Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



BUT I CAN WRITE
orchidee said:

Best wishes Michael. You missed my singing. What? You wanted to miss it - as everyone does?! That would certainly add to any pain you may have - pain of mental torment, I mean. heehee. Did Miss Berles visit you in hosp?

November 7th, 2018 03:09

BUT I CAN WRITE
Michael Edwards said:

Should have mentioned - a first for me - a collage - not something that has previously appealed but this worked out okay.

November 7th, 2018 03:08

ANOTHER BATCH OF 575s (2)
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Great haikus!
Love the geese!
It looks like one of them is left out of the “conversation” or is bored and leaving!😉

All the best to you!

~Laura~

November 5th, 2018 20:34

NOW THEN
Debsspot said:

Love the sense of humor in you work.
Also your sketches are beautiful. So simple and elegant.

November 5th, 2018 20:04

THE HEAD UPON THE NAIL
Debsspot said:

Too true ha ha.....great twist.

November 5th, 2018 19:59

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Debsspot said:

Love these Michael, very evocative. Love the sketches too.

November 5th, 2018 19:54

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ A fine trio of GEESE followed by a fine quartet of HAIKU !

1. Raining on my Pathway
2. In praise of Spherical Objects
3. Contending ~ Framing ~ Discussing
4. Unknown ~ Brazen ~ Vindicated

My fave is THREE because I love a DEBATE
Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
Our Prayers are with YOU MANANA - B & A 🧡🧡🧡🧡

November 5th, 2018 19:49

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Christina8 said:

Wonderfully done. Good luck tomorrow!

November 5th, 2018 18:26

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Lorna said:

If I\'m reading second correctly, it should be \"X\" rated.... or my mind should... ha ha

November 5th, 2018 07:59

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orchidee said:

A fine set of writes Michael. with a swoony one too - you know the one! heehee.

November 5th, 2018 02:22

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Goldfinch60 said:

Four more good ones Michael.

November 5th, 2018 01:40

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Lorna said:

And your elegant cranes have higher thoughts as they look to the sky..........loved all three .... last is my favorite.

November 4th, 2018 04:28

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE for Pics & Poems to bring us SUNDAY SMILES !
My fave is No. 3 Lamplight ~ Stars ~ Trees in silhouette ~ very evocative ~ Please check my DEER Yours BRIAN.

November 4th, 2018 02:49

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Goldfinch60 said:

Three good ones Michael.

November 4th, 2018 02:21

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orchidee said:

A fine set of write w c. Is Miss Berles gossiping in the dark, in the first one?!

November 4th, 2018 02:20

NO MORE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Wow! A very profound and powerful write!
Excellent write...excellent artwork!

~Laura~

November 3rd, 2018 23:53

NO MORE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS UNCLE MIKE : Ive woken up again and its Sunday Morning. Brian wanted me to comment as you have all commented on LWC ! Loved the Trio of Geese so so waddley ! Loved the enigmatic Ode : was she left with an unemotional heart ? Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

November 3rd, 2018 15:23

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orchidee said:

How\'s that evening going M?!

November 3rd, 2018 12:57

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dusk arising said:

Sad how a bad judgement can harden a person.
So much in life overlooked when contemplated over a scowl.

November 3rd, 2018 07:37

NO MORE
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. I thought by the title of this poem, it would be explaining why you can\'t any more of my singing! heehee.

November 3rd, 2018 02:58

OPPORTUNITIES
Adam Shirley said:

What a short yet very true write, makes you realize that every opportunity that you come across is a chance to define yourself.

November 2nd, 2018 13:00

OPPORTUNITIES
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

True words... Great picture
Rod Hull would have loved it


November 2nd, 2018 11:50

OPPORTUNITIES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Droll variation on the old HEAD IN THE SAND ploy !
OPPORTUNITY is a frustrating thing ! In my experience it often KNOCKS ~ When you least expect it ~ When you can least afford it or when you are least able to avail yourself of it ! And (damn it) it never knocks TWICE ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

November 2nd, 2018 10:24

OPPORTUNITIES
orchidee said:

Why he talking to it? Did he get a decent answer from it? Bit like - go talk to the cat or dog some days; we\'ll get a better answer than from humans (sometimes)!

November 2nd, 2018 07:32

OPPORTUNITIES
dusk arising said:

Name and shame this foolish man!

Love the line drawing, but which end is witholding the urge?

November 2nd, 2018 07:32

OPPORTUNITIES
Lorna said:

You were right Michael - this was so well worth waiting for! ha ha!

November 2nd, 2018 05:15

OPPORTUNITIES
orchidee said:

Erm, so could the words and pic together mean, as one example - some people talk out of their own a***? Now I\'ve made myself swoon! Fido will bark at me for saying that. lol.

November 2nd, 2018 02:39

OPPORTUNITIES
Goldfinch60 said:

Such very true words and a wonderfully drawn message to go with them.

November 2nd, 2018 02:35

THE HEAD UPON THE NAIL
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I hit my head upon the wall I find a nail is much too small...
Love the pic! is that a stork? with its aprehensive walk?
BRAVO M.E. Bravo

November 1st, 2018 11:32

THE HEAD UPON THE NAIL
dusk arising said:

This reminds me of how my older brother taught me the art of winning a fight was all in the mind. One had to convince one\'s opponent to hit one as hard as they possibly could with their face upon ones moving fist. It sounded a complex idea but proved simplicity itself in application.

November 1st, 2018 08:01



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