Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
NO MORE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Surely Miss Berles is not \'no more\'?!
October 18th, 2018 01:11
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Surely Miss Berles is not \'no more\'?!
October 18th, 2018 01:11
INTO AUTUMN
dusk arising said:
Gave me the vision of dawn at this time of year. A shudder of chill yet peaceful.
October 17th, 2018 02:01
dusk arising said:
Gave me the vision of dawn at this time of year. A shudder of chill yet peaceful.
October 17th, 2018 02:01
INTO AUTUMN
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Miss Berles driving that tractor?!
October 17th, 2018 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Miss Berles driving that tractor?!
October 17th, 2018 01:48
INTO AUTUMN
Goldfinch60 said:
May that glorious peace be with us forever Michael. I could see that vale.
October 17th, 2018 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
May that glorious peace be with us forever Michael. I could see that vale.
October 17th, 2018 00:34
MY EWER
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I\'ve heard great writers say they are sometimes the conduit for their work that comes to them from somewhere... it flows through them and appears on the page. Just possibly Michael we are in the presence of a great writer?.
It is certainly a pleasure to read your work as it is to see your art.
No critic here...
October 16th, 2018 05:02
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I\'ve heard great writers say they are sometimes the conduit for their work that comes to them from somewhere... it flows through them and appears on the page. Just possibly Michael we are in the presence of a great writer?.
It is certainly a pleasure to read your work as it is to see your art.
No critic here...
October 16th, 2018 05:02
MY EWER
orchidee said:
Nymphs? Woof! Fido barked to warn me of a swoon! It\'s OK Fido. I was thinking of the dragonfly type of nymph.
October 16th, 2018 03:12
orchidee said:
Nymphs? Woof! Fido barked to warn me of a swoon! It\'s OK Fido. I was thinking of the dragonfly type of nymph.
October 16th, 2018 03:12
MY EWER
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes I agree the words are special my friend - - I see appreciation for life\'s opportunities dear Michael - Appealingly gentle is this solid intention to enjoy being gifted with Nymph attention. Great read.
October 16th, 2018 02:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes I agree the words are special my friend - - I see appreciation for life\'s opportunities dear Michael - Appealingly gentle is this solid intention to enjoy being gifted with Nymph attention. Great read.
October 16th, 2018 02:46
MY EWER
orchidee said:
OK, I\'ll rubbish this then. Someone commented on one site \'I don\'t care much for this\' on several poems. Erm, he got the reply of two words, one of which was \'off\'!
Ooh, a fine write Michael, splendid , flowing, etc. I\'m gushing now!l lol.
October 16th, 2018 02:07
orchidee said:
OK, I\'ll rubbish this then. Someone commented on one site \'I don\'t care much for this\' on several poems. Erm, he got the reply of two words, one of which was \'off\'!
Ooh, a fine write Michael, splendid , flowing, etc. I\'m gushing now!l lol.
October 16th, 2018 02:07
MY EWER
Goldfinch60 said:
May those nymphs continue the harmony that you have in your life Michael.
October 16th, 2018 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
May those nymphs continue the harmony that you have in your life Michael.
October 16th, 2018 00:58
NATURAL WORLD
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
What a beautiful and vivid write.
You have captured very well the beauty of nature and the bleakness of the colder seasons.
I love the picture too!
Keep writing
FineB
October 15th, 2018 15:25
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
What a beautiful and vivid write.
You have captured very well the beauty of nature and the bleakness of the colder seasons.
I love the picture too!
Keep writing
FineB
October 15th, 2018 15:25
NATURAL WORLD
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the sketch and the three pieces of studied wisdom Michael- -- the first haiku has to be one of your best methinks. A fine first read of my day.
October 15th, 2018 05:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the sketch and the three pieces of studied wisdom Michael- -- the first haiku has to be one of your best methinks. A fine first read of my day.
October 15th, 2018 05:53
NATURAL WORLD
dusk arising said:
Bee A says to Bee B, \'I Love you Bee B\'. Bee B replies \'Buzz off\'
You\'ve started off my hay fever with all that pollen. Or are u just pollen our leg?
October 15th, 2018 05:16
dusk arising said:
Bee A says to Bee B, \'I Love you Bee B\'. Bee B replies \'Buzz off\'
You\'ve started off my hay fever with all that pollen. Or are u just pollen our leg?
October 15th, 2018 05:16
NATURAL WORLD
orchidee said:
Fine writes and pic Michael. You back home now from 1066?
October 15th, 2018 01:31
orchidee said:
Fine writes and pic Michael. You back home now from 1066?
October 15th, 2018 01:31
LET\'S
Christina8 said:
Love your poem today! I agree there\'s never a better time to kiss!
October 14th, 2018 11:15
Christina8 said:
Love your poem today! I agree there\'s never a better time to kiss!
October 14th, 2018 11:15
LET\'S
dusk arising said:
The clock has turned another cog
So come here doll, and giz a snog.
October 14th, 2018 06:58
dusk arising said:
The clock has turned another cog
So come here doll, and giz a snog.
