Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
OUCH
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write and pic Michael.
Goldie\'s father had the same trouble then, as your recent poem - broke finger in three places. Was that England, Spain, and France, the three places? Hmm.
No joke though when it happens.
September 19th, 2018 01:45
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write and pic Michael.
Goldie\'s father had the same trouble then, as your recent poem - broke finger in three places. Was that England, Spain, and France, the three places? Hmm.
No joke though when it happens.
September 19th, 2018 01:45
OUCH
Goldfinch60 said:
Many years ago my father used to work shift work at Grain Oil Refinery. One Sunday afternoon my Mum brother and I were watching cricket, the John Player League, when Dad walked in with his hand bandaged, we asked what had happened, he said he had hit his finger with a spanner - we all fell about laughing.
He had broken the top bone in his middle finger in three places.
I hope the bucket was clean.
September 19th, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Many years ago my father used to work shift work at Grain Oil Refinery. One Sunday afternoon my Mum brother and I were watching cricket, the John Player League, when Dad walked in with his hand bandaged, we asked what had happened, he said he had hit his finger with a spanner - we all fell about laughing.
He had broken the top bone in his middle finger in three places.
I hope the bucket was clean.
September 19th, 2018 01:40
HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN
dusk arising said:
Ha ha nice one. Playing with words is fun. Playing with the written word more difficult than the spoken word.
September 18th, 2018 10:04
dusk arising said:
Ha ha nice one. Playing with words is fun. Playing with the written word more difficult than the spoken word.
September 18th, 2018 10:04
HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I hope he learned his lesson!
A great fun read! Thank you for your wonderful shares!
Love your art piece! It reminds me of a special location I visit anytime Iām in New York. When Iām there I visit the Montauk Point Lighthouse! An amazing site!
~Laura~
September 18th, 2018 09:41
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I hope he learned his lesson!
A great fun read! Thank you for your wonderful shares!
Love your art piece! It reminds me of a special location I visit anytime Iām in New York. When Iām there I visit the Montauk Point Lighthouse! An amazing site!
~Laura~
September 18th, 2018 09:41
HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Uncle Mike ~ Daily you \"Fill up our senses ~ with NONSENSE!\" It lifts the gloom & doom of BREXIT ! Love the LIGHT HOUSE etc very nauti-cal Love BRIAN and ANGELA XOX Please check JOHN DENVER ~ Thanks.
September 18th, 2018 04:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Uncle Mike ~ Daily you \"Fill up our senses ~ with NONSENSE!\" It lifts the gloom & doom of BREXIT ! Love the LIGHT HOUSE etc very nauti-cal Love BRIAN and ANGELA XOX Please check JOHN DENVER ~ Thanks.
September 18th, 2018 04:48
HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN
Goldfinch60 said:
Oops! Good fun write Michael.
September 18th, 2018 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Oops! Good fun write Michael.
September 18th, 2018 01:28
HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN
orchidee said:
Ooh a fine write and pic Michael. Ahh I get it. Bit like a guy who went to docs and said :
\'Doc I feel intense\'. Doc replied:
\'Well, stop camping then\' (in tents)! lol.
September 18th, 2018 01:19
orchidee said:
Ooh a fine write and pic Michael. Ahh I get it. Bit like a guy who went to docs and said :
\'Doc I feel intense\'. Doc replied:
\'Well, stop camping then\' (in tents)! lol.
September 18th, 2018 01:19
OCEANS TEARS
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Wow...this write is incredible!
I totally agree with Fayās comment!
An amazing read indeed!
Love your art piece with the added touch of the clothes line!
~Laura~
September 17th, 2018 09:59
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Wow...this write is incredible!
I totally agree with Fayās comment!
An amazing read indeed!
Love your art piece with the added touch of the clothes line!
~Laura~
September 17th, 2018 09:59
OCEANS TEARS
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this read - - - such linguistic pleasure to catch the nuances behind these lines - another gem Michael.
September 17th, 2018 06:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this read - - - such linguistic pleasure to catch the nuances behind these lines - another gem Michael.
September 17th, 2018 06:00
OCEANS TEARS
dusk arising said:
I came out of a fog to read this. Its filled with sombre mystery. Much like my fog.
September 17th, 2018 05:09
dusk arising said:
I came out of a fog to read this. Its filled with sombre mystery. Much like my fog.
September 17th, 2018 05:09
OCEANS TEARS
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh I\'m gonna be eidetic today! Any relation to Ida Tick?
September 17th, 2018 01:26
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh I\'m gonna be eidetic today! Any relation to Ida Tick?
September 17th, 2018 01:26
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
dusk arising said:
The scaffold of your mind erected around the nuance of a blueprint brings forth the buyers interest.
September 16th, 2018 17:48
dusk arising said:
The scaffold of your mind erected around the nuance of a blueprint brings forth the buyers interest.
September 16th, 2018 17:48
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
rrodriguez said:
Nicely put... words are for building beautiful ideas and concepts.
September 16th, 2018 17:37
rrodriguez said:
Nicely put... words are for building beautiful ideas and concepts.
September 16th, 2018 17:37
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
fuche_bu said:
love the pictures. Are these models your own constructions? Nice poem too.
September 16th, 2018 08:33
fuche_bu said:
love the pictures. Are these models your own constructions? Nice poem too.
September 16th, 2018 08:33
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well crafted almost a GEO - Metrical composition you might say... Loving the sculptures by the way,
A poem away keeps the rants away?
September 16th, 2018 04:24
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well crafted almost a GEO - Metrical composition you might say... Loving the sculptures by the way,
A poem away keeps the rants away?
