Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



A SHELTERED NOOK
WL Schuett said:

Really good Michael the painting is perfect with the poem

November 9th, 2017 08:45

A SHELTERED NOOK
Accidental Poet said:

Most fitting words to a most beautiful painting. Certainly a fav Michael.

November 9th, 2017 04:53

A SHELTERED NOOK
Goldfinch60 said:

Those nooks are special as is the poem and the painting Michael.

November 9th, 2017 03:31

A SHELTERED NOOK
FredPeyer said:

This is so British! Beautiful though, and so well written! Like the painting too!
Wish we had some these nooks here!

November 9th, 2017 03:19

A SHELTERED NOOK
Michael Edwards said:

I do remember him - never did get it - err the bear that is !! Cheers Orchi

November 9th, 2017 02:30

A SHELTERED NOOK
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. I will go and sign there with them then. It looks remote enough, so no one else will hear me singing.
Ahh, a nook\'s all right, as long it\'s not nookie - I would swoon! lol. Remember that monstrous Nookie Bear?! Would scare off any child.

November 9th, 2017 02:20

ANOTHER CRUDY
Louis Gibbs said:

Sounds like you got there exactly when you should have. Neither late nor early. Cute one, Michael!

November 8th, 2017 10:30

ANOTHER CRUDY
WL Schuett said:

Like the gate drawing a perfect match for your poem , good art

November 8th, 2017 10:15

ANOTHER CRUDY
myself and me said:

Try to imagine what the paint will look like after you color it. A beautiful short with simple words yet tells a lot.

November 8th, 2017 09:59

ANOTHER CRUDY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Good Michael Morning ! Thanks for Crudy and the Pen & Ink study. Time has always fascinated me as a runner (a three hour Marathon is still my aim !) and as a Scientist \"Times\" relating to the Universe ~ Light years etc. I wanted to give a talk on the USA (50 States in 50 minutes) BUT the minimum time it took was 360 minutes ~ so I plumbed for KENTUCKY and call my talk \"What a State to be in\" It really is a crazy State and a TIME ZONE goes bang through the middle ! So on one side of the street you are a whole hour different ~ early or late ~ awesome ~ I also love GATES & DOORS ~ great visually and great subjects for Odd Odes. Thanks for stimulating ~ Brian 10:33 am (I\'m on my first Coffee Break Teaching again @ 11 am) Please send someone Flowers using my Flower Fusion ~ Thanks B.

November 8th, 2017 05:38

ANOTHER CRUDY
Accidental Poet said:

Perfectly timed Michael. And a really nice image, yours ofcourse.

November 8th, 2017 04:03

ANOTHER CRUDY
orchidee said:

You coming or going there?! Good write and pic Michael. Is it half past Autumn now?

November 8th, 2017 02:39

ANOTHER CRUDY
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Michael, we will all go through that gate eventually, pearly or otherwise.

November 8th, 2017 02:37

HER TAINTED HEART
Laura🌻 said:

Loved the last stanza!
The watercolor is quite
effective! Excellent!

November 8th, 2017 01:17

ANOTHER CRUDY
FredPeyer said:

This is simply great! Brought to mind \"Hawaiian Time\" which is always 30 minutes late!
So let me think, if I am too early to be late and too late to be early...I must be right on time!

November 8th, 2017 01:15

HER TAINTED HEART
MendedFences27 said:

\"Her Tainted Heart\" title sent me looking for guilt on her part. Overly suspicious I suppose. Loved the poem throughout, each stanza drawing a picture of love lost and a heart \"tainted.\" Phil A.
P.S. On the art- would like to have seen it completely colorized. Somehow it seems unfinished. Beautiful in its own right, though.

November 7th, 2017 19:54

HER TAINTED HEART
Fay Slimm. said:

The flow slows to a poignant finalé in this ballad of love ending - - good read again Michael and oh how I love the expert display of un-finishing in that picture.

November 7th, 2017 14:42

HER TAINTED HEART
myself and me said:

May the raindrop clean \"her tainted heart\", free her suffered soul. Beautiful poem, fresh paint.

November 7th, 2017 12:00

HER TAINTED HEART
WL Schuett said:

A couple fine works of art , I really like the feel of this poem , well done Michael

November 7th, 2017 08:30

HER TAINTED HEART
Christina8 said:

Loved the poem--last stanza really great! Also great watercolor!

November 7th, 2017 08:25

HER TAINTED HEART
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Excellent as always MICHAEL ~ A Flow Painting to embellish a Lowing Poem ! Yours BRIAN ~ \"Please Send Flowers\" in my new FUSION and enjoy a cyber massage with my AROMATHERAPY OK poem ! Thanks B.

November 7th, 2017 05:07

HER TAINTED HEART
Accidental Poet said:

Finely crafted work here, the painting and poem. I think they\'re both perfect as they are, but that\'s just me. Very well done Michael.

November 7th, 2017 04:48

HER TAINTED HEART
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael.

November 7th, 2017 02:44

HER TAINTED HEART
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a wonderful poem Michael the wistfulness and sorrow wash over it like the rain on her tainted heart.

I like the artwork, it seems to be a slightly different style than than your usual ones.

November 7th, 2017 02:04

HER TAINTED HEART
FredPeyer said:

Michael, the whole poem is great, but the last stanza is extra-ordinary!
I also like how the painting seems to be less and less finished as they eye moves to the left, a bit like moving from reality to dream.

November 7th, 2017 02:01

THE CLOWN
myself and me said:

A poem full of humor in a terrific form. Wonderful.

November 3rd, 2017 14:55

THE CLOWN
lasergraph said:

Ouch, I hope the scaffold is soft

November 3rd, 2017 14:10

THE CLOWN
Louis Gibbs said:

Ouch! I suppose he will be scheduled for a rectal scaffoldectomy? (Have I just invented a new word too?)
Cute poem, Michael!

November 3rd, 2017 08:58

THE CLOWN
Christina8 said:

Great clown poem! And flipped at the end. Also wonderful graphite drawing!

November 3rd, 2017 06:57

THE CLOWN
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - - fantastic form for the kind of humour you used . Love the pencil work too.

November 3rd, 2017 03:57



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