Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



LIMERICK 79
L. B. Mek said:

lmao!
this made my morning Michael..
loved the painting as well, so clean
brush strokes, like poetry
so effortlessly accessible
just a joy, thank you!

February 8th, 2022 06:39

LIMERICK 79
dusk arising said:

He aspired to become an MP
which he achieved with the greatest of glee
bereft of all malice
he was called to the palace
before her majestyhe took to his knee

His knighthood really made Sir Paul
The finest Lord of them all
resplendent in ermine
commoners were now vermin
mere servants at his beck and call


I can\'t resist joining in with your limericks. Nice one.

February 8th, 2022 05:47

LIMERICK 79
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m voting with orchi - again! Dunno what\'s happening here...
Orchi - you are exhibiting the wisdom of age, not something every ancient manages. Bless you (a secular blessing of course 😊)

February 8th, 2022 03:21

LIMERICK 79
orchidee said:

I see this from this angle - Is it wrong, even scandalous, that many still don\'t know of benefits they can claim? There\'s \'heat or eat\' for example, and not just elderly people.
Also, not only homeless people have the need to use Food Banks.
Miss Berles claimed all the entitlement of sylla-berles for us?

February 8th, 2022 02:46

LIMERICK 79
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Michael my first laugh of the day, fabulous las line.

Andy

February 8th, 2022 02:44

A PAIR OF PEARS (A HAIRY PAIR)
Doggerel Dave said:

My entry to this competition is: a pair of coconuts (outer husk removed).
Prize to be sent by international courier;
May be left unattended on front porch table.
Thanking you in advance, Michael.

February 5th, 2022 03:36

A PAIR OF PEARS (A HAIRY PAIR)
orchidee said:

Fido says it\'s strictly about a pair of pears - the fruit variety! lol. He said that to save me from a swoon.

February 5th, 2022 03:15

A PAIR OF PEARS (A HAIRY PAIR)
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Michael, my first laugh of the day. May there be many sounds of laughter in yours.

Andy

February 5th, 2022 01:39

SHE STANDS ALONE
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

amaZing ,,sir💝❣️🙏🙏

February 4th, 2022 05:26

SHE STANDS ALONE
Doggerel Dave said:

I think that might be poetry....even I, not a great lover of depictions of nature in words, appreciated this. Picture a perfect complement. Thanks Michael.

February 2nd, 2022 19:44

SHE STANDS ALONE
Neville said:



There aint a single thing not to like about this page sir Michael ... N

February 2nd, 2022 04:38

SHE STANDS ALONE
dusk arising said:

Oh for more poetic journeys such as this. Worth waiting for.
\"in thoroughfares of shredded light\" words of poetry only the visual artist would create.
Into my favourites.

February 2nd, 2022 04:11

SHE STANDS ALONE
Rozina said:

Lovely description of nature and the painting too.

February 2nd, 2022 03:28

SHE STANDS ALONE
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Michael written by a true artist.

Andy

February 2nd, 2022 03:11

SHE STANDS ALONE
orchidee said:

A descriptive good write and pic M. You know Des Cryptshun?!

February 2nd, 2022 03:00

SHE STANDS ALONE
Caring dove said:

Really like this . Love the personification in this writing 🙂


February 2nd, 2022 02:57

LAST SEEN
Rozina said:

I enjoyed these few lines and as always admire your drawing.

January 31st, 2022 22:43

LAST SEEN
Neville said:


well I for one am delighted you posted \'LAST SEEN\' here & in its present format .. tis exceedingly good sir .... N

January 31st, 2022 17:31

LAST SEEN
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.
Them syllables gone into oblivion? Miss Berles nowhere to be seen?!

January 31st, 2022 02:58

LAST SEEN
Goldfinch60 said:

Such sad words Michael but brilliantly written.

Great drawing that fits in so well with your words.

Andy

January 31st, 2022 02:51

SHORT MEASURES (5)
Goldfinch60 said:

Fun write Michael.

Andy

January 28th, 2022 02:40

SHORT MEASURES (5)
Fay Slimm. said:

Hhhmmm - a smelly read Mike but what fantastic artwork.

January 27th, 2022 16:31

SHORT MEASURES (5)
Rozina said:

Haha! Relief! Lovely artwork.

January 27th, 2022 08:45

SHORT MEASURES (5)
dusk arising said:

After a night of wenchin
he finally let go the tension
it stank like no other
from under the covers
his fart hung in suspension

Cor blimey M.E. you must be younger than I thought because for an old fogey like me the first morning pleasure is to acknowledge and relieve my prostate\'s importuning demands for a pee.

Nice one, is that picture a \"scratch and sniff\" type?


January 27th, 2022 08:12

SHORT MEASURES (4)
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.

January 25th, 2022 05:58

SHORT MEASURES (4)
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Michael and so true, mind you I do shave my face every day and comb my hair.

Super art work - is it an old one, I seem to recognise it

Andy

January 25th, 2022 04:07

SHORT MEASURES (4)
Rozina said:

Absolutely agree with you to age gracefully. Lovely watercolour. painting.

January 25th, 2022 04:00

SHORT MEASURES (2 & 3)
L. B. Mek said:

love that single, shrub-like
bouquet of colourful, flower heads
shadow-less - leaning suggestively, away
from that generic pristine of walled
almost institutional, ivory white..
such a subtle focal point, or detail
that adds layers of meaning
to this idyllic, scene
you\'ve captured wonderfully;
what a nuanced talent, you posses
my friend..
and as-ever
what timely and insightful words of commentary, you\'ve shared..
thank you!

January 24th, 2022 08:00

SHORT MEASURES (2 & 3)
Rozina said:

Enjoyed your limericks and really admire your artwork.

January 24th, 2022 04:31

SHORT MEASURES (2 & 3)
orchidee said:

Good (sylla) berles and pic here. Are the berles more expensive at the moment? Hence the short writes?
(Everyone but you will think I\'m talking rubbish here - no change there, then?!) lol.

January 24th, 2022 02:53



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