) An OCTET of four DOUBLETS ! The Season is followed by a single word descriptor. Also the First Line & the Last Line must be IDENTICAL : I have a very analytical mind ! I have written mine to post tomorrow : please judge it on its structure ! I love all facets of MPS : it keeps me POETICAL ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 15th, 2018 05:22
Seasonals
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again Michael.
Where is Spring rolling to? Down a hill? Good wishes too.
November 15th, 2018 02:43
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again Michael.
Where is Spring rolling to? Down a hill? Good wishes too.
November 15th, 2018 02:43
Seasonals
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry I\'ve been off the radar for 48 hours - all those who read the comments under my last posting will understand why. Anyway I\'m back and as for this posting it\'s yet another form I have devised and and is a good filler-in when you have just a few moments to spare. The \'rules\' are so obvious it\'s not even worth explaining them. Let me know what you think.
November 15th, 2018 02:08
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry I\'ve been off the radar for 48 hours - all those who read the comments under my last posting will understand why. Anyway I\'m back and as for this posting it\'s yet another form I have devised and and is a good filler-in when you have just a few moments to spare. The \'rules\' are so obvious it\'s not even worth explaining them. Let me know what you think.
November 15th, 2018 02:08
FORGOTTEN
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
As I was reading this masterfully penned poem, it made me think of “The Man In The Iron Mask”! An outstanding write!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2018 16:15
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
As I was reading this masterfully penned poem, it made me think of “The Man In The Iron Mask”! An outstanding write!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2018 16:15
FORGOTTEN
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Michael, this poem is excellent. To date, I don\'t believe you\'ve written one better.
Yet, who is this man? Did he live in ancient Rome? One can only guess.
Perhaps this mystery man is Socrates - Mamertine Prison, ancient Rome? Yet, I do not know if he was denied reading material.
Great write, Edward. :-)
November 13th, 2018 16:23
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Michael, this poem is excellent. To date, I don\'t believe you\'ve written one better.
Yet, who is this man? Did he live in ancient Rome? One can only guess.
Perhaps this mystery man is Socrates - Mamertine Prison, ancient Rome? Yet, I do not know if he was denied reading material.
Great write, Edward. :-)
November 13th, 2018 16:23
FORGOTTEN
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine summary of attention paid to the words those whom the world deemed best forgotten . A chill runs through every line Michael as we put ourselves into the places of vaults and chains.
November 13th, 2018 10:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine summary of attention paid to the words those whom the world deemed best forgotten . A chill runs through every line Michael as we put ourselves into the places of vaults and chains.
November 13th, 2018 10:39
FORGOTTEN
kingOfOne said:
wise man. lovely charcoal drawing, did you draw it?
November 13th, 2018 04:59
kingOfOne said:
wise man. lovely charcoal drawing, did you draw it?
November 13th, 2018 04:59
FORGOTTEN
dusk arising said:
Ah, the thinker who spoke his mind to the wrong persons. People who heard but did not listen.
I\'m left wondering about \"No empathetic thoughts are stretched
in sympathy with his domain\". Does that refer to his own thoughts or the thoughts of others?
November 13th, 2018 04:02
dusk arising said:
Ah, the thinker who spoke his mind to the wrong persons. People who heard but did not listen.
I\'m left wondering about \"No empathetic thoughts are stretched
in sympathy with his domain\". Does that refer to his own thoughts or the thoughts of others?
November 13th, 2018 04:02
FORGOTTEN
Debsspot said:
Your words draw a picture as clear and beautiful as the sketch above despite the stark subject. Great work.
November 13th, 2018 03:28
Debsspot said:
Your words draw a picture as clear and beautiful as the sketch above despite the stark subject. Great work.
November 13th, 2018 03:28
FORGOTTEN
sylviasearcher said:
I love the imagery you create with this piece.
My empathetic thoughts were stretched to this figure \'with nails that pierced his white clenched palms\'
November 13th, 2018 03:01
sylviasearcher said:
I love the imagery you create with this piece.
My empathetic thoughts were stretched to this figure \'with nails that pierced his white clenched palms\'
November 13th, 2018 03:01
FORGOTTEN
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. The next book I shall read is: \'All You Need To Know About Syllables And Metres\', by Miss C. Berles.
November 13th, 2018 02:50
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. The next book I shall read is: \'All You Need To Know About Syllables And Metres\', by Miss C. Berles.
November 13th, 2018 02:50
AND SO TO BED
dusk arising said:
Honey bunny swears shes funny and giggles in her burrow.
Here and now swears he\'s a plough and buried in his furrow.
Thanks for brightening up my day.
November 12th, 2018 12:47
dusk arising said:
Honey bunny swears shes funny and giggles in her burrow.
Here and now swears he\'s a plough and buried in his furrow.
Thanks for brightening up my day.
November 12th, 2018 12:47
AND SO TO BED
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Very amusing!
I hope Hairy Clare doesn’t catch a cold!
Love your drawing! It reminds me of my great grandparents’ estate where beyond that gate were many cows grazing! Beautiful memories!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 12:43
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Very amusing!
I hope Hairy Clare doesn’t catch a cold!
Love your drawing! It reminds me of my great grandparents’ estate where beyond that gate were many cows grazing! Beautiful memories!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 12:43
RIOJA
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the shape poem and its subject matter! When I saw it, the adjective artful came to mind! Artful with your writing, artful with your artwork...intertwining your talents! Exceptional!
Cin 🍷cin🍷
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 11:01
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the shape poem and its subject matter! When I saw it, the adjective artful came to mind! Artful with your writing, artful with your artwork...intertwining your talents! Exceptional!
Cin 🍷cin🍷
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 11:01
AND SO TO BED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE : For another Dotty Ditty ! UK poetic humour is often misunderstood once you\'re outside the Fishing Zone which is one of the 1001 reasons for BREXIT : We\'re Happiest when we\'re INSULAR (although I do value \"Mi sangre Espanola !) Thanks for Pome \'n Pic: lovely :
LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
We are in VANITY FAIR with Pilgrims Progress today : please check Thanks !
November 12th, 2018 04:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE : For another Dotty Ditty ! UK poetic humour is often misunderstood once you\'re outside the Fishing Zone which is one of the 1001 reasons for BREXIT : We\'re Happiest when we\'re INSULAR (although I do value \"Mi sangre Espanola !) Thanks for Pome \'n Pic: lovely :
LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
We are in VANITY FAIR with Pilgrims Progress today : please check Thanks !
November 12th, 2018 04:31
AND SO TO BED
Fay Slimm. said:
Still giggling at these lines Michael - - I pity poor Beaty - - h aha - love the charcoal drawing.
November 12th, 2018 03:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Still giggling at these lines Michael - - I pity poor Beaty - - h aha - love the charcoal drawing.
November 12th, 2018 03:23
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