Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

McTavish is dead ~ an\' his Brother don\'t know it
His Brother is dead ~ an\' McTavish don\'t know it
There\'s both o\' them dead ~ an\' they\'re in the same bed
And neither one knows that t\'other one\'s DEAD !
At the inquest they blamed CO from parafine heater !

Thanks for sharing MIKE Morbid poems often funniest
Please check my Poem today \"Dancing & Romancing\"
Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA.

August 8th, 2018 04:48

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
dusk arising said:

That\'ll be a smelly place! I do so hope that you don\'t find a certain \'trump\' there as well.

August 8th, 2018 02:02

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha ha - who but you could think up an last line like that !! A smilngly good read.

August 8th, 2018 01:39

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
orchidee said:

Aww, are they all farts?! Oohh! lol.

August 8th, 2018 01:39

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes, I will be there as well, shall we share a bottle of red or white?

August 8th, 2018 00:42

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Adam Shirley said:

Love the sentence at the end, gave me quite the smile on a short poem dedicated to a dear one, my condolences. Wonderful poem.

August 8th, 2018 00:15

THE FLY
orchidee said:

Hey, me wife KP ( I forgot I married her) is avoiding being declared bankrupt. She spent it all on Botox!

August 7th, 2018 13:09

THE FLY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

FLIES have their place
In the ecological race
But I don\'t want one to POOP
When he lands in my SOOP
That would be crass
Soop flavoured with with frass !

Thanks again UNCLE MIKE for seasoning
MPS with a soupcon of humour
Yours appreciatively BRIAN & ANGELA

Please add a POEM to our FUSION on AFRICA ~ Thanks A & B !
Please check ANGELA\'s POEM ~ LONG WHITE CLOUD ~ Thanks

August 7th, 2018 10:48

THE FLY
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Love this little cartoon fly write! I will not shoo it away. It’s worth the save in my faves!
It reminded me of the first time I visited Pennsylvania in the USA and ate a piece of ‘shoo-fly’ pie at a Pennsylvania Dutch restaurant called ‘‘Good ‘N Plenty’’!
I was looking for the flies in the pie! To my surprise, they had all been shooed away! 🤣
Shoo-fly...shoooo

~Laura~


August 7th, 2018 08:20

THE FLY
dusk arising said:

Excellent cartoon and poem.

^^8^^ don\'t buzz round the house
when the weathers this hot
^^8^^ Mike Edwards will swipe you
he\'s bought a new \'swat\'

August 7th, 2018 05:26

THE FLY
Heartwriter said:

Lol! No one wants a fly bugging around. I guess they have their purpose. Just not indoors.

August 7th, 2018 05:17

THE FLY
sylviasearcher said:

I often feel sorry for flies.. I bet they wish they were birds. 🤔

August 7th, 2018 03:28

THE FLY
onepauly said:

simple.
truly a good poem.

August 7th, 2018 02:33

THE FLY
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write Michael. We swat flies, but I read they only live 3 weeks anyway.

August 7th, 2018 01:41

THE FLY
Goldfinch60 said:

You\'re down on the floor
No longer a thriller
Your life is no more
Extinct by fly killer.

August 7th, 2018 01:13

SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
Heartwriter said:

The words helped make it a favorite. Those flowers forced it so. My favorite of all flowers in a planter. Loved it.

August 6th, 2018 16:27

SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
MendedFences27 said:

Who knows where true love is to be found? Watching a bee-hive seems now, to be a honey of a spot. And the sweetness will remain , forever.
Terrific poem Michael.

August 6th, 2018 14:43

SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MIKE ~ New Love is a very powerful force and it can be dangerous to those betrothed ! I fall in Love every day ~ BUT ~ My love for Angela is so powerful (despite being separated by 11,500 miles for at least a YEAR) that I never act on impulse. Also some of Angela\'s Best Mates work at My College ~ so BIG SISTER is watching ME ! Love PLANTERS my MUM has many which I have water to water when they are on Hols. Thanks for sharing BRIAN

August 6th, 2018 11:30

SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
orchidee said:

That snapping of twigs might make me swoon! A fine write and pic Michael.

August 6th, 2018 01:24

SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful lovelorn write. May their Spirits entwine for eternity.

August 6th, 2018 01:08

SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
dusk arising said:

Eyyup lad, i\'m off t\'woods to snap a twig underfoot. Appen as i\'m feelin lucky (wink wink).
This is you at your best ME in classical form and metaphor.

August 6th, 2018 01:08

SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
orchidee said:

How\'s that evening? You got a tie on this evening there?! None of those nice flowers are wearing ties!

August 5th, 2018 11:31

SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

A beautiful splash of colors those flowers do make! Are they all planted in one pot?

A fine short sartorial write to which I agree!

~Laura~

August 5th, 2018 08:40

SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
dusk arising said:

Crikey yes ties i remember those.

August 5th, 2018 08:35

SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ahhhhhhhh MISTER EDWARDS ~ The ubiquitous TIE ~ I have over 50 for all my Clubs & Societies ! I can turn up naked provided I\'m wearing the right Kipper Tie and it covers my Tackle !

They threw Him from the Nudist Club
And here\'s the reason WHY
Because He turned up on parade
Wearing His Old School Tie !

I\'m what the Americans call a GREETER @ Church today. So despite the Weather I am booted & suited ~ Van Heuston long sleeved Shirt (broad blue stripe) and a Blue Royal Society of Chemistry (A very Spiritual Organisation !) TIE ~ just hitting the waistline. At work (remember that !) I always wear a tie for Meetings ~ Interviews ~ Formal Dinners (A Bow Tie if I am Chef de Rang) and if I visit other Colleges as a MODERATOR etc etc. So on balance I am still a TIEMAN for 50% of the time. An interesting SUBJECT ~ My Sister always buys me a TIE @ Christmas one of which plays JINGLE BELLS when least expected ~ SUCH FUN. Thanks for sharing ~ love the Flowers ~ I have some Ties like that that my Granddad wore in the 60\'s FLOWER POWER ! Every blessing ~ BRIAN TIEMAN !

August 5th, 2018 04:02

I WRITE
livsxxxx said:

Wow. Simple but so effective ! Great poem x

August 5th, 2018 04:00

SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. I hardly wear ties. Feel like I\'m being hanged, especially in this weather.

August 5th, 2018 01:12

SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Michael. It takes a great deal of practice to get it right and it must also be dead to the braces on the occasion that you where them.

August 5th, 2018 00:38

PURE COMMERCE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Back in the hood where the undesirable deals are constant...unfortunately!

Love your pic!
How’s your new computer working out?

~Laura~

August 4th, 2018 19:20

PURE COMMERCE
orchidee said:

Cooeee - how\'s that evening going?!

August 4th, 2018 11:38



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