Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
NEW RESOLVE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I\'ve resolved to get the dictionary out with this lot!
December 7th, 2017 02:51
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I\'ve resolved to get the dictionary out with this lot!
December 7th, 2017 02:51
NEW RESOLVE
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks Andy - it\'s the Square in Market Harborough - always painting the town as pictures of it prove so popular.
December 7th, 2017 01:22
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks Andy - it\'s the Square in Market Harborough - always painting the town as pictures of it prove so popular.
December 7th, 2017 01:22
NEW RESOLVE
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, such power within it. Going forward despite past past misfortunes is the way I read it.
This is the way life should be look ahead to the positive.
Good artwork as well - which town is this one.
December 7th, 2017 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, such power within it. Going forward despite past past misfortunes is the way I read it.
This is the way life should be look ahead to the positive.
Good artwork as well - which town is this one.
December 7th, 2017 01:18
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
myself and me said:
See the couple in this paint again.
Ha, Ha, Ha, I love the poem, so funny.
December 6th, 2017 17:33
myself and me said:
See the couple in this paint again.
Ha, Ha, Ha, I love the poem, so funny.
December 6th, 2017 17:33
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
FredPeyer said:
Well done (again) Michael! If I had to choose one of the three, it would probably be number two!
December 6th, 2017 12:50
FredPeyer said:
Well done (again) Michael! If I had to choose one of the three, it would probably be number two!
December 6th, 2017 12:50
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I\'m back from GERMANY after 4 years in STALAG LUFT 3 ~ We built a plane to escape but with 54 passengers we didn\'t get lift off ! The Komandant gave us all Gluwein und Bratwurst for trying ! Love you odes ~ Nursery Rhymes are always good fodder for a parody ! Love your painting ~ My poem is about \'OUSES today ~ please check ~ Thanks BRIAN
December 6th, 2017 10:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I\'m back from GERMANY after 4 years in STALAG LUFT 3 ~ We built a plane to escape but with 54 passengers we didn\'t get lift off ! The Komandant gave us all Gluwein und Bratwurst for trying ! Love you odes ~ Nursery Rhymes are always good fodder for a parody ! Love your painting ~ My poem is about \'OUSES today ~ please check ~ Thanks BRIAN
December 6th, 2017 10:33
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
Louis Gibbs said:
Number two, hands down! An adult nursery rhyme ... love it, Michael!
December 6th, 2017 08:58
Louis Gibbs said:
Number two, hands down! An adult nursery rhyme ... love it, Michael!
December 6th, 2017 08:58
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Super super. ...superb!!
December 6th, 2017 07:24
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Super super. ...superb!!
December 6th, 2017 07:24
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
Fay Slimm. said:
That middle rhyme had me in stitches Michael - another clever slant on the original nursery rhymes - I love your sense of humour - - and another adorable picture to add to the pleasure of visiting your page.
December 6th, 2017 05:37
Fay Slimm. said:
That middle rhyme had me in stitches Michael - another clever slant on the original nursery rhymes - I love your sense of humour - - and another adorable picture to add to the pleasure of visiting your page.
December 6th, 2017 05:37
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah a clever alternative to the nursery rhymes Michael and reading them set me into giggle-fits - you are so clever at writing the slightly sensuous - - brilliantly presented watercolour too. Saved these little naughties to read again.
December 6th, 2017 05:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah a clever alternative to the nursery rhymes Michael and reading them set me into giggle-fits - you are so clever at writing the slightly sensuous - - brilliantly presented watercolour too. Saved these little naughties to read again.
December 6th, 2017 05:33
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
Accidental Poet said:
Now that sailor needs a shower. Nice Michael.
December 6th, 2017 04:56
Accidental Poet said:
Now that sailor needs a shower. Nice Michael.
December 6th, 2017 04:56
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine writes Michael. Stand clear of that sailor!
December 6th, 2017 02:43
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine writes Michael. Stand clear of that sailor!
December 6th, 2017 02:43
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
myself and me said:
Beautiful paint. Can not help laughing while read the poem.
December 5th, 2017 18:13
myself and me said:
Beautiful paint. Can not help laughing while read the poem.
December 5th, 2017 18:13
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
I loved these Adversary Rhymes.
Naughty and ever so funny.
Beautiful watercolour.
Keep writing
FineB
December 5th, 2017 15:33
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
I loved these Adversary Rhymes.
Naughty and ever so funny.
Beautiful watercolour.
Keep writing
FineB
December 5th, 2017 15:33
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
FredPeyer said:
The watercolor is superb!
