Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



A FULL HEAD OF HAIR
orchidee said:

Oh lol, a good write and pic Michael. Grey hair or white hair looks distinguished. You distinguished - or extinguished?!
Well, white hair gives a \'head- start\' to playing Santa. I just thought of that pun! Good innit?

September 12th, 2018 01:36

A FULL HEAD OF HAIR
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Michael.

I do have a full head f hair (on top) and my claim to fame is that I have fewer grey hairs than my YOUNGER brother!

September 12th, 2018 01:13

A FULL HEAD OF HAIR
dusk arising said:

And your point is??? (LOL i am shaven headed with a goatee beard - trying to look artistic - or is it autistic).
Brought a wry smile to my face.

September 12th, 2018 00:23

SHE SAW THE LIGHT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

A BUNSEN BURNER in the Belfry ?
Got my Phone & took a SELFRY
What a sight before Evensong
(Please pardon me in my SARONG)
The BUNSEN TUBE was 100 foot long.
Snaking up the TOWER it went
Just like MOSES famed SERPENT
Lest her Choir Robe should get scorched
She now uses a wind up torch.
The moral of this tale is clear
Dont let you BUNSEN BURNER dangle DEAR !

Thanks Michael for a fine DITTY !
Love the model Church my fave so far
Put our names on it BRIAN & ANGELA
Blessing & Love šŸ˜Ž šŸ§”

September 11th, 2018 04:08

SHE SAW THE LIGHT
dusk arising said:

He struck a match
to enlight her joy
how she played
with his shiney toy



September 11th, 2018 03:47

SHE SAW THE LIGHT
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Michael,

Nice rhyming and other ā€œthingsā€ going on in your bright write! Enjoyed it along with the conversation going on among the three amigos so that your American friends...including this Italian-American...can understand whatā€™s going on! I am learning!šŸ˜‰

Love the sculpture! The only thing I canā€™t see is the scarred campanologist. I guess Iā€™ll have to use my imagination!

September 11th, 2018 02:33

SHE SAW THE LIGHT
orchidee said:

If he\'s not a chemist, I feel a swoon coming on! heehee. Did it glow in the dark? Swoon! Made myself faint now.

September 11th, 2018 01:34

SHE SAW THE LIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good Michael. Blimey the mention of Bunsen Burners took me back int the depths of my history when I was an analytical chemist in the last century.

September 11th, 2018 00:48

SOME (MORE) 575s
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MICHAEL ~ Technically (as you know) they are SENRYU ! We try to encapsulate SHAKESPEARE in a SENRYU ~ You have done that subconsciously 1. Love\'s Labour Lost 2. Measure for Measure 3. Midsummer Night\'s Dream ! Any other suggestions ? Love the Houses ~ At Snape ~ price is governed by SIZE cheapest (depending on Artist) is about Ā£50 and of course EACH ONE IS UNIQUE ~ like your SENRYU ! Yours BRIAN.

September 10th, 2018 15:38

SOME (MORE) 575s
dusk arising said:

You are so creative. I\'m a great fan of your driftwood street scenes. Do you have these on display around your castle or are you an art dealer too, displaying them in rows of glass cabinets with tempting price tags (in $$$$\'s of course) to attract new world visitors to take home a piece of old Blighty?

September 10th, 2018 12:52

SOME (MORE) 575s
orchidee said:

Oh yes, and \'regaling\' in a song with Miss Berles!

September 10th, 2018 01:56

SOME (MORE) 575s
orchidee said:

Yes, lovely sculptures too Michael. Bit swoony now. I spotted \'conjugal!\' heehee,

September 10th, 2018 01:32

SOME (MORE) 575s
Goldfinch60 said:

Three good ones there Michael.

I have not commented much on your sculptures - they are wonderful.

September 10th, 2018 01:28

SOME (MORE) 575s
onepauly said:

I could not have put it better.
wonderful!

September 10th, 2018 00:46

THE VIEWS OF NOBLER MEN
rrodriguez said:

This make sense when we look at it from the perspective of bringing people together to accomplish something together, but like yo just have put out they damn the views of nobler men.

September 9th, 2018 19:29

THE VIEWS OF NOBLER MEN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

VERY TRUE UNCLE MIKE ~ SOPHISTRY ~ The use of clever false arguments ~ especially eith the intention to deceive ! Better now known in the USA as TRUMPETRY and in the UK as BORISTRY ! It was ever thus and alas will ever be ! Yours as ever BRIAN šŸ˜Ž

September 9th, 2018 11:32

THE VIEWS OF NOBLER MEN
Lorna said:

I\'m missing something ...... is this English/UK politics? Oh and I\'m loving your little house sculptures - they are 3 dimensional no?

September 9th, 2018 05:14

THE BIRD POEM
orchidee said:

Oh lol, this has come up on Google, top of list, when I searched for Cilla Berles.

September 9th, 2018 02:38

THE VIEWS OF NOBLER MEN
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. You a nobler man?

September 9th, 2018 02:06

THE VIEWS OF NOBLER MEN
Goldfinch60 said:

Nobility does not always bring wisdom,
The wise are ignored
By the ignorant in power.

September 9th, 2018 01:39

THE VIEWS OF NOBLER MEN
dusk arising said:

\"When i worra lad there wont none o this inta web stuff tha knows\".
\"Aye lad, i can remember when that My Poetic Side site was just fields\".
\"So worra ya gonna do when they do this Brexit thing?\"
\"I\'m sticking to Weetabix no matter wot they does\".

September 9th, 2018 01:30

THE VIEWS OF NOBLER MEN
onepauly said:

its all with capitol gain.

September 9th, 2018 01:06

THEY DANCE
HangingbyaHalo said:

Beautiful ā¤ļø Good write.

September 8th, 2018 18:18

THEY DANCE
dusk arising said:

Aaah the dance of my muse cavorting through the ether.

September 8th, 2018 13:22

THEY DANCE
orchidee said:

Yes, me dancing! I dunno what they mean either. Does Miss Berles know?!

September 8th, 2018 10:44

THEY DANCE
Lorna said:

oooooo shades of Celtic woodlands in the mist....... let\'s go hug a tree! I once knew an woman whose Italian husband left her to run away to England to become a Druid.... with a young nymph of course..... she just sighed and said \"he\'s old, bald and broke - she won\'t stay long\"....... what got me going on that! Having gone off like that should add that I love your imagery and words of course!!!

September 8th, 2018 08:56

THEY DANCE
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Michael,

Iā€™ve been reading your poem over and over! Your choice of words keep dancing in my mind!
Iā€™m enjoying the read and the ā€œdanceā€!
Beautiful art piece!

Have a wonderful Saturday!

~Laura~


September 8th, 2018 07:26

THEY DANCE
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Great job...

September 8th, 2018 07:20

THEY DANCE
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Very nice...brief to the point and can relate

September 8th, 2018 07:19

THEY DANCE
fuche_bu said:

Nice work. Good imagery--both the words and the picture.

September 8th, 2018 06:54



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