Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
POETICAL OUTTAKES
dusk arising said:
Each one a gem for my mind to play with!
Looking forward to your poem.
August 13th, 2018 15:37
dusk arising said:
Each one a gem for my mind to play with!
Looking forward to your poem.
August 13th, 2018 15:37
POETICAL OUTTAKES
orchidee said:
And did she swoon? \'To see his Bunsen, eh?!\' Well, that was her excuse, and she is sticking to it! We\'ll believe her, though thousands wouldn\'t. lol.
August 13th, 2018 13:56
orchidee said:
And did she swoon? \'To see his Bunsen, eh?!\' Well, that was her excuse, and she is sticking to it! We\'ll believe her, though thousands wouldn\'t. lol.
August 13th, 2018 13:56
POETICAL OUTTAKES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE AGAIN ! I\'ve selected 5 of your outtakes for My Little Black Book ~ look out for them !
Words unsaid by strangers
Fortified by principle
Like melting crowns that fall on fire
The lonely path weaves down
A man denied of books
Here are some of mine ~ all scientific
His Bunsen still burned brightly ~ when ignited
Elizabeth was more an Enigma than an Enzyme
The union was doomed to failure. She was EXOTHERMIC ~ He was decidedly ENDO !
ABSTRACT POETRY ~ Like Abstract Art ~ is a genre of Modern Poetry i.e without REASON ~ OK ~ Some MPS Poetry is ABSTRACT !
Thanks for posting BRIAN.
August 13th, 2018 09:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE AGAIN ! I\'ve selected 5 of your outtakes for My Little Black Book ~ look out for them !
Words unsaid by strangers
Fortified by principle
Like melting crowns that fall on fire
The lonely path weaves down
A man denied of books
Here are some of mine ~ all scientific
His Bunsen still burned brightly ~ when ignited
Elizabeth was more an Enigma than an Enzyme
The union was doomed to failure. She was EXOTHERMIC ~ He was decidedly ENDO !
ABSTRACT POETRY ~ Like Abstract Art ~ is a genre of Modern Poetry i.e without REASON ~ OK ~ Some MPS Poetry is ABSTRACT !
Thanks for posting BRIAN.
August 13th, 2018 09:36
POETICAL OUTTAKES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD AFTERNOON MIKE ~ i WAS BUSY THIS MORNING ~ So now (after SOUP & SANI) I have a little time to devote to MPS. I found your \"LIST\" interesting ~ the MUSE is stirred by WORDS (and spawns words) it is also stirred by Visual Images and (less so) by Sounds & Scents. Structured Poetry has Rules & Constraints (so it is useful to store \"phrases\") Modern Poetry has NO RULES so such store would be useless. Because You are a WORDSMITH I have selected some for my own collection (we all have a \"Little Black Poetry Book\") ! Love the picture full of 19th C charm !
August 13th, 2018 08:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD AFTERNOON MIKE ~ i WAS BUSY THIS MORNING ~ So now (after SOUP & SANI) I have a little time to devote to MPS. I found your \"LIST\" interesting ~ the MUSE is stirred by WORDS (and spawns words) it is also stirred by Visual Images and (less so) by Sounds & Scents. Structured Poetry has Rules & Constraints (so it is useful to store \"phrases\") Modern Poetry has NO RULES so such store would be useless. Because You are a WORDSMITH I have selected some for my own collection (we all have a \"Little Black Poetry Book\") ! Love the picture full of 19th C charm !
August 13th, 2018 08:46
POETICAL OUTTAKES
Fay Slimm. said:
Such interesting phrasing in your poetical outtakes Michael - - cant wait to read what you make of their rearrangement tomorrow. Love the picture.
August 13th, 2018 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Such interesting phrasing in your poetical outtakes Michael - - cant wait to read what you make of their rearrangement tomorrow. Love the picture.
August 13th, 2018 03:14
POETICAL OUTTAKES
orchidee said:
How about the Bolics? Can they help me out of this ash heap? And does anyone else but you know what I\'m wittering on about?!
August 13th, 2018 02:36
orchidee said:
How about the Bolics? Can they help me out of this ash heap? And does anyone else but you know what I\'m wittering on about?!
August 13th, 2018 02:36
HE THOUGHT
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
So glad...
“He went and did it.”!!
Such a handsome couple!
54 years..that’s awesome!
“The sags and wrinkles” mean nothing! It’s the lasting love that matters!
~Laura~
August 13th, 2018 01:38
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
So glad...
“He went and did it.”!!