September 16th, 2018 04:24
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for reminding us of the fragility of the building blocks of POETRY ~ However thankfully the WHOLE of the WORDS is always GREATER than just the SUM of the WORDS. Alas MODERN POETRY is just WORDS ~ without structure - rhyme - rhythm or reason ! So the WHOLE is worst than the SUM of the WORDS ! CLASSICAL POETRY ~ has Structure - Rhyme - Rhythm & Reason in abundance ! Love the WATER MILL ~ A friend of mine lived in one in YORKSHIRE. Please CHECK ANGELAS poem today ID RATHER HAVE JESUS ~ YOURS AS ALWAYS ~ BRIAN !
September 16th, 2018 03:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for reminding us of the fragility of the building blocks of POETRY ~ However thankfully the WHOLE of the WORDS is always GREATER than just the SUM of the WORDS. Alas MODERN POETRY is just WORDS ~ without structure - rhyme - rhythm or reason ! So the WHOLE is worst than the SUM of the WORDS ! CLASSICAL POETRY ~ has Structure - Rhyme - Rhythm & Reason in abundance ! Love the WATER MILL ~ A friend of mine lived in one in YORKSHIRE. Please CHECK ANGELAS poem today ID RATHER HAVE JESUS ~ YOURS AS ALWAYS ~ BRIAN !
September 16th, 2018 03:38
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
Goldfinch60 said:
Those letters, words and punctuation can show so many ideas.
September 16th, 2018 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those letters, words and punctuation can show so many ideas.
September 16th, 2018 01:35
POETIC CONSTRUCTION
orchidee said:
a fine write and pic Michael. Yes, if no punctuation we may go on and on and on...... Maybe we do anyway.
Ask Mr Punk Tuation. Dunno his real first name.
September 16th, 2018 01:25
orchidee said:
a fine write and pic Michael. Yes, if no punctuation we may go on and on and on...... Maybe we do anyway.
Ask Mr Punk Tuation. Dunno his real first name.
September 16th, 2018 01:25
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
A.H. Browning said:
Thank you for making me smile... really smile... and maybe laugh š a little.
A.H. Browning
September 15th, 2018 22:04
A.H. Browning said:
Thank you for making me smile... really smile... and maybe laugh š a little.
A.H. Browning
September 15th, 2018 22:04
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
dusk arising said:
Women can be awful touchy about other peoples cooking. Now my mum was a terrible cook, i was brought up eating Heinz 57 varieties. My ex on the other hand was a fine cook. I shall never forget when mum and dad came around for sunday tea near christmas (a rare event for them to visit) and Ex had cooked some mince pies, dad was stuffing his face saying how delicious they were, mother was prodding a mince pie around her plate with a fork.
September 15th, 2018 14:55
dusk arising said:
Women can be awful touchy about other peoples cooking. Now my mum was a terrible cook, i was brought up eating Heinz 57 varieties. My ex on the other hand was a fine cook. I shall never forget when mum and dad came around for sunday tea near christmas (a rare event for them to visit) and Ex had cooked some mince pies, dad was stuffing his face saying how delicious they were, mother was prodding a mince pie around her plate with a fork.
September 15th, 2018 14:55
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
orchidee said:
You seen Mr Chris Tation - Christopher? Or is it Miss Chris Tation (Christine)? Maybe it\'s husband and wife, both named Chris? (crustacean).
September 15th, 2018 09:41
orchidee said:
You seen Mr Chris Tation - Christopher? Or is it Miss Chris Tation (Christine)? Maybe it\'s husband and wife, both named Chris? (crustacean).
September 15th, 2018 09:41
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the Houses I love bespoke ART however PRIMITIVE ! Angela and I are both foodies ~ Angela\'s job is very physical so she needs lots of carbs & proteins & enough fats etc. The first time I took her to my Fave Restaurant ~ she chose the WINE (Spanish Rioja of course !) and ate every gram of the three courses (Pate ~ Sirloin Steak ~ Apple & Blackberry Pie with ice cream ~ chocolate mints & coffee ! I fell in love with her appetite ! I don\'t like PICKY EATERS or VEGANS. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
September 15th, 2018 07:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the Houses I love bespoke ART however PRIMITIVE ! Angela and I are both foodies ~ Angela\'s job is very physical so she needs lots of carbs & proteins & enough fats etc. The first time I took her to my Fave Restaurant ~ she chose the WINE (Spanish Rioja of course !) and ate every gram of the three courses (Pate ~ Sirloin Steak ~ Apple & Blackberry Pie with ice cream ~ chocolate mints & coffee ! I fell in love with her appetite ! I don\'t like PICKY EATERS or VEGANS. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
September 15th, 2018 07:33
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Michael!
It\'ll soon be Christmas
September 15th, 2018 06:09
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Michael!
It\'ll soon be Christmas
September 15th, 2018 06:09
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A fun read!
You mouthing something rude?!...
I donāt believe it!
Are āfat ballsā like meatballs?
Beautiful art piece!
~Laura~
September 15th, 2018 04:44
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A fun read!
You mouthing something rude?!...
I donāt believe it!
Are āfat ballsā like meatballs?
Beautiful art piece!
~Laura~
September 15th, 2018 04:44
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic Michael. You giving her mealworms too?!
September 15th, 2018 01:45
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic Michael. You giving her mealworms too?!
September 15th, 2018 01:45
SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
Goldfinch60 said:
So the Beef Wellington with onion gravy, roast potatoes and asparagus was not appreciated then Michael.
September 15th, 2018 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
So the Beef Wellington with onion gravy, roast potatoes and asparagus was not appreciated then Michael.
September 15th, 2018 00:50
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