Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THREE ONE-LINERS
dusk arising said:
This is a sneaky trick..... publishing three masterpieces in one hit!
Keep it up, love it!
November 19th, 2017 13:39
dusk arising said:
This is a sneaky trick..... publishing three masterpieces in one hit!
Keep it up, love it!
November 19th, 2017 13:39
THREE ONE-LINERS
Christina8 said:
Love your one liners and its a great combo with your print. Very nice!!
November 19th, 2017 12:40
Christina8 said:
Love your one liners and its a great combo with your print. Very nice!!
November 19th, 2017 12:40
THREE ONE-LINERS
Louis Gibbs said:
The disturbing print feels like my insides in sensory overload ... scrambled. Love the three one-liners, and you expanded my vocabulary with \"espaliered\". Good post, Michael!
November 19th, 2017 08:48
Louis Gibbs said:
The disturbing print feels like my insides in sensory overload ... scrambled. Love the three one-liners, and you expanded my vocabulary with \"espaliered\". Good post, Michael!
November 19th, 2017 08:48
THREE ONE-LINERS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Michael for another uplifting Poem \'n Pic for a sunny Sunday morning ! Brown & Blue are a powerful combination and evoke the newly harvested fields of East Anglia ~ as seen from the Train ~ so beloved of John B ! You have exact shades of rich brown loam and the tracery of the unsown fields criss~crossed by combine & plough ! My favourite Poem is number 2 and I have encountered many such ladies in the past 17 years ! However I am grateful the ANGELA is more well groomed and elegant ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
November 19th, 2017 04:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Michael for another uplifting Poem \'n Pic for a sunny Sunday morning ! Brown & Blue are a powerful combination and evoke the newly harvested fields of East Anglia ~ as seen from the Train ~ so beloved of John B ! You have exact shades of rich brown loam and the tracery of the unsown fields criss~crossed by combine & plough ! My favourite Poem is number 2 and I have encountered many such ladies in the past 17 years ! However I am grateful the ANGELA is more well groomed and elegant ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
November 19th, 2017 04:49
THREE ONE-LINERS
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful and intricate these one-liners Michael - -- the final one did it for me. Great combo with the mysterious artwork too.
November 19th, 2017 03:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful and intricate these one-liners Michael - -- the final one did it for me. Great combo with the mysterious artwork too.
November 19th, 2017 03:17
THREE ONE-LINERS
orchidee said:
Fine writes and pic Michael. What\'s that? You wish me songs were all one-liners, cos you know I sing them all?! Meoowwowoooo, that\'s me! lol.
November 19th, 2017 03:00
orchidee said:
Fine writes and pic Michael. What\'s that? You wish me songs were all one-liners, cos you know I sing them all?! Meoowwowoooo, that\'s me! lol.
November 19th, 2017 03:00
SHE PLAYED THE FLUTE
FredPeyer said:
\'Held in passive hands\'...how many times do we hold our live and memories in \'passive hands\'! This poem is profound, Michael! Love it!
November 19th, 2017 02:28
FredPeyer said:
\'Held in passive hands\'...how many times do we hold our live and memories in \'passive hands\'! This poem is profound, Michael! Love it!
November 19th, 2017 02:28
THREE ONE-LINERS
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I just love these on-liners of yours! Can\'t make up my mind which one I like the most, so all three thumbs up!
November 19th, 2017 02:14
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I just love these on-liners of yours! Can\'t make up my mind which one I like the most, so all three thumbs up!
November 19th, 2017 02:14
SHE PLAYED THE FLUTE
Seek said:
I can hear the solemn melodies from the flute just reading this great poem.
November 18th, 2017 12:56
Seek said:
I can hear the solemn melodies from the flute just reading this great poem.
November 18th, 2017 12:56
SHE PLAYED THE FLUTE
Laura🌻 said:
She certainly did play the flute...my daughter that is! I will email this beautifully penned poem to her! I’m confident that she will recall some past dreams and be most thankful for the new ones that have come true. She’s now a soprano singer of classical music.
I’m reading a lot into your painting! Fascinating!!
Thank you.