Such a handsome couple!
54 years..that’s awesome!
“The sags and wrinkles” mean nothing! It’s the lasting love that matters!
~Laura~
August 13th, 2018 01:38
POETICAL OUTTAKES
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the painting and your idea of the outtake folder! I’m looking forward to the poem you’ll derive from it!
This approach reminds me a bit of the “brainstorming” of ideas for writing that I used with my elementary school students! It was a group activity...
promoting self confidence!
~Laura~
August 13th, 2018 01:21
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the painting and your idea of the outtake folder! I’m looking forward to the poem you’ll derive from it!
This approach reminds me a bit of the “brainstorming” of ideas for writing that I used with my elementary school students! It was a group activity...
promoting self confidence!
~Laura~
August 13th, 2018 01:21
POETICAL OUTTAKES
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a file of ideas that were never brought to fruition. This reminded me of a poem that I wrote many years ago and I will put on here to today.
August 13th, 2018 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a file of ideas that were never brought to fruition. This reminded me of a poem that I wrote many years ago and I will put on here to today.
August 13th, 2018 01:14
POETICAL OUTTAKES
orchidee said:
Hmm, a fine write M. But I don\'t know, can\'t comment much on this style. I tend to use all my lines there and then. Well, I make deletions and alterations as I go along. Not that many, to be honest, when I get in the flow of writing!
August 13th, 2018 01:09
orchidee said:
Hmm, a fine write M. But I don\'t know, can\'t comment much on this style. I tend to use all my lines there and then. Well, I make deletions and alterations as I go along. Not that many, to be honest, when I get in the flow of writing!
August 13th, 2018 01:09
HE THOUGHT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the PHOTO ~ very CLARK KENT and LOIS LANE ~ love the 60\'s I have photos of my Grandparents looking like that ! Loved the POEM ~ gives me the resolve to \"Grasp the Nettle\" on Monday Morning to get more funding for my new MICROBIOLOGY LAB ! Yours BRIAN.
They said it was IMPOSSIBLE
But MARIE CURIE was UNSTOPPABLE
So with PIERRE\'S smart proclivity
They solved the mystery of ...........
R A D I O A C T I V I T Y !
August 12th, 2018 03:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the PHOTO ~ very CLARK KENT and LOIS LANE ~ love the 60\'s I have photos of my Grandparents looking like that ! Loved the POEM ~ gives me the resolve to \"Grasp the Nettle\" on Monday Morning to get more funding for my new MICROBIOLOGY LAB ! Yours BRIAN.
They said it was IMPOSSIBLE
But MARIE CURIE was UNSTOPPABLE
So with PIERRE\'S smart proclivity
They solved the mystery of ...........
R A D I O A C T I V I T Y !
August 12th, 2018 03:49
HE THOUGHT
orchidee said:
Any more info on this and I might swoon! A fine write Michael.
August 12th, 2018 01:15
orchidee said:
Any more info on this and I might swoon! A fine write Michael.
August 12th, 2018 01:15
TO SLEEP
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael. I can fall asleep as soon as my head hits the pillow.
The discussion about the painting is interesting as I believe this one or one very similar has been posted before, or was that one of a pub. No matter it is always good to see your art.
August 12th, 2018 00:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael. I can fall asleep as soon as my head hits the pillow.
The discussion about the painting is interesting as I believe this one or one very similar has been posted before, or was that one of a pub. No matter it is always good to see your art.
August 12th, 2018 00:02
TO SLEEP
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the painting! The pastel colors are very pleasing to the eye!
I believe you posted this one with another poem. If I remember correctly, I think there’s a second painting you posted about the same subject!
As far as sleeping patterns, I’m glad I don’t have any issues with that...yet!
I love how you weaved the words DELTA, ALPHA, BETA into your poem!
~Laura~
August 11th, 2018 10:25
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the painting! The pastel colors are very pleasing to the eye!
I believe you posted this one with another poem. If I remember correctly, I think there’s a second painting you posted about the same subject!
As far as sleeping patterns, I’m glad I don’t have any issues with that...yet!
I love how you weaved the words DELTA, ALPHA, BETA into your poem!
~Laura~
August 11th, 2018 10:25
TO SLEEP
Heartwriter said:
You are the artist we like to see each morning! Enjoyed.
August 11th, 2018 06:16
Heartwriter said:
You are the artist we like to see each morning! Enjoyed.
August 11th, 2018 06:16
TO SLEEP
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Yes, the two buildings on either side are played down well, with the lighter tones. I think.