Love all three of them. To me they also sound very \'British\' (sausages in a pie? For real?, pub, and the never-ending rain!) Hey, I am not knocking it, just observing! :-)
December 5th, 2017 03:39
FredPeyer said:
The watercolor is superb!
Love all three of them. To me they also sound very \'British\' (sausages in a pie? For real?, pub, and the never-ending rain!) Hey, I am not knocking it, just observing! :-)
December 5th, 2017 03:39
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
orchidee said:
Ahh, this explains my swoons. I remember hearing nursery rhymes like this when I was young - and up to about age 18. lol.
December 5th, 2017 02:55
orchidee said:
Ahh, this explains my swoons. I remember hearing nursery rhymes like this when I was young - and up to about age 18. lol.
December 5th, 2017 02:55
GUILT
myself and me said:
lovely paint, could be a nice place to visit. By watching the paint, it could unload the burden of guilty.
December 4th, 2017 18:55
myself and me said:
lovely paint, could be a nice place to visit. By watching the paint, it could unload the burden of guilty.
December 4th, 2017 18:55
GUILT
Louis Gibbs said:
I fully appreciate the beautiful watercolor, Michael. I\'m a bit lost on the poem, however. Fred\'s comments helped a little, but it somehow doesn\'t register with me ... my shortcoming I\'m sure, and I apologize.
I will continue to ponder.
December 4th, 2017 10:00
Louis Gibbs said:
I fully appreciate the beautiful watercolor, Michael. I\'m a bit lost on the poem, however. Fred\'s comments helped a little, but it somehow doesn\'t register with me ... my shortcoming I\'m sure, and I apologize.
I will continue to ponder.
December 4th, 2017 10:00
GUILT
Christina8 said:
A very deep write. Very good in so few words! Absolutely beautiful picture of the church scene!
December 4th, 2017 07:48
Christina8 said:
A very deep write. Very good in so few words! Absolutely beautiful picture of the church scene!
December 4th, 2017 07:48
THE CONFORMIST
FredPeyer said:
To me \'thinking outside of the box\' is like an out of body experience, where we look at ourselves and our lives from a different perspective, free of all constraints, limitations, and conventions.
Great poem, great rhyming too!
December 4th, 2017 04:13
FredPeyer said:
To me \'thinking outside of the box\' is like an out of body experience, where we look at ourselves and our lives from a different perspective, free of all constraints, limitations, and conventions.
Great poem, great rhyming too!
December 4th, 2017 04:13
GUILT
orchidee said:
Waitrose might be too snobbish to notice guilt. Too busy charging us too much!
December 4th, 2017 03:30
orchidee said:
Waitrose might be too snobbish to notice guilt. Too busy charging us too much!
December 4th, 2017 03:30
GUILT
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful painting, and a nice story too regarding the sale.
Now for the poem: Read it, made it a favorite immediately. Read it again, and again, am still contemplating it, and probably will for a while. Do I feel guilty because I was cruel in my dreams? Or do I have cruel dreams because I am guilty? You do pack a lot of meaning into only a few words. Love your shorties!
December 4th, 2017 03:19
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful painting, and a nice story too regarding the sale.
Now for the poem: Read it, made it a favorite immediately. Read it again, and again, am still contemplating it, and probably will for a while. Do I feel guilty because I was cruel in my dreams? Or do I have cruel dreams because I am guilty? You do pack a lot of meaning into only a few words. Love your shorties!
December 4th, 2017 03:19
GUILT
orchidee said:
I wanted that pic for my KP wedding! Too late now! lol.
December 4th, 2017 02:48
orchidee said:
I wanted that pic for my KP wedding! Too late now! lol.
December 4th, 2017 02:48
GUILT
orchidee said:
Yes, and is the guilt real, or not? Which is worse - true or imagined guilt?
And why all this somewhat deep stuff from me this early of a morning. I will give myself a headache thinking!
A fine write and pic Michael.
December 4th, 2017 02:47
orchidee said:
Yes, and is the guilt real, or not? Which is worse - true or imagined guilt?
And why all this somewhat deep stuff from me this early of a morning. I will give myself a headache thinking!
A fine write and pic Michael.
December 4th, 2017 02:47
GUILT
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and true write.
Fabulous artwork - where is it. It must be wonderful to walk over that bridge to that building (Church?).
December 4th, 2017 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and true write.
Fabulous artwork - where is it. It must be wonderful to walk over that bridge to that building (Church?).
December 4th, 2017 01:45
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS TIMES TWO
FredPeyer said:
You are a master of couplets: the brush and the pen!
December 3rd, 2017 22:28
FredPeyer said:
You are a master of couplets: the brush and the pen!
December 3rd, 2017 22:28
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