November 18th, 2017 11:31
Laura🌻 said:
She certainly did play the flute...my daughter that is! I will email this beautifully penned poem to her! I’m confident that she will recall some past dreams and be most thankful for the new ones that have come true. She’s now a soprano singer of classical music.
I’m reading a lot into your painting! Fascinating!!
Thank you.
November 18th, 2017 11:31
SHE PLAYED THE FLUTE
orchidee said:
Will me singing be enough to waken the dead?! heehee.
November 18th, 2017 04:06
orchidee said:
Will me singing be enough to waken the dead?! heehee.
November 18th, 2017 04:06
SHE PLAYED THE FLUTE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. It was only bitter, with no sweetness, when I accompanied her with my singing! Trust me to ruin it. doh!
November 18th, 2017 02:58
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. It was only bitter, with no sweetness, when I accompanied her with my singing! Trust me to ruin it. doh!
November 18th, 2017 02:58
SHE PLAYED THE FLUTE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ great theme for a Saturday Morning. Angels on Christmas Cards are often depicted \"Tooting a Flute\" or a \"High Flyer on a Lyre\".
Your Picture shrieked ZIMBABWE ~ Crossed wires of BROWN & BLUE ~ we are praying for a peaceful transition from Despotism to Sanity !
Thanks for a challenging \"POEM et PIC\" so early on a Saturday Morning ! I\'m just off to CHURCH for the Men\'s \"Full English Breakfast\" (35 of us !) and Carpet Bowls ! Yours BR IAN
November 18th, 2017 02:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ great theme for a Saturday Morning. Angels on Christmas Cards are often depicted \"Tooting a Flute\" or a \"High Flyer on a Lyre\".
Your Picture shrieked ZIMBABWE ~ Crossed wires of BROWN & BLUE ~ we are praying for a peaceful transition from Despotism to Sanity !
Thanks for a challenging \"POEM et PIC\" so early on a Saturday Morning ! I\'m just off to CHURCH for the Men\'s \"Full English Breakfast\" (35 of us !) and Carpet Bowls ! Yours BR IAN
November 18th, 2017 02:55
SHE PLAYED THE FLUTE
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good Michael, those sounds can bring back lost memories.
The painting is interesting, it is another one where much can be seen within it the more you look.
November 18th, 2017 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good Michael, those sounds can bring back lost memories.
The painting is interesting, it is another one where much can be seen within it the more you look.
November 18th, 2017 02:17
MEASURED REASON
Christina8 said:
That\'s quite a nice sketch, Michael! As always, you composed a great poem to accompany your art. We are much more reasonable in the light.
November 17th, 2017 13:49
Christina8 said:
That\'s quite a nice sketch, Michael! As always, you composed a great poem to accompany your art. We are much more reasonable in the light.
November 17th, 2017 13:49
MEASURED REASON
FredPeyer said:
You are quite the intellectual here, Michael! I do love it. Want to be able to read it again, so into my favs it goes. You know, unfortunately, \'measured reason\' seems to be in short supply in today\'s world. Just look at Washington!!!
November 17th, 2017 12:24
FredPeyer said:
You are quite the intellectual here, Michael! I do love it. Want to be able to read it again, so into my favs it goes. You know, unfortunately, \'measured reason\' seems to be in short supply in today\'s world. Just look at Washington!!!
November 17th, 2017 12:24
MEASURED REASON
orchidee said:
I\'m all behind - something to rhyme with \'shun\'? I\'m still trying to think of something! heehee. Now come on Orchi, that was about a million poems ago!
November 17th, 2017 10:58
orchidee said:
I\'m all behind - something to rhyme with \'shun\'? I\'m still trying to think of something! heehee. Now come on Orchi, that was about a million poems ago!
November 17th, 2017 10:58
MEASURED REASON
Louis Gibbs said:
\"The doubt that measured reason brings\" to \"A victim of illusions call\' ... Nails it, Michael! If only more of that transpired in this world of blind followers! It could break the cycle of \'ancient transitions\' referred to in my poem today. Great poem, my friend!