Doh! I gotta study a bit of Greek now, before I know what sleep patterns I\'m having. Can one dream in Greek?! You asleep now, and can\'t reply yet?
August 11th, 2018 03:19
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Yes, the two buildings on either side are played down well, with the lighter tones. I think.
Doh! I gotta study a bit of Greek now, before I know what sleep patterns I\'m having. Can one dream in Greek?! You asleep now, and can\'t reply yet?
August 11th, 2018 03:19
THEIR SANCTUARY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Lovely forest scene love the visual too ~ more plese BRIAN. Please check Five Fabulos Females ~ Thanks B !
August 10th, 2018 05:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Lovely forest scene love the visual too ~ more plese BRIAN. Please check Five Fabulos Females ~ Thanks B !
August 10th, 2018 05:00
THEIR SANCTUARY
FineB said:
A vivid, poignant write.
Thanks Michael
Beautiful and awesome.
The watercolour is beautiful!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2018 03:48
FineB said:
A vivid, poignant write.
Thanks Michael
Beautiful and awesome.
The watercolour is beautiful!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2018 03:48
THEIR SANCTUARY
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing and painting Michael - - a delightful posting and a pleasure to catch your work.
August 10th, 2018 03:32
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing and painting Michael - - a delightful posting and a pleasure to catch your work.
August 10th, 2018 03:32
THEIR SANCTUARY
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I forgot what dryads are!
You got any little acorns? From them mighty oaks grow, as is said!
August 10th, 2018 02:01
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I forgot what dryads are!
You got any little acorns? From them mighty oaks grow, as is said!
August 10th, 2018 02:01
THEIR SANCTUARY
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, love the last line.
\"where dryads seek their sanctuary.\"
August 10th, 2018 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, love the last line.
\"where dryads seek their sanctuary.\"
August 10th, 2018 00:56
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
I am still giggling at your clever image - small is big to a palette like yours Mike - -- as for cloud numbers I favour the nine for drifting me into my own little paradise. Great stuff.
August 9th, 2018 16:42
Fay Slimm. said:
I am still giggling at your clever image - small is big to a palette like yours Mike - -- as for cloud numbers I favour the nine for drifting me into my own little paradise. Great stuff.
August 9th, 2018 16:42
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
orchidee said:
Ma again! Thoughts of death - I\'m about to sing! lol.
August 9th, 2018 10:00
orchidee said:
Ma again! Thoughts of death - I\'m about to sing! lol.
August 9th, 2018 10:00
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Heartwriter said:
Michael if goodness gets one there. Perhaps we will pass on a cloud and share some poems written in the sky!!!!!! Great write.
August 9th, 2018 09:52
Heartwriter said:
Michael if goodness gets one there. Perhaps we will pass on a cloud and share some poems written in the sky!!!!!! Great write.
August 9th, 2018 09:52
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A MAN lay down by a SEWER
And by that SEWER died
At the Coroners inquest
They called it SEWERSIDE !
Thanks for another Poeme de Morte ~ very droll
My COMPUTER does not have a CELESTIAL KEY
Perhaps one day it will~ a direct line to JEHOVAH !
Yours as always BRIAN.
August 9th, 2018 08:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A MAN lay down by a SEWER
And by that SEWER died
At the Coroners inquest
They called it SEWERSIDE !
Thanks for another Poeme de Morte ~ very droll
My COMPUTER does not have a CELESTIAL KEY
Perhaps one day it will~ a direct line to JEHOVAH !
Yours as always BRIAN.
August 9th, 2018 08:19
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
orchidee said:
Erm, I\'ve not been there (as yet) to find out! I expect it\'s as Goldie says.
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
August 9th, 2018 01:31
orchidee said:
Erm, I\'ve not been there (as yet) to find out! I expect it\'s as Goldie says.
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
August 9th, 2018 01:31
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no need for any of these in heaven, including computers. See you there Michael.
August 9th, 2018 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no need for any of these in heaven, including computers. See you there Michael.
August 9th, 2018 00:45
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Heartwriter said:
Haha! You too funny. They gonna smell it up?
August 8th, 2018 09:29
Heartwriter said:
Haha! You too funny. They gonna smell it up?
August 8th, 2018 09:29
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love it!
No worries...
sharing is good!
Only one thing...
let’s not forget the wine!🍷
~Laura ~
August 8th, 2018 06:05
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love it!
No worries...
sharing is good!
Only one thing...
let’s not forget the wine!🍷
~Laura ~
August 8th, 2018 06:05
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