Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



SHE STANDS ALONE
orchidee said:

A descriptive good write and pic M. You know Des Cryptshun?!

February 2nd, 2022 03:00

SHE STANDS ALONE
Caring dove said:

Really like this . Love the personification in this writing 🙂


February 2nd, 2022 02:57

LAST SEEN
Rozina said:

I enjoyed these few lines and as always admire your drawing.

January 31st, 2022 22:43

LAST SEEN
Neville said:


well I for one am delighted you posted \'LAST SEEN\' here & in its present format .. tis exceedingly good sir .... N

January 31st, 2022 17:31

LAST SEEN
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.
Them syllables gone into oblivion? Miss Berles nowhere to be seen?!

January 31st, 2022 02:58

LAST SEEN
Goldfinch60 said:

Such sad words Michael but brilliantly written.

Great drawing that fits in so well with your words.

Andy

January 31st, 2022 02:51

SHORT MEASURES (5)
Goldfinch60 said:

Fun write Michael.

Andy

January 28th, 2022 02:40

SHORT MEASURES (5)
Fay Slimm. said:

Hhhmmm - a smelly read Mike but what fantastic artwork.

January 27th, 2022 16:31

SHORT MEASURES (5)
Rozina said:

Haha! Relief! Lovely artwork.

January 27th, 2022 08:45

SHORT MEASURES (5)
dusk arising said:

After a night of wenchin
he finally let go the tension
it stank like no other
from under the covers
his fart hung in suspension

Cor blimey M.E. you must be younger than I thought because for an old fogey like me the first morning pleasure is to acknowledge and relieve my prostate\'s importuning demands for a pee.

Nice one, is that picture a \"scratch and sniff\" type?


January 27th, 2022 08:12

SHORT MEASURES (4)
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.

January 25th, 2022 05:58

SHORT MEASURES (4)
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Michael and so true, mind you I do shave my face every day and comb my hair.

Super art work - is it an old one, I seem to recognise it

Andy

January 25th, 2022 04:07

SHORT MEASURES (4)
Rozina said:

Absolutely agree with you to age gracefully. Lovely watercolour. painting.

January 25th, 2022 04:00

SHORT MEASURES (2 & 3)
L. B. Mek said:

love that single, shrub-like
bouquet of colourful, flower heads
shadow-less - leaning suggestively, away
from that generic pristine of walled
almost institutional, ivory white..
such a subtle focal point, or detail
that adds layers of meaning
to this idyllic, scene
you\'ve captured wonderfully;
what a nuanced talent, you posses
my friend..
and as-ever
what timely and insightful words of commentary, you\'ve shared..
thank you!

January 24th, 2022 08:00

SHORT MEASURES (2 & 3)
Rozina said:

Enjoyed your limericks and really admire your artwork.

January 24th, 2022 04:31

SHORT MEASURES (2 & 3)
orchidee said:

Good (sylla) berles and pic here. Are the berles more expensive at the moment? Hence the short writes?
(Everyone but you will think I\'m talking rubbish here - no change there, then?!) lol.

January 24th, 2022 02:53

SHORT MEASURES (2 & 3)
dusk arising said:

LOL, where do you go to think of this stuff.

January 24th, 2022 02:31

SHORT MEASURES (2 & 3)
Goldfinch60 said:

Two good ones Michael, the first one is so very true.

Good artwork - back to your normal style?

Andy

January 24th, 2022 02:30

SHORT MEASURES (1)
dusk arising said:

That should be wriiten into the marriage contract.

She thought she\'d caught a stunner
in that cute London marathon runner
but his habit were bad
turned out such a cad
lifes a bitch she thought, its a bummer\"

January 22nd, 2022 17:16

SHORT MEASURES (1)
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Truth be told…
‘immediate attraction’ and ‘enduring’ go well together as much as oil and vinegar do…for most of us.

Laura🌻



January 22nd, 2022 09:04

SHORT MEASURES (1)
Fay Slimm. said:

Short indeed but telling a truth we all need to heed my friend. A super three liner again Mike.

January 22nd, 2022 07:01

SHORT MEASURES (1)
Daydream Believer said:

Such true words

January 22nd, 2022 04:57

SHORT MEASURES (1)
Rozina said:

Yes I agree.

January 22nd, 2022 03:49

SHORT MEASURES (1)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Michael but sometimes that enduring opinion is correct.

Andy

January 22nd, 2022 03:47

SHORT MEASURES (1)
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.
How\'s the supply of sylla-berles? Are there any short measures of them?!

January 22nd, 2022 03:22

LIMERICKS 70 and 71
FallenAngel1🕊 said:

Good writes Michael,a two for one deal😀 I remembered another one my mom taught me years ago,..well I only remember the first two lines,maybe you know it,..how ever if you don\'t it, I\'m sure you can make something wonderfully funny of it,..\"There was an old man from Nantucket,with a prick so long he could suck it\",lol that\'s all I remember of it. Cheers🍻😄

January 14th, 2022 21:35

LIMERICK 75
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Love the limerick and the artwork.
Thank you for sharing and
making me laugh.😂

Laura🌻



January 14th, 2022 16:27

LIMERICK 75
FallenAngel1🕊 said:

Theres was an old women from France
Who hopped a train by chance
The ingineer f%*#ed her
So did the conductor
And the breakman ran away with her pants😂 You probably know this one,I learned it from my mom years ago,so it\'s been around a long time,but I hadn\'t thought about it in years. Thanks for bringing back good memories Michael,and kudos to you for another laugh😀✌🕊


January 14th, 2022 12:47

LIMERICK 75
L. B. Mek said:

well they can afford it, up
in those high clouds
funny,
that\'s the dream, sold
to those
blowing themselves-up
as well;
in my eyes, both
equal threat, terrorist\'s
to that civil, way
of life
so many die, trying
to preserve...

January 14th, 2022 05:56

LIMERICK 75
dusk arising said:

LOL love that limerick


One wife ran away headed north
you guessed it, the spare one of course
she was lonely at night
but has met Mr Right
in a place she calls home Perranporth



January 14th, 2022 04:49



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