November 17th, 2017 10:02
Louis Gibbs said:
\"The doubt that measured reason brings\" to \"A victim of illusions call\' ... Nails it, Michael! If only more of that transpired in this world of blind followers! It could break the cycle of \'ancient transitions\' referred to in my poem today. Great poem, my friend!
November 17th, 2017 10:02
MEASURED REASON
Accidental Poet said:
The man behind you who took the photograph just wanted to capture an artist in the process of creating a work of art. I understand your smile Michael.
November 17th, 2017 09:20
Accidental Poet said:
The man behind you who took the photograph just wanted to capture an artist in the process of creating a work of art. I understand your smile Michael.
November 17th, 2017 09:20
MEASURED REASON
myself and me said:
It is kind of magic to me that the lines turned into sketch, and the colors turn the sketch into paint. Fine poem with deep thoughts.
November 17th, 2017 08:26
myself and me said:
It is kind of magic to me that the lines turned into sketch, and the colors turn the sketch into paint. Fine poem with deep thoughts.
November 17th, 2017 08:26
MEASURED REASON
Fay Slimm. said:
Incredulity versus reason - -- interesting thoughts Michael on logic that becomes wisdom through being measured. Hhhmmm - Great stuff for a morning read.
November 17th, 2017 05:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Incredulity versus reason - -- interesting thoughts Michael on logic that becomes wisdom through being measured. Hhhmmm - Great stuff for a morning read.
November 17th, 2017 05:28
MEASURED REASON
Drewp said:
This is very clever and well composed. you have an extraordinary talent. I would love to see more of your artwork too. Beautiful.
November 17th, 2017 03:56
Drewp said:
This is very clever and well composed. you have an extraordinary talent. I would love to see more of your artwork too. Beautiful.
November 17th, 2017 03:56
MEASURED REASON
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Got to go back to bed a while now though. This \'deep\' stuff, this time of morning has given me a headache. Too much thinking by me, that\'s why! lol.
Then again, working out 2+2 gives me headache sometimes. Is the answer 5?
November 17th, 2017 03:00
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Got to go back to bed a while now though. This \'deep\' stuff, this time of morning has given me a headache. Too much thinking by me, that\'s why! lol.
Then again, working out 2+2 gives me headache sometimes. Is the answer 5?
November 17th, 2017 03:00
MEASURED REASON
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Michael, the forces of light can always beat the power of darkness in our lives.
November 17th, 2017 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Michael, the forces of light can always beat the power of darkness in our lives.
November 17th, 2017 01:51
IN PRAISE OF MILK
FredPeyer said:
Your great little poem reminded me of a time when I was little, watching a farmer milk his cow (by hand, not machine) and drinking still warm fresh milk directly from the cow. Delicious!
November 16th, 2017 21:16
FredPeyer said:
Your great little poem reminded me of a time when I was little, watching a farmer milk his cow (by hand, not machine) and drinking still warm fresh milk directly from the cow. Delicious!
November 16th, 2017 21:16
IN PRAISE OF MILK
dusk arising said:
I remember that butter being patted and cut with a wire for my mum. Cheese too...... then along came yogurts (Eden Vale) and life began to get complicated (growing up). Great waft of nostalgia in your words. And now its even healthy to eat butter again.... what madness have we endured (blue band marg in 4 rectangular packs) and now they tell us our lovely bovines are the cause of global warming!!! How dare they? Look what you\'ve started! LOL
November 16th, 2017 19:41
dusk arising said:
I remember that butter being patted and cut with a wire for my mum. Cheese too...... then along came yogurts (Eden Vale) and life began to get complicated (growing up). Great waft of nostalgia in your words. And now its even healthy to eat butter again.... what madness have we endured (blue band marg in 4 rectangular packs) and now they tell us our lovely bovines are the cause of global warming!!! How dare they? Look what you\'ve started! LOL
November 16th, 2017 19:41
IN PRAISE OF MILK
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the four-line tribute to \'extract of udder\' here, Michael! So well done.
November 16th, 2017 10:54
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the four-line tribute to \'extract of udder\' here, Michael! So well done.
November 16th, 2017 10:54
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