October 14th, 2018 06:58
LET\'S
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oooooo UNCLE MIKE : Awesome Bateau and a tingling Poem : Have a lovely DAY : Love ANGELA 💋
Please check Brians Ode to Bluebells !
October 14th, 2018 02:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oooooo UNCLE MIKE : Awesome Bateau and a tingling Poem : Have a lovely DAY : Love ANGELA 💋
Please check Brians Ode to Bluebells !
October 14th, 2018 02:00
LET\'S
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Fido won\'t let me. Every time I go to kiss he barks! I will put him out the back garden a while! Is it half past Autumn too now?
October 14th, 2018 01:25
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Fido won\'t let me. Every time I go to kiss he barks! I will put him out the back garden a while! Is it half past Autumn too now?
October 14th, 2018 01:25
LET\'S
Goldfinch60 said:
Kissing time is always the right time.
Love the model.
October 14th, 2018 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Kissing time is always the right time.
Love the model.
October 14th, 2018 01:06
ROMANTIC SHORTIES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the FISH ~ looks good al fresco ! Love the shorties DRINKING ~ BLOOMING & DREAMING ~ Please check OUR Sailing ~ Bailing ~ Wailing ~ Thanks for comment on FUSION. Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 13th, 2018 11:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the FISH ~ looks good al fresco ! Love the shorties DRINKING ~ BLOOMING & DREAMING ~ Please check OUR Sailing ~ Bailing ~ Wailing ~ Thanks for comment on FUSION. Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 13th, 2018 11:10
ROMANTIC SHORTIES
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Michael.
I am very impressed with the table that you have carved - did it take long to carve and polish?
October 13th, 2018 03:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Michael.
I am very impressed with the table that you have carved - did it take long to carve and polish?
October 13th, 2018 03:50
ROMANTIC SHORTIES
orchidee said:
I tried drinking ice water, but only got tummy ache. doh!
Sshh Fido - ready to bark at No.3!
Fine writes and pic Michael.
See ya at Hastings!
October 13th, 2018 01:40
orchidee said:
I tried drinking ice water, but only got tummy ache. doh!
Sshh Fido - ready to bark at No.3!
Fine writes and pic Michael.
See ya at Hastings!
October 13th, 2018 01:40
SOME QUATRAINS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE for me (BRIAN) a perfect POEM is a set of Quatrains with xaxa xbxb etc Rhyme Pattern. Isolated Q\'s are a bit like HAIKU & SENRYU which are best described as STATEMENTS rather than POEMS. But there are UNIKUS ~ Three prime Examples are BREXIT ~ EXIT ~ FIXIT all of which are deeply profound. Thanks for your famous four:
1. TOMATO SOUP ART IS NOT
2. PORQUOI DROIT O GAUCHE ?
3. I COME ~ I GO ~ I NO COME BACK AGAIN
4. LAVENDER ~ BENDER !
Please check my latest FUSION ~ What makes you HAPPY ?
Yours as ever BRIAN alias BRAIN !
Love the primitive sculptings ~ ace !
October 12th, 2018 15:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE for me (BRIAN) a perfect POEM is a set of Quatrains with xaxa xbxb etc Rhyme Pattern. Isolated Q\'s are a bit like HAIKU & SENRYU which are best described as STATEMENTS rather than POEMS. But there are UNIKUS ~ Three prime Examples are BREXIT ~ EXIT ~ FIXIT all of which are deeply profound. Thanks for your famous four:
1. TOMATO SOUP ART IS NOT
2. PORQUOI DROIT O GAUCHE ?
3. I COME ~ I GO ~ I NO COME BACK AGAIN
4. LAVENDER ~ BENDER !
Please check my latest FUSION ~ What makes you HAPPY ?
Yours as ever BRIAN alias BRAIN !
Love the primitive sculptings ~ ace !
October 12th, 2018 15:32
SOME QUATRAINS
orchidee said:
You polishing that armour this evening, ready for 1066?!
October 12th, 2018 13:50
orchidee said:
You polishing that armour this evening, ready for 1066?!
October 12th, 2018 13:50
SOME QUATRAINS
dusk arising said:
Well here we go, i have just read the first piece and im laughing aloud... onwards.....
last one modified:-
As church bells struck the quarter,
his mind relaxed
his life intact
he\'d had the vicar\'s daughter
always with a smile, love the humour in your writing.
October 12th, 2018 09:01
dusk arising said:
Well here we go, i have just read the first piece and im laughing aloud... onwards.....
last one modified:-
As church bells struck the quarter,
his mind relaxed
his life intact
he\'d had the vicar\'s daughter
always with a smile, love the humour in your writing.
October 12th, 2018 09:01
SOME QUATRAINS
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Mother said, the first was a tad \"Abstruse\"
She\'s sucha puritan...
I thought they were all excellent.
Bravo!
October 12th, 2018 07:58
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Mother said, the first was a tad \"Abstruse\"
She\'s sucha puritan...
I thought they were all excellent.
Bravo!
October 12th, 2018 07:58
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